雅思写作观点范例

Part-Time Job 学生兼职的好处

1. Help cultivate independence and develop a strong sense of responsibility.

2. Foster a sense of competition and cooperation, which is quite necessary in one’s future career.

3. Build up one’s confidence and offer one a sense of achievement (accomplishment), because one can realize his value and capability.

4. Learn to cooperate and master interpersonal skills, which are needed for future success.

5. Ease the financial strain of their family and at the same time one can enjoy a more colorful and interesting campus life with the hard-earned money.

6. Widen one’s horizon / Broaden one’s mind / broaden one’s scope of knowledge.

7. Getting a job can give you spending money and valuable work experience.

Tele-Education 远程教育

1. (优点): Improve the flexibility of learning in terms of space, time, choice of content or teaching resources.

2. (优点): Make life-long study possible.

3. Face-to-face contact can never be replaced. In traditional classroom, students and teachers can communicate directly and freely.

4. Students receiving tele-education tend to be socially unadaptable, lacking the necessary interpersonal skills.

5. The students are unable to cultivate teamwork spirit, cooperation and competition.

6. In traditional classroom, by discussing with the classmates and exchanging ideas with the teacher, students learn how to share the ideas and methods with each other and how to cooperate with each other to seek a better solution. However, students can not do so through tele-education.

7. Learning at home encourages children to live an indolent life with lax discipline.

8. The traditional school is a place where children get training of the mind and

character to produce self-control, habits of obedience as well as learn to write and read,

9. Lack adequate physical exercises, resulting in the deterioration of one’s physical health.

Coeducation 男女共校

1. The adult world is made up of males and females, so should the school be. Coeducation helps one to better know his social role so that one can easily adapt to the outside world. The formative years of children are the best time to expose them to the company of the other gender, in order that they may learn each others’ behavior and be better prepared for adult life.

2. It offers a good chance for male and female students to better understand one another, thus removing illusions and wrong impression. There are many striking differences between males and females. By studying together in a same school, they can complement each other and learn from each other.

3. It encourages benign competition and cooperation between male and female students.

4. It is beneficial to the healthy psychological development. Many psychological and physiological problems vexing an adolescent student can be readily solved in a coeducational school.

5. It is beneficial to the healthy psychological development. Many psychological and physiological problems vexing an adolescent student can be readily solved in a coeducational school.

6. It possesses a good many practical advantages. For example, the coed school has the socialization advantages. Obviously, a party involving two sexes is more interesting and likely to succeed. It helps students to enjoy various kinds of rich and colorful school life.

7. Different thoughts based on different genders exchanged in class are helpful to the study.

8. The presence of the opposite sex helps refrain students from indecent behaviors.

9. Coed schools help to get that sexual interaction going.

10. In fact boys and girls are a good influence on each other, engendering good