高考英语看图作文写作指导
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高考英语看图作文写作指导
看图进行书面表达的基本要求是:认真审图,确立主题,提炼要点,展开联想,变点为句,连句成篇。要达到这些要求,我们就必须认真审图,善于利用图中人物间的关系、人物的对话、人物的活动及所处场所,以及图中的文字说明和标识来提炼要点;要围绕主题展开合理的想象,切忌游离于主题展开不着边际的联想。
高考看图作文技巧细审题:包括文体,人称,时态. 纳要点:保证文章内容的完整. 展成句:注意英语表达的习惯,根据提纲扩展句子. 句成篇:利用一些表示转折,因果,选择等关系的关联词和过渡句,把句子连接起来. 面检查:格式文体要点语法字数等. 即五个“W”和一个“H”。要注意人物与空间的关系,画面与画面的关系,要点与发挥的关系。
说明文:(另见图表式作文)
议论文:(见漫画作文)
常用句型:
1.One day / the other day / a couple of days ago / while he was…,he..
2.It was snowing /raining heavily on Monday /Sunday morning …when …
3.The picture sets me thinking deeply…
4.From the picture,we can see ….
5.It is really an unforgettable day …
6.As is shown / indicated in the picture, …
7.After seeing the picture ,I was greatly shocked by …
8.This is a funny and instructive picture. In the picture, a young man …
9.We can learn from the picture that …
10.The picture shows that…
11.This sight reminds me of something in my daily life….
记叙类例题展示1:
下列四幅图描述了李华一家某一天的经历。请根据画面及图中的有关提示,用第三人称的口吻写一篇120字左右的短文。注意:可以适当增加细节,并展开合理的想象,使故事完整连贯。第一步:认真看图,确立主题
结合文字和图画,确立所要表达的主题是什么。
根据“四幅图描述了李华一家某一天的经历”一段文字提示,结合第一幅图中的日历上所表示的时间( 3月8日) ,我们可以确立本篇书面表达的主题是:李华要做些家务事来为他的妈妈庆祝“”妇女节。
第二步:围绕主题,提炼要点
第一幅图:李华把他的主意告诉父亲
第二幅图:李华扫地、父亲洗衣服
第三幅图:李华和父亲下厨房做菜
第四幅图:餐桌上有花瓶、饮料、鱼、肉等等
第三步:合理想象,补出要点
第一幅图:李华为什么要把他的主意告诉父亲?求得父亲的帮助或配合
第二幅图:李华和父亲为什么要选择做家务?这些家务平时都是由母亲做的
第三幅图:可想象他们做了除图画表现出的fish, pork外,还有没有其它菜。比如:chicken, soup and other delicious dishes.
第四幅图中没有一个人出现,为什么,留给考生进行合理的想象:李华和父亲是不是藏起来了?其目的是什么:可能是等母亲回家时以给她一个惊喜。
第四步:确定时态,译出要点
确定表达时所用的正确时态,将围绕主题初选出的要点和经过合理想象补出的要点翻译
出来。
本篇叙述的是李华一家过去某一天(“”妇女节)所发生的事,应该用过去时来进行表达。
第一幅图
On March the eighth, Women’s Day, LiHua had a good idea and told his father that he was going to do something to celebrate it. He asked his father to help him.
第二幅图
They decided to do some housework, which was always done by his mother. LiHua cleaned the house completely. His father did some washing.
第三幅图
They made a good meal, cooking fish, pork, chicken, soup and some other delicious dishes.
第四幅图
LiHua laid the table and set a vase full of flowers in the middle of the table. They hid themselves behind the door, waiting for Mother. They wanted to give her a happy surprise. When his mother came back and saw delicious dishes and drinks on the table, she felt very curious and happy.
第五步:连句成篇,过渡自然
对译出的要点通过合理的组合,加上必要的连接词或词语以及照顾到文章的首尾呼应,
再加上必要的结束语。
范文欣赏:
It was March the eighth that day, Women’s Day. LiHua had a good idea and told his father that he was going to do something to celebrate it. He asked his father to help him. First they decided to do some housework, which was always done by his mother. LiHua cleaned the house completely while his father did some washing.
Then they made a good meal, cooking fish, pork, chicken, soup and some other delicious dishes. LiHua laid the table and set a vase full of flowers in the middle of the table. After that they hid themselves behind the door, waiting for Mother so as to give her a happy surprise. When his mother came back and saw delicious dishes and drinks on the table, she felt very curious and happy. The family had a pleasant festival.
例题展示2:
审题:
1、体裁:记叙文
2、主要时态:一般过去时,叙述描绘一起交通事故
3、人称:第一人称I
4、要点:时间、地点、人物、事件的前后经过。
It was 7:15 on the morning of February 8, 2000. I was walking along Park Road
A car hit the man while he was crossing the road.
I noticed the driver was a young woman and the car was yellow.
The car number was AC864.