作文系列训练2
六下语文练习练习二的作文
六下语文练习练习二的作文
夏天，在我们老家的街上必定有许多小贩叫卖樱桃。
我最喜欢的是“冰樱桃”。
小樱桃们笑着迎接前来采摘的人们，枝丫上的小灯笼们个个都红得发黑发紫，还发出一种极淡的香气，看着就已经叫人垂诞三尺，恨不得马上回到家，洗一洗开吃了。
这樱桃在咬破那光滑的薄皮后，里面的汁水就一下子流到嘴里，特有的香甜从嘴里再流淌到喉咙。
单这样吃樱桃就十分甘甜美味了，再悄悄告诉你另一种更可口的吃法哟！把樱桃洗干净，用塑料袋分装成一次能吃完的量，放进冰箱里，让它们安安静静的在冷冻室睡一晚，到第二天早上，从冰箱拿出一袋，在这大夏天，它的美味就可想而知了，咬破皮，它会有一种冰沙一样的颗粒感，凉凉的，可马上它又化成水在口中，让人回味无穷，好吃的停不下来噢，不一会儿，一碗冰樱桃就这么吃光了。
部编版小学三年级语文上册第二单元作文训练《写日记》范文4篇及点评
部编版语文三年级上册第二单元作文训练范文4篇及点评
单元训练主题：写日记
目录：
1.摘草莓
2.过中秋节
3.音乐会
4.生日庆祝会
摘草莓
4月12日星期日晴
今天，晴空万里，爸爸带着我们去摘草莓。
我在车里唱着歌，大家的脸上都洋溢着欢乐的笑容。
到了大棚旁，门开了，我迫不及待地冲了进去。
那一个个红彤彤的草莓，犹如有着红宝石般脸蛋的小娃娃，在和我玩捉迷藏呢！它们有的躲在绿叶丛中，有的躲在叶子底下，还有的无处可去，只好躺在绿叶子上等待我来采摘。
我们东钻钻，西找找，也才找到几颗。
我灵机一动，小心翼翼地把一片叶子翻开，只见几个又红又大的草莓露着半边脸，像一个个害羞的小姑娘。
我惊喜万分，赶紧动手摘了下来，生怕被别人抢走了。
最后，我们满载而归。
吃着那酸酸甜甜的草莓，我们开心极了。
小作者将摘草莓这件事写得生动有趣。
运用了比喻、拟人的修辞手法，还用到“有的……有的……还有的……”的排比句式，把草莓的样子写得形象可爱。
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《写作“观察人物特点,写出人物个性》教案3篇
七年级作文训练之二——抓住人物特点，写出人物个性教学目标：学会抓住人物特点，写出人物个性。
教学重点抓住人物特点，写出人物个性教学课时：一课时。
教学过程：一、学生自学“观察人物特点，写出人物个性”。
二、教师引导：结合第一单元的《一面》、《童年的朋友》《我的老师》让学生进一步了解“抓住人物特征进行描写”的方法。
三、选取第一次作文中的肖像描写的优秀片断，让学生自己读，然后教师引导学生点评。
1、五位同学的学生作文中的外貌片断描写（即第一次作文课布置的作业）2、教师引导学生一一进行点评，指出每一篇作文的优点与缺点。
四、请一位普通话较好的学生朗读作文《老师的目光》。
老师的目光老师的目光,有时让人害怕,有时让人高兴,有时令人伤心,有时让人充满力量.老师有一双会说话的眼睛.教室里静悄悄,只听见老师在黑板上沙沙的写字声。
我们正在教室做数学题目,题目很简单,我很快就做完了.这时有的同学发出信号,我便把书本移了过去,好像很害怕被老师发现,当我回头的时候,有一双利箭似的眼睛正看着我,我好害怕,我把本子收回来了。
这时老师的目光多吓人啊!发语文卷子了,我提心吊胆地做在座位上,恭候老师读分数。
当我听到“邓琴琴69.5分”时，老师那和善的眼睛立刻向她投去了和善的目光,她高兴极了,飞快的从老师手中接过卷子,老师笑了,她也笑了。
这时老师的目光多好看呀!大扫除开始了,老师交给我一个任务，把教室的靠边的一扇窗户擦干净，我接过抹布“呼”的跳上窗台，完成老师交给我的光荣任务。
透过玻璃，看见外面同学们正在忙忙碌碌地干活，老师还和他们在一起干活。
，我把窗户擦得干干净净，放出了耀眼的光，这时，老师还夸奖我呢！老师的眼灯睛是闪烁着智慧光芒的星星。
它，就是我们心中的航标。
教师进行重点讲评。
1、这位同学主要写了老师的眼睛，围绕眼睛写了三件事，有详有略，前两件事略写，第三写擦玻璃是详写。
2、文章地采用了外貌描写的方法，紧紧抓住老师的目光，写出了师生之间真挚的爱，这是本文的一大特色。
高中语文2025届高考10月名校联考作文练习2(共6篇,附写作指导和参考范文)
班级考号姓名总分1.往里走与向外求（贵阳一中2025高三10月考）阅读下面的材料，根据要求写作。
本试卷现代文阅读Ⅰ提到，许倬云遇到精神危机时的解决方案是：不去争，不去抢，往里走．安顿自己。
正如许倬云所言，遇事向内求，才能有所应。
但现实生活中，很多人却是向外求，向外索取。
以上材料引发了你怎样的联想与思考？请写一篇文章。
要求：选准角度，确定立意，明确文体．自拟标题；不要套作，不得抄袭；不得泄露个人信息；不少于800字。
班级考号姓名总分2.尊重模仿注重创新（2025届东北三省三校10月考）阅读下面的材料，根据要求写作。
①人类从未停止过模仿，人模仿动物发明了飞机、潜水艇、雷达等先进的机械设备，人模仿人却也有邯郸学步、东施效颦的笑话，而今出现的AI机器人可以说是在用机器模仿人。
②近日，北京一所小学的一位语文老师发现，班上一位经常“咬笔头”的学生写出了一篇出色的作文。
然而，让老师没想到的是，这篇作文原来是他借助AI改写鲁迅文章而成的。
③机器的思考是编程形成的，而人类的思考靠的是自主意识。
——艾伦·图灵以上材料引发了你怎样的思考，请结合材料写一篇文章。
要求：选准角度，确定立意，明确文体，自拟标题；不要套作，不得抄袭；不得泄露个人信息；不少于800字。
班级考号姓名总分3.自信从容平时世界（浙江新阵地教育联盟2025届高三10月联考）阅读下面的材料，根据要求写作。
近几届奥运会的一个变化，就是观众对金牌榜没有那么深的执念了，对输赢没有那么多的苛求了，对运动员更包容了。
尤其是年轻观众，他们从记事起，就拥有“平视世界”的视角。
以上材料引发了你怎样的联想与思考？请写一篇文章。
要求：选准角度，确定立意，明确文体，自拟标题；不要套作，不得抄袭；不得泄露个人信息；不少于800字。
班级考号姓名总分4.知其不可而为之（广东省2025届S6高质量发展联盟高三10联考）阅读下面的材料，根据要求写作。
孔子周游列国，以宣扬其仁政主张，历经多年未能成功。
高考材料作文审题立意训练二
高考材料作文审题立意训练二1、阅读下面的材料，按照要求写一篇不少于800字的文章。
（郑州47中高三年级期中试题）有一个小和尚耐不住禅院的寂寞，老觉得修行太慢，感觉不出自己的长进，甚至他怀疑自己究竟能不能修成正果。
有一天，他再也没法忍受了，就向老禅师发牢骚，说自己没有慧根、缺少佛性，对自己失去信心了。
老禅师微微一笑说：“山腰的工地上，石匠们正在为本寺加工佛像，你反正也静不下心来，就跟他们去劳动吧，做个帮手，学点手艺……”小和尚一听，居然特别高兴，心想，终于可以出去透透风、乐呵乐呵了。
可是，三天以后，小和尚来找禅师，他满脸歉疚：“师傅，我还是回来修行吧，连四角八棱的粗糙岩石都能在工匠的雕琢下变成仪态万方的石佛，何况我是一个人呢？”老禅师舒心的笑了。
2．阅读下面的文字，根据要求写一篇不少于800字的文章。
（银川一中3月）古代有一位智勇双全的将军。
一次，他率军对敌，但双方兵力悬殊，他的全部人马只及对方十分之一，因此众将士有点信心不足。
这位将军就到一座庙里求神问卜，然后，他取出一枚铜钱，当着众将士说：“胜负在天，就让神灵决定我们的命运吧！如果铜钱落地后正面朝上，神将保佑我们战无不胜；如果正面朝下，是神让我们失败，我们只有听天由命。
”说着，将军轻轻向上一抛，铜钱落地，正面朝上，顿时全军欣然。
接着将军又抛了一次，还是正面向上。
这样，将士们欢腾雀跃，士气大振，终于获得全胜。
凯旋归来后，将士们纷纷提出要感谢神灵的保佑。
这时，将军才拿出铜钱让大家看，原来，这枚铜钱的两面都是正面。
3．阅读下面的文字，按要求作文。
（60分）（元济中学摸底考试））有位商人,把儿子派往世界上最有智慧的人那里,去讨教人生的要义。
智者认真地听了少年所讲的来访原因，他建议少年在他的宫殿里转上一圈，两个小时后再来找他。
智者又递给少年一个汤匙，在里面滴进了两滴油，“当你走路时，拿好这个汤匙，不要让油洒出来。
”少年开始沿着宫殿的台阶上上下下。
两个小时之后，他回到了智者面前。
第二次作文训练：希腊神话安泰的故事(教师用)
第二次作文训练：安泰的故事【文题展示】古希腊神话中有这样一则故事：安泰是众所公认的英雄，所向无敌，地神盖娅是他的母亲。
安泰在格斗时，只要身不离地，便可源源不断地从大地母亲身上汲取力量，因而能够击败任何强大的对手。
不幸的是，安泰克敌制胜的奥妙，被一个叫赫拉克勒斯的对手发现了，于是安泰被弄到空中扼死了。
根据材料，联系实际，自选角度写一篇800字的议论文。
【审题立意】材料写了三个人物，先要弄清他们的关系，安泰和盖娅是母子关系，安泰和赫拉克勒斯是敌人，一向无敌的英雄安泰被赫拉克勒斯弄到空中扼死。
究其原因，是安泰离开了力量之源——大地母亲。
我们可以从三个角度来立意：从安泰的角度探究他失败的原因，一向无敌是因为不断从大地母亲身上吸取力量，而被扼死是因为离开了大地被弄到空中，没有了力量之源，可见个人的力量是渺小的，要依靠集体才能有所作为（依托、团结）；要直面缺点，认识自我，完善自我；扬长避短，勇于革新。
从母亲的角度看，她给予安泰力量，却不给予安泰自立的能力，对安泰的悲剧她有责任。
所以适当的给予是必要的，但更重要的是培养孩子的自立能力。
从赫拉克勒斯的角度来看，他能打败安泰的关键在于他掌握了对手的致命弱点，所以只有知己知被，才能百战不殆。
【佳作欣赏】直面缺点，方能有所长进英雄安泰因为能源源不断地从地神母亲盖娅那儿汲取到能量，所以战无不胜、所向披靡。
可貌似强大的安泰却有致命的缺点——必须与大地母亲时刻相接。
被胜利冲昏头脑的战神却浑然不知，当赫拉克斯设法将他弄到空中后，力不从心的他才开始明白，可为时已晚……的确，人无完人，金无足赤。
缺点是人们总不愿直视的附属品，但唯有懂得直面缺点的人生才是不断长进的人生。
对于像安泰这样的英雄尚受制于自己的缺点而失败，所以许许多多的成功人士葬身于自身缺点便不足为怪。
韩信因未放手权贵而身首异处，关云长因刚愎自用而失荆州，殒命麦城，唐玄宗因贪恋温柔乡而险些亡国……类似这样的历史兴衰，个人得失不胜枚举。
新视野大学英语第四版读写教程2作文训练
新视野大学英语第四版读写教程2作文训练全文共6篇示例，供读者参考篇1My Best FriendHi there! My name is Timmy and I'm in 5th grade. I'm going to tell you all about my very best friend in the whole wide world - Charlie!Charlie and I have known each other since we were just little guys in kindergarten. We met on the very first day of school when we were both put in Mrs. Wilson's class. I remember walking into the classroom feeling really nervous and scared because it was my first day ever at a big kid school. But then I saw Charlie sitting all by himself looking just as worried as me. He had these big brown eyes and a mop of messy black hair. Without even thinking about it, I plopped myself down right next to him at his table."Hi, I'm Timmy," I said, sticking out my hand to shake his.Charlie just stared at me for a second like he wasn't sure what to do. But then he broke out into a big goofy grin and shook my hand back. "Charlie," he said simply.And just like that, we were instant best friends!From that day on, Charlie and I were totally inseparable. We did everything together at school - played at recess, ate lunch, worked on our projects side-by-side. Our favorite thing was making up crazy stories and adventures for the characters we drew. Charlie was an amazing artist and could draw the coolest pictures of superheroes and monsters and spaceships. I wasn't quite as good at drawing, but I loved coming up with the wild plots for our tales. We'd spend hours and hours lost in our imaginary worlds of good vs. evil, magic, outer space, you name it!After school we lived pretty close together, so we were always at each other's houses too. Whether it was watching movies, playing video games, building forts and having Nerf gun battles, or just goofing around outside, we never got bored when we were together. I have an older sister who thought we were both weirdos, but we didn't care. We were having too much fun being 8-year-old goofballs!Some of my favorite memories with Charlie are from the summers when we went to day camp together. We'd spend the whole day running around like maniacs, playing capture the flag, canoeing, shooting arrows, and doing all sorts of activities. At night we'd gather around the campfire, roast s'mores and tell scary stories that gave us the chills. Those were the best weeks ever!Don't get me wrong, Charlie and I didn't always get along perfectly. We had our fair share of fights and arguments like all friends do. Like the time we both wanted to be the red Power Ranger for Halloween and couldn't agree on who got to wear the costume. Or when we got in a huge wrestling match over the last ceesestick and ended up breaking a lamp (whoops!). But even when we were mad at each other, it never lasted too long before we made up and became buddies again.Now we're both in 5th grade and have started to grow apart a little bit. We're getting interested in different things and hanging out with different friend groups at school. Just the other day I overheard Charlie talking about his new favorite basketball team and realized I had no clue who he was even talking about! It makes me sad to think that my bestie and I might not stay asclose as we used to be. But I'll always cherish the amazing friendship we had for so many years when we were little kids.I really lucked out having a best friend like Charlie. We've been through so many adventures and made so many crazy memories together over the years. No matter how old we get or what happens, he'll always be my number one pal. I just hope that when we're all grown up, our kids can be best friends just like us!篇2My Summer VacationThis summer was the best summer ever! I had so much fun and did a lot of cool things. First of all, I went to camp for two whole weeks. Summer camp is my favorite place in the world. I went to Camp Wildwood again this year and got to stay in the bear cabin just like last year.At camp we did all sorts of activities like swimming, hiking, canoeing, archery, arts and crafts, and roasting marshmallows over the campfire. My favorite was definitely the canoeing because I got to splash around in the lake and act silly with my friends. One time, me and Johnny accidentally tipped our canoe over and fell into the water! We were both soaking wet but justlaughed and laughed. The counselors had to come fish us out. Whoops!Another fun thing we did at camp was put on a talent show on the last night. I did a magic show with Billy where we pretended to saw a counselor in half. The other kids screamed so loud when he came out from behind the curtain! Just kidding, we didn't actually saw anyone. But we did make a box that looked like we cut him in two pieces. The audience went wild and gave us a huge round of applause at the end. I'm not sure if they actually thought it was magic or not.After camp, my family went on a big road trip to the Grand Canyon. We drove for three whole days to get there! I had to keep asking "Are we there yet?" every five minutes until my parents finally said yes. When we arrived, I couldn't believe how huge the canyon was. It seemed to go on forever and ever. We went hiking along the rim trail and took about a million pictures. My dad tried to get us to pose while hanging off the edge, but mom said "Absolutely not!" She was worried we would fall in, but I'm not scared of heights at all.We also rode million-year-old mules down into the canyon itself. Those mules were older than the dinosaurs! My mule's name was Wendy and she was pretty stubborn. She didn't wantto go at first until the guide gave her a smack on the rump. Then she started trotting along just fine. Going down into the canyon was like entering a whole new world. The rocks changed colors from red to orange to purple. It was incredible! We stayed overnight at a little hut and I got to sleep in a real cowboy bedroll. Definitely one of the coolest experiences of my life so far.After the Grand Canyon, we camped for a few nights in Rocky Mountain National Park in Colorado. We saw huge elk with massive antlers and went on a super long hike to a waterfall.I asked if we could go swimming in the waterfall pool, but dad said it was too dangerous because the current was too strong. Plus the water was basically ice cold from the snowmelt. No thanks, I'll pass on that! We saw a mama bear with two baby cubs along the trail too. The ranger told us to make noise by banging our hiking poles together so we didn't surprise them. I tried making my loudest growling bear no篇3My Awesome Summer VacationYay, summer vacation was here! No more school for a whole 2 and a half months. I was super duper excited. My parents saidwe were going on a big trip to somewhere really cool. I could hardly wait to find out where!A few days before we left, Mom and Dad finally told me and my little sister Annie where we were going. They said we were flying on a plane all the way to Hawaii! I had learned a little bit about Hawaii in school. It's a bunch of islands way out in the Pacific Ocean. Palm trees, beaches, sunshine, it sounded like a totally awesome place. Annie and I started giggling and jumping up and down we were so happy.The morning we left for our trip, we had to wake up really really early before the sun came up. That was hard because I love sleeping in during summer. But I forced myself out of bed because I couldn't wait to get to the airport. Our neighbors gave us a ride to catch our flight.Being on the airplane was a new experience for me. The flight attendants were nice ladies who kept giving us snacks and drinks. I watched movies on the little TV screen built into the seat in front of me. But I got a little antsy having to sitongo for so many hours. My wiggly legs kept kicking the seat in front of me by accident. Annie fell asleep which was no fair!After what felt like a bajillion hours, the plane finally landed in Honolulu on the island of Oahu. Walking off the airplane, thatfirst breath of warm humid air and sight of bright green trees was amazing. Hawaii really did look like a tropical paradise! A friendly guy with a fun Hawaiian shirt drapped leis of beautiful flowers around our necks to welcome us.We took a shuttle from the airport to check into our beachside hotel. Our room had a big balcony with a gorgeous view of the turquoise blue ocean. Annie and I could hardly stand the excitement, begging Mom and Dad to take us down to the beach right away. They made us rest for a little bit first after our long flight.But soon enough we got to run free on that amazing beach! The sand was so perfectly soft and white between my toes. Annie and I had a blast chasing waves and building sandcastles. The ocean water was warm and clear and just wonderful for swimming. We saw some little fish darting around in the shallows. After a few hours, we were tired hungry beach bums ready for a good dinner.Over the next few days, we went on so many fun adventures around Oahu. We took a boat tour where we saw huge families of spinner dolphins swimming and leaping all around us. On a snorkeling trip, we got to see the prettiest coral reefs and all types of tropical fish. One day we hiked up to the top of amountain ridge with the most incredible views of the whole island.Pearl Harbor was a sobering place to visit and learn about that tragic day in history. But I felt proud of the bravery shown by the American soldiers. We also wandered around the historical sites and buildings of Honolulu itself. I tried some Hawaiian food like Kalua pork, Loco moco, and Haupia coconut pudding. The flavors were deliciously unique.One day we took a short flight to the big island of Hawaii. Wow, that place was amazing too! We went whale watching and saw huge humpback whales breaching out of the water. Then we traveled up to the Hawaii Volcanoes National Park and walked through a stark volcanic landscape. Wisps of steam and smoke drifted out of the craters from deep within the earth. It felt so primordial and powerful.All too soon, our wonderful Hawaiian vacation was over. I was really sad to leave such a paradise behind. But clutched in my hands was a backpack full of awesome souvenirs like tiki carvings and colorful aloha shirts. My sun-kissed skin had turned a few shades darker too. Hawaii had been a whirlwind of breathtaking natural beauty, fascinating cultural sites, and nonstop fun island adventures.Back home, it was time to start another school year and swap stories with my friends about our summer travels. My tales of swimming with dolphins and watching lava erupt from volcanoes definitely topped anything they did! Hawaii left me withsun-drenched memories to last forever. It also gave me a craving to explore more of this big, beautiful world on future family vacations. Maybe somewhere like Australia or Costa Rica next time? I can't wait to someday become a well-traveled student of the world.篇4My Best Summer EverSummer vacation is the best time of the year! No school, no homework, just fun all day and night. This summer was the most awesome summer I've ever had. I got to go on so many adventures and do lots of cool stuff.It started out with a big bang - literally! On the 4th of July, my family drove out to the country to watch the most incredible fireworks show. We parked at my aunt and uncle's farm and set up chairs and blankets in their big field. As it got darker, more and more families arrived carrying picnic baskets and glow sticks.Finally, when it was totally dark, the fireworks began! Bright colors exploded across the sky - reds, blues, greens, purples, and shimmering silver and gold. Some burst into smiley faces or stars. Others made sizzling noises as they shot up and crackled when they burst. With each "oooh" and "aahh" from the crowd, a new firework would light up the sky. It was like magic!After the grand finale of the biggest, brightest fireworks yet, we packed up and headed home, my brother and I clutching glowsticks and sleepily rubbing our eyes. That night I dreamed of fireworks dancing across the stars.A week later, we left on our annual family vacation. This year we drove to the mountains for a week of hiking, exploring, and camping under the stars. I was a little nervous about camping at first, but it ended up being so much fun!We pitched our tent in a grassy meadow surrounded by towering pine trees. During the day, we went on awesome hikes. We climbed up rocky trails through the forest, stopping to examine cool bugs or rocks along the way. At the tops of the mountains, we could see forever! The views stretched out in every direction with mountains, valleys, and forests as far as the eye could see.My favorite hike was up to a beautiful waterfall. We could hear it crashing on the rocks before we even reached it. When we finally made it, the waterfall was bigger than I ever imagined! Icy cold water tumbled over a cliff, spraying refreshing mist everywhere. We took off our shoes and waded in the shallows, feeling the power of the rushing water.At night after roasting marshmallows and hotdogs over the campfire, we'd lie back and gaze up at the diamonds scattered across the velvety black sky. The stars seemed so close I could almost reach out and grab a handful of sparkly stardust. I tried to count them but lost track after a few thousand. I'd never seen so many stars!One morning, my brother and I were up before Mom and Dad to explore on our own. We trekked down to the riverbank and followed it upstream, hopping across rocks and watching tadpoles wiggle in the clear water. Suddenly, we both froze as a deer stepped out onto the path in front of us! It was bigger than any deer I'd ever seen with majestic antlers and a reddish-brown coat. We both held our breath, watching in awe, as it calmly drank from the river before looking up at us and gracefully bounding off into the trees."Wow," my brother whispered once it was gone. "That was so cool!" I could only nod, unable to find words for the magic we had witnessed.Too soon, our week was over and we had to pack up and head home. I was sad to leave the forest, but brought a little bit of it back with me - a pocket full of interesting rocks and seeds, pine cones, and dirt-stained memories to last until next summer's adventure.When we got back home, the hot and sticky city felt boring after our mountain escape. Thank goodness my camp started the next week! I went to day camp every summer, but this year felt more special since I was one of the oldest kids there and got to be a junior camp counselor.I loved being a little leader and helping teach the younger kids. We went on nature walks and I knew all the coolest bugs and biggest trees to point out. I showed them how to make necklaces from blades of grass and friendship bracelets from embroidery floss. At outdoor cooking time, I was the s'mores master, carefully instructing everyone on the perfect way to roast a golden brown marshmallow.During camp talent shows, I impressed my friends with my stellar hula hoop skills and big voice singing karaoke into ahairbrush "microphone." We put on wacky skits and dances for the parents at the end of each week. I even got to dress up and do face painting at the carnival one day!On hot afternoons, we'd run through the icy cold sprinklers on the lawn or have epics games of capture the flag in the shade of the sprawling oaks. Tag, hide and seek, you're it, red rover - we played them all. I felt like I got to relive篇5My Summer VacationThe summer vacation was so much fun! School had just ended and I was really excited to have weeks and weeks off with no homework or tests. My parents had promised we could go on a big trip this year since my little brother was finally old enough to travel without too much fussing.We decided to go to the beach for a whole week! I had never been to the beach before except for a quick day trip once when I was really little. My mom showed me pictures from when we went that time and I was just a baby, so I didn't remember it at all. The beach looked like paradise in the photos though - bright blue water, soft golden sand, and gorgeous sunny skies.A few days before our trip, my dad took us to buy all the stuff we would need. We got a big colorful beach umbrella, some buckets and shovels for making sandcastles, and fun beach balls. My mom bought us new swimsuits too. I got one with sharks on it because sharks are my favorite! My little brother got one with dinosaurs which he was really excited about.Finally the day came to leave for our trip! We packed up the car with our suitcases, the beach toys, some boogie boards, and a huge cooler full of snacks and drinks. The drive to the beach seemed to take forever. My brother and I kept asking "Are we there yet?" over and over again. But at last we made it!When we first stepped out of the car, I could smell the salty ocean air. It was a scent like nothing else! We rented a cute little beach house just a short walk from the shore. After unloading everything, we immediately put our swimsuits on and hurried down to the beach. The sand was so soft and warm between my toes. The water was a brilliant shade of blue-green. I had never seen anything like it!We spent the entire first day just playing in the waves and trying to body board. The saltwater would get in my mouth sometimes which tasted really weird. But I didn't care because I was having a blast! We also tried burying my dad in the sand andturning him into a mermaid sculpture. He was a pretty hilarious-looking mermaid!Each morning, we would wake up and my dad would make pancakes for breakfast. Then we'd grab our beach stuff and camp out by the ocean until lunch time. In the afternoons, we usually explored around the beach town. We went mini golfing one day which I won! On another day, we visited this amazing aquarium full of sharks, rays, and all kinds of other cool sea creatures. I even got to feed a dolphin which was one of the most amazing things ever.Some evenings we would have a bonfire right on the beach and roast marshmallows for s'mores. Other nights we would go out for fresh seafood at different restaurants. I tried shrimp, crab, and even swordfish for the first time. I liked it all, especially with lots of lemon and butter.My favorite part though was just spending those relaxing days on the beach, feeling the warm sun, playing in the waves, and breathing in that wonderful ocean air. We went exploring at low tide and found all kinds of neat shells and even a few sand dollars. I loved running away from the incoming waves as they rushed up the shore. My brother and I would race to see who could jump over them without getting our feet wet.By the end of the week, I had a deep tan, hair that was crispy with saltwater, and a heart full of happy memories. I also had a shoebox full of all the coolest shells and treasures I had found to take home as souvenirs. As we packed up the car to leave, I felt so sad to be going. I didn't want the magic to end!On the long drive home, my brother and I crashed hard and slept most of the way. We were so exhausted from endless days of fun in the sun. When we finally made it back, I ran right up to my room and pulled out my special beach shoebox. I spent hours going through every item, remembering all the good times.I couldn't wait to go back to the beach again. Maybe next year we could make it two whole weeks instead of just one! Until then, I would just have to dream about the crashing waves, the soft sand, and the incredible adventures that were waiting there whenever I returned. That first beach vacation had given me a glimpse of paradise and made me forever long for the summer days of saltwater, sunshine, and pure bliss.篇6My Super Fun Summer VacationI had the best summer vacation ever this year! School let out in June and I got to spend almost three whole months not havingto wake up early or do any homework. I love school, but summer is way more fun.The first couple weeks I just got to relax and sleep in late. My mom didn't make me do any chores or anything. I played lots of video games and watched cartoons and movies all day if I wanted to. I beat all the levels on my new game "Intergalactic Space Explorers 5" where you get to fly a spaceship and go on missions to different planets. It took me forever but I finally unlocked all the cool spaceships and outfits for my character.After a few weeks of just hanging out at home though, I started to get a little bored. That's when the real fun started happening! My parents took me and my little brother to this awesome waterpark called Splash Kingdom. They had these massive waterslides that looped all the way around like roller coasters. I was a little scared to go on them at first because they were so big and tall. But after watching some other kids my age go down and seeing how much fun they were having, I got brave and tried it. It was so exhilarating! My stomach felt like it was in my throat the whole way down. We must have gone on those slides a hundred times.The next week we went camping up in the mountains. We hiked deep into the forest to this really pretty spot right next to abig lake. My dad showed me how to set up our tent and build a campfire. He taught me safety rules like clearing the area around the fire and never leaving it unattended. We roasted hot dogs and made s'mores. I tried catching fish in the lake with my new fishing pole but didn't have any luck. We saw some deer and squirrels up close though which was cool.At night we got to sleep out under the stars. The sky looked amazing with more stars than I've ever seen before. It made me think about how big the universe must be. We told ghost stories and my dad pointed out the different constellations to me. I had so much fun that week just being out in nature, away from screens and technology. I didn't even miss playing video games!A few weeks later, my aunt and uncle came to visit us from another state. They took us to this really neat science museum downtown. It had all these hands-on exhibits where you could do fun experiments. In one area, you could create your own tornadoes by spinning these tubes around. In another, you could build circuits and make robots move. My favorite was the planetarium where you got to see the planets, stars, and galaxies projected all around you on the domed ceiling. The whole museum was like a gigantic playground but you were learning the whole time too!They also took us to the city's professional baseball stadium to see a game. I had been to little league games before, but never a big baseball stadium like that. We had awesome seats right down the third base line. I watched in amazement as the players hit monster home runs that flew way up into the stands. One player on the home team hit a grand slam and the whole crowd went crazy cheering. It was incredible being a part of that energy and excitement. I'm definitely going to start playing baseball more.Towards the end of the summer, we took a road trip out to visit my grandparents in another state. The drive took around ten hours, but it was still lots of fun. My brother and I loaded up my portable gaming system with tons of games and movies to keep us entertained. We also brought along books and played road trip games like I Spy and the License Plate Game. Every few hours we'd stop to eat or get drinks and snacks. I loved getting to see the countryside roll by out the window for miles and miles. It felt like we were on a great adventure going somewhere new and exciting.When we finally made it to my grandparents' house, they had a big welcome party for us. All my aunts, uncles, and cousins were there too. We had a giant cookout with hamburgers, hotdogs, corn on the cob, and all my other favorite foods. After we ate, all the cousins went out back and played for hours. We had a massive game of hide and seek around their huge backyard that went on forever. It was so much fun being able to run around outside in the fresh air with no parents telling us to be quiet.In the evenings, we'd all sit around the fire pit and makes'mores again while the adults talked and told funny stories from when they were kids. My grandpa would pretend he was going to toss us into the fire if we didn't behave! But he was just joking around. We got to stay up way later than we're allowed at home, just hanging out as a family.Before I knew it, the summer was over and it was time to go back to school. I was really sad to see it end, but also excited to see my friends and start a new grade. This was definitely the best summer I've ever had. We did so many amazing things and made so many incredible memories as a family. I can't wait for next summer so we can have even more adventures! Maybe we'll finally go to Disney World like we've been talking about. I've got my fingers crossed!。
四省联考作文题之二(简约与繁复)解析及范文
四省联考作文题之二（简约与繁复）解析及范文【原题再现】阅读下面的材料，根据要求写作。
当下，很多人倡导简约的理念，也有不少人肯定繁复的价值。
要求：选准角度，确定立意，明确文体，自拟标题；不要套作，不得抄袭；不得泄露个人信息；不少于800字。
【优秀范文1】说繁道简阳春三月，花团锦簇，是为繁；清秋之际，水落石出，是为简；“座上客常满，杯中酒不空”，是为“繁”；“君子之交淡如水”，是为“简”；“台下十年功”，是为繁；台上一分钟，是为简。
繁与简，简与繁，相互对立，又相辅相成，共繁是由简组成的。
二十六个拉丁字母，组成了纷繁复杂的英文，组成了一段文明。
赤橙黄绿青蓝紫，七种单调的色彩，却构成了多姿多彩的世界。
一个个简简单单的细胞却繁衍出了整个地球的生命。
一切繁杂的背后是由若干个简单构成的，没有这种种的简单，繁是虚无的，就和一幢楼房却没有砖瓦。
繁是简的过程，简是繁的结果。
一场动人的演出，若没有先期训练的繁，哪来最后成功的简，而最后的简，又何尝不是那一连串繁所要达到的。
生命演化繁纷复杂，从最初的单细胞到现在的多细胞，从海洋到绿地，从低级到高级，从恐龙的产生到灭亡，从人类的出现到发现，变化繁多，令人费解的过程，历经了沧海桑田，海陆变迁，而这一切，达尔文将它归成了一句再简单不过的话：“适者生存。
”进化论成为生命复杂演化过程的总结。
不经历风雨，怎么见彩虹，没经过复杂怎么来简单的结果呢？繁和简看似“死对头”，但却能相互转化。
春之繁茂之树，转眼秋天到，草木凋零，一切又归为简单，而来年春风召唤下又重新复苏。
贾府大观园繁华一时，羡煞旁人，俯仰之间，已为陈迹，只剩下断垣残壁，人去楼空，再“简”不过了。
人之初，性本善，而成长经过则会使一个单纯的人变得更复杂，或才高八斗，学富五车，或坑蒙拐骗，无一不精。
人生在世，繁盛，繁荣，终究化成一抔黄土长埋地下，一切从简。
简与繁不是一成不变的，当条件改变时，他们会变，当对象改变时，他们会变，当心情改变时，他们也会变。
专题02 深刻篇(二)-近五年高考语文满分作文分类分析及仿写训练
们自己的独特而美好的未来。
采取驳论的方式，反驳创新 意识只是科学工作者的专利
的观点。
从怎么办的角度提出未来 要注重传承的观点。接着 提出注重传承要热爱故乡， 继承文化之根的观点。思 想深刻。
本段颇为深刻， 提出注重传承要热 爱民族，热爱故乡， 这是文化的根。后 又辩证的提出文化 也是民族的根。
话锋一转，提出文化基因 不绝，故乡便是安放心灵 的家园。继而提出文化是 民族的根。文段具有辩证 性。
【写作指导】 曾子的话讲的是儒家的进取精神。所谓“担起”就是要自强不息，厚德载物。《法句 经》的话告诉人们要去除胜负心，不要沉溺于纷争之中。所谓“放下”就是要摆脱私心 的困缚超脱对外物的追逐。《庖丁解牛》的话告诉我们要顺其自然，按规律行事。所谓 “看开”,就是要“依道而行，顺应规律”。担起,放下,看开,虽是三家所言，但它们其 实是各有所长互为补充的。写作提示已经说明,要综合三家观点或是任意组合两家观点 进行写作，因此,学生写作时切不可只谈一个方面，也不要局限于材料本身而大谈儒释 道三家文化，要论述担起、放下、看开,对于读书治学、成才修身等的启示意义。
有位科学家强调，实现北斗导航系统服务于各行各业，“需要新方法、新 思维、新知识”。她致力于科技攻关，还从事科普教育，培育青少年的科学素 养。有位摄影家认为，“真正属于我们的东西，是民族的，血脉的，永不过 时”。他选择了从民族传统中汲取养分，通过照片增强年轻人对中国文化的认 同。有位建筑家主张，要改变“千城一面”的模式，必须赋予建筑以理想和精 神。他一直努力建造“再过几代人仍然感觉美好”的建筑作品。
近五年满分作文 分类解读
仿写训练（二）
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人教版初三英语全册写作训练 Unit 2
人教版初三英语全一册单元写作训练Unit 2 I think that mooncakes aredelicious!本单元是围绕节日这一话题展开的，是大家较为熟悉的内容，要想写好这个话题的文章，首先要注意其体裁，通常是电子邮件式的说明文，介绍一两个中国的传统节日，内容涉及节日名称、时间、含义及主要活动，还应谈到你喜欢该节日及理由。
写作此类话题作文的常用表达有：(1) I love…because…(2) I think they are…to…(3) You’ll have good luc k in the New Year.(4) Chinese people have been celebrating…for centuries.(5)It’s my favorite festival because...它是我最喜欢的节日，因为……(6)I think that they’ re fun to watch.我认为它们看着很有意思。
（一）有用短语1. the Lantern Festival 元宵节2. the Dragon Boat Festival 端午节3. the Water Festival 泼水节4. be fun to watch 看着很有意思5. eat five meals a day 一天吃五餐6. put on five pounds 体重增加了五磅7. in two weeks 两星期之后8. be similar to... 与.......相似9. throw water at each other 互相泼水10. a time for doing sth. 做某事的时候11. the traditional of… … 的传统12. in the shape of... 呈……的形状13. folk stories民间传说故事14. go to…for a vacation 去…度假15. wash away 冲走；洗掉16. lay out摆开;布置17. end up最终成为;最后处于18. share sth. with sb. 与……分享……19. as a result结果20. one,. . the other... (两者中的)一个……另一个……21. take sb. out for dinner 带某人出去吃饭22. dress up 乔装打扮23. haunted house 鬼屋24. trick or treat (万圣节用语)不给糖果就捣蛋25. fly up to… 飞向…26. take sb. around…带某人到处走走27. play a trick on sb.捉弄某人28. give out 分发29. the importance of…. …..的重要性30. care about….. 关心31. call out 大声呼喊32. remind sb. of 使某人想起33. sound like 听起来像34. treat sb. with. 用/以……对待某人35. the beginning of new life 新生命的开始36. the spirit of.. . ….的精神37.on October the 31st 在10月31日38.how touching 多么动人39.have good luck in the new year在新的一年里有好运气40. in need 需要帮助；处于困境中41. not only…but also…不但…而且…42. between…and… 在…和…之间【典型例题】假如你是李磊，你的美国笔友Tom对中国传统文化很感兴趣。
模仿《背影》写作 (2)
（人物）特写 －动作描写
例：就在这时候，也许是教室里异样的声音 引起了“丑小鸭”的注意，她转过头来朝 后边望了望，先是惊异地愣了一下，随后 坚决地站起来，绕过两行桌子，走到那个 女同学的身边，掏出自己那方洁净的白手 帕，一面抚着“小白鸽”的背，一面不声 不响地给她擦净沾在手上和脸上的一些脏 物，同时又耳语似的小声而真诚地说： “我扶你到卫生室看看吧!”
有了初一初二的大量的读写积累，面 对中考，孩子们将会居高临下，举重若 轻。有的家长也认为：广泛的经典阅读， 不仅对孩子的语文学习有利，对中考以 及未来的高考也有利，而且会让他们终 身受益，因为读书实实在在是在为孩子 的终身发展奠基。
接下来的日子，在学校领导的支持下，全 组老师齐心协力，大力推进名著阅读活动， 在语文课程改革方面取得突破，教育教学成 果显著。三年下来，孩子们人均读书达30部， 阅读量近千万字；人写读书笔记两万多字。 2013年中考时，该班取得海淀区最好语文成 绩，周展平同学考取中考状元，语文118分， 作文满分；2016年高考，周展平又考取北京 市理科状元，语文141分，作文满分。
孤独是壶滚烫的酒，烧坏了喉咙还说不 出口。
不管什么天气，记得随时带上自己的阳 光。不管什么遭遇，记得内心装满开心的童 话。
《幸福的颜色》
扣题：
写出“幸福”，提炼出幸福感觉；对幸福
的感受，提炼要精辟。
扣住颜色，反复写颜色，但抓住核心片
段集中写一次。
课桌上躺着一张白色的校卡，调皮的阳光从窗
在读书的同时，孩子们还写下了数量可观 的读书笔记，养成了勤于动笔、读写结合的好 习惯。这种经典阅读“作业”，其意义和作用， 不是以应试为目的的《检测与训练》作业可以 相提并论的。在阅读过程中，孩子们的生命获 得成长。 初一的下学期，在事前没有任何征兆的情况 下，家长群体告状的事件突然爆发。事情突如 其来，其势汹汹，我毫无思想准备，猝不及防。
作文训练——如何写好中心句(2)吴
1.“是什么？”
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句式三：
2.“为什么？”
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3.“怎么样”
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三、小结提炼中心句的方法和原则。
1.请以“读书”为题，仿照示例1的模式从3个角度各写1句中心句。
中心句一：
中心句二：
中心句三：
2.请以“欣赏”为题，仿照示例1的模式从3个角度各写1句中心句。
中心句一：
中心句二：
中心句三：
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一、展示预习作业中部分同学写的佳句。
二、合作探究。
欣赏了同学们的佳句，我们除了知道从这“是什么”、“谁什么”、“怎么样”三
陆家街中学“主动学习“课堂教学导学案编号：
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1.学会寻找合适的角度进行变化，写好中心句。
2.训练从“是什么”“为什么”“怎么样”三方面写好中பைடு நூலகம்句。
3.学会根据题目的要求写出切题的中心句。
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考场作文中心句的重要作用：
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下面是一位同学的一篇关于《父亲》的习作片段，请你进行续写。
父亲是一盏灯，在孩子的成长中，把孩子前行的道路照亮。徐霞客的父亲并不出名，但却深明大义。在科举制的明朝，只有读书参加考试才能建功立业。但徐霞客的父亲却并没有逼迫自己的儿子走上科举之路，而是鼓励他用自己的方式度过自己的人生。徐霞客游历大明十三省，跋山涉水一生，可见父亲对他的影响，正是父亲为徐霞客指引了正确的人生方向，才使得他成为名垂千古的地理学家。
作文系列训练之二夹叙夹议
写作指导材料：夹叙夹议，立体刻画1、为什么要用两三事刻画人物？2、怎样衔接两三件事？3．立体刻画人物时，要注意些什么？A、B、C、范文1：和老妈在一起和你在一起，我的世界五彩缤纷——题记童年——保姆"哇，好香呀！"我放学回家，一进家门就闻到了一股炸鸡的味道，果不其然，桌子上摆着一碗黄澄澄、脆香香的炸鸡翅！我不由得奔过去，伸开五指山，捏起一个鸡翅就啃。
从厨房里走出来的老妈看到我这副馋嘴的模样，真是又好气又好笑。
急忙叫我去洗手，当她看到我的手指甲长得老长老长的，不禁嗔怪到："十岁了还不讲卫生，赶紧把指甲剪掉呀！"饭后，我伸了个长长的懒腰，坐在沙发上，伸出手来请求道："老妈，你给我剪指甲呀。
"老妈嘴上很不情愿地数落着我，而行动上却早已坐下来开始给我这个"小少爷"剪指甲。
"老妈，快给我的指甲再磨一磨呀。
"刚刚解决了"手上工程"，我又把脚翘到她的腿上。
没办法，一并解决了这双臭脚吧，这小子！我心里偷偷笑刀子嘴，豆腐心的老妈在心里肯定嘀咕着。
哎呀，老妈--我亲爱的保姆，和你在一起，真的很舒服！在人间——朋友"大姐呀，不许动！要钱还是要命？"我头扎毛巾，身披浴巾，肩挎冲锋枪，手持"AK-47"步枪"挟持"着老妈。
哪知道我老妈要钱不要命，宁可往我的枪口上顶，也不愿掏出一分钱来！我哪下得了手呀，只好败下阵来，郁闷！一日，我将留了多日的头发抹上点啫喱、发胶什么的，来一个爆炸头。
在老妈面前，眯着小眼睛满屋子哼着"菊花残，满地伤-----"自我感觉很"周杰伦"呀！可我老妈冷眼瞧了半天，赏了我一拳，扔了一句："小兄弟，你走错了门吧，这儿不是周府，我可不是周杰伦的妈！"我不禁喷饭！唉，唉，唉，老妈--我可爱的朋友，和你在一起，真是快乐无比！我的大学--老师"A，快来看开心辞典！"我在房间里琢磨着魔方的六面玩法，老妈在客厅里叫我。
九年级语文书第三单元作文第二题
九年级语文书第三单元作文第二题全文共5篇示例，供读者参考九年级语文书第三单元作文第二题篇1理想，是春天的第一朵鲜花；理想，是夏天的第一束灼阳；理想，是秋天的第一颗果实；理想，是冬天的第一片雪花；理想，是沙漠里的绿洲；理想，是吹响生命的号角……山溪的理想是大海，囚鸟的理想是蓝天，树木的理想是大地。
物尚且如此，何况人乎？纵观古今中外，凡成大业者，哪一个没有远大的理想！是啊！一个人没有了理想，那么他的生活就像在大漠中失掉了罗盘，迷失了方向。
如果一个人没有了理想，那么就像鸟儿失掉了翅膀，永远不能飞翔。
如果一个人没有了理想就像太阳失掉了光辉，永不能射出耀眼的光芒！我懂了，只有被理想充实的人们才会充满对生活的爱，才会找到果实累累的金秋，扬起生活的风帆，发挥自己的聪明才智为人类做出贡献。
然而我的理想又在哪里呢？我曾伸出双手向苍天问过，也曾冥思苦想过。
直到今天我才恍惚有了答案——我要做一位发明家。
一次，我家里的小电扇坏了，大人们都没有去管它。
一天晚上，我用工具把小电扇打开一看，原来，是一个零件松了。
于是我利用书上说的撑杆原理，用一块小海绵垫底，用一根小木棍把它顶着。
就这样，电扇就被我修好了。
我把这件事告诉了妈妈，她还把我夸了一顿呢！通过这件事，我联想到了爱迪生这位大发明家，觉得我也应该像爱迪生那样不怕困难、不怕吃苦、顽强拼搏、在失败中寻找经验。
于是，我确定了我的人生目标——做一位像爱迪生那样的发明家。
现在，我已经为实现我的理想而读了大量的书籍。
比如：《十万个为什么》系列丛书《世界上下五千年》《海底两万里》《追踪ufo之迷》以及《中国未解之迷》和《世界未解之迷》等很多书。
为了实现我的理想，我要做到三个字：创、信、坚。
“创”就是创造，我们作为21世纪的少年，不能墨守陈规，要勇于创新。
所谓“信”，就是指信心，一个人如果失去了信心，那么他将一事无成。
“坚”有两种含义。
一种是坚持不懈，坚持就是胜利；另一种就是坚强，因为“失败是成功之母”，搞发明创造，总会有失败，我们要承受得起打击。
作文训练第二讲 纵式结构
作文训练第二讲纵式结构简介本文将介绍纵式结构在作文中的应用和重要性。
纵式结构是一种常用的写作方法，可以使作文逻辑清晰，层次分明。
纵式结构的定义纵式结构是指在作文中使用递进的思维方式和段落结构，依次展开论点或论证。
每个段落都围绕着主题叙述，通过有条理的安排使文章内容更加严谨。
纵式结构的优势1. 逻辑清晰: 采用纵式结构可以使文章逻辑更加清晰明了。
每个段落都专注于一个观点或主题，使读者更容易理解和跟随文章的思路。
逻辑清晰: 采用纵式结构可以使文章逻辑更加清晰明了。
每个段落都专注于一个观点或主题，使读者更容易理解和跟随文章的思路。
2. 层次分明: 纵式结构能够将文章分为不同的部分，每个部分呈现一个特定的主题或论点。
这种层次分明的结构使文章整体更加有条不紊，读者容易找到自己感兴趣的内容。
层次分明: 纵式结构能够将文章分为不同的部分，每个部分呈现一个特定的主题或论点。
这种层次分明的结构使文章整体更加有条不紊，读者容易找到自己感兴趣的内容。
3. 增强阅读体验: 纵式结构可以提高读者的阅读体验。
通过有序的展开论点，读者可以更好地理解作者的意图和观点，为文章增添了诱人的张力和引导性。
增强阅读体验: 纵式结构可以提高读者的阅读体验。
通过有序的展开论点，读者可以更好地理解作者的意图和观点，为文章增添了诱人的张力和引导性。
纵式结构的实例下面是一个纵式结构在作文中的实例，以前提、讨论、结论三个段落为例：1. 前提: 对于某个问题或现象进行必要的背景描述和前提条件引入。
前提: 对于某个问题或现象进行必要的背景描述和前提条件引入。
2. 讨论: 在前提的基础上，逐个叙述各个论点或观点，并进行详细的讨论和分析。
每个论点或观点都围绕着主题进行展开，逐步加深读者的理解。
讨论: 在前提的基础上，逐个叙述各个论点或观点，并进行详细的讨论和分析。
每个论点或观点都围绕着主题进行展开，逐步加深读者的理解。
3. 结论: 在讨论的基础上，总结前面的观点，并得出结论或建议。
2022高考英语作文预测与训练(二)语言文化
高中英语作文猜测与训练（二）语言文化◆语言文化☆命题猜测针对该话题，我们猜测高考命题人员可能会从以下角度来命题：介绍中外节日或重大大事或某一组织，谈谈英语学习的体会(方法、策略、困难、心得、经受）、对英美英语差别的理解和体验、语言学习策略、语言学习与文化的关系、爱护文化遗产，以及如何进行有效交际等。
举例如下：(1)介绍中国或外国的某一节日、某一文化活动或某一重大大事。
(2)为“英美英语差别”的讲座或为“我的英语学习之路”的英语演讲写一则海报。
(3)为某报社写一篇有关英语学习方法、学习策略与学习困难等方面的调查报告。
（4）谈论你宠爱的一句英语名言并说明缘由(5)介绍你参与以“了解本地文化与风俗、拓宽视野、加强友情”为目的一次国外夏令营活动。
（6）就“语言学习中，了解文化的必要性”的主题发表看法。
(7)就“如何解决中同学英语学习中的困难”的主题发表看法。
(8)就“如何爱护文化遗产”的主题发表看法。
☆必备词句◆1.语言学习(1)扩大某人的词汇量(2) 查字典(3）强调语法学习(4)养成阅读习惯(5)阅读技能/策略/力量(6)我的阅历告知我……(7)我每天练习听力两小时。
(8)我觉得学习英语语法最难。
(9)一个人动机越强，学习外语就越快。
◆2.英美英语差别(1)美国/英国英语(2)在语法方面有一点/很大的差别。
(3) 对于这两者的区分，我感到很迷惑。
3.语言与文化(1)language learning(2)culture difference /diversity(3)cultivate cross-cultural awareness(4)Respect others’culture and custom(5)Culture plays an important role in language learning.(6)Culture understanding enables us to ...(7)It is high time for us to treasure and protect culture relics.◆4.写作常用的高级句式（1）In the course of my schooling，I will never forget the great difficulty I encountered in learning English. 在我求学的过程中，我忘不了学习英语的巨大困难。
微格作文训练之议论文写作2：三大三小结构作文
• 伟大的事业从细节的积累中来，神圣的工作表现在每个人的日 常事务里。——列宁
• 小事成就大事，细节成就完美。
——戴维·帕卡德
• 如果对细节把握不到位，无论你的建筑设计方案如何恢弘大气，
都不能称之为成功的作品。
——密
斯·凡·德罗
• 一件没有预料的事件可能引起故障，一个长久被忽略的细节可 能导致一次危机。
• 英国国王理查二世与里奇伯爵准备决一死战，决定谁来统治英 国。决战当天，理查派马夫去准备战马，马夫让铁匠给国王的 战马打掌。铁匠说：“我早几天给军队的战马全部打了马掌， 马掌和钉子都用光了，要重新打。”马夫不耐烦地说：“我等 不及了，你有什么就用什么吧！”于是，铁匠找来4个旧马掌 和一些钉子。可最后一只马掌只打了两枚钉子，马夫又等不及 了，认为两枚钉子应该能够挂住马掌，就牵走了马。结果在战 场上，理查的马掉了一只马掌，战马失足把理查掀翻在地。理 查被里奇伯爵活捉，他的王国也随之崩溃。后来，人们评价说： 细节决定成败，帝国亡于铁钉。
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• 后面一句“有一些生活细节可以折射出一 定的人生感悟、人生哲理。”提示了写作 范围及取材方向，内容必须紧扣“细节”， 而且要突出人生的意义和主旨，指向不能 偏离“人生”，如果从细节对社会、国家 等影响的角度来立论均为偏颇。
• “细节处的人生”理解点有二：一是“细 节”，二是“人生”。关于“细节”的意 义应该放在对“人生”的影响上理解。
分论点1：只有学会观察细节，才能走向成功。
递 进 分论点2：只有学会抓住细节，才能走向成功。 式 分论点3：只有学会运用细节，才能走向成功。
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2017届高三一轮复习 作文之记叙文写作 单元测试2
2017届高三一轮复习作文之记叙文写作单元测试1．（2016届辽宁省大连市第八中学高三上学期期中）阅读下面的文字，根据要求写一篇不少于800字的文章。
（60分）活着就要创造，如果没有梦想、事业、财富，人生的价值又如何体现。
——励志流行语人生本修行，万般皆身外，何必苦苦相争。
——星云物质时代，“皈依田园”似乎成了一种时尚。
河南夏邑、湖北钟祥等中国长寿之乡每年都会迎来数以万计、五湖四海的都市人定居，他们尊奉着当地人的“生活情调”——摒弃杂念，融入自然，生活规律。
要求：①不要脱离材料的含意作文。
②立意自定，题目自拟，文体自选。
③不得套作，不得抄袭。
④不得透露个人相关信息。
⑤书写规范，正确使用标点符号。
【答案】孤独婉芬慢悠悠地上山。
她身体太弱，不一会就浑身冒汗，气喘吁吁。
婉芬将披肩系到腰间停下来大口地喘着粗气，两眼四下搜寻着树枝，她想给自己寻个手杖好拄着上山，但一直没找到合适的，只得且行且找。
此时，她真希望有一只大手拉着她向上攀爬。
“哦，学武。
你在那边还好吗？”婉芬喃喃地说。
她想他了，他是她的丈夫学武。
学武走了八个多月了。
他在病床上辗转了几个月，去年年底，在蒙特利尔最冷的那天，学武静静地走了。
尽管有一些心理准备，但一直期待奇迹发生的婉芬还是感觉太突然，因为学武的癌症一经发现就是晚期，在学武住院的几个月里，婉芬尽管忙乱，但因为学武还在，让她觉得还有主心骨。
但学武最终还是走了，在这远离故土、远离亲人的异国他乡，一切都要婉芬独自面对，她感觉罩在头顶上的那片天塌了，心里承受着从未有过的孤独。
终于，婉芬在草丛里捡起了一根还算合适的树棍儿，借助树棍儿的力量，婉芬的行进速度快了些。
上次来翠湖山庄还是和学武一起，婉芬的眼泪夺眶而出。
两年前，也是在七月。
儿子放暑假回国，学武休带薪假，夫妻二人在翠湖山庄小住几日，享受清净的二人世界。
夫妻二人那几日每天上午都会上山，有时是乘缆车上下，有时也徒步下山。
婉芬清楚地记得离开翠湖山庄的那个清晨，丈夫拉着婉芬就是从婉芬刚才走的那条小路来到了这里。
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作文训练
1、阅读下面两则材料，从中引出一个话题，自定立意，自选文体，自拟标题，写一篇不少于800字的作文。
孔子有个学生看到一小孩掉进湍急的河里，就奋不顾身跳下去把他救起。
这个小孩的父亲很感动，于是送了一头牛给他表示感谢，他高兴地接受了。
当时一头牛价格昂贵，类似现在的一辆豪华摩托车。
大家议论纷纷，认为他太贪心，这让他很苦恼。
孔子听说此事后对这个学生说，你做得对，因为你的行为向社会宣告：只要冒着危险救了人，无论多大的奖赏都可以心安理得地收下，这样可以鼓励更多的人去救人。
春秋时鲁国政府有一条规定，鲁国人到国外旅行，凡是看见在外国沦为奴隶的本国人，可以先垫钱把他赎回来，回国后再到政府去报账。
孔子的一个学生把一个沦为奴隶的人赎了回来，没有到官府报账，人们都夸他品格高尚。
孔子听说此事后，不仅不为自己的学生受称赞而高兴，反而非常生气，很严厉地批评了他一顿，说他的行为妨碍了更多的鲁国奴隶被赎回来，因为人们假如垫钱赎回了奴隶，不报账自己会蒙受损失，而报账了则说明自己的人格不如孔子的学生，于是以后只好假装没看见。
道德旗帜下的沉思
抚卷于案，初对孔子的话语感到不解：义救鲁奴而不报账的学生受责备，同样是救人一命却收下谢礼的学生反得表扬。
掩卷沉思，方觉意义深远。
（提出观点，引用材料）
看问题做事情应以谁为最大受益者为出发点。
个人虽然收了贵重酬劳，但最大受益者却是国家和社会，孰大孰小，不言而喻。
其实德与利的关系并非完全对立，只是因为在我们的心中高树道德旗帜使我们
古人云：“格超梅之上，品在竹之间；德馨心必正，质雅品自高。
”的确，道德是高尚的品格。
从古到今，道德是永恒的话题，它是做人的基础，无德者不立。
但是我们在推崇道德的时候又往往过激，好像道德与金钱是天生的不共戴天的敌人似的，在评价某个人的道德是否高尚时总会把所有的目光聚集在金钱上，这是不智的，甚至可以说是完全错误的。
千禧之年，袁隆平教授接受了500万元的首届“最高科学荣誉奖”，若照以上之论，那我们便应认为他没道德吗？不，袁隆平的二系法杂交稻技术的推广，让中国让世界多养活了亿万人口。
相比之下，这500万对于他的贡献来说是微不足道的，国家之所以设此重奖，便是以此激励科学家为国做出更大贡献，让世人明白中国是个尊重人才的国家，从而吸引更多的本国人才、留学者和外籍科学家来华工作。
“重奖效应”在这几年也确实卓有成效。
雅典奥运会中国取得历史性突破，赛后国家重奖了获金牌运动员，这件事引起很多议论，责难之语充盈于耳。
但我认为重奖是一种催化剂，可以激励更多的运动员创造佳绩，说不定我们2008年还会因此夺得金牌总数第一呢。
不能认为运动员拿了奖金就丧失了道德，女排队员不是集体捐款给慈善机构了吗？无独有偶，来华赚得巨资的皇马队员不也在去年SARS流行时将集体签名出售球衣的巨款捐给了中国慈善协会了吗？
当然，我们不能见利忘义，应该正确看待和处理道德与利益的关系。
前不久在雷州海岸面对落水渔民有人喊出的“先收费后救人”的话不免让人寒心，韩国某明星借“慰安妇”之名出“写真集”的事件更是让人为之愤怒，这种重利轻德，一心往钱里钻的行为令人不齿。
把道德与利益的关系处理好，在市场经济形势下尤为重要，我们不应偏颇地盗用道德概念，而应理性地看待和处理道德问题。
朋友，让我们用理智去审视利益，用理智去维护道德吧！
作文训练
1、阅读下面两则材料，从中引出一个话题，自定立意，自选文体，自拟标题，写一篇不少于800字的作文。
孔子有个学生看到一小孩掉进湍急的河里，就奋不顾身跳下去把他救起。
这个小孩的父亲很感动，于是送了一头牛给他表示感谢，他高兴地接受了。
当时一头牛价格昂贵，类似现在的一辆豪华摩托车。
大家议论纷纷，认为他太贪心，这让他很苦恼。
孔子听说此事后对这个学生说，你做得对，因为你的行为向社会宣告：只要冒着危险救了人，无论多大的奖赏都可以心安理得地收下，这样可以鼓励更多的人去救人。
春秋时鲁国政府有一条规定，鲁国人到国外旅行，凡是看见在外国沦为奴隶的本国人，可以先垫钱把他赎回来，回国后再到政府去报账。
孔子的一个学生把一个沦为奴隶的人赎了回来，没有到官府报账，人们都夸他品格高尚。
孔子听说此事后，不仅不为自己的学生受称赞而高兴，反而非常生气，很严厉地批评了他一顿，说他的行为妨碍了更多的鲁国奴隶被赎回来，因为人们假如垫钱赎回了奴隶，不报账自己会蒙受损失，而报账了则说明自己的人格不如孔子的学生，于是以后只好假装没看见。
道德旗帜下的沉思
抚卷于案，初对孔子的话语感到不解：义救鲁奴而不报账的学生受责备，同样是救人一命却收下谢礼的学生反得表扬。
掩卷沉思，方觉意义深远。
（提出观点，引用材料）
看问题做事情应以谁为最大受益者为出发点。
个人虽然收了贵重酬劳，但最大受益者却是国家和社会，孰大孰小，不言而喻。
其实德与利的关系并非完全对立，只是因为在我们的心中高树道德旗帜使我们
古人云：“格超梅之上，品在竹之间；德馨心必正，质雅品自高。
”的确，道德是高尚的品格。
从古到今，道德是永恒的话题，它是做人的基础，无德者不立。
但是我们在推崇道德的时候又往往过激，好像道德与金钱是天生的不共戴天的敌人似的，在评价某个人的道德是否高尚时总会把所有的目光聚集在金钱上，这是不智的，甚至可以说是完全错误的。
千禧之年，袁隆平教授接受了500万元的首届“最高科学荣誉奖”，若照以上之论，那我们便应认为他没道德吗？不，袁隆平的二系法杂交稻技术的推广，让中国让世界多养活了亿万人口。
相比之下，这500万对于他的贡献来说是微不足道的，国家之所以设此重奖，便是以此激励科学家为国做出更大贡献，让世人明白中国是个尊重人才的国家，从而吸引更多的本国人才、留学者和外籍科学家来华工作。
“重奖效应”在这几年也确实卓有成效。
雅典奥运会中国取得历史性突破，赛后国家重奖了获金牌运动员，这件事引起很多议论，责难之语充盈于耳。
但我认为重奖是一种催化剂，可以激励更多的运动员创造佳绩，说不定我们2008年还会因此夺得金牌总数第一呢。
不能认为运动员拿了奖金就丧失了道德，女排队员不是集体捐款给慈善机构了吗？无独有偶，来华赚得巨资的皇马队员不也在去年SARS流行时将集体签名出售球衣的巨款捐给了中国慈善协会了吗？
当然，我们不能见利忘义，应该正确看待和处理道德与利益的关系。
前不久在雷州海岸面对落水渔民有人喊出的“先收费后救人”的话不免让人寒心，韩国某明星借“慰安妇”之名出“写真集”的事件更是让人为之愤怒，这种重利轻德，一心往钱里钻的行为令人不齿。
把道德与利益的关系处理好，在市场经济形势下尤为重要，我们不应偏颇地盗用道德概念，而应理性地看待和处理道德问题。
朋友，让我们用理智去审视利益，用理智去维护道德吧！。