雅思写作task 1 曲线图

• 引言： • 1.直接开门见山,给曲线下定义，即日期，地点，曲 线讲述了什么内容。（第一句，注意时态用一般现 在时） • The graph shows....... • (chart,table,diagram)(indicates,illustrates,describes,gi ves,presents,reveals) • eg：The graph shows the number of cases of X disease in Someland between the years 1960 and 1995 • 2.第二句，第三句要总结出曲线的总体趋势（要注 意使用的时态） • eg：It can be clearly seen that X disease increased rapidly to 500 cases around the 1980s and then dropped to zero before 1999,while Y disease fell consistently from a high point of nearly 600 case in1960 to less that 100 cases in 1996
单条曲线（single line graph）
• You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph below.You should write at least 150 words.
• 避免重复： • 如果是准确使用了各种结构和大量的词 汇，得分就会很高。
两条曲线
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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph below.You should write at least 150 words.
• 主体： • 曲线一般以年代顺序来显示信息，所 以最恰当的逻辑顺序是从最早的时间一直 写到最晚的时间。
• 结束句： • 报告要用一两句话来概括内容，得出一 个相关结论 eg：In conclusion, the graph shows that the disease was increasingly prevalent until the 1980s when it was eradicated from Someland.
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考生答卷一： The graph shows the rate of smoking in Someland. In1960,600 men in every 1000 was smoking.This number decreased gradually to 500 by 1974 and continued to decrease but more steeply to 300 in 1996.In contrast the rate of women smokers in1960 was very low at onlt 80 in every1000.This number incresed to 170 by 1968 and increased again but more steeply to 320 in 1977.The rate of female smokers then remained stable at 320 until 1984 at which point the figures began to decline and had dropped to 250 by 1995. 考生答卷二 The graph compares the rate of smoking in men and women in Someland between the years1960 and 2000.It can be clearly seen that the rate of smoking for both men and women iacurrently declining and that fewer women have smoked throughout the period. In 1960,600men in ever 1000 was smoking.This number decreased gradually to 500 by 1974 and continued to decrese but more steeply to 250 in 2000.In contract,the rate of smoking in women in1960 was very low at only 80 in ever 1000.By 1968 this increased to 170,and increased again but more steeply to 320 in 1977.The rate of female smokers then remained stable at 320 until 1984 at which point the figures began to decline and had dropped to 200 by 2000. In conclusion ,we can see that the rate of smoking in men dropped throughout the whole period but was always at a higher level than the female figures, The rate of smoking inwomen increased until 1977 but then decreased for the rest the period.
分析
1.起始段，对曲线的信息进行概括。 2.对整个曲线进行了概括性描述；使用了 连接词and，until，befor来组成连贯的句 子。
1.对曲线的各个组成部分进行了细致的描 述。 2.段落中使用了不同程度的动词、形容词 和副词来准确描述曲线。将时间和数字 包括进来反映曲线的信息。
再次对曲线进行总结
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图表出题频率：最多柱状图，其次曲线图，再者饼状图，表格。
图表大忌：切忌发表个人观点和看法，切忌照搬题目、切忌简单罗列数据、避免词汇 重复 写作注意事项： 词汇语法：词汇准确多样，不能重复 those who work in = people working in = the employee in 句子：结构不能太简单，一句话要同时写两个对象的特征。 逻辑：句子里，句子与句子之间，段与段之间都要使用表示对比，转折，相似的连词 或副词。 时态：第一句使用一般现在时，主体部分大多用一般过去式。
内容
The graph shows the number of cases of X disease in Someland between the years 1960 and 1995.As an overall trend,it is clear that the numerber of cases of the disease increased fairly rapidly until the mid seventies,and remained constant for around a decade at 500 cases before dropping to zero in the late 1980s. In 1960,the number of cases stood at approximately 100.That number rose steadily to 200 by 1969 and then more sharply to 500 in 1977.At this point the number of cases remained stable until 1984 before plummeting to zero by 1988.From 1988 to 1995 Someland was free of the disease. In conclusion, the graph shows that the disease was increasingly prevalent until the 1980s when it was eradicated from Someland.
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Biblioteka Baidu
考生答卷一： The graph shows the rate of smoking in Someland. In1960,600 men in every 1000 was smoking.This number decreased gradually to 500 by 1974 and continued to decrease but more steeply to 300 in 1996.In contrast the rate of women smokers in1960 was very low at onlt 80 in every1000.This number incresed to 170 by 1968 and increased again but more steeply to 320 in 1977.The rate of female smokers then remained stable at 320 until 1984 at which point the figures began to decline and had dropped to 250 by 1995. 考生答卷二 The graph compares the rate of smoking in men and women in Someland between the years1960 and 2000.It can be clearly seen that the rate of smoking for both men and women is currently declining and that fewer women have smoked throughout the period. In 1960,600men in ever 1000 was smoking.This number decreased gradually to 500 by 1974 and continued to decrese but more steeply to 250 in 2000.In contract,the rate of smoking in women in1960 was very low at only 80 in ever 1000.By 1968 this increased to 170,and increased again but more steeply to 320 in 1977.The rate of female smokers then remained stable at 320 until 1984 at which point the figures began to decline and had dropped to 200 by 2000. In conclusion ,we can see that the rate of smoking in men dropped throughout the whole period but was always at a higher level than the female figures, The rate of smoking inwomen increased until 1977 but then decreased for the rest the period.
雅思写作task 1
By Eileen
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一．图表简介： 图表分类：
图表通常分为两大类。一类是数据图，包括曲线图（graph/ line chart），柱状图 （bar chart/ column chart），饼状图（pie chart）和表格（table）。
另一类是示意图/流程图（diagram/flow chart）。目前在雅思考试中主要出现的是数 据图。