托福独立写作中间段思路

associated with almost every major aspect of a nation, including political events, society, business, sports, entertainment and public figures. Besides, editorial pages are often attached, which normally includes columns for the editors or the writer's opinions, the criticism and debates of critics, or even readers' letters. Such content provides further analysis of current events and enables readers to obtain more profound knowledge about the country. Therefore, in order to know about current situations in a foreign country, one convenient way is to browse through its major newspapers or magazines. For instance, reading articles in The Washington Post, The New York Times or Time Magazine helps foreign readers form a clearer picture about the United States. Additionally, there are also some types of publications that specifically cater to international readers. Printed in many different languages and distributed around the world, these sources may focus more on topics that interest people from overseas. Among the best examples are China Daily and Beijing Review could be mentioned.
• Playing computer games！
2015年3月14日托福写作真题
• Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People spend too much money on their pets even though there can be other good ways to spend money. Give details and examples to support your response.
• Playing computer games is aLeabharlann Baiduwaste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them.
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Super Mario Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles Rich Man Sherlock Holmes DotA: Defense of the Ancients Plants vs. Zombies Zuma
3. Children might be misled into incorrect behavior under the influence of computer games.
• Childhood is an important period when a person begins to adopt his values and form his concepts. Immature youngsters are lacking in essential abilities to distinguish between good and evil. Thus, they might be more easily misled by false ideas and messages included in the computer games, such as violence, sex, etc. To illustrate, …
游戏有趣 (specific)
长期玩游戏
问题产生(specific)
• 2. decrease/reduce learning efficiency (lack of self-control, distraction) result in bad acdemic performance
学生缺乏自制力 1. 不愿花时间 学习 2. 学习无法集 中精神 成绩下降
Without doubt, it will not only do harm to a child's health and schoolwork, but also waste much valuable time that could be spent engaging in more meaningful activities.
• Undeniably, the broad coverage of news reports and commentary helps people learn much about any country. Stories printed in newspapers and magazines are typically
Agree
• 1. be harmful to physical and mental health （e.g. poor eyesight, obesity, (hypertension), backache; depression, sleep deprivation/insomnia/sleeplessness, forgetfulness,）
Agree
• 1. cultivate children’s creativity foster imagination • 2. both educational(a wide range of knowledge) and entertaining(relieve burden)
• Popular game named RichMan, for example, guides players to plan and arrange incomes and investments intelligently. Young children can obtain a primary understanding of what financial transactions mean.
Lee Kuan Yew 李光耀
Working at a large company helps improve a person's working efficiency and ability. In most cases, new employees are given a valuable opportunity to receive free formal staff training. Hence, useful skills and knowledge can be learned and applied. Workers at large companies also have access to significant events such as seminars, conferences and exhibitions. These are important sources of learning. Needless to say, taking in new things continuously nourishes one's mind and makes him more competent. On the other hand, the comparatively fiercer competition among co-workers urges one to continually progress. Nobody wishes to lag behind within a large company. The pressure from others constitutes a powerful impetus to improve abilities and perfect personality traits. In the long run, people working in such an atmosphere would be more likely to accomplish self-promotion and professional success.
思路拓展
• 不同角度与维度
• 1.对于学校的利好：学校支持老师进修学习可以使教育者更加 精通专业知识，因此，可以培养更多优秀的教师，为学校的发 展注入新鲜活力，可以想象，优秀教师更加可以提高教学质量 和学校的美誉度，所以，对于学校的发展是有积极的影响。 • 2.对于老师的利好：很多从业者，每五年会产生一种职业的倦 怠，老师也是如此，当教育者感到教学任务已经没有挑战性， 自己在专业上也没有成长的空间的时候，很多人对于工作的热 情和热爱会极大地降低。相反，如果学校可以给老师们创造新 的提升职业技能的机会，会保持教育者们持久的热情，因此， 教育者对所服务的企业有更多的忠诚度和归宿感。 • 3.对于学生的利好：这个做法对学生也有利好的，当老师们进 修回来可以更加生动地幽默地传播知识的时候，老师们的教学 会更多地赢得学生们的尊敬和喜爱，学生们学习热情会被极大 点燃，学生们的学习动力会被极大地激发。