托福写作逻辑模板

托福写作逻辑模板

之前我的托福写作业很头疼，根本不知道从哪里提升。后来上了班，觉得这个老师的方法很是得法，就过来分享好了。我的分数是27分，而且综合写作居然是fair，这样的话独立写作应该是满分吧？先说一句，我的英文阅读量不是很大，写作除了应试作文也就写过一些竞赛论文和摘要。所以以下技巧只适用于托福作文，放在GRE上都会死的很惨。

首先，虽然ETS对独立写作的要求是300字，但是那帮狗还是会看好字数多的文章。所以我建议的字数是500字以上。一开始的时候你可能觉得根本写不完。不过，按我的思路你练熟了就会觉得500字根本不够写啊。这是一个熟能生巧的过程，之后我会说到怎样练习。

另外就是写作思路的问题。中国人写出来的作文很容易堆砌出来一堆高大上的理论，但这样的写作思维在老美看直接懵逼。所以，你的作文应该尽可能地detail，用例子去举证你的论点。托福写作是不需要拿一个例子素材库去背例子的。身边的故事也可以是很好的例子。你可以写你自己的故事，也可以写张三李四王二麻子的故事，甚至你胡编乱造一个从未发生的传说，只要这个例子能够恰到好处地证明你的论点。

再就是模板的问题。你可能觉得用模板有可能被判雷同，其实不用担心。不是那种大众参考书上面人尽皆知的模板就不会有问题。模板不仅可以快速提高你的写作速度，更重要的是能够为你提供一个更加恰当的行文逻辑。好的模板是灵活的，能够根据文章的逻辑和内容进行变化的。下面我将以我的模板为基础对各个段落的思路进行说明。

我的写作模式是经典的五段论：introduction，support1，support2，concession，conclusion。两个分论点一段让步，加上开头结尾。

首先是开头段，我的开头段基本上彻底模板化了：

Today, a prevalent statement we often hear is that……, because……. A considerable number of opponents, however, argue that……, since……. As far as I am concerned, the former/latter view seems align more with my perspective. Two reasons would suffice here to support my point of view.

你可能在别的参考书上看过各种写的天花乱坠漫天修辞的开头，但是作为理工科学生的我在有限时间内实在写不出来一个更好的……所以，用这个万金油模板相对来说比较稳妥。毕竟90%的托福作文都是两个观点进行对比。我在这里把我的一个写作练习贴上：

Recently, a prevalent saying we hear is that increasing number of colleges intend to fund many social activities in order to attract those elite students. However, a greater amount of opponents propose the idea that this policy is more likely to result in the far more exodus of top students from colleges since increasing needs of good students cannot be met in terms of this new financial

policy. As far as I am concerned, however, I am in favor of the latter view. There are several reasons to support my point of view, however, the following two would suffice here.

注意我在这里并没有完全拘泥于刚才那个模板，而是换了一些表达方式。平时也要注意自己培养在paraphrase这方面的能力，遇到好的表达，好的词汇就刻意记下来，会有用到的时候的。

接下来是第一个论点。论述的过程中一定要记住只能有一个核心内容，不能写着写着就说到别的问题上。这是一个非常容易犯的错误。这一段就没有一个什么固定的模板了我的模板是一个逻辑模板。

To begin with, although…（对立面的好处）, …（不否定论点的好处）, that is because…（本段论点）. Specifically, …（结合生活具体论述）. For instance, …（举出一个例子）. In contrast, if …（采取了对立面）, …（导致的结果）To illustrat e, …（再举举反面例子）. Thus, …（再次强调本段论点）.

在这里强调一下以上论述逻辑中用到的论证方法：

1. 因果链: this is because…..

2. 做对比: ……on the contrary

3. 做列举: first of all, …. In addition,… moreover….

这三种基础论证方法每段中至少要用到两种，才能够使论证做到充实，也才能够把文章写得长。另外，文中所举的例子必须能够服务于分论点的论证。驴唇不对马嘴的例子肯定会给文章减分的。而且例子一定要足够的具体，添加足够的细节，让读者有一种身临其境的感觉。

这里再举一个自己习作当中的例子：

First of all, although teachers at the present time seem to maintain the greater amount of knowledge and diverse teaching methods to pass on far more valuable things for their students, it is not to say that teachers in the modern society is far more influential than counterparts in the past. On the contrary, teachers in the past seem to be more influential for students because they were the major channels for students to gain knowledge in the past time.Specifically,unlike today, students without the help of the Internet, TV programs and published books to get access to the knowledge which they are interested in.In this regard, students are essential to follow their teachers all the time to gain the important things they need to know so that we often can see students and teachers were discussing paper and conducting experiment together. By doing so,their students would gain the chances to improve their academic level rapidly. On the contrary, teacher at the present time seem not to be as important as counterparts before. This is because the rise of the Internet and TV programs would afford students far more valuable and interesting information for students so that what teachers know may be far less than their students in one field. Moreover, far more TV programs and published books can provide them with sufficient amount of