雅思写作双饼图写法介绍——pie chart

2. 翻译下面 2个句子（为不局限思维，题目只给出了词组
，可根据你的理解去翻译，每题至少翻译两个版本，多种翻 译的途径通常是通过采用不同主语，或者主动、被动，或者 从句，非谓语等实现的）
1)1932，工业部门，（劳动力）人数，最多， 占了42% 2) 与1932年相比，在1992年，很多部门都有 明显的变化
words today
be made up of…, be composed of…,consist of …
由…组成（整体）由（部分）组成 1.Society is made up of people with different abilities. 2. The workforce of Great Britain is composed of five parts
department of agriculture industrial sector 工业部门
农业部门
The two pie charts below show the distribution of workforce from 16 years old to 65 in Great Britain in 1932 and 1992
P2
P3开头部分
Compared with the year 1932, 1992 witnessed tremendous changes in many of the selected sectors. The proportion of the unemployed significantly shrank to only 10%.
饼图句型分析 1
表达：1932，工业部门，（劳动力）人数，最多，42%

（1）In 1932, most of the people (42%) worked 基本句式 in the industrial sector. （ 2 ） There were 42% of the people (largest portion) working in the industrial sector. there be （3）The people working in the industrial sector occupied 42 % of the total labor force, which 非谓语——现在分词 was the most significant part of all.
P3 对比图一，描写图二上升情况
However, for the more traditional sectors, there was a considerable decrease from 15% to 8% in agriculture and fishing ，and a more aggressive deduction can be detected (被动) in the sector of industry from 42% to about 15%. P3 对比图一，描写图二下降情况

时间做主语
比较中必写句型
与 1932 年相比，在 1992 年，很多部门都有 明显的变化。 Compared with the year 1932, there were tremendous changes in many of the selected sectors. Compared with the year 1932, 1992 saw tremendous changes in many of the selected sectors.
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阅读题目和分析数据
1.Read the title and
5% 15% 15%
JECSS 35% English 30%
Analyze the number the biggest one 最大的
30%
35%
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学会用插入语
P4开头部分

In conclusion, during the 60 years chosen, the number of the unemployed and the amount of labor force in the traditional sectors like agriculture and industry declined, while government employee and workforce in the service industry saw a rocket-up.
非谓语→定语从句
（4）The people who worked in the industrial sector made up 42% of the total labor force, which was the most significant of all.
1：多句式结合：基本句型 /there be/ 非谓语/从句
15%
the smallest one 最小的 the same two 数量一样的
anize the article Introduction 文章组织 Body Conclusion
Liberal Arts （文科）15% Science（理 科）5%
占多少比例： occupy, represent, constitute, make up, take up, account for,
被动
42% of the people (largest portion) were employed in the industrial sector. The people employed in the industrial sector covered 42% of the total. 分词表被动
In 1932, 25% of the people between 16 and 65 were unemployed.
Of those who had a job, the largest percentage of the population (45%) chose to work in the industrial sector , which was followed by those in the service sector (15%) and the department of agriculture and fishing (12%). Only 3% of the workers were employed by the government.(被动句) P2:针对图一，进行排序描写
某个对象做主语
Comparatively, working in the industrial sector would be most people’s choice (42%) among all the sectors in 1932. 非谓语做主语 1932 witnessed the fact that working in the industrial sector became most people’s choice

2：主动被动交互使用
句式分析3——多样化主语 42% of the people worked in the industrial sector, which was the largest portion of the total labor force. 动作发出者做主语 Relatively, the industrial sector attracted the largest amount of workforce (42%) in 1932.


P3的开头部分：概括说明变化
P3剩余部分
As for the employed, dramatic expansion took place in the sector of government and service industry to about 52% and 15% respectively. Noticeably, government workforce witnessed the most obvious change, which is 5 times that of the previous 3% in 1932.
句式分析2——主动被动

In 1932, 42% of the people worked in the industrial sector, which was the largest portion of the total labple working in the industrial sector was the largest portion of the total labor force. 非谓语——现在分词表主动
The two pie charts below show the distribution of workforce from 16 years old to 65 in Great Britain in 1932 and 1992
P1 标题改写（替换、添加与变换）

The two pie charts illustrate the distributional situation of labor force between the ages of 16 and 65 in two different years in UK.
P4 总结特点

插入语 体会如何写长句： Like结构 While 表对比结构 非谓语 从句
summary——写作思路
P1: 改写标题 P2:排序（图一） P3：对比 （结合图一对比，写出 图二变化情况） P4：结尾

homework
1.Write words 并记忆） and recite those words（抄写
1. Males accounted for 10% of the whole workforce. 2. Students make up / take up roughly 20% of the group. 表示剩余：名词：the rest = the remainder 1. During the remainder of the morning, he helped his aunt with some housework. 形容词： remaining 2. The remaining 18% was taken up by the cost of medical care.
words today
rocket-up 飞涨 obvious 明显的 traditional sector 传统部门 distribution分布 劳动力分布Distribution of population 人口 workforce tremendous 巨大的 aggressive 进攻的， 巨大的 shrank——shrunk shrink收缩的