段落写作之主题句和支持句PPT优秀课件
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②As is known to us all, drinking and driving is a sort of terrible behavior that will threaten the safety of people, including the driver himself.
③Many of the traffic accidents caused by drinking and driving have brought about traffic jams, injuries and even deaths.
不完整:Enjoy the beautiful scenery in different places． 不清楚:To travel，one needs to know something about it． 太笼统:By travelling one enjoys a lot． 较 好:By travelling one can enjoy the beautiful scenery in different places．
(2)主题句也常置于段落末尾。作者先不说出本段的中心 思想，一直留到最后才披露。这可以给读者设置一种悬念， 迫切想要读下去，同时给读者的印象也特别深刻。放在段末 的主题句，通常还有对前面所述作总结的作用。这可称为归 纳法（induction）。
As the saying goes, genius is the product of the loneliness. Einstein is a good example. Therefore, on the one hand, the only child feels lonely. On the other hand, one can enjoy loneliness when thinking. Loneliness brings more chances to think of meanings about life and future.
最后一个段落为总结性段落，最后一句为结论性主题句， 点出了本篇文章作者写作的目的就是让人们学会享受孤独，品 尝真正的人生。
(3)有时主题句会出现在段落中间，也有时主题句含而不露， 隐藏在全段的字里行间。
2. 主题句的写法 主题句的句子结构和思想内容必须完整、清楚、具体， 不能模棱两可、空泛。要避免不完整（incomplete）、不清楚 （ unclear ） 、 过 于 笼 统 （ general ） ， 如 作 文 题 目 是 The Advantages of Travel（旅行的好处）。试比较其中一段的主 题句，前三种写法均不可取。
④Besides, a great deal of money has to be spent treating the injured and repairing the broken cars, which means a waste of money. 答案：①主题句 ②支持句 ③支持句 ④支持句
写作点拨系列（三） 段落写作之主题句和支持句
【核心点拨】 一、主题句
概括段落的主要内容，确定段落的主题，限定该主题在 本段落详细讨论的范围，是整个段落的纲领，此句即为主题 句。围绕主题句，作者通过列举事实、提供例证、描写细节、 说明理由等逐步展开段落。
பைடு நூலகம்
1. 主题句的位置 (1)主题句通常置于段落开头，开门见山摆出问题，随之辅 以细说。其作用是便于读者迅速地把握主题，抓住段落的中心 思想。此为演绎法（deduction），便于初学者仿效。 Nowadays, every student pays enough attention to study habit because of its importance. As for me, I have three ways to improve my study habit. 段落第一句是主题句，道出了全段的中心思想——学习习 惯。study habit是关键词。
二、支持句 通过给出一些例子、原因、事实、统计数据或引文等，
对主题句作进一步的阐述、说明的句子即为支持句。 特点:通常包含若干个句子，置于段落的中间，是段落的
主体部分。在文章写作时，支持句的多少、长短要适中，重 点突出。
【对点训练】 Ⅰ. 请找出下面短文段落的主题句和支持句
① Nowadays, drinking and driving is becoming a heated topic among people in China. Here, I’d like to air my views about it.
However, I don’t think this is a proper way. Firstly, if the children are always rewarded with money when they get high marks, _t_h_e_ir__a_tt_e_n_t_io_n__w_i_ll_b_e__f_o_cu__se_d__o_n_m__o_n_e_y_（他们的注意力 会集中在钱上）instead of the pleasure of studying. _S_o_m_e__o_f _t_h_e_m__w_i_ll_s_t_o_p_w__o_r_k_in_g__h_a_r_d_（他们中的一些人就会不努力学习） as soon as they get what they want. Secondly, _t_o_o_m__u_c_h_m__o_n_e_y_ _w_i_ll_s_p_o_i_l_t_h_e_c_h_i_ld_r_e_n_（钱太多了会惯坏孩子）, for they are too young to make good use of the money. I think _a_h__u_g_w__il_l _w_o_r_k_ _b_e_t_te_r_f_o_r_c_h_i_l_d_r_en__t_h_a_n_m__o_n_e_y_（对孩子们来说，拥抱的效果比 钱好）.
In a word, the only child not only feels lonely but also can get some benefits. Learning to enjoy loneliness, one would be easier to taste the real life.
Ⅱ. 用恰当的主题句和支持句补全短文 In modern times, more and more parents devote their energy
to their career due to fierce competition, thus caring less about their children. ______M__a_n_y_o_f__th_e_m__c_h_o_o_s_e__to__r_e_w_a_r_d their _c_h_il_d_r_e_n_w__it_h__m_o_n_e_y_（许多人选择用钱来奖励孩子）for the progress they have made in their studies.
③Many of the traffic accidents caused by drinking and driving have brought about traffic jams, injuries and even deaths.
不完整:Enjoy the beautiful scenery in different places． 不清楚:To travel，one needs to know something about it． 太笼统:By travelling one enjoys a lot． 较 好:By travelling one can enjoy the beautiful scenery in different places．
(2)主题句也常置于段落末尾。作者先不说出本段的中心 思想，一直留到最后才披露。这可以给读者设置一种悬念， 迫切想要读下去，同时给读者的印象也特别深刻。放在段末 的主题句，通常还有对前面所述作总结的作用。这可称为归 纳法（induction）。
As the saying goes, genius is the product of the loneliness. Einstein is a good example. Therefore, on the one hand, the only child feels lonely. On the other hand, one can enjoy loneliness when thinking. Loneliness brings more chances to think of meanings about life and future.
最后一个段落为总结性段落，最后一句为结论性主题句， 点出了本篇文章作者写作的目的就是让人们学会享受孤独，品 尝真正的人生。
(3)有时主题句会出现在段落中间，也有时主题句含而不露， 隐藏在全段的字里行间。
2. 主题句的写法 主题句的句子结构和思想内容必须完整、清楚、具体， 不能模棱两可、空泛。要避免不完整（incomplete）、不清楚 （ unclear ） 、 过 于 笼 统 （ general ） ， 如 作 文 题 目 是 The Advantages of Travel（旅行的好处）。试比较其中一段的主 题句，前三种写法均不可取。
④Besides, a great deal of money has to be spent treating the injured and repairing the broken cars, which means a waste of money. 答案：①主题句 ②支持句 ③支持句 ④支持句
写作点拨系列（三） 段落写作之主题句和支持句
【核心点拨】 一、主题句
概括段落的主要内容，确定段落的主题，限定该主题在 本段落详细讨论的范围，是整个段落的纲领，此句即为主题 句。围绕主题句，作者通过列举事实、提供例证、描写细节、 说明理由等逐步展开段落。
பைடு நூலகம்
1. 主题句的位置 (1)主题句通常置于段落开头，开门见山摆出问题，随之辅 以细说。其作用是便于读者迅速地把握主题，抓住段落的中心 思想。此为演绎法（deduction），便于初学者仿效。 Nowadays, every student pays enough attention to study habit because of its importance. As for me, I have three ways to improve my study habit. 段落第一句是主题句，道出了全段的中心思想——学习习 惯。study habit是关键词。
二、支持句 通过给出一些例子、原因、事实、统计数据或引文等，
对主题句作进一步的阐述、说明的句子即为支持句。 特点:通常包含若干个句子，置于段落的中间，是段落的
主体部分。在文章写作时，支持句的多少、长短要适中，重 点突出。
【对点训练】 Ⅰ. 请找出下面短文段落的主题句和支持句
① Nowadays, drinking and driving is becoming a heated topic among people in China. Here, I’d like to air my views about it.
However, I don’t think this is a proper way. Firstly, if the children are always rewarded with money when they get high marks, _t_h_e_ir__a_tt_e_n_t_io_n__w_i_ll_b_e__f_o_cu__se_d__o_n_m__o_n_e_y_（他们的注意力 会集中在钱上）instead of the pleasure of studying. _S_o_m_e__o_f _t_h_e_m__w_i_ll_s_t_o_p_w__o_r_k_in_g__h_a_r_d_（他们中的一些人就会不努力学习） as soon as they get what they want. Secondly, _t_o_o_m__u_c_h_m__o_n_e_y_ _w_i_ll_s_p_o_i_l_t_h_e_c_h_i_ld_r_e_n_（钱太多了会惯坏孩子）, for they are too young to make good use of the money. I think _a_h__u_g_w__il_l _w_o_r_k_ _b_e_t_te_r_f_o_r_c_h_i_l_d_r_en__t_h_a_n_m__o_n_e_y_（对孩子们来说，拥抱的效果比 钱好）.
In a word, the only child not only feels lonely but also can get some benefits. Learning to enjoy loneliness, one would be easier to taste the real life.
Ⅱ. 用恰当的主题句和支持句补全短文 In modern times, more and more parents devote their energy
to their career due to fierce competition, thus caring less about their children. ______M__a_n_y_o_f__th_e_m__c_h_o_o_s_e__to__r_e_w_a_r_d their _c_h_il_d_r_e_n_w__it_h__m_o_n_e_y_（许多人选择用钱来奖励孩子）for the progress they have made in their studies.