高中英语 概要写作

概要

新高考考试说明

新题型：概要写作（25 分）

要求：基于一篇350字左右的文章写一篇60字左右的概要，

不得照抄原文当中的句子。字数多于80或少于40扣2分

Summary Writing

共性问题：Copy the original sentences totally or randomly without your own words; pay no attention to the structure of the sentences; catch the wrong key points.

What is a summary?

简洁完整客观

It’s a concise , complete and objective restatement of the key points of a passage in your own words.

No details/examples/repetition/comments

Steps for summary writing （写作步骤）1) Read the passage for the style , structure and

key points . 2) Rewrite the key points in our own words

briefly and coherently .

①②③简洁连贯

Read for the style:

What’s the style of the passage?

A. Narration 记叙文

B. Argumentation 议论文

C. Exposition 说明文

The structure of an exposition （说明文结构）The topic-what

The reason-why

The method-how

The solution/conclusion

Read for the structure:

Para. 1 Four elements

The topic

The reason

The method

The result Paragraph Para. 2 Para. 3 Para. 4

Read for the key points:1) What’s the topic of this passage? (Para. 1) 2) Why did Ebbesmeyer want to study ocean currents in this special way? (Para. 2) 3) How did he collect data? (Para. 3) 4) What’s the result of his work? (Para. 4) Ebbesmeyer studies ocean currents in a special way. (Point1)If he learnt when and where the shoes went into the water and tracked where they landed, he could learn a lot about the patterns of ocean currents. (Point 2)

Ebbesmeyer got to know a lot of beachcombers and asked for their help in collecting information about where the shoes landed. With this data, …(Point 3)

As the result of his work, Ebbesmeyer has become known as the scientist to call with questions about any unusual objects found floating in the ocean. (Point 4)

概要 Point 1:

Ocean expert Curtis Ebbesmeyer studies ocean currents in a special way.in …way 用…方法 employ/adopt/use different; new; unusual; unique

way 采用；使用(…方法)

special method; approach 1.Curtis Ebbesmeyer, an ocean expert, employs a new way

to study ocean currents.

Tip1: Change the part of speech 改变词性Tip2: Use words of similar meaning 近义词替换

概要What happened to the shoes?

fell into the water in a shipping accident

washed up on the shores abandoned/unwanted

inspire

Point 2:

概要 2._______________________________________________ inspired him to carry out an experiment.

What happened to the shoes in a shipping accident All that happened to the shoes in a shipping accident

Tip3: Simplify description by using general words

If he learned when and where the shoes went into water, he could learn a lot about the patterns of ocean currents. 简化描述