议论文正反观点对比写作
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注意：词100左右
一.审题
议论文 本文属于________ ，基本时态是一般现在时 __________， 第一和第三人称 人称用__________________.
提纲要点（main points)
英语班会上，同学们 对上网 的利弊争论 不休， • 2.大多数同学认为时间是自己，提倡多上网 不能统一 . topic • 3.网络使我们交流方便，获得国内外知识及最新消息
在最近一次主题为中学生课余时间上网的英语班会上，同学们 对上网的利弊争论不休，不能统一。请你根据下列信息写一篇文章， 并发表自己看法。
大多数同学
少数同学
Fra Baidu bibliotek
1.时间是自己的，提倡多上 1.上网可以，但必须限时 网 2. 网络使我们交流方便， 2.多数人上网是玩游戏而不 获得国内外知识及最新消息 是学习 3.因特网使学生丰富了业余 3.个别同学甚至逃学上网 生活
5. 表示总结 to sum up ; all in all
• 26% of the students are __________ in favour of the are for opinion. (赞同） not only • They are ________ weak in subjects ______ but also they can't control themselves. （不但…而且…） the contrary （与之相反） *On _________, 74% of them ___________. hold the opposite opinion hold a different view. (持有不同/相反的观点）
小试牛刀：衔接词
:
my opinion As far as I’m concerned Personally speaking (在我看来）students • In ___________,
should form a good habit of studying by of(而不是） depending themselvesinstead ______ on teachers.
1.在最近一次主题为中学生课余时间上网的英语班会上，同学 1. 在最近一次主题为中学生课余时间上网的 们对上网的利弊争论不休，不能统一。
• 4.因特网使学生丰富了业余生活 2.大多数同学认为时间是自己 ，提倡多上网 • 5.少数同学认为上网可以，但必须限时 3. • 网络使我们交流方便，获得国内外知识及最新 6.多数人上网是玩游戏而不是学习 • 7.个别同学甚至逃学上网 消息 . 4.因特网使学生丰富了业余生活.
二. 抓要点，列提纲---文章结构
首段：提出问题
正反 观点 对比 类的 文章
第二段：不同观点对比
第三段：说明自己观点
写作步骤
1. 审题 （文体，时态，人称内容要点等） 2. 列提纲（安排好段落，铺设好过渡，处理 好开头和结尾） 3. 组合句子（连词成句，连句成篇） 4. 检查润色
Example 1:
观点对比型 写作训练
writing: (20 minutes)
在最近一次主题为中学生课余时间上网的英语班会上，同学们 对上网的利弊争论不休，不能统一。请你根据下列信息写一篇文章， 并发表自己看法。
大多数同学
少数同学
1.时间是自己的，提倡多上 1.上网可以，但必须限时 网 2. 网络使我们交流方便， 2.多数人上网是玩游戏而不 获得国内外知识及最新消息 是学习
过渡句
• Opinions are mainly divided into two groups. 主要有两种不同意见。 • Different people, however, have different opinions on this matter. 然而，在这件事上不同的人有不同的看法。 • However, each coin has two sides.
Recently, our class had a heated discussion about whether we should go online in our spare time. Opinions are mainly divided into two groups. Most students think that we can go online as much as possible in our spare time because we are free then. Through the Internet, we can gain plenty of the newest knowledge and the latest news at home and abroad. What’s more, network offers us a convenient way to communicate with each other. Most importantly, the Internet makes our lives outside class colorful and varied. On the other hand, few students hold the view that going online is part of our daily life. But they suggest a time limit. They have found that a lot of students are playing computer games instead of studying their lessons. There are even some students who are absent from school for days. As far as I am concerned, I think we can go online in our spare time in a right way, but we must limit our time on the Internet.
然而，每个硬币都有两面。
+介绍正方观点：
• Sixty percent of the students are in favour of the idea. …of them are in favor of the idea that… • People who are for the idea think … • Some people believe that… … • Practice: 大多数学生支持我们应该利用课余时间上网的 观点。 • Most of the students are in favour of the idea that we should go online in our spare time.
•
三、组合句子
介绍讨论的主题(开头句)：
• 介绍讨论的主题(开头句)： • 我们举行了一场讨论，讨论内容是…… We had a discussion about whether it is necessary to start learning English from childhood. • 我们已经作了一个调查，调查内容是学生如何选择高考 志愿…… We’ve had a survey on how to choose their courses, majors and universities. practice: 最近，我们班举行了一场讨论，讨论内容是我 们是否应该利用课余时间上网。 Recently, our class had a discussion about whether we should go online in our spare time.
介绍反方观点
• However, … of the students think… • On the other hand, …of the students think… • However, others have different opinions.
• Practice: 但是别的人有不同的看法。他们认为多数学生上网
注意：词100左右
3.因特网使学生的业余生活 3.个别同学甚至逃学上网 更丰富多彩
上网：go online 方便的：convenient 逃学：be absent from school
Recently, our class had a heated discussion about whether we should go online in our spare time. Opinions are mainly divided into two groups. Most students think that we can go online as much as possible in our spare time because we are free then. Through the Internet, we can gain plenty of the newest knowledge and the latest news at home and abroad. What’s more, network offers us a convenient way to communicate with each other. Most importantly, the Internet makes our lives outside class colorful and varied.
Some people’s opinion and reasons 5.少数同学认为上网可以，但必须限时 6.多数人 8.自己看法及原因 上网是玩游戏而不是学习 7.个别同学甚至逃学上 Other people’s opinion and reasons 网.
8.自己看法及原因. 及原因 the writer’s opinions and reasons
是为了玩游戏而不是学习。
• However, others have different opinions. They think that most of students go online to play games but not to learn.
本人观点
in my view / opinion, I agree with…, • As for me, … • As far as I’m concerned,
•
How to polish your Writing
高考大纲中常用的衔接词 1. 表示递进 what is more; in addition； besides, more over 2. 表示转折 however; on the contrary 3. 表示因果 therefore; as a result; because 4. 表示对比 like; unlike, on the other hand
On the other hand, few students hold the view that going online is part of our daily life. But they suggest a time limit. They have found that a lot of students are playing computer games instead of studying their lessons. There are even some students who are absent from school for days. As far as I am concerned, I think we can go online in our spare time in a right way, but we must limit our time on the Internet.
一.审题
议论文 本文属于________ ，基本时态是一般现在时 __________， 第一和第三人称 人称用__________________.
提纲要点（main points)
英语班会上，同学们 对上网 的利弊争论 不休， • 2.大多数同学认为时间是自己，提倡多上网 不能统一 . topic • 3.网络使我们交流方便，获得国内外知识及最新消息
在最近一次主题为中学生课余时间上网的英语班会上，同学们 对上网的利弊争论不休，不能统一。请你根据下列信息写一篇文章， 并发表自己看法。
大多数同学
少数同学
Fra Baidu bibliotek
1.时间是自己的，提倡多上 1.上网可以，但必须限时 网 2. 网络使我们交流方便， 2.多数人上网是玩游戏而不 获得国内外知识及最新消息 是学习 3.因特网使学生丰富了业余 3.个别同学甚至逃学上网 生活
5. 表示总结 to sum up ; all in all
• 26% of the students are __________ in favour of the are for opinion. (赞同） not only • They are ________ weak in subjects ______ but also they can't control themselves. （不但…而且…） the contrary （与之相反） *On _________, 74% of them ___________. hold the opposite opinion hold a different view. (持有不同/相反的观点）
小试牛刀：衔接词
:
my opinion As far as I’m concerned Personally speaking (在我看来）students • In ___________,
should form a good habit of studying by of(而不是） depending themselvesinstead ______ on teachers.
1.在最近一次主题为中学生课余时间上网的英语班会上，同学 1. 在最近一次主题为中学生课余时间上网的 们对上网的利弊争论不休，不能统一。
• 4.因特网使学生丰富了业余生活 2.大多数同学认为时间是自己 ，提倡多上网 • 5.少数同学认为上网可以，但必须限时 3. • 网络使我们交流方便，获得国内外知识及最新 6.多数人上网是玩游戏而不是学习 • 7.个别同学甚至逃学上网 消息 . 4.因特网使学生丰富了业余生活.
二. 抓要点，列提纲---文章结构
首段：提出问题
正反 观点 对比 类的 文章
第二段：不同观点对比
第三段：说明自己观点
写作步骤
1. 审题 （文体，时态，人称内容要点等） 2. 列提纲（安排好段落，铺设好过渡，处理 好开头和结尾） 3. 组合句子（连词成句，连句成篇） 4. 检查润色
Example 1:
观点对比型 写作训练
writing: (20 minutes)
在最近一次主题为中学生课余时间上网的英语班会上，同学们 对上网的利弊争论不休，不能统一。请你根据下列信息写一篇文章， 并发表自己看法。
大多数同学
少数同学
1.时间是自己的，提倡多上 1.上网可以，但必须限时 网 2. 网络使我们交流方便， 2.多数人上网是玩游戏而不 获得国内外知识及最新消息 是学习
过渡句
• Opinions are mainly divided into two groups. 主要有两种不同意见。 • Different people, however, have different opinions on this matter. 然而，在这件事上不同的人有不同的看法。 • However, each coin has two sides.
Recently, our class had a heated discussion about whether we should go online in our spare time. Opinions are mainly divided into two groups. Most students think that we can go online as much as possible in our spare time because we are free then. Through the Internet, we can gain plenty of the newest knowledge and the latest news at home and abroad. What’s more, network offers us a convenient way to communicate with each other. Most importantly, the Internet makes our lives outside class colorful and varied. On the other hand, few students hold the view that going online is part of our daily life. But they suggest a time limit. They have found that a lot of students are playing computer games instead of studying their lessons. There are even some students who are absent from school for days. As far as I am concerned, I think we can go online in our spare time in a right way, but we must limit our time on the Internet.
然而，每个硬币都有两面。
+介绍正方观点：
• Sixty percent of the students are in favour of the idea. …of them are in favor of the idea that… • People who are for the idea think … • Some people believe that… … • Practice: 大多数学生支持我们应该利用课余时间上网的 观点。 • Most of the students are in favour of the idea that we should go online in our spare time.
•
三、组合句子
介绍讨论的主题(开头句)：
• 介绍讨论的主题(开头句)： • 我们举行了一场讨论，讨论内容是…… We had a discussion about whether it is necessary to start learning English from childhood. • 我们已经作了一个调查，调查内容是学生如何选择高考 志愿…… We’ve had a survey on how to choose their courses, majors and universities. practice: 最近，我们班举行了一场讨论，讨论内容是我 们是否应该利用课余时间上网。 Recently, our class had a discussion about whether we should go online in our spare time.
介绍反方观点
• However, … of the students think… • On the other hand, …of the students think… • However, others have different opinions.
• Practice: 但是别的人有不同的看法。他们认为多数学生上网
注意：词100左右
3.因特网使学生的业余生活 3.个别同学甚至逃学上网 更丰富多彩
上网：go online 方便的：convenient 逃学：be absent from school
Recently, our class had a heated discussion about whether we should go online in our spare time. Opinions are mainly divided into two groups. Most students think that we can go online as much as possible in our spare time because we are free then. Through the Internet, we can gain plenty of the newest knowledge and the latest news at home and abroad. What’s more, network offers us a convenient way to communicate with each other. Most importantly, the Internet makes our lives outside class colorful and varied.
Some people’s opinion and reasons 5.少数同学认为上网可以，但必须限时 6.多数人 8.自己看法及原因 上网是玩游戏而不是学习 7.个别同学甚至逃学上 Other people’s opinion and reasons 网.
8.自己看法及原因. 及原因 the writer’s opinions and reasons
是为了玩游戏而不是学习。
• However, others have different opinions. They think that most of students go online to play games but not to learn.
本人观点
in my view / opinion, I agree with…, • As for me, … • As far as I’m concerned,
•
How to polish your Writing
高考大纲中常用的衔接词 1. 表示递进 what is more; in addition； besides, more over 2. 表示转折 however; on the contrary 3. 表示因果 therefore; as a result; because 4. 表示对比 like; unlike, on the other hand
On the other hand, few students hold the view that going online is part of our daily life. But they suggest a time limit. They have found that a lot of students are playing computer games instead of studying their lessons. There are even some students who are absent from school for days. As far as I am concerned, I think we can go online in our spare time in a right way, but we must limit our time on the Internet.