高考英语作文专题复习：书面表达指导(反对与支持)

Practice
近年来，广场舞在全国的退休大妈们中流行起来。 每天早晨和晚上，大妈们都会聚集在公共广场练习广 场舞。她们通常利用便携音箱来伴奏，音量很高的音 乐经常影响到周围居民的生活。最近已经发生多次跳 舞的大妈们跟居民间的冲突，而且这种冲突有愈演愈 烈的趋势。
1. 请根据以上材料，分析广场舞的正面和负面的影响，并 据此提出建议来解决这项活动带来的冲突。
Cause and effect 1: Some students object to this practice, because they miss the chance to improve their ability to adapt to a tough environment.
new policy.
Good
Distinguish
Negative side:
1. Roommates with the same bad habits may make a
mess of the situation.
Good
2. Students miss the chance to improve their ability to
Guidance
✓Think from multiple perspectives:
Advantages and disadvantages; Praise or criticism; Cause and effect; Effects and side-effects;
✓Keep yourselves informed of hot social issues by reading more.
简要描述事情的经过 打篮球、碰撞、争执，等等 分析发生冲突的原因 1．遇事不够冷静
2．…… 谈谈避免冲突的做法 （请考生根据自己的经历或感想，提出至
少两种做法）
注意： 对所有要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。 词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。 作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。 Conflicts with others are common in everyday life. __________________________________________________________
Good
5. This practice lead the students to lose their unique
personalities.
Indirect
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Principles
✓To be specific rather than general; ✓To be direct rather than indirect; ✓To be well-organized rather than disordered
2014
请阅读下面短文,并按照要求用英语写一篇 150 词左右的文章。 When we read newspapers, we often come across such English words as “AIDS” and “PK.” When we watch TV, we frequently hear words like… [写作内容] 1. 用约 30 个单词写出上文概要; 2. 用约 120 个单词发表你的观点,内容包括: (1)支持或反对汉语词典收录英语词汇; (2)用 2- 3个理由或论据支撑你的观点。 [写作要求] 1. 可以支持文中任一观点,但必须提供理由或论据; 2. 阐述观点或提供论据时,不能直接引用原文语句; 3. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称; 4. 不必写标题。
1. 根据图片与材料，你是支持还是反对“法定假期高速免 费”政策？并说明原因。
2. 词数150左右。 参考词汇：the toll-free road policy 高速免费政策
Tips
原因：1. 私家车数量过多 2. 高速公路路况差 3. 公共交通发展滞后 4. 法定假期外出游客激增 5. 法定假期高速免费政策
college life.
Good
3. It contributes to students’ academic performance.
Indirect
4. Roommates can get on well with each other.
Good
5. Students can avoid disturbing each other under the
1. Proofread and compare your essays. 2. Select a good one. 3. Make comments on it.
Above are some of my directions on English writing. Hopefully, you can benefit from them and improve your writing. However, Rome wasn’t built in a day. Only through abundant reading as well as constant practice, can you perfect your writing skills. I wish you all success!
adapt.
Good
3. The practice is likely to increase the workload of the
dormitory supervisor.
Good
4. The new policy prevents the students learning from
different kinds of people.
Background
In the past few years, the Writing task on the English test papers of Jiangsu College Entrance Examination is changing continuously, thus raising higher demands on examinees’ logical thinking apart from their command of vocabulary, grammar and other basic language skills.
What makes a good writing?
Elegant expression Precise structure
Logical arguments
1.Underline the highlights. 2.Exchange opinions with partners. 3.Make proper comments.
——Ding Suyan
Steps
1. Check the given topic or material thoroughly, paying special attention to what the task demands.
2. Take a side.
3. Make overall and careful analysis of the issue to form logical arguments.
建议：1. 限制上高速车辆的类别 2. 新建及扩建高速公路 3. 大力改善公共交通 4. 推行带薪分时段度假
the paid annual vacation policy
5. 法定假期不再免费 or 永久废除高速公路收费?
2010
2012
生活中冲突时有发生。假设你班同学苏华和李江打篮球时发生 争执，导致关系紧张。请你结合此事，并根据以下提示，用英语 写一篇短文，向学校英文报“Happy Teens”专栏投稿。
Distinguish
Positive side:
1. The new allocation benefits both students and the
university in various aspects.
General
2. The practice helps students to suit into the new
——Pei Xingyi
I do applaud this practice. Above all, it helps the students to adapt to the new college life. Besides, it reduces the possibility of students’ coming into conflict with each other. Finally, it creates a harmonious circumstance which provides a happier college life for students. To sum up, this practice is meaningful in that it comes from college administrators’ sincere concern for the students.
Task
The recent national holiday once again witnessed a huge travel peak. As usual, most expressways in the country went toll free for passenger cars with fewer than seven seats during the holiday period. However, there were so many vehicles on many of the country’s major expressways that drivers suffered much from terrible traffic jams, which turned expressways into virtual car parks.
2. 词数150左右。
参考词汇：square dance 广场舞
1.Hold a group discussion first. 2.Take notes during discussion. 3.Use brief but complete sentences.
1. Start each paragraph with a topic sentence. 2. Place your arguments in order. 3. Use linking words.
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