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a result of, for the reason that 让步关系： though, although, even if, even though,
in spite of the fact that
递进关系：what’s more, in addition, furthermore
on the one hand …on the other hand, 条件关系：if, unless, as long as, on condition that …
flowers are many buildings of different
styles. A stream runs through our
school and you always see everything
reflected in the water. Our school is
just like a garden.
Topic paragraph Supporting Paragraph 1 Supporting Paragraph 2 Supporting Paragraph 3
Concluding paragraph
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Topic paragraph (Introduction paragraph) General statement
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正确使用有关连接词
时间先后：first, then, later, in the end, eventually,
since then, after a while 转折关系：but, however, on the contrary, nevertheless
最新公开课-高中英语写作课件[1]教学讲义PPT
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theirtnoepstiscinsterneetseonrcheoles in the rocks. Other
species make their nests in holes in the ground. There are also varieties that do not live in groups at all…
表 列 举： for example / instance, take…for example, that’s to say, in other words, as follows
表 总 结： in short, in brief, in conclusion, in a word,
Concluding paragraph
Topic paragraph (Introduction paragraph) General statement
Topic ement
general statement
To many students, school life is boring and tiring. However, I find my school life meaningful and colourful.
topic statement
Supporting Paragraphs (Body) Paragraphs
TS Firstly, ...
SS Secondly, ...
SS Moreover, ... SS Finally, . . . However, ...
SS
In addition, … Furthermore, ...
A good paragraph is one that contains proper linking words.
species make their nests in holes in the ground. There are also varieties that do not live in groups at all…
表 列 举： for example / instance, take…for example, that’s to say, in other words, as follows
表 总 结： in short, in brief, in conclusion, in a word,
Concluding paragraph
Topic paragraph (Introduction paragraph) General statement
Topic ement
general statement
To many students, school life is boring and tiring. However, I find my school life meaningful and colourful.
topic statement
Supporting Paragraphs (Body) Paragraphs
TS Firstly, ...
SS Secondly, ...
SS Moreover, ... SS Finally, . . . However, ...
SS
In addition, … Furthermore, ...
A good paragraph is one that contains proper linking words.
高中英语写作课完整 Guo sirppt课件
假定你是某中学的学生李华。请用英语给出版社的 编辑写一封信，表达你对现在使用的英语材料的看 法，内容主要包括：
优点：
1. 话题广泛； 2. 图片丰富；3.有助于提高 学习兴趣。
建议：适当降低词汇难度。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使用文连贯；
3. 开头语已你写好，不计.入总词数。
3) Though she's almost 40，but she still plans to compete.
_H_o__w_e_v_e_r_, some of the texts have too many
new words and expressions which are hard for
us. _T__h_e_r_e_fo_r_e_, I'd like to suggest changing
them into easier ones.
* Well organized and smoothly develop Chinglish (避免中文式英文) * No Grammatical mistakes (没有语法错误)
* With exactly used words and relatively
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A good composition
Content
structure language
Beauty
be attractive, completed in a limited time!
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DISCUSSION:
What is a good writing？
Content: everything needed included which is related to your view.(内容要完整)
高中英语写作公开课ppt课件
PPT内容要精炼简洁，避免冗长繁琐。
文字要简短明了，避免使用大段文 字。
字体大小要适中，避免过小或过大。
添加标题
添加标题
添加标题
添加标题
使用关键词或短语，突出重点信息。
字体颜色要与背景色形成对比，避 免看不清。
感谢您的耐心观看
汇报人：
针对不同文体进行写作技巧讲解
记叙文：注意叙事顺序，情节曲折，人物塑造 议论文：论点明确，论据充分，论证严密 说明文：抓住事物特征，条理清晰，语言准确 应用文：格式规范，语言得体，内容符合要求
分析经典英文写作范文，提炼写作技巧
逐句分析，提炼句式、词汇 和表达方式
总结范文写作技巧，引导学 生掌握写作要领
字体大小适中，颜色搭配合理
字体大小：根据幻灯片布局和观众距离调整，确保清晰易读 字体颜色：与背景色形成对比，突出重点内容，避免使用刺眼颜色 文字排版：遵循简洁明了原则，避免文字堆积和混乱布局 文字数量：精简文字内容，突出重点，避免过多文字干扰观众理解
图文并茂，增强视觉效果
文字与图片结合，增加视觉冲击力 图片选择要符合主题，清晰度高 图片与文字排版要简洁明了，易于理解 色彩搭配要合理，避免过于花哨或单调
课堂总结与作业布置
总结本节课所学内容及重点难点
回顾本节课所学的 单词和短语。
复习本节课所学的 语法和句型。
强调本节课的重点 和难点。
总结本节课所学的 写作技巧和方法。
布置课后作业及要求
作业内容：根据本节课所学内容，写一篇80-100词的英语作文。 作业要求：认真审题，结合本节课所学知识，注意语法和单词的拼写，书写工整。 上交时间：下节课上课前提交，逾期不候。 奖励机制：对完成出色的同学进行表扬和奖励。
高考英语作文写作公开课PPT课件
What is the ideal length for an English composition in the college entrance examination? The ideal length for an English composition depends on the specific requirements of the exam, but generally, it should be between 150-250 words
Motivation and funding: Encourage students to continue in their writing practice and provide positive feedback to boost their confidence
Critique of language use: Assess the language proficiency of students and provide guidance on improving their vocabulary, grammar, and presence structure
Writing format guidance
Instrument students on the appropriate format for different types of writing, such as essays, letters, and narrativscriptive Composition
This type of composition is focused on describing a person, place, thing, or event in detail It requires the student to use rich and vivid language to create a sense of presence and importance
谈高中英语写作教学PPT课件
1． 审题 理解题意、抓住中心、掌握要领、判断文体。对题目
进行仔细研究、透彻理解是写好作文关键的一步。
2． 构思 思考主题所需的题材并按照作文主旨要求组织层次
清楚、合乎逻辑，前后连贯的文章框架，然后拟出提纲，根据
提纲所提供的信息设计每段的主题句，它是一个段落的中心、
文章的关键。再围绕主题句考虑扩展句，它是用来详细阐述，
阅，重点抽查中下水平的学生的作文，采用当面 批改的形式，从而大面积提高教学质量。 2、批阅过程中，认真记录习作中存在的带有普遍性和 典型性的错误，为讲评课作材料准备。 3、将一些写得较好的错误较少的习作张贴出来，或讲 评时读给全班学生听，给予鼓励。 4、备好、上好讲评课，使不同层次的学生在每次习作 中能有所获。
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Writing Samples
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1 geography population
others counCtarnayd/a city history
language
2020年10月2reat Britain is made up of/consists of three countries. Shanghai lies in the east of China. lie on/lie to
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进入初二，教材中的对话、课文的篇 幅已经较长，内容也较广。在这一阶 段应培养学生比较两种语言的差异， 能使学生更理性地学习英语、掌握英 语表达法。在这一阶段，已学了一般 将来时、一般过去时和过去进行时， 要注重训练学生在写作时选择哪种时 态。并逐步地从简单句、并列句转移 到包含状语从句的复合句。可先从连 词成句到翻译句子，再到片段作文等。
高中英语写作公开课ppt课件
要点一
要点二
Description
The teacher can provide examples of both narrative and argumentative essays and explain the differences between them They can then assign topics for both types of essays and ask the students to write them, ensuring they understand the nuances of each type of writing
Parts of speech
It involves understanding the different types of words and their functions in a sense (noun, verb, objective, etc.). The correct usage of each part of speech is essential for clear communication
Writing evaluation and feedback
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Content: The evaluation criterion for content includes the accuracy and depth of information, the coherence and logic of ideas, and the originality and creativity of the content
Through peer evaluation, students can learn to apply different writing styles and viewpoints, improve their critical thinking ability, and enhance their communication and cooperation skills
要点二
Description
The teacher can provide examples of both narrative and argumentative essays and explain the differences between them They can then assign topics for both types of essays and ask the students to write them, ensuring they understand the nuances of each type of writing
Parts of speech
It involves understanding the different types of words and their functions in a sense (noun, verb, objective, etc.). The correct usage of each part of speech is essential for clear communication
Writing evaluation and feedback
04
Content: The evaluation criterion for content includes the accuracy and depth of information, the coherence and logic of ideas, and the originality and creativity of the content
Through peer evaluation, students can learn to apply different writing styles and viewpoints, improve their critical thinking ability, and enhance their communication and cooperation skills
高中英语作文(32张PPT)-经典通用课件资料
表起始的过渡语有first of all，to begin with，in my ／our opinion，according to，so far， as far as等。
表时间的过渡语有at first，then，later， firstly, secondly, meanwhile，in the end， finally，after that等。
[原文]I like reading while my brother likes watching TV.
[修正]I like reading while my brother enjoys watching TV.
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有可能的话,使用一些地道的,充满洋腔洋调,有“洋味”的单词。
高中英语教学课件
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内容
行文 2021/10/10
homework
语言 2
新旧评分标准的不同:
内容方面
旧标准只对要点作出要求，而新标准除要求内容要点外，还涉及到对次重点和无关内容的评定。考生要 获得高分，除要覆盖所有要点外，还要尽量覆盖次重点，并且要少写或不写无关内容。
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语言方面
语言方面
旧标准只用语言中错误的多少来衡量语
言的好坏；
旧新标标准准只对用语语言言的中要错求误则的较多为少具来体衡：量
语应言用的语好法坏结；构应多样，力避单调。
应用的词汇应丰富，忌重复用词。
语言错误方面，对“尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致”的“些许错误”可以原谅。
新标准这发对语比挥言旧自的评己要分的求标潜则准能较对。语为具言体错：误的一棒子打死更能鼓励考生发挥自己的水平，更能鼓励考生 应用语法结构应多样，力避单调。
表时间的过渡语有at first，then，later， firstly, secondly, meanwhile，in the end， finally，after that等。
[原文]I like reading while my brother likes watching TV.
[修正]I like reading while my brother enjoys watching TV.
2021/10/10
20
有可能的话,使用一些地道的,充满洋腔洋调,有“洋味”的单词。
高中英语教学课件
2021/10/10
1
内容
行文 2021/10/10
homework
语言 2
新旧评分标准的不同:
内容方面
旧标准只对要点作出要求，而新标准除要求内容要点外，还涉及到对次重点和无关内容的评定。考生要 获得高分，除要覆盖所有要点外，还要尽量覆盖次重点，并且要少写或不写无关内容。
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语言方面
语言方面
旧标准只用语言中错误的多少来衡量语
言的好坏；
旧新标标准准只对用语语言言的中要错求误则的较多为少具来体衡：量
语应言用的语好法坏结；构应多样，力避单调。
应用的词汇应丰富，忌重复用词。
语言错误方面，对“尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致”的“些许错误”可以原谅。
新标准这发对语比挥言旧自的评己要分的求标潜则准能较对。语为具言体错：误的一棒子打死更能鼓励考生发挥自己的水平，更能鼓励考生 应用语法结构应多样，力避单调。
高中英语写作公开课ppt课件
It provides a comprehensive guide to help students develop their writing ability, including essay writing, letter writing, and other practical writing tasks
It is important to understand the basic rules of English grammar, such as subject verb agreement, use of positions, and correct placement of commands PowerPoint presentations can break down these rules into easy to understand slides with examples and exercises to help students master them
Argumentative Writing: Practice and Feedback
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Applied Writing
Applied Writing
Applied Writing
Applied Writing
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Letters and Emails
Resumes and Cover Letters
Introduction
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The courseware uses a variety of examples and practical exercises to make learning more interesting and effective
It is important to understand the basic rules of English grammar, such as subject verb agreement, use of positions, and correct placement of commands PowerPoint presentations can break down these rules into easy to understand slides with examples and exercises to help students master them
Argumentative Writing: Practice and Feedback
01
02
03
04
Applied Writing
Applied Writing
Applied Writing
Applied Writing
01
02
03
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Letters and Emails
Resumes and Cover Letters
Introduction
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The courseware uses a variety of examples and practical exercises to make learning more interesting and effective
高中英语作文的写作步骤课件(18张PPT)
我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：有志者事竟成。
2.I sincerely hope my advice will be some help for you. If there is more I can do to help, please let me know.
我真诚的希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。如果有更 多我可以帮忙的，请告诉我。
The ability to develop in this period:
to write a composition with the help of the mind map of writing.
Mind Map (英语作文写作思维导图）
人称 、时态、要点 关键词、词组、句型
审题
组织
规范书写
高中英语作文的写作步骤课件（18张P PT）
高中英语作文的写作步骤课件（18张P PT）
参考句式（核心段）
1 . I'd like to suggest that 我想要建议…… 2. In my opinion,... 在我看来
3. If I were you, I would... 如果我是你，我会…… 4. You'd better do.../not do... 你最好/最好不……
个人认为，做…是明智的
高中英语作文的写作步骤课件（18张P PT）
高中英语作文的写作步骤课件（18张P PT）
亮点关联词
1 . To begin with，… 首先…… 2. Besides,/ In addition，... 其次…… 3. What’s more，... 再者…… 4. Last but not least， 最后…….
高中英语作文的写作步骤课件（18张P PT）
2.I sincerely hope my advice will be some help for you. If there is more I can do to help, please let me know.
我真诚的希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。如果有更 多我可以帮忙的，请告诉我。
The ability to develop in this period:
to write a composition with the help of the mind map of writing.
Mind Map (英语作文写作思维导图）
人称 、时态、要点 关键词、词组、句型
审题
组织
规范书写
高中英语作文的写作步骤课件（18张P PT）
高中英语作文的写作步骤课件（18张P PT）
参考句式（核心段）
1 . I'd like to suggest that 我想要建议…… 2. In my opinion,... 在我看来
3. If I were you, I would... 如果我是你，我会…… 4. You'd better do.../not do... 你最好/最好不……
个人认为，做…是明智的
高中英语作文的写作步骤课件（18张P PT）
高中英语作文的写作步骤课件（18张P PT）
亮点关联词
1 . To begin with，… 首先…… 2. Besides,/ In addition，... 其次…… 3. What’s more，... 再者…… 4. Last but not least， 最后…….
高中英语作文的写作步骤课件（18张P PT）
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2011年新课标全国卷—书面表达
假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程， (1) 遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心 （Learning Center）的帮助 (2)。根据学校规定， 你需书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信： 内容主要包括： 1. 本人简介；2. 求助内容；(3) 3. 约定时间;(4) 4. 你的联系方式 (5) （Email:lihua@;Phone:12345678）。 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 结束语已为你写好。
be a judge at our English speech contest to be held in our school on June 15.
要举行 我写信是要邀请你作为
2010年新课标全国卷—书面表达 It will start at 2:00 pm and last for about three hours. Ten students will deliver their 发表他们的演说 speeches on the given topic “Man and Nature”. We hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you. 如果你方便的话 Please call me at 448876655 if you have any questions. I am looking forward to your reply. With best wishes Li Hua
How to write a good composition？
1)Use proper linking words
(使用恰当的连接词）
2012年高考英语辽宁卷—书面表达
第二节 书面表达（满分25分） 假定你是某中学的学生李华。请用英语给出版社的 编辑写一封信，表达你对现在使用的英语材料的看 法，内容主要包括： 优点： 1. 话题广泛； 2. 图片丰富；3.有助于提高 学习兴趣。 建议：适当降低词汇难度。 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使用文连贯； 3. 开头语已你写好，不计入总词数。
使用恰当的连接词 Use proper linking words
Dear Editor, As a student reader, I am writing to talk about the English textbooks published by your house. To begin with These books have many advantages._________ One of them is that we can find a variety of topics, such as science, culture and history. These topics, I think, are very popular with us students.
One Possible Version Dear Sir or Madam,
2012年新课标全国卷—书面表达
I'm Li Hua, a middle school student from 来自中国的一名中学生。 read China. I the announcement of the 看到 通告，告示 summer camp that you have posted on the 发布 Internet and I am interested in it. I know that you welcome students from different countries and I'd like to take part in it. I've been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English.
近几年来，在新课标试卷中，书面表 达趋向于提纲式作文，但是这些提纲 只给出了大致的写作方向，没有限制 具体内容，属于半开放式的提示；考 查应用中的书信，话题与中学生的学 习生活密切相关，考生会觉得有话可 说，有利于考生的自由发挥。
DISCUSSION:
What is a good writing？ How to catch the experts' eye?
2011年新课标全国卷—书面表达
One possible Version Dear Ms.Smith,
I'm Li Hua, a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university. I'm
我是在你学校学习暑期课程的一名中国学生
writing to ask for help. I came here last month
应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性 及上下文的连贯性。
高考英语评分原则：
5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。 评分时，应视其对交际影响的程度予以考虑。英， 美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。 6. 如书写较差以至影响交际，将其分数降 低一个档次。 7. 语言首先要求准确通顺。 8. 鼓励写出新颖词汇，顺畅连接和复杂结构。
In my opinion; However;
Therefore; what's more
Avoid Chinglish! 1) Traffic in Shanghai is too crowded. heavy. 2) There has is a highway connected with Beijing. 3) Though she's almost 40，but she still plans to compete. 4) I forgot left my dictionary at home. 5) It will take cost us much money to buy one.
A good composition
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be attractive, completed in a limited time!
DISCUSSION:
What is a good writing？ Content: everything needed included which is related to your view.(内容要完整) （内容要点一个也不能丢，如果人家给的是文字 提示，可以用笔在试题处标出1,2,3,4，如果人 家给的是图，那要先看懂图的意思，六个图都 要看看再动笔，不要看了一个马上就写。）
As a result; To begin with ;
In addition ; However
_____________, what's more along with the texts there are many beautiful and colorful pictures, which can help us understand English better. Even the students who used to dislike English have turned out to be interested in the subject. _________, However some of the texts have too many new words and expressions which are hard for Therefore I'd like to suggest changing us. __________, them into easier ones.
2010年新课标全国卷—书面表达
One possible Version Dear Ms.Smith,
I'm Li Hua, Chair of the student Union
of Yucai Middle School, which is close to
育才中学学生会主席
your university. I’m writing to invite you to
DISCUSSION:
What is a good writing？
Structure: * Good beginning and ending(好的开头结尾) * Well organized and smoothly developed (结构合理,行文流畅) Language: * No Chinglish (避免中文式英文) * No Grammatical mistakes (没有语法错误) * With exactly used words and relatively changed sentence patterns (词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化)
2012年新课标全国卷—书面表达
假定你是李华(1)，从互联网上得知一个国际中 (2) 学生组织将在新加坡（Singapore）举办夏令营， 欢迎各国学生参加(3) 。请写一封电子邮件申 请参加。 内容主要包括： 1. 自我介绍（包括英语能力) (4) 2. 参加意图（介绍中国） (4) 3. 希望获准。(5) 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 邮件开头和结尾已为你写好。
"我们一起研究高考"系 列之写作
英语高考第II卷(满分35分)
第一节 短文改错（10分） 第二节 书面表达（25分） (如何找到有效的增分点？)
高考英语评分原则：
1. 本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。 2. 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确 定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确 定或调整档次，最后给分。 3.词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去 2分。 4. 评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点，