高考英语作文写作技巧点拨系列

well
to
come
to
school
to_communicate_with_students_face_to_face.
5．我的确希望我的建议对你有所帮助。盼望着早日收到你
的好消息。
I do_hope my suggestions can be helpful for you. I'm looking_forward_to_getting_your_good_news soon.
满分作文怎样得——四步作文法
书信邮件类 题目要求 (2017·全国卷Ⅱ) 假定你是李华，想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸 (paper-cutting)艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括： 1．展览时间、地点； 2．展览内容。 注意：1.词数100左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
解题思路 四步作文法 第一步 审题谋篇 1．体裁 邀请信 2．时态 一般现在时和将来时 3．人称 第三人称为主
Looking forward to your early reply. Yours， Li Hua
(2018·安徽“皖南八校”高三第三次联考) 假定你是李华。你的笔友Tom给你写信咨询“如何在班级 创设浓厚的汉语学习氛围”。请你根据提示给他写一封英文回 信。内容包括： 1．宣传标语用英汉双语； 2．开设汉语角； 3．邀请汉语外教来学校上课。 注意：1.词数100左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
第三步 句式要美 1．句2合并升级为定语从句 All_the_signs_and_slogans_in_your_class_should_be_written_ both_in_Chinese_and_English,_which_can_create_an_atmosphere_t o_learn_Chinese. 2．句3合并升级为定语从句 You_should_set_up_a_Chinese_Corner,_where_you_can_pract ice_your_spoken_Chinese. 3．句4把know Chinese well升级高频短语 You_should_invite_some_Chinese_teachers_who_have_a_goo d_command_of_Chinese_to_come_to_school_to_communicate_wit h_students_face_to_face.
cutting exhibition.Paper-cutting is one of chinese traditions and I'm sure you will like it.The exhibition will be held in the local museum next saturday some famous chinese artists will perform on that day.Meanwhile，some beautiful paper cutting works，collected from all over the country, will be exhibited there.If you like， you can also join in paper-cutting.I'm sure it will be an unforgettable experience for you.I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Paper-cutting
is
one
of_Chinese_traditional_art_forms_and_I'm_sure_you_will_like_it.
3．艺术展将在下星期六上午8点到11点在当地博物馆举
行。
The exhibition will_be_held_in_the_local_museum_from_8：
Some
beautiful
paper-cutting
works,
which_were_collected_from_all_over_the_country,_will_be_on_sho
w.
6．如果你喜欢，你也能参加剪纸活动。我相信对你而言将 是一个令人难忘的经历。
If you like, you_can_also_join_in_paper-cutting. I'm_sure_it_will_be_an_unforgettable_experience_for_you.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you. Yours， Li Hua
现场阅卷·作文升格 学生答卷 Dear Henry， I'm Li Hua，one of your students.I'm writing to invite you to the paper
Yours，
Li Hua
我来阅卷 该生习作为四档作文，得分为18分。作文语言准确，而且 使用了非谓语动词、复合句(包括主语从句、状语从句)等，总 体来说是一篇相当不错的作文。但是，文章没有分段，缺少框 架意识，把所有内容混搭在一起，给阅卷老师判卷带来了困 难，从而影响了得分。
五档作文 如果我们把该文分成三段，前两句为第一段，简要说明要 举行摄影展以及主题；后两句为第三段，对对方来参加比赛提 出期待；中间为第二段，对要点进行详细的阐述。这样段落分 明、结构清晰，自然会受到阅卷老师的青睐，起评分自然就会 高。当然，如果我们再对句子进行一下整合会更好。请看整合 后的文章：
arning_Chinese. 2．班里所有的宣传标语既用汉语也用英语写。这样能创造
Βιβλιοθήκη Baidu
出学习汉语的氛围。
All the signs and slogans in your class should
be_written_both_in_Chinese_and_English.
It
can
create_an_atmosphere_to_learn_Chinese.
The exhibition will be held in the local museum from 8：00 am to 5：00 pm next Saturday. Some famous Chinese artists will perform on that
day. Meanwhile, some beautiful paper-cutting works, collected from all over the country, will be on show. If you are interested in the Chinese folk art, you can also join in paper-cutting. I'm sure it will be an unforgettable experience for you.
00_am_to_11：00_am_next_Saturday.
4．有一些著名的艺术家将当场表演如何剪纸。
There_are_some_famous_artists.
They
will
perform_how_to_cut_paper_on_the_spot.
5．从全国各地收集的一些漂亮的剪纸艺术画将被展出。
3．在班级里你们应该创办汉语角，你们可以练习汉语口 语。
You should set_up_a_Chinese_Corner. There you can practice_your_spoken_Chinese.
4．你们应该邀请一些精通汉语的中文老师来学校与学生面 对面地交流。
You should invite some Chinese teachers who know Chinese
四步作文法 第一步 审题谋篇 1．体裁 建议信 2．时态 一般现在时 3．人称 第二人称为主
第二步 要点要全
1．从你信中我得知你们班要培养学生讲汉语的兴趣。
From
your
letter,
I_know_that_your_class_will_develop_the_students'_interest_in_le
Dear Tom， How are you doing? I'm glad to hear from you. From your letter, _______________________________________________________ _________________ ___________________________________________________ _____________________ ___________________________________________________ _____________________ ___________________________________________________ _____________________ Yours sincerely， Li Hua
Dear Henry，
I'm Li Hua, one of your students. I'm writing to invite you to attend the Chinese paper-cutting exhibition. Paper-cutting is a traditional art form in China, which has a history of more than 1,500 years, and I'm sure you will like it.
The exhibition will be held in the local museum from 8：00 am to 11：00 am next Saturday. There are some famous artists who will
perform how to cut paper on the spot. Meanwhile, some beautiful paper-cutting works, collected from all over the country, will be on show there. If you like, you can also join in paper-cutting. I'm sure it will be an unforgettable experience for you.
7．盼望着收到你的来信。 I'm_looking_forward_to_hearing_from_you.
第三步 句式要美 1．句4合并升级为定语从句 There_are_some_famous_artists_who_will_perform_how_to_c ut_paper_on_the_spot. 2．句5升级为过去分词作定语 Some_beautiful_paper-cutting_works,_collected_from_all_ove r_the_country,_will_be_on_show.
第四步 衔接要顺 One possible version： Dear Henry， I'm Li Hua, one of your students. I'm writing to invite you to visit the paper-cutting exhibition. Paper-cutting is one of Chinese traditional art forms and I'm sure you will like it.
第二步 要点要全
1．我是你的学生李华。
I'm_Li_Hua,_one_of_your_students. 2．我写信想邀请你参观中国剪纸艺术展。剪纸是中国的传
统艺术形式之一，我确信你一定会喜欢剪纸。
I'm writing to invite_you_to_visit_the_paper-cutting_exhibition.