高中英语书面表达讲评公开课
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写作课——月考作文讲评
Learning Goal
Studnets learn to wirte a good composition by observing, discussing and imitating.
高考作文评分总则
• 本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。 • 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定是否达到及 格线（15分），然后确定其所属的具体档次，以该档 次的要求来衡量，最后给分。 • 词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。 • 评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语 法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性。 • 若缺少要点，分数降一档(5分)处理。 • 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时应视 其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。 • 书写较差以至于影响交际，将其分数降低一个档次 (5分)
Enjoy & Find
Enjoy & Find
李钰
Beautify the following sentences
1. I am Lihua. I’m chairman of the Students Union.
（同位语）
2. You gave me confidence. Thank you!
单词拼写错误
meaningful；purpose；also；brush(刷子)； reputation； reply; messy; convenient; union; writing; beautify(美化)；provide; illegal; cheat; effort(努力)； effect（影响）
Homework
1. 据今天所学写周报第三期的作文
2. 预习三维设计18-19页，完成20页习题（选做）
校长评课建议
• 学生错误归类分析，再举例加深印象 • 最后的连贯性词组分类再练习一下 • 英语发音要更地道
（非谓语动词）
9. It will not only make us happy, but also broaden our horizons
（倒装句）
10. There are 1000 students. Most of them come from Zhengzhou.
（定语从句）
增加连贯性
（强调句）
3. He always watches TV. This makes his parents angry.
（定语从句）
4. I like our library. I can read freely here.
（定语从句）
5. I got employed. This news made me very happy.
1. 表转折： However = Nevertheless, 2. 列举三个方面： To begin with首先, In addition另外, Last but not least 最后但也同样重要的是， 3. 列举两个方面： For one thing，…. For another 4. 总结：On the whole = In conclusion
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A级书面欣赏
**** 李钰 李妍菲
C级书面展示
Dear Leslie, I’m Lihua, Chairman of the Student Union of our school. As we know, many kinds of adlets can be found everywhere. In order to beautify our environment and improve the image of our city, we’ll hold a voluntary activity on Saturday. I’m writing to invite you to take part in it. Please meet us outside the schoolgate at 8 a.m. on Saturday if you’d like to go with us. You’d better wear sport shoes. Since some adlets are on the floors and seats, you should take along some necessary tools. Your early reply is highly appreciated. 范文
要点完全；词汇丰富；语法多样； 语言准确；行文连贯；书写优美
1. Make an analysis of the topic ) 2’ details! Don’t miss(审题 out any
2. Make a draft (打草稿 ) 10’ -15’ Be clear!
3. Modify your draft(修改草稿 ) 5’ Be fluent and accurate!
14. We need to divide into many groups. 15. The reason why is that our school will provide the tools. 16. Would you want to join us? 17. Every volunteers … 18. It’s held in may on 26th. 19. The most important，… 20. I would be appreciate if you can … 21. appeal more people to join us
（同位语从句）
6. When you are crossing the road, you should be careful.
（状语从句的省略）
7. If you work hard, you’ll make great progress.
（非谓语动词）
8. I was moved by his deeds, so I burst out crying.
4. Move it (誊写) 10’ Be beautiful!
漏掉活动 要求的： 漏掉身份 介绍的：
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****
斌
1. Our city become dirty. Our school hold this activity. Everyone who take part in this activity must do…. 2. in 9:00 3. I’m Lihua, the chairman of the Student Union of our school. 4. Our small actions will take place a big change in the future. 5. I’m looking for you early reply. 6. There would be many students join us.
7. Everyone should prepared some food in advanced. 8. Students as we are also can do something aFra Baidu bibliotekesome. 9. This activity will have a good influence to us. 10. …invite you join in us 11. …come up the idea 12. … the flow tips 13. You need take some tools
高考对于优秀作文的要求
• 第五档（优秀）：（21~25分） 1.完全完成了试题规定的任务，覆盖所有内容要点。 2.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。
3.语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复
杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。 4.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 5.完全达到了预期的写作目的。
Learning Goal
Studnets learn to wirte a good composition by observing, discussing and imitating.
高考作文评分总则
• 本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。 • 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定是否达到及 格线（15分），然后确定其所属的具体档次，以该档 次的要求来衡量，最后给分。 • 词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。 • 评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语 法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性。 • 若缺少要点，分数降一档(5分)处理。 • 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时应视 其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。 • 书写较差以至于影响交际，将其分数降低一个档次 (5分)
Enjoy & Find
Enjoy & Find
李钰
Beautify the following sentences
1. I am Lihua. I’m chairman of the Students Union.
（同位语）
2. You gave me confidence. Thank you!
单词拼写错误
meaningful；purpose；also；brush(刷子)； reputation； reply; messy; convenient; union; writing; beautify(美化)；provide; illegal; cheat; effort(努力)； effect（影响）
Homework
1. 据今天所学写周报第三期的作文
2. 预习三维设计18-19页，完成20页习题（选做）
校长评课建议
• 学生错误归类分析，再举例加深印象 • 最后的连贯性词组分类再练习一下 • 英语发音要更地道
（非谓语动词）
9. It will not only make us happy, but also broaden our horizons
（倒装句）
10. There are 1000 students. Most of them come from Zhengzhou.
（定语从句）
增加连贯性
（强调句）
3. He always watches TV. This makes his parents angry.
（定语从句）
4. I like our library. I can read freely here.
（定语从句）
5. I got employed. This news made me very happy.
1. 表转折： However = Nevertheless, 2. 列举三个方面： To begin with首先, In addition另外, Last but not least 最后但也同样重要的是， 3. 列举两个方面： For one thing，…. For another 4. 总结：On the whole = In conclusion
＋
****
****
****
A级书面欣赏
**** 李钰 李妍菲
C级书面展示
Dear Leslie, I’m Lihua, Chairman of the Student Union of our school. As we know, many kinds of adlets can be found everywhere. In order to beautify our environment and improve the image of our city, we’ll hold a voluntary activity on Saturday. I’m writing to invite you to take part in it. Please meet us outside the schoolgate at 8 a.m. on Saturday if you’d like to go with us. You’d better wear sport shoes. Since some adlets are on the floors and seats, you should take along some necessary tools. Your early reply is highly appreciated. 范文
要点完全；词汇丰富；语法多样； 语言准确；行文连贯；书写优美
1. Make an analysis of the topic ) 2’ details! Don’t miss(审题 out any
2. Make a draft (打草稿 ) 10’ -15’ Be clear!
3. Modify your draft(修改草稿 ) 5’ Be fluent and accurate!
14. We need to divide into many groups. 15. The reason why is that our school will provide the tools. 16. Would you want to join us? 17. Every volunteers … 18. It’s held in may on 26th. 19. The most important，… 20. I would be appreciate if you can … 21. appeal more people to join us
（同位语从句）
6. When you are crossing the road, you should be careful.
（状语从句的省略）
7. If you work hard, you’ll make great progress.
（非谓语动词）
8. I was moved by his deeds, so I burst out crying.
4. Move it (誊写) 10’ Be beautiful!
漏掉活动 要求的： 漏掉身份 介绍的：
****
****
斌
1. Our city become dirty. Our school hold this activity. Everyone who take part in this activity must do…. 2. in 9:00 3. I’m Lihua, the chairman of the Student Union of our school. 4. Our small actions will take place a big change in the future. 5. I’m looking for you early reply. 6. There would be many students join us.
7. Everyone should prepared some food in advanced. 8. Students as we are also can do something aFra Baidu bibliotekesome. 9. This activity will have a good influence to us. 10. …invite you join in us 11. …come up the idea 12. … the flow tips 13. You need take some tools
高考对于优秀作文的要求
• 第五档（优秀）：（21~25分） 1.完全完成了试题规定的任务，覆盖所有内容要点。 2.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。
3.语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复
杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。 4.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 5.完全达到了预期的写作目的。