高考英语漫画作文练习

高考英语漫画作文练习
高考英语漫画作文练习

漫画作文练习十三篇

首先要描述图画,然后介绍图画背后所反映的问题,最后联系实际发表自己的观点。

练习1

注意:1 )仔细品味图中文字的幽默、无奈,要适当发挥想象,不要做简单描述。

2 )词数150 左右。

3 )开头已经写好,不计人总词数。

To most of the parents , it is no easy job to keep their children away from the

personal computer.

Nearly all parents are thinking of the most effective ways to make the Internet safer for their children . Their solutions are as follows . Some of them think advanced hardware can be equipped into computers for network security while some parents prefer security software available on the Internet.If these don’t work , they will cover the screen with underwear to protect their children from harmful information.

Nowadays it is well known that teenager network security has become so serious that the whole society focuses on it . In my opinion ,much attention should be paid to this issue . As parents , they are supposed to communicate with their children to help them make good use of the Internet with their study. Additionally, it is our government’s responsibilities to take actions to c reate a greener Internet

environment. As for ourselves , we should build up strong self-awareness . It is important for us to concentrate on the useful information rather than computer games and so on .

练习2

下图描绘的是现在人类面临的窘境。请你根据对下面这幅漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文,描述这种现象,说明其产生的原因及后果,并发表你的看法。

If only I could keep a

real bird!

注意:

1. 仔细品味图中的幽默,要适当发挥想象,不要做简单描述。

2. 词数150左右。开头已经写好,不计入总词数。

3. 作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。

Nowadays, human beings are faced with an embarrassing situation.

In the cartoon, we can see a man talking to a paper bird kept in his cage and beside him is a vast desert dotted with endless tree roots. Obviously, birds have lost their homes as people have cut down all the trees. As a result, humans have lost their animal friends.

The scene may seem ridiculous and unbelievable to us, but it may become a reality in the future if we go on developing economy regardless of the damage caused to the environment. Now in some places, trees have been cut down without limits. Some scientists say that there will be no vast forests in 20 or 30 years and many species will die out. It is really a terrible thing.

Therefore, we should realize the importance of environmental protection and live in harmony with our animal friends. …

随着人民生活水平的提高,人们愈发关注食品质量安全。“三鹿”奶粉事件引起人们广泛关注:商家的社会责任感与企业道德,人们健康的相关法律保证。

根据下图写一篇150词左右的短文。可以切合题意有所发挥。短文首句已给出,不记入总词数。

As we can see from the cartoon, manufacturers, milk stations, milk cows and even grass are trying in vain to make excuses for the misconduct. After careful consideration, we come to realize that the drawer wishes to call our attention to the lack of social responsibility and business ethics.

With the change of people’s ideology, people take it for granted that we make a fortune. Driven by the pursuit of profit, some manufacturers go to extremes to make money by providing the customers with fake or inferior products. A case in point is “Sanlu milk powder”, which is confirmed to contain a poisonous chemical. As a result, numerous innocent infants become the victims of the milk food. In the long run, such illegal acts not only damage the dairy industry, but the credibility of the social mechanism.

To my mind, it is high time we took effective measures to prevent such crime from happening again. It is advisable to pass related law to punish whoever produces poisonous food. Only in this way can we establish a harmonious society where manufactures take up more social responsibility and credibility and people enjoy healthy food.

2010年1月份,上海同济、华师大、华东理工、上外和东华等6所高校,在自主招生的理科考试中无一例外地选择了放弃考语文。根据这一现象结合下图谈谈你的看法。

提示:1) 英语是国际交流的工具2)世界上学汉语的的人越来越多3)母语的重要性

Recently, six universities in Shanghai made English language compulsory in their joint exams, and left out Chinese.

There is no doubt that the English language is a very important medium of education. But that is no reason why we should forget the importance of our mother tongue and traditions and culture. It is the Chinese language that makes China a nation. Once we have a thought that our mother tongue is not important, our nation will be in danger.

With the development of China, Chinese has become a worldwide language. Many people in the world start to learn Chinese. Being the Chinese, we should feel proud of our mother tongue.

Chinese is one of the oldest languages in the world. You should love your mother language if you want to love your nation.

Therefore, we should view our mother tongue as a necessity. Only through our own language can our culture find glory it truly deserves.

练习5

下图反映的是网络时代所出现的一种问题,有些孩子沉溺于网上交流而忽视了与父母的沟通。请你根据对该漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文。该文应包含以下要点:

1.该漫画告诉了我们什么;

2.你对此现象的看法;

3.我们该如何主动和父母亲沟通。

注意:1.表达时要适当发挥想象,不要仅做简单描述。

2.词数150左右。开头已经写好,不计入总词数。

3.文中不得提及本人的相关信息。

参考词汇:漫画caricature。

Modern technology has many advantages. While we enjoy the fun and convenience of the Internet, we also experience some new problems. This caricature describes one of them. It shows that the teenage boy is enjoying chatting online so much that he refuses to talk to his parent. I think it might be common, but it is totally unacceptable. Nothing can replace face-to-face communication no matter how easy or interesting it is for us to chat with people from across the world on the Internet.

In most Chinese families, there is only one child. Obviously, we are the centre of our parents’ attention. Many parents are willing to do anything to make sure that we live a good life. It is understandable that they want to know what’s happening t o us, what kind of friends we make and how we are getting on with our studies.

I think we should let them know us well. For example, we can tell them what’s going on in school when we have dinner or turn to them for advice when we have problems.

In that wa y, I’m sure the relationship between us and our parents will become better and better.

请根据下列表格中所提供的材料,结合你的生活经历,展开想象,以学生的身份用英有形的钥匙无形的钥匙

生活中必不可少,拥有它方便、快捷,丢失了会增加烦恼。学习、成长中同样重要,比如……

(至少三点)

In a word,…(至少两点)

注意:1. 对所给材料适当整理,逐一陈述,合理想象,不要简单翻译;

2. 词数150左右。开头已经写好,不计入总词数;

We all have some keys in life, some visible and others invisible. Visible keys play an important part in our life, making our life convenient and comfortable. If we lose them by accident, we tend to get into a mess.

The same is true of invisible keys in the course of our study and growth. Teachers’ guidance is of great benefit to our gaining knowledge. Parents’ words of comfort and encouragement help us build up confidence. With the help of our friends, we’re l ikely to overcome difficulty and succeed. We feel greatly honored to have access to these invisible keys , which are priceless gifts in our daily life.

In a word, a key is to a man what water is to fish. Whether the keys are visible or invisible, they are well worth treasuring. Only by making full use of them can we open the door of success and make great contributions to our society.

盐城市2009/2010学年度高三年级第二次调研考试英语试题

书面表达 (满分25分)

左图描绘的是某家心理诊疗所医生正向病人介绍治病良方的漫画。请你根据对这幅漫画

的理解用英语写一篇短文,并发表你的看法。

注意:

1. 仔细品味图中文字的幽默,并适当发挥想象,

不要做简单描述。

2. 词数150左右。开头已经写好,不计入总词

数。

3. 作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。“In just six hours you will be cured of your fear of

snakes, heights, small spaces and commitment.”

As we can see from the picture, a person was persuaded into a small cage by the two men down. The cage, with some snakes inside, was high up on four columns. He was told that he would be cured of his fear of snakes, heights, small spaces and commitment in just six hours in that way.

According to my understanding, the picture is describing a person with some mental disa bility. He prefers to stay in large spaces with others’ company. The two men down are very good doctors, trying to help cure the person of his illnesses. Instead of giving him some medicine, they had their own way of treating this patient, having him face his mental problems directly. The doctors think it more difficult for such patients to recover if they are only treated by means of pleasing them.

I think life is full of ups and downs. One can’t step away from challenges or avoid responsibility. On the contrary, we should face them with courage and wisdom

练习8

范文:简要描述图片,并谈谈你对学生在业余时间参加过多的补习和培训的看法。

(一)内容要点:

1.描述文字说明:

1)学生被迫上很多补习班

2)无兴趣可言

2.议论文字说明:

1)太多的补习班是浪费时间

2)学习要有兴趣

3)家长不要强迫孩子参加补习

4)表达希望

(二)One possible version:

Look at this picture. You will understand better “Too much work makes Jack a dull boy”. He has to go to so many training classes besides his school classes. Life is no fun at all for him. Holidays and weekends have become dull work-days. He is too tired to learn these lessons well with no interest.

In my opinion, spare-time training courses are a waste of time for many students. They might do better when they show interest in what they are learning. Please don’t force these students to do what they are not willing to, and when learning is fun, surely they will do better than we expect!

(三)文章结构和套语:

Look at this picture. You will understand better “Too much work makes Jack a dull boy”. He has to … besides his school classes. Life is …. … have become …. He is …

In my opinion, … for many students. They might …when they … what they are learning. Please don’t …what they…, and when learning is fun, surely …

1). 开头:

Look at this picture.

The picture shows that…

From this picture, we can see…

2).衔接句:

1. As we all know, …

2. As is well-known, …

3. It is well known that…

4. In my opinion, …

5. As far as I am concerned, …

6. This sight reminds me of something in my daily life.

3).衔接词

1.表示时间顺序:first/ firstly, then, next, after, after that, during, throughout, before, later, while, meanwhile, at present, by now, finally, in the end, at last, at that time, in the past, immediately等。

2.表示递进关系:and, also, furthermore, moreover, besides, in addition, above all, what’s more, what’s better, in the same way等。

3.表示方位:near (to), far (from), in (the) front of, beside, behind, beyond, above, below, to the right, to the left, on one side, on the other side of, outside等。

4.表示因果关系:as, since, for, so, because, thus, accordingly, consequently, as a result, because of, due to, owing to, thanks to, therefore等。

5.表示目的:for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order that, so as to, in order to/ that, for the sake of等。

6.表示列举和顺序关系:first, second, third, next, then, finally, lastly, after that, first of all, to begin with, for one thing......, for another......等。

7.表示解释和说明:for example, for instance, that is, namely, that is to say, such as, in other words, and so on等。

8.表示转折和对比关系:but, yet, sill, anyway, while, however, (al)though, on the contrary, only, on the other hand, for all that, in contrast, similarly, at the same time, just like, just as等。

9.表示概括和总结:altogether, therefore, in conclusion, in brief, on the whole, in short, in a word, generally speaking, generally, as has been stated等。

练习九

根据图画内容,以“We Want Our Schoolbags Lighter”题,用英语写一篇100词左右的短文。短文须包括以下要点,不得逐条翻译。

1.简单描述漫画的内容;

2.作业负担过重;

3.精讲精练;

4.参加体育锻炼和社会活动。

We Want Our Schoolbags Lighter

The picture shows that a girl is wearing a pair of glasses and

carrying a big heavy schoolbag, and a woman is doing some exercise.

The girl says to the woman, “If you carry the schoolbag for me, I’m sure

you will lose some weight.”

As is well-known, we Chinese students are overburdened with lessons and homework which our teachers have given us. All that we do every day is to listen to our teachers’lessons, to take notes and do our homework which seems endless.

We do hope our teachers will help us get more knowledge with fewer lectures, exercises and less homework. Only in this way will we have spare time to do more physical exercise and make us stronger, and we will have more spare time to take part in some social activities, which makes us all mentally and physically healthier.

练习十

Directions: write an English composition in over 120 words bases on the picture and the instructions given below.

简要描述图片内容,结合生活实际,就图片的主题谈谈自己的感想。

The parents in the picture are teaching the girl how to ride a bicycle. Her

father is holding the left handle of the bicycle and telling the girl how to ride a

bicycle. He tells her that unless she puts her heart into learning, she can’t ride

well. Her mother is holding the right handle of the bicycle, she is telling the girl

to be careful. She warns her that if she doesn’t be careful, she will get off the

bike. She is carrying a first-aid kit for her. She is afraid that her daughter will get

hurt. The girl’s grandmother is holding the back of the bicycle. They are doing

their best to push the bicycle forward. The girl has nothing to do. She wonders

whether her parents let her do her things by herself. In this way, how can a child

learn well?

练习十一.

The Tutor Mother Invited

This is a funny and instructive picture.

In the picture we can see the mother hen invites a tutor – a goose to

teach her baby chickens to swim. It is known to all that birds like chickens

can’t swim at all. But the mother hen wants her babies to learn to swim

following the tutor. We can imagine the final result.

Nowadays, many parents are treating their children like the mother hen. They expect their sons and daughters to become famous when they grow up. However, they don’t know about their children’s interests and advantages. So they invite kinds of tutor to teach their children what they dislike or they are not good at. Finally they do harm to their children.

练习十二.

请根据下面的漫画,以“What Will the Child Become?”为标题,写一篇短文。

要求:1 词数100左右,不包括已给出的开头部分;

2 内容要包括对本漫画画面的描述以及你自己对这一现象的看法。

参考词汇:电子琴——electronic piano

What Will the Child Become?

Look at this picture. It is a picture of a family of five.

Who is the “King” of the family? The only child! He is riding

his “horse” – his father. What a proud “King” he is! His grandfather is holding an umbrella over him and cooling him with a fan. His mother is carrying his schoolbag and lots of other things for. What is his grandmother doing behind? She is trying hard to carry an electronic piano and a drawing-board.

But what will the child become in the future? He’ll think of himself more than anyone else. He’ll be unable to do anything without help.He’ll become no good for the world.

练习十二.

下面这幅画描述了一个情景。请根据中文提示以“They’re Th inking Along the Same Line”为题写一篇短文。注意:1 短文须忠实描述图画内容,可发挥想象适当增加细节也可进行简单评述,但短文必须连贯。2 词数100字左右。

They’re Thinking Along the Same Line

Here we see two men of a similar type. They happen to be riding in the same street, along the same side but from opposite directions. Neither of them wants to give way to the other. Great minds think alike. Today their minds happen to run along the same line: “Anyway he wouldn’t dare to run into me.” In no time they’ll crash into each other, fall to the ground and roll toge ther into the same ditch. Hopefully, from this incident, they will draw the same lesson: follow the traffic rules.

练习十三.

目前中国学生的负担越来越重,减负的呼声日益高涨,但减负的结果如何呢?请根据下面两幅图,以“The Change of Load”为题用英语写一篇短文。

The Change of Load

From the two pictures, we can see that before the learning load is reduced, students carry a lot of books with them every day, wet with sweat. However, after the learning load is reduced, tuition makes many parents get into debt because their children have to go to college for a good future.

At present, many students can’t afford the heavy tuition, for which many of them will have to say good-bye to school or their parents will have a heavy debt load. When we call for reducing the students’ learning load, we should also call on t he tuition to be reduced.

高三语文漫画作文指导

高三语文漫画作文指导 Prepared on 22 November 2020

漫画作文指导 高考分析:漫画式材料是材料作文中一种非常重要的形式,在十几年来的高考作文中屡见不鲜。如“三南”作文试题《妈妈爱吃鱼头》,全国卷《给六指做手术做手术》、《截错了》,全国Ⅰ卷《出事了吧》,江西卷《助鼠为患》等等。既然属于材料作文之列,那么在审题立意方面还要遵循材料作文的基本规律。但漫画式作文毕竟不同于文字阅读,它有自身的特点,因此审题立意时要遵循其规律特点: 掌握分析漫画的方法 这类看图作文所提供的图画一般由标题、画面、注释三部分构成,审题时要重点审读这三个组成部分,多角度,多侧面,全方位思考,透视画面本意。 一、看标题 标题往往告知人们图画的主题思想,是图画的“眼腈”。透过这“眼睛”,我们可洞察图画的主题。所以审读时首先要看标题是什么,然后再把标题同图画的内容结合起来进行分析,这样就容易弄清图画的寓意所在。 二、观画面 以图画为材料的作文,分析画面是解题的重要环节。画面上的每一个细节都对表达画图的寓意有提示作用。因此,我们在审读图画题时,一定要仔细、全面、认真地观察画面。 三、读注释 图画是一门艺术,为了表达其寓意,常常配有言简意赅、画龙点睛的注释文字。这注释是弄清图画寓意的一把金钥匙,考生必须仔细品味,思考其所隐含的信息和观点。 四、析夸张 很多图画常常对人物行为或场景描绘给以变形夸张,以达到讽刺或警世的目的,引起观者共鸣。夸张之处往往就是图画的弦外之音,是图画所要表达的寓意所在。所以,审读题时必须注意图画的夸张之处。 五、联现实 图画大多具有针砭时弊,抨击社会不良现象的功能,解读时必须展开想象,跳出画面,联系现实,揣摩画。外之音。考生要多角度思考,切忌就画论画。 总之,漫画类材料审题难度并不大,最近几年,高考语言运用试题中有很多漫画类题目,或者说明画面内容,或者命一个题目,或者揭示寓意,这就是漫画式材料作文审题非常好的训练方式。 认真观察这幅下面这幅漫画,按要求作文。 要求选择一个角度构思作文,自主确定立意,确定文体,确定标题;不要脱离材料内容及含意的范围作文,不要套作,不得抄袭。 这一漫画材料审题不难,材料涉及到一个鸟、一个鸟笼,而且鸟笼有残破的地方,并且有文字说明:禁锢就是你以为你做不到。材料的主体是鸟,但文字说明事实上已经揭示了漫画的主旨,也就是写作的主旨。显然作者对鸟是否定的。鸟笼对鸟已经起不到禁锢作用了,是鸟自己把自己禁锢住了。需要注意的是“以为”一词,它更强调了鸟之所以如此是由于自己的主观意识,而非客观现实。 文章的立意角度可以是解放思想,勇于冲破精神的牢笼,解放心灵,打破惯性思维,打破定势思维。 [例文一]

高考英语看图作文专项练习16

Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 word s based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should first describe the drawi ng, then interpret its meaning, and give your comment on it. You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points) 参考范文 As is vividly betrayed in the drawing above, a gentleman and a lady are sitting calmly on the reserved seats for babies and their mothers while a mother holding a baby in her arm is st anding beside the seats. The drawing exposes a common social phenomenon and is most thought-provoking. The implied meaning of the drawing is worth discussing. To begin with, manners should be improved in public places. Some people lack the necessary public awareness so that they pay no atten tion to the rules and regulations designed for public places. As a result, t hey disturb the normal order of public places. What’s more, the trad itional moral values should be enhances. It is well known that to respect the elderly and take care of the young is one of our traditional virtues in our country. At present, some people are so selfish that they even neglect our traditional virtues in public places, which does no good to the healthy development of our society. In one word, we should make a deep reflection on our own de eds.

漫画作文审题立意指导

漫画作文审题立意指导

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