中考英语一轮复习---写作指导writing 教学课件
中考英语复习:写作指导 (共19张PPT)
句式富于变化
3. I was careless. I lost a bag on the ground. (good ) ---I was careless and lost a bag on the ground. (better) ---I was so careless that I lost a bag on the ground. (best)
做题步骤
审
• 找: 表达的中心。 • 圈:要点 • 定:体裁、时态、人称等细节
列
• 用简单的句子或短语列出文章 要点。
加
• 加首尾,使结构完整。
• 可以采取总分总结构或者总 分结构,开头或结尾的句子 注意简洁,漂亮。
如何写开头
1.开头常用词语: as far as we know 据我们所知 as everybody knows 众所周知 at present 目前 first of all 首先 To tell the truth 老实说
中考指导:
English writing
中考评标准:
作文一律按档给分。 影响作文分数的因素:
1 题目要求、内容要点;
2 句子准确、通顺; 3 层次结构清晰; 4 拼写、语法等错误; 5 卷面整洁度;
作文一般框架:三段式
1)综述(总):概括性强,最多2-3句话引入主题; 2)正文(主要内容)(分):层次性强,一定要有过 渡型连接词。最多展开3个方面,每个方面最多2句话; 3)结尾(总):紧扣主题,2句话内结束,尽量升华。
如何添加过渡句、连接词
• 补充说明 for example, besides, What’s worse! What’s more! • 转折 however, yet, but • 原因 thanks to, because of • 结果 so ,so· · · that
2020届中考英语一轮复习---作文教学策略教学课件 (共19张PPT)
范文
The Internet is changing the world.It is becoming an important part of our lives.
The Internet makes our lives more interesting. We can get all kinds of information on the Internet and share it with others. We can make friends and share our ideas and feelings with each other by sending emails or chatting online. We can also do shopping, study, listen to music and watch movies. This helps make life easier.
The Internet can change our lives for the better, but we should use it carefully.
当今社会,互联网对我们越来越重要,它改变了人们的生活。许
多中学生使用手机或是电脑上网,父母亲对此很担忧。请你从学生的角
度来辩证的对待互联网,告诉同学们应该如何正确的对待和使用网络,
你写对了吗?
1. We work . 主+谓
2. I like basketball. 主+谓+宾 3.They are studen主t+s系.+表 4.She bought me a pen.主+谓+间宾+直宾
主+谓+宾+宾补
中考英语一轮复习---作文专题复习教学指导课件(共17张PPT)
We _________work hard .We _______improve our ways of study.We _______________make a plan for our study in order to keep a balance between study and rest …….
英语中用于句与句之间、段与段之间常见的衔接词 或短语有: ① 表示时间顺序:above all,at first, secondly,thirdly,then, later,finally,recently, in the end,as soon as, After a while,little by little… ② 表示空间顺序:near, next to, far from, in front of, on the left, on one side… ③ 表示转折关系:but, yet, however ,though… ④ 表示因果关系:thanks to,so, because, for, therefore, thus… ⑤ 表示目的: in order to(that), so as to, so that… ⑥ 表示列举:for example, such as… ⑦ 表示总结性:in all, in a word, in short… ⑧ 表示观点:As for me,in my opinion, in my eyes, I think, I’m sure… ⑨表示并列关系:What’s more, in addition, as well, besides,moreover,…
中考英语作文专题复习
Learning aims:
1. 掌握写作的四步骤(一审二列三连四查)。 2. 能够根据要求列出关键词,学会连词成句 、成段、成篇。 3. 能够运用一些技巧使文章出彩。
中考英语写作指导课件(共41张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共41张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共41张PPT)
美(beautify)
• mHooswt pdeoopeleopclheoosspeentdo trhaevierl vtaocgaettion? We awmayadferoam stuhrevebyusaynwdohrledreduirsinogurthreeport.(the hoblidegayinsn. ing) • A lot of people travel.
中考英语写作指导
学学习习目目标标::
1.了解中考作文要求及命题特点。 2.学习如何组织作文。 3.如何有效地使用连词。
1. 中考作文要求及命题特点
要求:要求学生在15-20分钟内,根据所给提
示,写一篇语言正确、内容完整,语句连贯的 短文。词数控制在80个左右。
特点:1.贴近生活,贴近时代,有充分的思维
加谚语(Proverb)
集中注意力于学习
We should concentrate on our studies. As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” We should concentrate on our studies...
中考英语写作指导课件(共41张PPT)
• A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home.
Some other people visit friends or parents. A few
people work.
(th and enjoy your vacation. People who relax
初三英语总复习英语写作指导ppt课件
• 提示词:family, lots of housework, learn to do, help, parents, feel proud of
举例 审清主题
• 人称:第一人称 • 时态:一般现在时,一般将来时
(个别使用一般过去时也可。) • 主题:做家务 • 文体:记叙文
teacher at school ,and so do I. My favorite teacher, Miss Lu, is a 30year-old young lady of medium height, with big eyes and long straight hair. She wears glasses and often gets dressed in different styles of clothes. And a big smile can always be found on her round face.
举例 初写文章
Summer vacation is coming, I want to learn how to cook. I want to cook for them. I think they will feel proud of me.
人物故事类的一些句子感受
• She wears glasses and often gets dressed in different styles of clothes.
大作文—复习策略 选题
人物故事 自己,家人,朋友,老师… 学习提高 学习的科目,遇到的困难和麻烦… 健康生活 疾病和卫生,食品健康… 计划愿望 暑假计划,学习计划…
大作文—复习策略 选题
最新中考英语复习---英语写作指导教学课件 (共40张ppt)
范文
A Visit to a Farm
Today we visited a farm. Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together. The farm workers gave us a warm welcome. Then the head of the farm showed us around. How glad we were to see the crops and vegetables growing well. At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes or stories. Two of us even played a game of chess. We enjoyed ourselves. The time passed quickly. Before we knew it, we had to say goodbye to the workers.
Key points: visited a farm had a picnic danced· · · sang Time order:
met · · · bus played chess told jokes· · · stories
Today· · · early in the morning · · · then· · ·at noon · · · After a short rest· · · the time passed quickly· · ·
中考英语写作指导优秀课件(共22张PPT)
2017年河西一模作文
Stage 1: 审 体裁________________ 时态________________ 人称________________
Jim 是你的一位同学。请结合下面的提示写一篇短文, 把他介绍给大家,并说出你对他这些做法的看法。 (1)Jim的父母有钱,给他很多零花钱。 (2)Jim理解父母的不容易,不多花钱,想办法省钱; 他喜欢读书,在网上买书,有时去图书馆借书;别人 买饮料喝他却带水上学;从不花钱买零食。 (3)有人认为他的做法很怪异,但……。 参考词汇:零食 snacks 要求:(1)词数:80 ~ 100个。 (2)开头已给出,不计入总词数。 (3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。 Jim’s parents work very hard and his family has become very rich.___________________________________________
• Homework : • 1. Correct the composition on the handout. • 2. Finish the composition according to the mind map.
Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.
假如你所在中学的校刊近期开辟英文专栏,征集发生 在大家身边的感人故事。请根据以下提示,为该专栏 投稿。 (1)在一个寒冷的早晨,你买早餐时看到前面的女 孩买了面包和牛奶。 (2)女孩要离开时,发现树下有一个老年乞丐,他 看上去又冷又饿。 (3)女孩走到乞丐身旁,把食物递给了他。 (4)乞丐向女孩道谢,女孩微笑着离开。 (5)你很感动…… 参考词汇:乞丐 beggar 感动 be moved 要求:(1)词数:80 ~ 100个。 (2)开头已给出,不计入总词数。 (3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。 On a cold morning, while I was…
2025年中考英语写作复习课课件(共25张PPT)
Write your story about growth according to your story line.
__________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________
correctly. • I write my story in 3 parts.
Homework
1. Finish writing the composition. 2. Polish your writing according to the checklist.
1中考英语复习初中英语书面表达写作技巧指导复习PPT课件
找一找,错在哪?
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My favourite Football Star
There are many famous football playersin
the world. David Beckham is one of them. He is
my favourite football star. He was born in England oinnMay 2,1975.
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第二段重点介绍贝克汉姆的职业生涯, 即提示2和3要点给出的信息.如:“给…..踢 球,效力于……”.可用短语p:_l_a_y__f_o_r______ 来表示.
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最后一段介绍贝克汉姆的几次中国之 行以及在中国有很多球迷,,即提示第4点 内容.“球迷”可以用f_a_n________来表示.
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第六步 誊写 其次要考虑全文的人称和时态. 因为
是介绍性文章,所以应该用__第__三__人__称__. 本文涉及贝克汉姆的内容大多发生在 过去,所以要特别注意时态的运用.与现 在有关的一般情况用___一__般__现__在__时___, 如介绍他现在效力的球队; 与过去有关 的情况用__一__般__过__去__时_,如他在曼联踢球, 应用___H_e__p_la_y_e_d__fo_r.….
My favorite Football Star
There are many famous football eckham is one of them. He is my
favourite football star. He was born in England
Now he plays for Los Angeles Galaxy. Beckham hcaams beeteonCtohina several times. He
2020届中考英语一轮复习---写作课教学课件共23张PPT
• Step2 Generating & organizing writing
•
ideas (Class work and individual)
The reasons (why teenagers smoke)
Danger of smoking
Ways to prevent smoking
•Just for fun •Look cool •Lots of people smoke •Steal money •Do harm to the brain (头脑) •Be bad for health •Learn about smoking •Keep away from smokers
Group work, individual work and class work:
Writing different parts in groups and show your writing part
Step 3 – Turning ideas into an short
article (Class work)
Task 1 Learn to write a good composition
As we know, smoking is ba for health. But now lots of teenagers(青少年) are smoking.
Step 1 Learn about the writing task:
can influence studies. Finally, it is bad for health because
it can cause disease.
阐述吸烟的危害
In a word, we should protect ourselves from smoking. First , we should learn more about the danger of smoking. Second , we should keep away from smokers. Let’s do our best to make a cleaner world!
《中考英语写作指导》公开课课件共25张PPT
一、写作要点 • “一审”即审题。 • “二写”即列纲或打腹稿。 • “三连”即连词和句成文。 • “四改”即修改润色全文。
审题:做到三审
• 体裁看清楚题目要求,读懂题目所表达
的含义,抓住要点,注意文体是什么
• 时态、人称如果是日记和故事,宜采
用过去时态;如是简介之类的,宜采用现 在时态。
列纲:做到三思
中考英语作文指导
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2017年4月26日
英语写作在中考英语中占据重要 的地位,写作分值的高低直接影 响到英语测试的成绩,怎样才能 写出一篇优秀作文,在中考中获 取高分呢?
习作范例
Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it. Tell the magazine readers. •What exactly your hobby is; •When and how you became interested in this hobby; •Why you enjoy your hobby; •About your hopes and plans for the future. 写作要求: 1.根据所提供的内容,适当拓展想象空间,灵活地将 提供的信息体现在文章中。 2.条理清楚,语句通顺,书写清晰、规范。 3.词数60-80.
• In my life, I will thank my mother forever. My mother is busy everyday. she does housework and works hard in the factory. I am in trouble, she always encourages me to overcome difficulties. I am ill, she looks after me carefully. I will thank my mother for giving me life. I will thank her for helping me. I love my mother very much.
中考英语一轮复习专项指导-书面表达PPT优秀课件
You’d better put ferns ______. What makes you choose it?
How can you give suggestions?
Contrast (对比)
Quotation (引用)
Examples (举例)
Suggestions (提建议)
中考英语一轮复习专项指导-书面表达 PPT优 秀课件
3. It is commonly/generally/widely + believed/held/
accepted/recognized that ….
4. One of the greatest early writers said ...
One famous scientist once remarked … For your
common.
For your reference
中考英语一轮复习专项指导-书面表达 PPT优 秀课件
Good language
Contrast (对比)
Quotation (引用)
Where do you think is the best place to solve a problem?
Why do you believe it is the best place?
Suggestions (提建议)
Good
language 1. Let's+do sth. / Shall we+do +sth?
2. Would you mind+(not) doing sth?
3. How/What about doing sth?
4. You'd better (not) do sth.
中考英语一轮复习---写作教学课件共15张PPT
Rules
Notice
“Lost” and
“Found”
Wanted
g
Ask for leave
Note
Greeting card
Letter of thanks
Invitation
Writing Skills
审 Reading 圈 Circling 定 Deciding 写 Writing
Students` Union
Exercises
假如你是Lily,今天感觉不舒服,要去看医生不 能上学,医生让你吃药并在家休息,请你给你的 班主任王老师写一张请假条,请三天病假。 Dear Mr Wang ___________________________________________ ___________________________________________ ___________________________________________
your student Lily
Sum up
1. The types of the writing ①Notice ②Rules ③Asking for leave ④Invitation ⑤Wanted ⑥Reply letter ⑦Greeting card ⑧Letter of thanks ⑨Lost and Found ⑩Note 2.The writing skills ①Reading ②Circling ③Deciding ④writing ⑤checking ⑥Copying
1.Learn the types of the writing 2.Train students` creativity. 3.Improve the ability of the students` observation.(观察,观察力) 4.Master the writing skills perfectly.
中考英语一轮复习-写作Howtowriteacomposition优秀PPT
Step 1.Self review
(1)Lead in Use a picture to lead in today’s topic
Mind map
你能想出多少与坏境有关的名词呢?
rubbish
plastic traffic pollution
earth animal
7.要写好 一篇记 叙文, 首先必 须确定 自己的 情感, 然后根 据自己 的情感 选择提 炼材料 ,再加 以细致 的描写 ,在必 要的地 方画龙 点睛地 穿插一 点议论 。
8.对任何 一篇记 叙文而 言,叙 述是骨 架,描 写是血 肉,而 抒情与 议论则 是灵魂 ,这四 者是缺 一不可 的。总 之,我 们要学 会综合 运用多 种表现 手法, 使我们 笔下的 文字显 得生动 活泼、 形象可 感、醒 人耳目 、启人 深思。
Environment
Nowadays,the environment is getting worse and worse.
_____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________
中考英语写作指导课件(共38张PPT)
1 考情分析
目
2 方法指导
录
3 典例精析
4 备战演练
中考英语写作指导课件(共38张PPT)
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中考英语写作指导课件(共38张PPT)
考情分析
分析近几年河南中招真题可知,书面 表达常见的类型分为三类:命题、半命 题、无命题这三种形式。文体以记叙文 为主,话题为写人叙事类、事物介绍类、 发表观点类和咨询建议类。词数均为80 词左右。
中考英语写作指导课件(共38张PPT)
简单句翻译原则(1个V)
Ving Ving+ V谓语+ to do
V原
中考英语写作指导课件(共38张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共38张PPT)
Good→Better(9-12分(共38张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共38张PPT)
1.并列句(句与句)
• We should have good eating habits and keep away from junk food.
• We should not only have good eating habits but also keep away from junk food.
• Have a good fit is very important.
中考英语写作指导课件(共38张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共38张PPT)
Bad→Good(4-8分)
1.要点全 2.简单句
中考英语写作指导课件(共38张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共38张PPT)
1.列全要点
Beginning: Body:(3个方面) 1.锻炼身体 2.良好的饮食习惯 3.保持好心情 Ending:
中考英语作文指导ppt
中考英语作文指导ppt**Introduction**The middle school entrance exam, often referred to as the "zhongkao," marks a significant milestone in the academic journey of Chinese students. Among the various subjects tested, English essay writing stands out as a crucial component that requires meticulous planning and execution. This PowerPoint presentation aims to provide students with a comprehensive guide to writing impactful English essays for the zhongkao.**Section 1: Understanding the Essay Prompt*** **Analyzing the Topic**: Before embarking on the writing journey, it is essential to carefully read and interpret the essay prompt. Identify the key words and phrases that guide your understanding of the topic. ***Setting the Tone and Direction**: Determine the overall tone and direction of your essay. Is it argumentative, descriptive, narrative, or another type? This decision will shape your approach to writing.**Section 2: Brainstorming and Outlining*** **Brainstorming Ideas**: Gather relevant ideas and examples that align with the essay prompt. Think of personal experiences, facts, or quotes that can support your arguments or enhance your description. * **Creating an Outline**: Organize your ideas into a logical outline. This will ensure a smooth flow of information and enhance the coherence of your essay.**Section 3: Writing the Essay*** **Introduction**: Begin with a captivating opening sentence that hooks the reader's attention. Follow with a brief overview of the essay's main points. * **Body Paragraphs**: Develop each main point in a separate paragraph. Use clear topic sentences and supporting details to elaborate on your ideas. Incorporate transition words and phrases to maintain a smooth flow. * **Conclusion**: Summarize the essay's main points and leave a lasting impression on the reader. Avoid introducing new information in the conclusion.**Section 4: Language and Grammar*** **Choosing Appropriate Vocabulary**: Use a rich vocabulary to express your ideas effectively. Avoidrepetition and strive for variety in your word choice. ***Maintaining Grammar and Syntax**: Ensure correct grammar and syntax throughout your essay. Pay attention to tense, subject-verb agreement, and sentence structure.**Section 5: Revision and Editing*** **Checking for Coherence and Flow**: Review your essay for coherence and logical flow. Ensure that each paragraph contributes to the overall argument or description. * **Eliminating Errors and Redundancy**: Carefully edit your essay to eliminate any grammatical errors, typos, or redundant phrases. Consider using a dictionary or grammar checker for assistance.**Conclusion**Writing a successful English essay for the zhongkao requires careful planning, diligent execution, and thorough revision. By following the steps outlined in this PowerPoint presentation, students can enhance their essay writing skills and produce impactful pieces that will impress their examiners. Remember, practice makes perfect, so don't hesitate to revise and refine your essays until they shine.**中考英语作文指导****引言**中考,即中学入学考试,是中国学生学术旅程中的重要里程碑。
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第四步:巧用经典句型
一、开头句型。ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱ
It goes without saying that... It can be said with certainty that... As the proverb says It has to be noticed that... It`s generally recognized that...
(Have a discussion!)
第一步:都要认真审题,明确写作体
裁、要求和提示要点
具体做法:用笔勾画
• 假如你是李明,你的英国笔友mike给你发了一封电 子邮件,请认真阅读并用英语回复。
Hello Li Ming, I'm going to China as an exchange student this
——主题句 第一段(开头)
——扩展句
第二段 (正文)
——主题句 ——扩展句 ——扩展句 ——扩展句 ——扩展句 ——扩展句
(要视内容而决定扩 展句 的多少,并且加
上关联词)
第三段(结尾)
——主题句 —— 结尾句
How can we write a good
composition(作文)?
How can we write a good composition?
英语写作中流行的十句作文法是由专家
总结一种高分作文方法,考生在经过短期 训练之后便可较大程度地提高作文成绩。 需要指出的是:所谓十句作文并非一定是 10句,很多考生的高分作文(100字左右) 的句子数量都在10至12句之间(以句子长 短和结构不同而变化)。如按每个句子平 均10-12个单词计算,用10-12个句子便能完 成一篇要求在100词左右的作文。其基本模 式为:
keep quite while eating or drinking wait for the elder people to eat first give gifts to important people
第三步:使用关联词
1)表层次: to begin with, then, finally; to start with, in addition, last but not least; each/one coin has two sides. On one hand ....on the other hand, 2)表转折;but, however, though, although, after all, in spite of, fortunately, unfortunately,at the same time… 3)因果 thanks to, due to,for, since, owing to, as a result(of), hence, thus 4)例证 for example, for instance, such as 5)表示利弊的:be good/bad for sb.; be harmful to sb.; do harm to sb.; …have great/much influence on sb; affect; have an effect on sb.; 6)表示喜爱的:be fond of…; be interested in…; show great interest in…; lose oneself in…; put one’s heart into…; 7)总结 As I see, As for me ,As we all know, in general, generally speaking, in a word, in brief, in conclusion, in short, in summary, to sum up, in my opinion
中考作文指导
Writing
Learning aims:
1. 学会作文审题,根据所给要点构建文章结构。
2. 能够根据要求列出关键词,学会连词成句。 3. 通过添加主题句、适当的连接成分等学会 组句成篇。
中考英语写作评分标准
一档文(17-20分)
写出全部内容要点,层次清楚, 语言流畅,有句式变化, 有复杂结构,至少2-3个, 基本无语法错误,只有1-2个, 或有少量由于使用复杂结构 而引起的语法或拼写错误, 但不影响意义理解。
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• 假如你是李明,你的英国笔友mike给你发了一封电 子邮件,请认真阅读并用英语回复。
Hello Li Ming, I'm going to China as an exchange student this
September. I will spend the Mid-Autumn Festival with a Chinese family. What is a Mid-Autumn Festival? How do you celebrate it? What table manners should I pay attention to when I have dinner with them?
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要求:1. 表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯;
2. 须回复所有问题(问题1两点;问题2 和问题3各三点),并适当发挥
3. 词数100词左右(开头与结尾已给出, 不计入总数)
4. 不得使用真实姓名,校名和地名。
第二步:
列出写作提纲(Outline)。
不要遗漏要
具体做法:
点!
根据段落整理写作要点
Write an Outline 可以用英文或中文
Introduction
September 15th, family members get together
Main body
have a big dinner, enjoy the full moon, guess the riddles
Conclusion
September. I will spend the Mid-Autumn Festival with a Chinese family. What is a Mid-Autumn Festival? How do you celebrate it? What table manners should I pay attention to when I have dinner with them?