BEC雅思图表描述写作

世界主要汽车生产国的年产汽车比例图 美国:44% 日本:23% 德国: 20% 韩国:13%
日本 德国 美国 韩国
This pie chart shows the percentage of annual car productions from major car producing countries in the world.
visitors 70,000 60,000 50,000
• 动词+by 与+to的区别
40,000 30,000 20,000 10,000 0 1960 1970 1980 1990 2000
对于下降到某个位置的描述： 动词＋to＋具体数据。 动词＋to＋the bottom of＋具体数据。 动词＋副词，reaching the bottom of +具体数据， e.g. The number dropped sharply, reaching the bottom of 50 in September. 动词＋副词，reaching + 具体数据。 主语+bottom out at +数字
常用词

表示曲线图最高点和最低点可以使用 下列句型：
The figure(s) + peaked (bottomed out) at/ reached the peak(the bottom) of $150 +in December

Line Graph
The number of female smokers reached the peak of 350 in 1975, and after 1975 the rates of women smokers slowly decreased to the bottom in 2000.
表示数字的常用方法
1.应用“there be”句式（例1, $ 150, 140 pairs） There are 140 pairs of shoes sold when the price reaches $ 150. 2.应用动词“have/has”(例2, 1980) The Bluebeach town has 33,000 visitors in the year 1980. 3.应用原文中提供的动词(例3) Korea produces 13% of the total number of cars in the world.
Line Graph
1. Women:1975前上升，1975后下降（找转折点）
There was a significant increase in the number of female smokers before 1975, and after the year 1975 the rates of women smokers slowly declined.
• 右图是美国 Seattle市Green Hall超市十一 月所销售的四 种皮鞋价格与 数量对比图， 请对该图写一 个简要的说明。
180 160 140 120 100 80 60 40 20 0
00 50 80 $1 $1 $1 $2 20
购买鞋数(双）
This bar chart shows how price affects people’s demand /buying of shoes in the Green Hall Supermarket of Seattle in November.
Practice: Line Graph
• The graph shows rates of smoking in men and women in the UK from 1960 to 2000.
分析： 1. Women:1975前上升，1975后下降（找转折点）
2. men: 平稳下降
3. 时态：一般过去式
2. Findings 描述总体趋势，极值，转折点
• 开头句：描述大致趋势或总体情况 • As is shown from the bar chart above/below/on the right, people buy fewer shoes as the price of shoes goes up. • We can see from the graph that the number of visitors to the Bluebeach town increased steadily before 1990 and then decreased slightly. • According to the pie chart above, there are four major car producing countries in the world/ the US is the largest car producer in the world.
visitors
• 右图是美国 海滨旅游小 镇Bluebeach 自1960年以来 所接待的游 客人数图， 请对该图作 一个简要的 说明。
70,000 60,000 50,000 40,000 30,000 20,000 10,000 0 1960 1970 1980 1990 2000
This graph shows how the number of tourists/visitors to the Bluebeach town changes from 1960 to 2000.
• Report: More staff are needed in our department Date: July 16, 2018 • Introduction This report aims to explain why our department needs more staff. • Findings Statistics show that there exists a big gap between the number of staff in our department and staff workload. While the number of order has been growing up, the number of staff has remained steady. Moreover, our customer service department recently received a complaint from one of our clients about a tremendous delay in our delivery, which is partly caused by staff insufficiency. • Conclusion To conclude, there are many reasons for the need of more staff. It is high time that the department should increase the staff number. • Recommendation More staff should be recruited in the upcoming job-hunting season to improve our performance.
70,000 60,000 50,000 40,000 30,000 20,000 10,000 0 1960 1970 1980 1990 2000
• The number of tourists to Bluebeach town decreased slightly from the year 1990 to 2000. • There is a sharp rise in the number of tourists to Bluebeach from the year 1980 to the year 1990. • The last decade of the 20th century(时间) witnessed a slow decline in the number of tourists to Bluebeach(对象) • = The number of tourists(对象) witnessed a slow decline in the last decade of the 20th century(时间)
Report Structure
• • • • 1. Introduction 2. Findings 3. Conclusion(s) 4. Recommendation(s)
• In writing a report, how to describe tables, figures, and charts?
Line Graph
2. men: 平稳下降，降幅稍大 The rates of British male smokers went through/witnessed a continuous downward tendency/trend.
The years from 1960 to 2000 witnessed a continuous downward tendency in the rates of British male smokers.
Over the years the number of male smokers declined steadily and bottomed out at 280 in 2000.
对于上升到某个位置的描述：
• 主语+动词＋to＋具体数据。 主语+动词＋to＋the peak of＋具体数据。 主语+动词＋副词，reaching the peak of +具体数据, e.g. the number rose significantly, reaching the peak of… 主语+动词＋副词，reaching + 具体数据+时间。
• BEC写作--报告样题 • You work for PJT Co. Ltd, a manufacturing company. You need more staff in your department and your manager has asked you to write a report explaining why. • Write 120-140 words.
English Practical Writing：
Writing a Report 报告及图表描述
• 英文商务报告包括Introduction (This report aims/sets out to……)，Findings (It was found that)， Conclusions(To conclude), Recommendations (It is suggested that…..) ，以及 参考文献(reference)。括号中是每段开头常用的表达方式。
• • • •
表示变化的常用方法
• • • • • • 主要有源自文库面三个句式： 1. 主语+动词+副词+时间 n. + v.+adv. +time 2. There be +形容词+名词+时间 There be + a. + n. + time 3. 主语+witnessed+形容词+名词+in…
visitors

1. 表格(table)

2. 曲线图( line graph)
3. 柱状图/饼状图(bar/pie chart)

图表报告的结构
• 第一段：介绍(Introduction) • 第二段：正文(Findings) • 第三段：总结或评论(Conclusion)
1. Introduction 说明该图表的性质、主要内容

We should begin our essay with a clear statement. This is to provide the reader with an orientation as well as a context for the individual steps to follow.