基础写作课件

My English Learning It is six years since I began to learn English. With the help of my teachers and classmates, I have made progress in my English. Now I’m doing well both in writing and reading in English. But I still find it hard to learn English, such as some difficult idioms. Difficult as it is, I have made up my mind to master this useful language by my hard work.
从上述例子同学们可以明 白什么样的句子叫“规范的英 语句子”。 其实， “规范的英语句子” 就是我们经常讲的三种句子：
A) Simple sentence: Hearing the news, he was happy. B) Compound sentence A: He gave me a book but I forgot to bring it back home. C) Compound sentence B: What he is doing has nothing to do with me.
1.The time passed quickly.
S+V
2. Mobile phones are useful. S+V+P 3. Uncle Lee bought me a birthday present. S+V+IO+DO 4. The dish tastes delicious. S+V+P 5. I heard my brother shouting loudly. S+V+O+C 6. We have planted a lot of trees in and around our school. S+V+O
七、参考词汇
junk food : fried chicken ,chocolates, icecream,sugar ,chips ,hamburgers and potato crisps, … be high in fat and caloeries,lead to heart disease and cancer, overweight ,
1) 名词性从句 如：老师生气。原因：王力迟到。
That Wang Li came late to school made the teacher very angry. 2) 定语从句
如：中国，地处亚洲东部；特点： 地大物博、人口众多。
China, which lies in the east of Asia, is a great country with a large area and population as well as rich natural resources. 3) 状语从句
如：有了Tom的帮助，我们很快就 找到了他们的村子。 With the help of Tom, we soon found their village. 4)借助非谓语动词短语做定语或状语 如：他们站在大树下，等待着总统的到来。
They are standing under the big tree, waiting for the president.
Here are 3 ways to make sentences:
I.巧妙运用短语，写出规范的简单句： 1)借助名词短语做同位语 如：李立，男，19岁，1986年生； 籍贯：广东。 Li Li, a boy of 19, was born in Guangdong in 1986.
2)借助介词短语做定语 如：李飞，男，10岁，棕色短发，身 穿白色茄克。 Li Fei is a ten-year-old boy with short brown hair and a white jacket. 3)借助介词短语做状语
三、Basic Writing
请根据以下的情景说明, 使用5个规范的英语句 子描述全部所给的信息内容。 标题为 My English Learning
【情景说明】 我学英语已经六年了，在英语学习上有了 一定的进步，但总是觉得英语难学，尤其是 英语中的一些习惯用法。自己今后一定要努 力学习这门有用的外语， 争取早日掌握这门 语言。
Revision
一、五种简单句型结构
主语 + 不及物动词 主语 + 及物动词 + 宾语 主语 + 连系动词 + 表语 (S+V) （S+V+O） (S+V+P)
主语 + 及物动词 +间宾（人）+ 直宾（物） (S +V +IO +DO) 主语＋及物动词＋宾语＋宾语补足语 (S+V+O+C)
判断下列句子的类型：
Dear Peter, I watch a TV program yesterday and have learned that junk food is really bad for our health.___________________ ___________________________________ ___________________________________ ___________________________________ ___________________________________ I hope you will give up junk food.The sooner,the better. Yours, Li Hua
五、Summing up 1.五种简单的句子结构 2.常用介词的in ,on 和at用法
3.写作中的规范英语句子 1）简单句 2) 并列句 3）复合句
六、Homework: 基础写作
假设你叫李华，你的好友Peter很喜欢吃一些垃圾食品。你昨 天看了一个电视栏目，里面的专家谈到垃圾食品对人体有很多坏处。 现在请你根据以下的内容提示给他发个e-mail，劝他放弃垃圾食品， 养成良好的饮食习惯。 写作内容： 1.垃圾食品的坏处 1）虽然好吃，但是它属于高脂肪和高热量食品，容易让人变胖； 2）更为严重的是经常吃垃圾食品，会导致一些可怕的疾病。 2.你的建议；要养成良好的饮食习惯，每日三餐，多吃新鲜的水果 和蔬菜 写作要求： 1.只能用五个句子表达全部内容（信件的开头和结尾已给出，不计 入总句数）； 2.把五个句子组成联贯的短文。
II. 巧用连接词，写出规范的并列句： 如：他给我钱，我不要。
He gave me a lot money but I refused.
如：我刚到拐角处，就见到你啦。 I was just walking down the street corner when I saw you.
III. 用好从句和引导词，写出规范的复 合句：
注：所给情景有时是中文要点，有时是表格。
My Englieen learning English for over 6 years. I have made some progress in my English. But I always feel English is hard to learn, especially some English idioms are difficult. I will work hard at this useful foreign language. I will try hard to grasp this foreign language.
二、介词 at on in
at 表示时间点，也可用在不确定的时间及 短期假日之前。 如：at six o’clock, at noon, at night, at midnight, at lunch /dinner time, at that time, at Christmas, at the weekend… on 指“某天”或“某天的早晚”。 如:on Monday, on December 19,2006,
on Christmas Day, on Sunday morning on the weekend, on New Year’s Day… in 指长于或短于一天的时段，也可用 在月、季节、年、年代和世纪前。 如：in the morning, in the late morning Of Dec.19, in a week, in June, in winter In 2006,in the 21st century…
如：雷锋还活在我们心中，我深受 感动。
I was deeply moved by this, because I know Lei Feng is still living in our hearts.
四、实战练习
[情景说明] 通知： 罗定中学高三年级学生将于5月7日去体检。 体检地点：罗定人民医院 体检时间：5月7日，星期六 注意： 1、7:45在医院门口集合，可以骑车或步行前往； 2、体检前空腹； 3、在医院要保持安静，听从医生和护士的安排。
Notice The students in Senior Three of Luoding Middle School will go to have a physical examination in the People’s Hospital of Luoding on Saturday, 7th May . We’ll meet at the hospital gate at 7:45. You may either walkthere or go there by bike. We are not allowed to eat or drink anything before the examination. Please keep quiet and listen to the doctors and nurses when you are there.