如何写好雅思小作文

This was followed by a drop in September to Dhs 120 million before recovering to Dhs 180 million. In October and November, sales remained steady, and there was a small increase in December to 190 million dirhams.

The chart below shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in America and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999.


The chart below shows the different levels of postschool qualifications in America and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999. 改后：The bar chart illustrates the diverse levels of post-school certificates in the US and the percentage of males and females holding them in 1999.
The table illustrates the information of the countries of Madagascar and Mauritius around the Indian Ocean in 1999.
具体趋势描写

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The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999. 改后：The chart describes the percentage of diverse types of poor families in Australia in 1999.

As we can see from the line graph, the Dubai gold sales fluctuated in 2002.
Number of full-time teachers of regular schools (in millions) in China (1960-1990).
The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999.
Family type Proportion of people from each household type living in poverty

The next four months saw a steady decline, reaching a low point of 120 million dirhams in July.
In August, there was a sudden increase. Sales almost doubled, rising from Dhs 120 million in July to Dhs 210 million in August.
主题句常用句型


The overall / general trend indicates … There was an overall + 趋势 It is clear that…/ It can be (clearly) seen that… From图的类型, it can be (safely) concluded that… One of the most surprising/interesting features/trends was…
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时态：一般过去时
如果图表是对将来的预测，用一般现在时
结构：主题句+ 分项描述具体趋势 段落

一张图一般写一段 多张图之间如有联系，可写一段；如没联系，
几张图写几段 流程图一般写一段
主题句常用句型

According to the 图的类型 As shown in the 图的类型 As can be seen from the 图的类型 It is clear/apparent/manifest/obvious from the 图 的类型 that ..
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‚三不政策‛
不要主观描述
不要分析原因 不要寻找本质
总结段常用短语


in short, in brief, in conclusion, in sum, in summary, in closing, to conclude, to sum up, finally, overall, all in all 参见‘主题句常用句型’

In conclusion, it can be clearly seen from the chart that the main sales period was in the early part of the year, plummeting in the summer, except for a sudden increase in August.
雅思小作文 - 结构
时态确定原则



当句子主语是图表，即chart / graph / curve / pie / column / bar / table时，一般现在时 当句子主语是图表中的信息时，时态由信息所 对应的时间来确定 如果没有具体时间，默认为一般现在时
结构
Introduction 总起段
亮点句型


According to/As (is) shown in/As can be seen from the table, chart, diagram, graph, figures It can be seen/observed from/ we can see from … It is clear/apparent from the table/chart/diagram/graph/figures (that)...
改写练习

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According to the figure, there was a sharp decrease in the number of teachers from five millions in 1960 to three millions in 1962, which was followed by a rapid increase over the next two years.
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It can be seen that there was an increasing trend from 1960 to 1990. However, there were some fluctuations in earlier years. According to the figure, although there were some fluctuations in earlier years, there exists indeed an increasing trend. The overall trend was to indicate the increasingly growing number, although there exists some fluctuations in the earlier years.
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The number rose again from just under six million in 1964 to six million in 1966 and then went up gradually until 1976 when there was a leveling off at eight millions for the next ten years.
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In conclusion, more teachers were in Chinese regular schools in the 1990 than 30 years before.
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双刃剑 量力而为


What is worth mentioning is that since the overall percentages exceed 100%, it can be concluded that some adults choose several reasons for studying.
Body 主体段 Conclusion 总结段
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首句 改写文章标题 1.主题句 2.具体趋势 + 数据支持 describe, compare, contrast 重申总体趋势
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有可能的话点出隐藏信息
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时态：一般现在时 无需自己的想法 改写原题

增加、减少或替换单词 连续的5个字不能按顺序的重复出现


More specifically , in January, gold sales were/stood at about 200 million dirhams per month. In February they increased slightly to Dhs 220 million, rising sharply to a peak of 350 million dirhams in March.
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The years from 1986 to 1990 saw a steady rise in the number of teachers.
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