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our car repaired.
•Paragraph 2：
• As we drove along，a flower shop came into sight. I walked qiuckly into the flower shop, where a bunch of flowers in full bloom caught my eye. Having witnessed the effect of my mom’s kindness, I decided to send her the sweet flowers. Soon, the heavenly scent filled the car again. Mom tried to conceal her excitement, but tears filled her eyes. Through this trip, I discovered that, despite my
g_r_a_b_b__e_d(grab)the flowers on the back seat and walked into a nursing home. Impatient and③_a_n_n_o_y_e__d_(annoy), I saw my mom came out empty-handed. ④C__u_r_io__si_t_y_(curious) drove me to ask her what happened. ⑤K__n_o_w__i_n_gthat my mom gave the flowers to the receptionist⑥w_it_h_o_u__t_(with)leaving her
My story
wait for help
feelings:
hopeless/aimless/ depressed/frustrated
actions:
someone come to help wander/hug
the car was repaired surroundings:
burning hot sun/
Task 2 Read for plot--summary
• One day between spring and summer, my mom and I were①d_r_i_v_in_g_
(drive) through the countryside．But suddenly, my mom stopped the car,②
one is willing to help us?”
waving at mom fceaemlienignsto
All our
aovcfietawio.snu“ddHeeni,sathmearnecwepitthiohniissthfarnodms
the nursing home.” Mom explained to me. “Why are you here?”
occasional anger towSaurdrsrohuedr,iInagcstually felt proud of hFeere. lJiunsgt at that
moment, a pleasant wind was blowing, making the leaves of trees swinging as if to be cheering for us./ What mom did reminded me of
when one day between_s_p_r_in_g__a_n_d_s_u_m__m_e_r___
where on the road_th_r_o_u_g_h__t_h_e_c_o_u_n_t_r_ys_i_d_e_____ who _m__o_m__, I_,_r_e_c_e_p_ti_o_n_is_t_o_f__th_e__n_u_r_si_n_g_h__o_m_e____ what Mom stopped the car and gave flowers
Continuation Writing
Learning Aim:
By the end of the class, we will be able to:
● have a clear map of the structure and obtain a good understanding of the text;
Mom asked excitedly. “ I just intended to thank you for your
flowers formally.” How lucky we were! What amazed me most
was that he was a retired garage man. As a consequence, he had
What lesson can we get from the story?
Roses given, fragrance in hand.
The more you are willing to give, The more you are likely to receive.
• Paragraph 1：
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were driving through countryside
stopped and gave flowers to the receptionist
our car broke down
unhappy impatient, annoyed curious, confused
worried, hopeless
see a flower shop breeze/heavenly scent
buy flowers
transitional words: all of a sudden
Share your story!
Group disscussion. Try to infer and write down key words, phrases or sentences on the paper and then put them into a complete story.
name, I was somewhat confused. But mom told me that leaving flowers to⑦
_w_h__o_e__v_e_rapprieciate them made her feel good. When we continued driving,
Warming-up
Have you ever given flowers to somebody?
How did you feel? Would you give flowers to someone you don't know?
Task 1 Read for main idea--5w questions
a famous saying: Roses given,fragrance in hand. Lesson
Task 4 Contiunation Writing
• Writing Criteria:
• 1.Your story should be coherent(连贯)，logical and reasonable. • 2.Your writing should be rich in vocabulary and sentence pattern. • 3.You should underline 5 key words in your writing.
⑧un_l_u_c_k_il_y___(luck), our car⑨_b_r_o_k_e__(break) down. Seeing few passers-by on the road, I found it⑩_h_o_p_e_l_e_s_s__(hope) to wait for help.
Task 3 Group work for plot
My story
• We were worrying about what couldsubreroduonndei．ngBsut after
waiting in vain for a long time, under the hot burning sun, worried
and depressed, I was wandering the road aimlessly. “What if no
● learn how to analyze, infer, develop and create a logical and reasonable ending of the story by Mind Mapping.
● logically organize information, ideas and language; ● learn to develop creative thinking.
ton_u__rs_i_n_g_h_o_m__e_/our car_b_r_o_k_e_d_o_w__n__
why Leaving flowers _fo_r__so_m__e_o_n_e_w__h_o_w__il_l_a_p_p_r_e_c_ia_t_e____
them made her feel good.
Assignment
•Write down your story and polish your writing with your partner.
What have we learnt today?
Step 1 :Read the passage and answer the 5w questions to get the main idea. Step 2: Analyze the feeling and plot development. Step 3: Infer the ending by the key words and given sentences. Sቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱep 4: Begin to write. Add more details.(feelings, actions, dialogues,etc.) Step 5: Polish your writing.