2017中考一模(议论文)【学生版】

2019静安一模

Write at least 60 words about the topic “To be a responsible student!”（请以“做一个有担当的学生!”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）

（注意：中文不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）

Situation：

新时代的学生都需要有责任意识，无论是在自己家中、在学校或者是在社会上都需要有担当。请你谈谈你的认识，并举例说明你的理解。

案例分析：

范文点评：

To be a responsible student

Can you be responsible for yourself? A sense of responsibility is valuable for a good student.

In my opinion, first, being a responsible student should be responsible for ourselves. In later life, no matter what difficulties we face, we should never give up. Then, we

should be responsible for our family and friends. It is our duty to love our family and friends. We should keep our loyalty and commitment in mind,

At last, we should be responsible for the social. To be responsible for our social is meaning to make contributions to it. Show our unselfish devotion to the community, smile and help others.

语言进阶：

1.非谓语做主语

being a responsible student should be responsible for ourselves

1)动名词做主语，可以表示经常性，习惯性的动作, 也可以表示具体的动作

比如：painting is his hobby.

2)动名词做主语还可以指经验

比如：Driving in the rush hour is tiring.

3)It可以在句首做形式主语，动名词短语在后面做真正的主语

在下面的句型中，it是形式主语，v-ing形式作真正的主语。

It is no use/good/ point +doing

例如：It’s no use arguing with him.

4)动名词做主语，谓语动词用单数

词典例句：

●Being deaf and dumb makes communication very difficult.

装聋作哑使谈话变得非常困难

●Talking mends no holes．

空谈无济于事。

练习：

-What do you think made Lisa angry？

-___her key.

A. As she lost

B. Lost

C. Losing D .Be lost

翻译巩固：

1.丢了新的自行车使玛丽觉得非常沮丧

_______________________________________________________________________________ 2.在这里空等是浪费时间，不如早点回家吧。

_______________________________________________________________________________ 3.抽烟对身体有害，你最好相信医生的话早点戒掉。

_______________________________________________________________________________ 2.no matter +疑问词的让步壮语从句

no matter + what等引导的让步状语从句。No matter后面接关系代词或关系副词引导状语从句在句中作让步状语。No matter what (who/when etc.)...分别表示“无论何事”、“无论何人”、“无论何时”等，这个从句可以置主句之前，也可以置主句之后。

词典例句：

●No matter what you do, you must be very careful.

不管做什么事，你都必须非常细心。

●No matter which you choose, you will be satisfied.

不论你选择哪一个，你都会满意的。

翻译巩固：

1.不管你如何努力，你都不会成功的。

_______________________________________________________________________________ 2.无论发生什么，我会一直在你身边

_______________________________________________________________________________ 3.无论如何，我都不会和他们那种人成为一丘之貉

_______________________________________________________________________________ 3.keep sb/sth in mind.

Keep (sb/sth) in mind 记住，铭记用来替换remember

例句：

●When you keep this in mind you realize thatall you can control in a dangeroussituation is