2015届高考高考英语二轮点晴 专题训练 短文改错(5)

2015届高考高三英语二轮专题训练：短文改错练习（5）【英语卷(解析）·2015届浙江省温州市十校联合体（温州中学等）高三上学期期初联考（201408）】第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）下面短文中共有10处语言错误，请在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不给分。

It can be seen,more and more people own mobile phones in China now.At the end of2002,there were20millions mobile phone users.By2005a number reached up to30million.People have found mobile phones convenience.They can get in touch to each other whenever and wherever they like.There’re different functions to meeting different needs,such as surf the Internet.However, it may bring us some trouble.For an example,the radiation from the phone may do harm our health.In spite of this,the number of people having mobile phones are increasing steadily.【答案】【知识点】D1短文改错记叙文【思路点拨】注意固定句型的应用，名词的单数形式，固定搭配及主谓一致。

【答案解析】1.It→As正如我们看见的，现在中国越来越多的人拥有手机。

这里是非限制性定语从句，用As引导。

lions→million到2002年底，有2千万的手机用户。

数词后面加million3.a→the到2005年，这个数字到了3千万。

这里是特指“手机用户的数量”，a→the4.convenience→convenient人们发现手机很方便，使用find+宾语+形容词：convenience→convenient5.to---with get in touch with sb,与某人取得联系。

6.meeting→meet有不同的功能满足不同的需求。

这里是不定式做目的状语7.surf→surfing such as后面接动名词：surf→surfing8.去掉an For example“例如”：去掉an9.our前加to手机的辐射会对我们的健康造成伤害。

Do harm to“对…造成伤害”，our前加to10.are→is拥有手机的人的数量还在稳定上升。

主语是the number of…，谓语是单数：are→is【英语卷(解析)·2015届广西桂林中学高三8月月考（201408）】第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）One day my uncle had been riding a horse in rain when he reached a small restaurant.Wet and coldly,and he wanted to warm himself very much.However,the restaurant was too crowded with people that he could not get near the fire.“Taking some fish to my horse!”he called out to thewaiter.“Sorry,sir.But a horse didn’t eat fish!”the waiter answered.“Never mind,just do as I tell you,”my uncle said.The crowd of people felt surprising at the strange order.To see a horse eat fish, all of whom ran out.Having the whole room to himself,my uncle sat down besides the fire and began warm himself.【答案】【知识点】D1短文改错记叙文【文章综述】讲述一个人骑马到了一个餐馆，又冷又湿，想一个办法让自己取暖的故事。

【答案解析】76.rain前加the考查形容词。

In the rain在雨中；77.coldly→cold考查形容词。

句意：又冷又湿，他非常想温暖一下自己。

Cold形容词做伴随状语。

78.去掉and考查句子结构。

And应该连接两个句子，但wet and cold只是伴随状语，故去年掉and.79.too→so考查固定结构。

句意：然而这个餐馆如何拥挤以至于不能靠近火源。

So…that如此以至于。

80.Taking→Take考查祈使句。

句意：给我的马一些鱼。

81.didn’t→doesn’t考查动词的时态。

句意：对不起，先生，马不会吃鱼。

表示客观事实，故用一般现在时。

82.surprising→surprised考查形容词。

句意：许多人对这个奇怪的菜单感到很吃惊。

修饰人用surprised。

83.whom→them考查代词。

句意：为了看看马吃鱼，所有的人都跑出去了。

Them代指的是人们。

84.besides→beside考查介词。

句意：屋子里只剩下他自己，坐在火堆旁边开始暖和。

85.warm前加to或warm→warming考查动词的用法。

Begin to do或begin doing开始做某事。

短文改错I took part in a geography research study group in last term.Our76________topic was environmental pollution and protection.We took a variety77________of pictures showed the present pollution conditions of our city.To78________our surprised,there are still a lot of people doing silly things to our79________ surroundings.Some people throw the rubbish anywhere they like,80________some cars give off harmful gases,and waste water is poured in81________rivers by some factories.Worse still,people sometimes had to make82________their ways through dusty winds as a result of pollution.Through83________our research,we come to know what everybody must pay attention84________to our environment and some measures should be taken to protect.85________【参考答案】76.去掉第二个in.77.正确.78.showed—showing或showed---which showed.79.surprised—surprise.80.去掉the81.in---into82.had---have.83.ways—way84.what—that或去掉what.85.protect后加it.短文改错There is a teacher who I can never forget her in my life.That76.________ was in my old days whenever I was in the middle school and I77.________ once had lots of teachers who were very strict to us except78.________ one female who was young,pretty as well kind-hearted.79.________ It is very hard of me to describe what she was like,but she had80.________ her own personality that quickly conquered us all.She asked81.________ us to elect our monitor.She let us to decide where to go for82.________ an outing.She didn’t get angry even if any of them was late for83.________ school.It was not long until most of us behaved very well84.________ because we did find her an elderly sister who we can rely on.85.________【参考答案】76.去掉her77.whenever→when78.to→with79.well∧as80.of→for81.√82.去掉第二个to83.them→us84.until→before85.can→could短文改错第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）I am worker at the tap water company.I find that76.____________people were becoming more and more careful about77._____________ health.If the tap water appear a little bit unclear78.____________and muddy,the telephone will ring again and again.79.____________ Fortunately,people do not pay equal attention to the80.____________ protection of water resources.For the sake of our81.____________ health,we should take good care our water resources82.____________and environment.There is a saying“whether we do83.____________not careful protect our environment the last drops84.____________of water we will see them will be our own tears.”85.____________【参考答案】I am∧worker at the tap water company.I find that76.______a______ people were becoming more and more careful about77.______are____ health.If the tap water appear a little bit unclear78.____appears_and muddy,the telephone will ring again and again.79._____or_____ Fortunately,people do not pay equal attention to the80.__Unfortunately_ protection of water resources.For the sake of our81.___√_____ health,we should take good care∧our water resources82.______of___and environment.There is a saying“whether we do83.____if_____not careful protect our environment the last drops84.___careful___of water we will see them will be our own tears.”85.them短文改错As students,we have classes from early morningtill late afternoon.Therefore,take a ten-minute break76._____ between class is definitely important,even necessary.77._____ Otherwise we may feel both physically or mentally tired.78.______ During the ten-minute break we did something to get79.______ rid of tiredness.What we need is to have real rest,80.______ instead of getting even tired.So don’t do anything that81._______ will make you too excited.My ten-minute break is always pleased.82.______I usually do some simple exercises.Sometime I have a free chat83.______ with my classmates or just take a walk during the break.84.______ When the new class begins,I feel freshly again.85.______【参考答案】take---taking.77.class—classes.78.or—and.79.did—do.80.real---a real81.tired—more tired.82.pleased—pleasing.83.Sometime—Sometimes.84.正确。