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Writing 1

Write 35-45 words on your answer sheet.

Hi, How are you? Yesterday, I passed an examination, so I can go the upper class. I’d been afraid that I didn’t pass it, but I could. I can’t believe it. How about you? Is anything special?

By the way, how are your parents? It is long time since I met them. Please say hello to them.

I’ll write soon, byebye.

Takako

Examiner Commets

This is an excellent attempt, covering all three content elements appropriately. Although the writer has slightly exceeded the word limit, the content is relevant and natural. The answer reads well and requires no effort by the reader. Questions 7

●This is part of a letter you receive from your pen friend.

I’m glad you like learning English. You teacher sounds really nice---and yours friends do too! Tell me all about your English classes.

●Now write a letter to your pen friend.

●Write your letter in about 100 words on your answer sheet.

Questions 8

●You have to write a story for you English teacher.

●You story must have this title:

A broken window

●Write you story in about 100 words on your answer sheet.

Question 7

Hi!

Thank you for your letter. Learning English is still interesting and it is very good for me. I have good English teacher and also good classmates. They made me more interest to learn English.

Let me introduce my English class.

The nice teacher’s name is Peter! He is tall, handsome. Furthermore, he makes us very interest and feel comfortable in his class.

It’s t ime to talk about my classmates!

They are all women except one man and they have variety nationality. For example, south korea ( of course include me ), Japan, Poland, Columbia and China etc. Most of them have cheerful character and passion to learn English. That’s why I said that I like learning English.

I’ll send a letter soon again.

Take it easy!

Examiner Commets

This is a good attempt, showing fairly ambitions use of language and with evidence of some range, for example cheerful character……passion to learn English. Sentence structure is sound and there is some linking of sentences. The answer requires only a little effort by the reader.

Band:4

Question 8

This is a story of my English teacher’s holiday. On last Sunday, he stayed at home with his son, and wife. After lunch, he went to the park in front of the house with his son, and was playing baseball. His son Tomy wanted to be a baseball player in the future. So, he always played the baseball with his friends. But, on this day, Tomy was playing wit h his father. Mike wasn’t good at the baseball. Tomy threw a ball, and Mike hit it! The ball that Mike had hit broke a winkow of his house. Of course, his wife lost her temper. He apologized for her. His wife said “ it’s ok. I don’t mind. But, you must tid y up here, and from today, make meals on your own!” She was really angry.

Examiner Commets

This is a good story, showing fairly ambitious use of language and some range of structures and vocabulary, as well as some suitable expressions, for example lost her temper…tidy up. The story is well organized and there is some linking of sentences.

Band:4