2015年6月漫画作文解析

If a foreign friend of mine is going to visit my hometown, Shanghai, I would like to take her to Yu Garden. Yu Garden is a traditional Chinese garden located beside the City God Temple in the northeast of Shanghai. Here she will marvel at the exotic and exquisite beauty of the Chinese Garden. She can walk on the crooked bridge and take photos of the beautiful goldfish. Besides, she can taste the local cuisines like steamed buns, wonton noodles, soy milk. There are a variety of mouth-watering snacks there. Apart from the beautiful scenery and delicious food, she will also be attracted by the remarkable performance of different craftsmen. For example, she will see Shanghai-style paper-cutting, and the process of making Chinese candy and clay figurines. I believe my friend will have a great day if she visits Yu Garden. This is a place where the features of this city are combined.
PART 2
说明文
2014年6月四级作文题目一反常态没有考议论文，而是要 求写推荐一个地方并说明原因的文章，写法趋向于说明文。 Suppose aБайду номын сангаасforeign friend of yours is coming to visit your hometown, what is the most interesting place you would like to take him/her to see and why? 假设你的一位外国朋友来参观你的家乡，你最感兴趣的地 方想带他/她去看?为什么?
This modern life
The reasons why modern people are tied up with computers are as follows. To begin with, they have become increasingly busier in making money; therefore, they need a quick way to outlet their pressure and exhaustion and computer is their ideal companion. Moreover, computers can assist people to deal with complicated working stuff, make friends, and entertain themselves because they have become growingly powerful and everything else is linked with them. For instance, two decades ago, computers were far from popular and people used them to practice typing letters and do basic works. However, with the Internet becoming pervasive, computers have integrated music, films, shopping, and everything we like into their worlds. Now, when we power on the all-mighty computers, what we want is out there for us.
This modern life
As is vividly depicted in the cartoon, modern life has been dominated by computers. No matter the young man is in the office, at home, and in his spare time, the only friend he has is a computer. Even when he sleeps, what is in his dream is still the computer. Apparently, the cartoon aims to reveal the fact that the computer has begun to play a negative role in the modern life.
As is clearly depicted from a series of cartoons that a man is excessively dependent on the computer whether in working and playing or at home and sleeping. What the cartoon conveys is the serious impact of computers on daily life and it is high time we paid attention to it.
四级作文
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PART I
漫画作文
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and comment on this kind of modern life. You should write at least 120words but no more than 180 words.
This modern life
As is shown in the above picture, people sit in front of the computer all day and night, even in their dreams they ’ re still playing computer games. Such thoughtprovoking phenomenon is, especially among young people, prevail in our modern life.
命题解析 本题要求首先简要描述图画，然后评论这种现代生活。图 画显示：现代人无论工作、居家、娱乐还是睡眠，都与电 脑密不可分。本题主旨为电脑或网络对现代生活的影响。
解题思路： 第一段：描述漫画内容，引出文章主题：电脑的使用 越来越广泛，使用的时间也越来越长。 第二段：分析该现象的原因。本段最好进行正反论证， 说明电脑有利有弊：一方面可以满足工作生活的需要并娱 乐自我，另一方面过度沉迷也会浪费大量的时间和精力。 第三段：提出措施解决或得出自己的结论。
This modern life
In conclusion, while computers have contribute a lot to making our life more convenient, we should use them appropriately.
This modern life
This modern life
To sum up, this lifestyle is absolutely imperfect. In order to lead a healthy life, we are supposed to do more exercises and expose ourselves to the tangible world. Meanwhile, it is about time that we powered the computer off and talked with our friends and family faceto-face. Only in these ways will modern life become more beautiful for you and me.
If my foreign friend comes to my hometown, I will take her to the Central Avenue. When it comes to the reasons why I choose this place, they can be briefly summed up as below. To start with, Central Avenue is a symbol of Harbin, which has a long history. There are European-style buildings in mounting numbers along the street, attracting a great many tourists to take photos with them. Moreover, a variety of delicious foods are tempting. Taking a look around, I can find examples too numerous to list. The best illustration might be ice-cream brick of Ma Dieer. Finally, brilliant historic culture can widen vision and enhance knowledge, laying a solid foundation for the understanding of this fabulous city. Harbin is a city full of vitality and energy. I believe my foreign friend will enjoy her days here. Not only can she appreciate the landscape of the Songhua River but also taste authentic northeast food. No better place can be chosen than Central Avenue!
This modern life
It ’ s true that the computer has brought great convenience to our modern life. However, as is illustrated in the picture, the overuse of it may lead to several bad consequences. To begin with, there is evidence that longterm exposure to electromagnetic radiation emitted from computers may cause many health problems, like insomnia, headaches, and even cancer. In addition, when people immerse himself in the world of computer, they tend to pay less attention to the surroundings, and excessive use of the computer means much less chance of face-to-face interactions with people who populate their real lives.