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人教版英语九全Unit5(读后续写)说课教案
人教版英语九全Unit5(读后续写)说课教案

英语读后续写说课教案

湖南省溆浦县江维学校黄春林

尊敬的各位老师、各位评委:

大家好!

我说课的题目是读后续写,下面我将从阅读材料分析、学情分析、教法学法、教学过程、板书设计、教学反思六个方面来说课。

一、阅读材料分析

1、阅读材料的内容和特点

本篇阅读材料是一篇关于一些网络热词的由来、含义及用途的文章。它具有时尚性,前卫性,使用的时候需要甄别。

2、教学目标

1)语言目标

掌握以下词汇:more and more popular agree with complete

Play a role achieve one’s purpose besides

掌握以下句型:More and more cyber words have been created.

It’s widely/often used when you----

What’s more

Every coin has two sides

2)技能目标

通过阅读,让学生获得有效的语言输入,从而提高语言输出能力。

熟悉并掌握利弊型题材议论文的基本写作技。

3)情感态度与价值目标:

通过阅读拓宽学生的视野,使学生的知识面得到增长;让学生学会多方面多角度看待、理解、接纳新兴事物,增强社会意识,从而获得文化交际的基本能力。

3教学重难点:

1)用所学句型给网络热词进行英语解释;

2)辩证地接纳新兴事物,掌握利弊型题材议论文的写作技能。

教学关键点:充分调动学生参与的积极性,指导学生成功地完成每一个任务。

二、学情分析

九年级学生已经具备了一定的阅读能力。他们观察语言特征,模仿使用,找到规

律,在愉快轻松的氛围中学到知识、拓宽知识,掌握技能。

三、教法学法

为了达到新课标对学生能力的要求,本节课在教学的组织上采用启发、引导、讨论、合作、完成。教师加以点拨讲解,充分体现了“学生主体,教师主导”的教学思想。同时利用多媒体技术增加信息量并提高课时效率。

四、教学过程

Step 1. Lead-in导入(由网络热词的图片让学生讨论并猜测其含义)

1)学生要用的句型:It means------或The phrase shows---------进行解释说明。

Step 2 Pro-reading阅读前

根据文章标题预测课文的主要内容或框架结构。

Step 3. While-reading阅读中

Task3. 根据表格,复述课文主要内容。

Step 4. Post-reading阅读后

分组讨论并总结网络词的优点与缺点。(整合阅读材料和已有知识结构,突破学生自

己的思维模式,构建新理念,产生新观点。)

Step 5. Writing写作

1) 首先要求学生写下网络词的优点和缺点,形成自己的观点;

2) 学生展示自己的观点;

3) 对利弊型题材的议论文写作进行指导;

5)学生展示作文

6)师生共评作文1篇

Step 6. Homework互评作文

每个同学的作文至少给2个以上的同学阅读,2个评价(包括评语和分数)。

六、教学反思

课后,我一直在思考:在新课改理念下,如何做到课堂的开放与高效两不误?让我们在实践中一起探索吧!

以上是我的说课内容,谢谢大家!

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