高考英语图表作文
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Guided Writing (25分)图表作文
Directions:Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instruction given below.
例一
某网站对高中生的交流方式进行了一次调查,结果如图表所示。
请简要描述图表,结合你的实际,谈谈你的看法。
作文指导图表作文
第一段(简述)
As the chart indicates, the proportion of the high school students who contact each other by sending a short message and by E-mail is absolutely high, while other communicating means, such as by writing a letter are relatively minor.
第二段(看法)
Personally speaking, this social phenomenon persuades us to take the following two aspects into consideration.Firstly, wherever and whenever we are, sending messages or email is convenient, for a mobile phone is portable. On the other hand, these communicating means are efficient, for it almost takes no time to send or receive a message. If I have to contact somebody, for example, I often choose to use my cell phone or computer. Writing a letter is a traditional way to get in touch with each other, which seems to be out of fashion.
第三段(小结)
No doubt, this survey reflects the feature of modern times that people including high school students prefer to enjoy such convenience and efficiency brought about by high technology. (163words)
例二“有困难向谁述说”图表作文
The pie chart above illustrates the result of the survey “To whom do you go when in trouble” conducted in high schools recently. It can be clearly seen that classmates and friends tops the list, adding up to 58%. Teachers and parents ranks second, making up 33%, while those who solve the problem on their own accounts for only 9%.The reasons for the phenomenon may be as follows:
The share of the similar experience mainly contributes to the tendency for us to complain to our classmates and friends instead of the older generation. Because of the identical feelings, we
may find the solutions suggested by our friends to be more useful and advisable. On the contrary, owing to the unavoidable generation gap, we are sure to value the trouble or problems differently from teachers and parents, and the disagreement may even cause unnecessary argument, thus turning away many youngsters.
Secondly, the lack of self-confidence and independence may account for the 9% part. We have little courage to burden the consequence of our own life choice, thus habitually turning to others for help. The result of this situation is the less we try, the less mature we are.
To sum up, the process of growing may usually be painful, and young students may have to face various kinds of troubles. As long as they take optimistic views and proper methods, those troubles will no longer obstacles. Just open your heart and pick up your courage.
首段
Use figures or statistics 引用具体或粗略的数据,然后作出概括性分析,点名主题或引出需要论述的问题。
1) 饼图 a pie chart 柱状图 a bar chart 表格图 a table
Chart diagram graph
2) 描述:show describe illustrate
Clear apparent
Reveal represent
3) figure statistic number percentage proportion
4)常用的开篇句型(即概述图表内容时常用的表达法)
The table / chart /graph shows / describes / illustrates that.....
As (is) shown in the table....
As can be seen from the statistics / figures,...
Figures/ statistics show that....
According to the table/pie chart/ graph/bar graph, we can see/conclude that … 根据该表/图,我们可知……
The table/graph reveals (shows/indicates/illustrates/ r epresents/points out) that … 该表/图表明……
As we can see from the table …
As can be seen from the bar graph …
As is shown (illustrated/indicated) in the pie chart …
如表/图所示,……
5) 表示数据变化的单词或词组
Rapid/ rapidly 迅速的,飞快的,
Dramatic/ dramatically 戏剧性的,生动的
Significant/ significantly 重大的
Sharp /sharply 明显的,急剧的
Steady / steadily 稳固的
Gradual/ gradually 渐进的,逐渐的
Slow /slowly 缓慢的
Slight / slightly 略微的
Stable / stably 稳定的
6)在描述中常用到的词汇
Significant changes 图中一些较大变化
Noticeable trend 明显趋势
Distribute
Unequally
In the case of
In terms of/ regarding
7) 描述增减变化常用的句型
Compared with … is still increased by …
The number of … grew/rose from … to …
An increase is shown in …; then came a sharp increase of …
In … the number remains the same/drops to …
There was a very slight (small/slow/gradual) rise/increase in ......
There was a very steady (marked/sharp/rapid/sudden/dramatic) drop (decrease/decline/fall/reduction) in ....../ compared with that of last year).
8) 图表作文常用句型精选
1. The table shows the changes in the number of.....over the period from....to......该表格描述了在。
年至。
年间。
数量的变化。
2. the bar chart illustrates that....该柱状图展示了。
3. the graph provides some interesting data regarding....
该图为我们提供了有关。
有趣数据。
4. the pie graph depicts that.... 该圆形图揭示了。
5. this is a cure graph which describes the trend of.... 这个曲线图描述了。
的趋势。
6. the tree diagram reveals how....该树形图向我们揭示了如何。
7. the data/ statistics / figures lead us to the conclusion that.... 这些数据资料令我们得出结论。
8. as is shown / demonstrated/ exhibited in the diagram / graph / chart/ table.... 如图所示。
9. as is shown in the table....如表格所示。
10. as can be seen from the diagram, great changes have taken place in.... 从图中可以看出,。
发生了巨大变化。
11. from the table / chart/ diagram/ figure, we can see clearly that ..... / it is clear/ apparent from the chart that..... 从图表我们可以很清楚看到。
12. this table shows the changing proportion of a a&b from ....to... 该表格描述了。
年到。
年间a与b 的比例关系。
13. the graph, presented in a pie chart, shows the general trend in....
该图以圆形形式描述了。
的总的趋势
14. over the period from....to... the ...remained level. 在。
至。
期间,。
基本不变
15. in the year between ....and....在。
年到。
期间
In the 3 years spanning from 1995 through 1998...
16. from then on / from this time onwards.... 从那时起
17. the number of....remained steady / stable from.....to..... 。
至。
的数量基本不变。
18. the number sharply went up to... 数字急剧上升至。
19.the percentage of...stayed the same between ...and.... 。
至。
期间。
的比率维持不变。
20. the figures peaked at ....in 。
的树木在。
达到定点。
为。
21. the percentage reamined steady at.... 比率维持在
22. the percentage of....is slightly larger / smaller than that of.... 。
比例比。
,,的比例略高
23. there is not a great deal of difference between....and.... 。
与。
的区别不大
24. .....decreased year by year while...increased steadily 逐年减少,而。
逐步上升
25. the situation reached a peak of .... 。
的情况、局势达到顶点,为。
26. the figures reached the bottom / a low point 数字、情况达到低谷
27. a is ....times as much / many as b a是b。
倍
28.increase by .../ to... 增长了、增长到
29. there is an upward trend in the number of .... 数字呈上升趋势
30. a considerable increase / decrease from....to...
31. the rate of decrease slow down
32. from this year on, there was a gradual decline reduction in the ...., reaching a figure of....
33. there are a lot of similarities/differences between……and……
the difference between a and b lies in……
34. a has something in common with b
35. ……(year)witnessed/saw a sharp rise in……
As is demonstrated in the table, more and more college graduates are out of a job in our country, which is a serious problem to our economic development and social security.It is estimated that in 2004, there are 5000,000 unemployed graduates, more than 30% higher than in 2002.
There is a pie chart of the average weekly expenditure of a family in Great Britain. As can been seen from the chart, the main expenditure of an average British family is spent on food, which accounts for 25 % of its total expenditure. The next two significant items are transport and housing, which are 15% and 12% respectively. If we take into account clothing and footwear, which makes up 10%, the four essentials of life, that is, food, transport, housing,,clothing and footwear, amount to 62% of the total expenditure.
Car Accidents Declining in Walton City
Remember that your composition must be written according to the following outline;
1. Rise and fall of the rate of car accidents as indicated by the graph;
2. Possible reason(s) for the decline of car accidents in the city;
3. Your predictions of what will happen this year.
⑴From the graph, we can see that the number of car accidents in Walton city fluctuated
during the year of 1990. ⑵The first two months of 1990 showed an increasing trend. ⑶The rate rose to 32 in March but fell to 26 in June. ⑷From June on, the rate was rising again and reached the peak point 39 in August. ⑸After August the rate began to decline remarkably, and eventually dropped to the lowest point 16 at the end of the year. ⑹Therefore, it’s obvious that car accident in Walton city declined in 1990
⑴主题句/概述表格反映的内容
⑵—(5)反映交通事故的变化情况
(6)小结:总结表格数据反映的总趋势
⑺There are several reasons for the decline. ⑻First, a new traffic law was made and came into force. ⑼It provided that in summer every car must be air-conditioned. ⑽As a result, the highest rate in August, when humidity and high temperature make drivers impatient and easily lead to car accidents, dropped steadily. ⑾Second, new roads were built and some narrow streets were widened, which quickened the flow of traffic. ⑿Finally, the city administration made great efforts to heighten people’s awareness of observing traffic rules.
⑺主题句
⑻原因/措施一⑼解释措施一/次要辅助
⑽采取措施一后的结果
⑾原因/措施二
⑿原因/措施三
⒀With all these new measures, I’m sure the rate of car accidents in Walton city will go on falling this year.
⒀总结:展望未来的情况
Changes in People’s Diet
Study the following table carefully and your composition must be based on the information given in the table. Write three paragraphs to :
1. stat e the changes in people’s diet from 1986 to 1990 according to the graph;
2. give possible reasons for this phenomenon ( or for this change);
3. draw your own conclusions.
⑴As is shown in the table, there have been great changes in people's diet between
1986 and 1990. ⑵From the table, we can find that grain, formerly the main food of most Chinese people, is now playing a less important role in people's diet. ⑶And the same goes for fruit and vegetables. ⑷On the other hand, the consumption of high-nutrition food such milk and meat has increased rapidly.
⑸What has caused these changes? There are mainly three reasons (主题句). (6) First,
people are much wealthier than before. (7) With higher income, they can afford to buy nutritious foods. (8) Second, people have realized the importance of a balanced diet to their health. (9) Lack of certain amount of meat or milk, for example, will result in poor health.
(10) Finally, owing to the economic reform, meat and milk, which were scarce in the past, are
produced in large quantities.
(11) Although milk and meat are important to one's health, eating too much rich food
may result in obesity and may other diseases. (12)Therefore, people should not only eat a lot of milk and meat, but also enough grain, fruit and vegetable for the sake of their health.
As can be seen from the table, marked changes took place in the diet of the Chinese people in the period 1986—1990. The consumption of grain, fruit and vegetables decreased year by year, while that of milk and meat showed a steady increase. There is clearly a marked shift away from the traditional grain-based diet to one containing more high-energy foodstuffs.
To what can we attribute this phenomenon? First, as people’s income is rising nowadays, people can afford a wider variety of food with higher nutritional value. Second, as people are becoming more knowledgeable about science, they are aware how important a proper diet is to their health. So they are demanding better-quality food.
The figures given in the table indicate that the standard of living of the Chinese people is rising. This is reflected in a more wholesome diet, and so we can conclude that in the future the Chinese people will lead not only a more prosperous life, but a healthier one as well.。