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几乎不72﹪ 不参加70﹪
A possible version
This table displays the result of a survey on how students spend their twoday weekend. It says that few students are glued to their schoolwork any more. Instead, they prefer to surf on the internet, watch TV, go shopping rather than involve in sports games. Library and interest groups are available but not favorable. .
Such changes have had a great effect on the development of society. It does good to both the citizens and the government
Good points
1.structure 第一段:描述图表,得出结论。 第二段:紧扣主题,根据图表比较分析原 因,论证结论。 第三段:发表议论,提出自己的看法。 2.link words
1997 1999 2001 2003 2005
food drink other 18%
other 46%
B
food drink 22%
57%
Housing 25%
A
Housing 32%
Percentage of Average Family Expense in2005
Percentage of Average Family Expense in 2000
第二步:观察图表中数据的增减总趋势, 阐明原因
Grain, the main food of the most people in China for thousands of years, is now playing a less important role and the amount of fruit and vegetables in the average people’s diet has also dropped by 1.5 percent from 2001 to 2005. In contrast to them, the amount of milk and meat has increased by 2 percent and 2.5percent.It is clear from the table that great improvement in people’s lives has been made in these years.
Warming up
图表式作文的几种形式:
一是以表格形式,将统计的数据或被说明的事 物直接用表格形式体现出来,即统计表。
Statistics table
【例析】请你根据下表提供的信息 描述近5年人们饮食的变化,并说明 变化的原因.
2001 2002 2003 2004 2005
grain milk meat
3. At the same period of time, however, the amount of milk and meat has been on the rise. 4. These changes are the signs of the
improvement in people’s lives.
41%
14.5% 26.5% 18% 100%
40%
15% 27.5% 17.5% 100%
分析:本 统计表描 述中国人 民从2001 年至2005 年饮食结 构的变化。
total
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第一步:点明此表格所表明的主题
As can be seen from the table, there are a lot of changes in people’s diet in the past five years.
Practice
下表是某校关于大学生双休日活动现状的一份调查。请结 合表格内容,就中学生如何过双休日发表你的看法。 学习情况
几乎都在学16﹪ 半天学习半天活动24﹪ 几乎都在做其他事60﹪
娱乐活动
体育活动20﹪ 游玩和购物40﹪ 上网看电视40﹪
去图书馆 兴趣小组
经常5﹪ 偶尔23﹪ 经常10﹪ 偶尔20﹪
技巧指导
图表式作文写作分三步:
第一、开门见山地点明本图表所反映的 主题 经常使用的词汇有:table, chart, figure, graph, describe, tell, show, represent等等。
【常用句式】 1. As can be seen from the chart,... As is shown in the chart,... 2. The chart shows that about 60 percent of students want to go to college... 3. From the graph/data/results/information above, 4. The graph shows the changes in the number of...over the period from...to... 5. Compared with...,the number of the students of...
第三、 归纳总结或发表评论。有时 第三步可省略
In a word, in short, Generally speaking, It's clear from the chart that..., We can draw the conclusion that..., We can learn/know...等等。
第二步:观察图表中数据的增减总趋势, 阐明原因
2. Grain, the main food of the most people in China, is now playing a less important role and the amount of fruit and vegetables in the average people’s diet has also dropped by 1.5 percent from 2001 to 2005.
观察下列图表,根据图示描述该市住房产权 的变化;并说明这些变化对个人和社会产生 的影响;
% 100 80 60 40 20 1995 2000 2005
State-owned private
【技巧点拨】
1.读懂柱状图坐标刻线及图例说明与文字, 比较柱状高低和颜色表示的内容及数据。 2.学会看趋势、找规律,从整体看图表有何 发展变化,找出特点、规律。 3.引用图表包含信息,使你的文章“由图而 发”,言之有据。
Practice
【例析】请你根据下表提供的信息描述近5年人们 饮食的变化,并说明变化的原因.
2001 2002 2003 2004 2005
grain
milk meat
Fruit& vegetable
43%
13% 25% 19% 100%
42%
14% 25% 19% 100%
41%
14.5% 26% 18.5% 100%
Personally I think, students are now freed from heavy burden of study, but their spare time is not well arranged .They are expected to spend more time on what they learn instead of hanging out. More time should be spent not only on green field but also in the libraries to build up themselves physically and mentally .
第三步:归纳总结并得出结论。
5. In a word ,there is no doubt that there will be great changes in people’s diet in the future.
第三步:归纳总结并得出结论。
In a word ,there is no doubt that people will enjoy a more scientific and balanced diet in the future and much happier life.
Curve diagram Bar chart Pie chart
根据所给图表,用5句话描写近年来看 电影与看电视的人数变化的短文。
100 90 80 70 60 50 40 30 20 10 0 1995
A
Number of People (in thousands) (a): Number of TV watchers B (b): Number of film goers
第二、 分析数据间的主要差异及趋势, 然后描写
rise drop reduce increase decrease fall while but on the contrary however compare... to/ with... in contrast to as...as the same as similar to different from, difference between among more than less than
观察下列图表
1.根据图示描述该市住房产权的变化。 2 .分析产生这些变化的原因。 3.说明这些变化对个人和社会产生的影响。
% 100
80
60 40 20 1995 2000 2005
State-owned private
Ownership of Houses in a Big City in China As can be seen from the chart,ownership of houses in a big city in China changed a lot in the past ten years. In 1995,75 percent of the houses were state-owned. Five years later,the rate of state-owned houses to private ones was 3 to 2. But from then on,the ownership of houses changed rapidly and so far 80 percent of houses have been private. .
What caused the changes?(What are the major reasons responsible for (behind) the changes?) There might have been two main reasons. First,from 1995 up to now, people's living standards have been improving (on the rise). Most of them can afford to buy their own houses. Second, most people do not save a lot of money in the bank for their children as their parents did in the past. They want to have their own home and enjoy a better life.
Fruit& vegetable
43% 13% 25% 19% 100%
42% 14% 25% 19% 100%
41% 14.5% 26% 18.5% 100%
41% 14.5% 26.5% 18% 100%
40% 15% 27.5% 17.5% 100%
total
二是以图形形式 A 表示数据变化的曲线图; B 表示数据的大小或数量之间的差异 的柱状图; C 表示总体内部结构变化的扇形图。