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For example:
The reasons why we like this ending are as follows: 1……. 2……. 3. ……
范文一： It was Fred, who brought a gift to Scrooge. “Merry Christmas, my dear uncle”, said Fred and handed the present to Scrooge. Scrooge opened it and found that it was his childhood photo. It reminded Scrooge of his happy times spent with his family. He was so surprised and moved that he burst into tears. Fred gave Scrooge a hug and tried again to invite him to have dinner with him tonight. This time, Scrooge accepted the invitation happily. “Christmas is the time when people can open their hearts freely to each other, merry Christmas.” said Scrooge gratefully. That night, they had a wonderful dinner, a wonderful party. Nothing could be merrier. From then on, Scrooge became as kind and helpful as a friend to every one. He no longer had any conversations with spirits, but kept Christmas cheerfully and lived a happy life.
Self-evaluation
1. What have we learnt today？ _____________________________________ 2. I think our group’s performance is： _____________________________________ 3. I think the group with the best story ending is ______________________________________
Yours Fred
Scrooge was deeply moved and made up his mind to be kind and helpful to the ones he loves. That night, he went to Fred’s house to celebrate Christmas together. What a wonderful dinner they had!
bad-tempered
来自百度文库
cold mean
regretful
determined
How will Scrooge change?
What will happen between Scrooge and Fred?
Evaluation Standard
Scores
Content
5 432 1
Are there any changes in scrooge?
范文二： Scrooge opened the door but found nobody. On the ground, there
was an envelope. He picked it up and unfolded it. It was a letter written by Fred.
圣诞欢歌读后续写讲评课
Act out the scene
What will happen then?
Revision
一、续写思路梳理： 1. 体裁____________ 2. 人称____________ 3. 时态____________ 4. 主要大意（5W1H） When:_______________________________________ Where:_______________________________________ Who:_______________________________________ What:_______________________________________ Why:_______________________________________ How:_______________________________________
Group Sharing
1. Select your favorite ending according to the standard. 2. Share the reasons why you choose it. 3. What are the strengths and what can be improved?
What: Fred invited Scrooge to have dinner with him Why: Fred loves his uncle and wanted to celebrate Christmas
with him How: At first Scrooge refused Fred but he regretted doing so
一、续写思路梳理： 1. 体裁___记__叙__文_____ 2. 人称__第__三__人__称____ 3. 时态__一__般__过__去__时__ 4. 主要大意（5W1H） When: On Christmas Eve Where: In the office Who: Scrooge and Fred
after he learnt his lessons from the 3 spirits who took
him to his past, present and future Christmas. So he
wanted to change himself.
二、续写的逻辑线索: The Change of Scrooge.
My dear uncle, Please allow me to thank you for bringing me the happy memories when I was a young boy. I still remember how well you treated me before my mum died. I love you because you’re my uncle. I wish you a merry Christmas and happy New Year. So, may I have the honor to invite you to have dinner with me tonight? I have prepared a wonderful family party for you. I am looking forward to your arrival.
Are the changes reasonable?
Dbiaddt-hteeemnpdienrgedimpress gyoouo?d tempered
cold warm\kind
mean
geneSrcoourses
Language
5 432 1
Underlined words
Excellent words or expressions
The reasons why we like this ending are as follows: 1……. 2……. 3. ……
范文一： It was Fred, who brought a gift to Scrooge. “Merry Christmas, my dear uncle”, said Fred and handed the present to Scrooge. Scrooge opened it and found that it was his childhood photo. It reminded Scrooge of his happy times spent with his family. He was so surprised and moved that he burst into tears. Fred gave Scrooge a hug and tried again to invite him to have dinner with him tonight. This time, Scrooge accepted the invitation happily. “Christmas is the time when people can open their hearts freely to each other, merry Christmas.” said Scrooge gratefully. That night, they had a wonderful dinner, a wonderful party. Nothing could be merrier. From then on, Scrooge became as kind and helpful as a friend to every one. He no longer had any conversations with spirits, but kept Christmas cheerfully and lived a happy life.
Self-evaluation
1. What have we learnt today？ _____________________________________ 2. I think our group’s performance is： _____________________________________ 3. I think the group with the best story ending is ______________________________________
Yours Fred
Scrooge was deeply moved and made up his mind to be kind and helpful to the ones he loves. That night, he went to Fred’s house to celebrate Christmas together. What a wonderful dinner they had!
bad-tempered
来自百度文库
cold mean
regretful
determined
How will Scrooge change?
What will happen between Scrooge and Fred?
Evaluation Standard
Scores
Content
5 432 1
Are there any changes in scrooge?
范文二： Scrooge opened the door but found nobody. On the ground, there
was an envelope. He picked it up and unfolded it. It was a letter written by Fred.
圣诞欢歌读后续写讲评课
Act out the scene
What will happen then?
Revision
一、续写思路梳理： 1. 体裁____________ 2. 人称____________ 3. 时态____________ 4. 主要大意（5W1H） When:_______________________________________ Where:_______________________________________ Who:_______________________________________ What:_______________________________________ Why:_______________________________________ How:_______________________________________
Group Sharing
1. Select your favorite ending according to the standard. 2. Share the reasons why you choose it. 3. What are the strengths and what can be improved?
What: Fred invited Scrooge to have dinner with him Why: Fred loves his uncle and wanted to celebrate Christmas
with him How: At first Scrooge refused Fred but he regretted doing so
一、续写思路梳理： 1. 体裁___记__叙__文_____ 2. 人称__第__三__人__称____ 3. 时态__一__般__过__去__时__ 4. 主要大意（5W1H） When: On Christmas Eve Where: In the office Who: Scrooge and Fred
after he learnt his lessons from the 3 spirits who took
him to his past, present and future Christmas. So he
wanted to change himself.
二、续写的逻辑线索: The Change of Scrooge.
My dear uncle, Please allow me to thank you for bringing me the happy memories when I was a young boy. I still remember how well you treated me before my mum died. I love you because you’re my uncle. I wish you a merry Christmas and happy New Year. So, may I have the honor to invite you to have dinner with me tonight? I have prepared a wonderful family party for you. I am looking forward to your arrival.
Are the changes reasonable?
Dbiaddt-hteeemnpdienrgedimpress gyoouo?d tempered
cold warm\kind
mean
geneSrcoourses
Language
5 432 1
Underlined words
Excellent words or expressions