上课用高考短文改错公开课课件
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the
another 30 minutes. 5.All in all, Joey is a very special dog because he has
overcome unpleasant start in life.
an
归纳总结
名词错误主要错在 单复数；可数与不可数；
泛指与特指；a.an.the 混用 冠词错误主要错在 漏用和多用
3.I will be very glad whether I can work with you.
if
如果 条件状语从句 if
是否 及物动词后的宾语从句且没有or not
whether 是否 通常引导名词性从句
小试牛刀
4.(2011全国) I bought my ticket but turned around to pick
小试牛刀
1.(2012全国) My father was so pleasing that he suggested I go to England for a holiday. pleased 2.(2014全国) The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste.
tasty
3.(2014全国) We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost.
wonderful
4.Being a member of the Students’ Union makes me
capable of organizing various activities. However, I am
Therefore
convinced that I can keep the class organized and lively.
5.We gave our thanks to our teachers who had been
educating us patient.
patiently
归纳总结
what
chance of winning the prize.
2.(13全国) In fact, my grandfather even scared my classmates
away during they came over to play or do homework with me.
when
1. My friend Nick told me story about his experience
a
back in the US, which was very interested.
interesting
2. I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to
Hangzhou.
buying
completed
3.(2012全国) I win a national prize for painting last week.
won
4.(2013全国) Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups
without handles.
drunk
5.She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs.
生活中，人人都会犯错，有错就知改。 写作中，人人也会犯错，有错也要改。
Proof Reading 短文改错
Play a game
. Find the wrong words and correct them
Be strict at sb Be responsible with sb/sth Be in business Have sth on common Have an effect in sb Lose the heart Make a great progress The war was broke out The accident was happened In the hurry Share sth for sb A pair of shoe A lot of equipments General speaking As soon as possibly
错误主要错在 句，名词性、定语从句）
小试牛刀
1.(2011全国)Luckily I had all my money on my pocket.
in
2.(2014全国) Nearly five years ago and with the help by our
of
father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes in
hold
6.Among the park’s trees there are a science hall, an art centre
is
a gym,…and…
归纳总结
时态、语态、主谓一致、动词短语、 错误主要错在 非谓语动词（to do/ doing/ done）
小试牛刀
1.(2010全国) If they had said was true, I would have a
our back garden.
归纳总结
错误主要错在 固定搭配
聚沙成塔---Summary
动词时态和语态 主谓一致勿忘记 还要注意非谓语 名词多考单复数 连词并列和从属 上下逻辑要清楚 形容副词看词性 代词前后要一致 介词搭配要记牢 还有冠词a/an/the 改完复查敲定稿
做完能力提升中的单句 改错和短文改错
myself
again that I’ll concentrate more on studies.
3. Every year more and more people start a stamp collection
of your own .
their
归纳总结
指代错误；人称代词和反身代词的误用； 主格宾格；关系代词和连接代词（复合
词性错用，副词混用； 原级、比较级 错误主要错在 最高级的混用
小试牛刀
1.(2010全国)Before her leaving, I prepared a gift to show my best wishes to him.
her
2.To make my dream come true, I have told me over and over
短 文 改
错
则 百 战 不 殆
设错方式？ 改错格式？
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你 同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。 错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：
3. Read the passage again, check your answers. （检查核对，敲定终稿）
Homework--Check your answers
I often platform
idnrethame cb∧oleafisnasgrtoeoamchearn.dI
dream of standing on the give lessons to lovely boys
考查内容 动 名 介 连 冠
时间
词 词词 词 词
代 形容 副 词词 词
2010年 3 1 2 1 1 1 0 1 2011年 3 2 2 1 1 0 1 0 2012年 3 1 2 1 0 2 0 1 2013年 3 2 2 1 1 0 1 0 2014年 1 1 1 1 1 0 2 3
小组合作，讨论学案中 的突破考点内容
归纳总结
并列连词和从属连词的漏用和错用， 错误主要错在 上下文逻辑关系理解错用
小试牛刀
1.(2011全国)It felt very strange to travel without any luggages.
luggage
2.(2014全国) When tea got popular in Britain, there was a
3minutes Quickly!
小试牛刀
1.(2010全国）On the box was a card say “ 25 cents each”
saying
2.The Great Wall of China is one of the largest construction
projects ever complete.
6
______
How many kinds of mistakes in this Proof Reading?
How many kinds of mistakes in this Proof Reading?
动词 名词
连词 介词
Proof Reading
形容. 副词
冠词 代词
近5年全国新课标卷短文改错题考点一览表
and
up my bag from the floor and then I realized that someone
had stolen it.
5.I received my mother’s call telling me she would come, but I
so
had to cancel the appointments with you.
______ . ______
giving
and girls. I teach them, play with them, but watch them . ______ and
growing up. I am always young when I wamas staying
. ______
with them. I know there is not easy to be a teacher. You . ______
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
改错步骤
1. Go through the whole passage to get a general idea .(浏览全文，掌握大意）
2. Read the passage sentence by sentence and find the grammar mistakes.（分句阅读，逐行 找错）
with for on in on
the a was was
a with Shoes equipment Generally Leabharlann Baiduossible
What is proof reading?
知
1. correct some grammar mistakes 2. connection between sentences 3. the main idea of the whole passage
. ______
Only in this way can you are a good teacher and win
______
be
respect from them. Though I am a student now, I will work
as very hard to make my dream come true.
crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits.
cups
3.After learning English for several years, I have made a
great progress.
4.If I choose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for
it have to learn in order to teach. Without enough knowledges . ______
knowledge
you can never learn well. What is more, you have to be . ______
teach friends with your pupils and take good care ofthheimm.
another 30 minutes. 5.All in all, Joey is a very special dog because he has
overcome unpleasant start in life.
an
归纳总结
名词错误主要错在 单复数；可数与不可数；
泛指与特指；a.an.the 混用 冠词错误主要错在 漏用和多用
3.I will be very glad whether I can work with you.
if
如果 条件状语从句 if
是否 及物动词后的宾语从句且没有or not
whether 是否 通常引导名词性从句
小试牛刀
4.(2011全国) I bought my ticket but turned around to pick
小试牛刀
1.(2012全国) My father was so pleasing that he suggested I go to England for a holiday. pleased 2.(2014全国) The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste.
tasty
3.(2014全国) We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost.
wonderful
4.Being a member of the Students’ Union makes me
capable of organizing various activities. However, I am
Therefore
convinced that I can keep the class organized and lively.
5.We gave our thanks to our teachers who had been
educating us patient.
patiently
归纳总结
what
chance of winning the prize.
2.(13全国) In fact, my grandfather even scared my classmates
away during they came over to play or do homework with me.
when
1. My friend Nick told me story about his experience
a
back in the US, which was very interested.
interesting
2. I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to
Hangzhou.
buying
completed
3.(2012全国) I win a national prize for painting last week.
won
4.(2013全国) Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups
without handles.
drunk
5.She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs.
生活中，人人都会犯错，有错就知改。 写作中，人人也会犯错，有错也要改。
Proof Reading 短文改错
Play a game
. Find the wrong words and correct them
Be strict at sb Be responsible with sb/sth Be in business Have sth on common Have an effect in sb Lose the heart Make a great progress The war was broke out The accident was happened In the hurry Share sth for sb A pair of shoe A lot of equipments General speaking As soon as possibly
错误主要错在 句，名词性、定语从句）
小试牛刀
1.(2011全国)Luckily I had all my money on my pocket.
in
2.(2014全国) Nearly five years ago and with the help by our
of
father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes in
hold
6.Among the park’s trees there are a science hall, an art centre
is
a gym,…and…
归纳总结
时态、语态、主谓一致、动词短语、 错误主要错在 非谓语动词（to do/ doing/ done）
小试牛刀
1.(2010全国) If they had said was true, I would have a
our back garden.
归纳总结
错误主要错在 固定搭配
聚沙成塔---Summary
动词时态和语态 主谓一致勿忘记 还要注意非谓语 名词多考单复数 连词并列和从属 上下逻辑要清楚 形容副词看词性 代词前后要一致 介词搭配要记牢 还有冠词a/an/the 改完复查敲定稿
做完能力提升中的单句 改错和短文改错
myself
again that I’ll concentrate more on studies.
3. Every year more and more people start a stamp collection
of your own .
their
归纳总结
指代错误；人称代词和反身代词的误用； 主格宾格；关系代词和连接代词（复合
词性错用，副词混用； 原级、比较级 错误主要错在 最高级的混用
小试牛刀
1.(2010全国)Before her leaving, I prepared a gift to show my best wishes to him.
her
2.To make my dream come true, I have told me over and over
短 文 改
错
则 百 战 不 殆
设错方式？ 改错格式？
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你 同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。 错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：
3. Read the passage again, check your answers. （检查核对，敲定终稿）
Homework--Check your answers
I often platform
idnrethame cb∧oleafisnasgrtoeoamchearn.dI
dream of standing on the give lessons to lovely boys
考查内容 动 名 介 连 冠
时间
词 词词 词 词
代 形容 副 词词 词
2010年 3 1 2 1 1 1 0 1 2011年 3 2 2 1 1 0 1 0 2012年 3 1 2 1 0 2 0 1 2013年 3 2 2 1 1 0 1 0 2014年 1 1 1 1 1 0 2 3
小组合作，讨论学案中 的突破考点内容
归纳总结
并列连词和从属连词的漏用和错用， 错误主要错在 上下文逻辑关系理解错用
小试牛刀
1.(2011全国)It felt very strange to travel without any luggages.
luggage
2.(2014全国) When tea got popular in Britain, there was a
3minutes Quickly!
小试牛刀
1.(2010全国）On the box was a card say “ 25 cents each”
saying
2.The Great Wall of China is one of the largest construction
projects ever complete.
6
______
How many kinds of mistakes in this Proof Reading?
How many kinds of mistakes in this Proof Reading?
动词 名词
连词 介词
Proof Reading
形容. 副词
冠词 代词
近5年全国新课标卷短文改错题考点一览表
and
up my bag from the floor and then I realized that someone
had stolen it.
5.I received my mother’s call telling me she would come, but I
so
had to cancel the appointments with you.
______ . ______
giving
and girls. I teach them, play with them, but watch them . ______ and
growing up. I am always young when I wamas staying
. ______
with them. I know there is not easy to be a teacher. You . ______
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
改错步骤
1. Go through the whole passage to get a general idea .(浏览全文，掌握大意）
2. Read the passage sentence by sentence and find the grammar mistakes.（分句阅读，逐行 找错）
with for on in on
the a was was
a with Shoes equipment Generally Leabharlann Baiduossible
What is proof reading?
知
1. correct some grammar mistakes 2. connection between sentences 3. the main idea of the whole passage
. ______
Only in this way can you are a good teacher and win
______
be
respect from them. Though I am a student now, I will work
as very hard to make my dream come true.
crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits.
cups
3.After learning English for several years, I have made a
great progress.
4.If I choose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for
it have to learn in order to teach. Without enough knowledges . ______
knowledge
you can never learn well. What is more, you have to be . ______
teach friends with your pupils and take good care ofthheimm.