短文改错(难度较难)_解析版

精品题库试题

用户：生成时间：2014.10.17 23:33:41英语

1.(2011辽宁)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。

In early January this year, the rate of UFO reports were steady, around three per weeks. When, however, on Monday, January 16, a science fiction film about visitors to outer space was shown on television, there was the immediate increase in reports of sightings from all parts of the States. The commanding officer, Wayne Tyler, who directly responsible for the study of all such reports, decided to making his findings known. They wrote an article, which said that all UFO reports could be explained for quite naturally by aircraft movements. Follow this explanation, there was a rapid drop in the number of reported sightings, because the rate remained above the previous level.

[答案] 1.1. 第一句中的were改为was

2. 第一句中的weeks改为week

3. 第二句中的to改为from

4. 第二句中的第一个the改为an

5. 第三句中who后加was或is

6. 第三句中的making改为make

7. 第四句中的They改为He

8. 去掉第四句中的for

9. 第五句中的Follow改为Following

10. 第五句中的because改为although/though/but/yet

[解析] 1.1. 第一句中的were改为was第一句的主语the rate of UFO reports(UFO报道的频率)为单数概念, 故谓语动词应用单数was。

2. 第一句中的weeks改为week介词per意为“每, 每一” , 后接单数名词。

3. 第二句中的to改为from短文围绕发现UFO的报道展开, 主题是来自外太空而非去外太空, 所以介词to应改为from。

4. 第二句中的第一个the改为an当这部科幻电影播放出来的时候, 来自美国各地的发现UFO的报道迅速增长。这里泛指量的增长, 需使用不定冠词。注意形容词immediate读音为元音音素开头, 应使用不定冠词an。

5. 第三句中who后加was或is非限制性定语从句中缺少谓语动词, be responsible for表示“对……负责”。

6. 第三句中的making改为make动词decide需接不定式作宾语, 此处making改为make。

7. 第四句中的They改为He人称代词的逻辑错误。前文只提到Wayne Tyler想将自己的发现公之于众, 故此处指“他” 写了一篇文章而非“他们”。

8. 去掉第四句中的for quite naturally作状语修饰谓语动词, 介词for多余, 应删除。

9. 第五句中的Follow改为Following follow为动词, 应改为介词following, 表示“由于” , 相当于as a result of。

10. 第五句中的because改为although/though/but/yet主句中“a rapid drop” 与从句“the rate remained above the previous level” 构成转折关系, 故应将because引导的原因状语从句改为although/though引导的让步状语从句或者but/yet连接的表转折的并列句。

2. 下面短文中共有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(^)，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Now I don’t watch televisions, but a few years ago I watch it every night. In those days I was not a bit tired after a day’s work, so watch TV be came my favorite pastime. Unfortunate, there were too many people among my family. Some wanted to see one programme while others preferred other. I was happy with any programme but the others spent a lot time arguing with one after another and there was no way of settling the matter except by selling