[GRE]arguement 模板

In this argument, the arguer advocates that [main idea].✓·in order to 好/boost (sagging) profits/improve the economic health✓·A should emulate B’s measures✓To bolster the conclusion,✓the arguer provides the evidence/statistics that...,✓points out that...✓cites the result of a resent survey that... indicated a preference for...✓cites data collected during a recent study, suggesting that ...✓along with the fact that .../ based on which he assumes that ...✓In addition/Furthermore/Meanwhile,✓he projects/predicts thatAlthough this argument might seem reasonable at first glance, it is in fact ill-conceived. The reasons are stated as follows.In the first place/In the second place/The last but not the least✓the threshold problem with this argument is that ……✓the argument depends on a dubious assumption that……✓the arguer assumes that no factor other than .... is responsible for/gives birth to……✓even if the evidence turns out to support the foregoing assumptions, the arguer just simply assumes that……✓Although this is entirely possible, the arguer offers no evidence to substantiate this crucial assumption.✓Nevertheless, there is no guarantee that it is necessarily the case, and the arguer does not supply any evidence to confirm this assumption.✓and neither any conclusive scientific evidence nor any anecdotal evidence is provided to affirm this assumption.✓It is very likely that✓It is possible that……✓It is reasonable to doubt that what the arguer assumes will not happen in reality. It is just as possible that……✓An appropriate example is not very far to seek.✓To illustrate this point clearly, let us take a look at the following representative example.✓The arguer's reasoning is flawed unless the arguer can convince me that these and other possible scenarios are unlikely.✓Without accounting for and ruling out these and other alternative explanations, the arguer cannot bolster the recommendation.✓Without patching these logical flaws /better evidence that the study/survey is statistically reliable the arguer cannot rely on it to draw any firm conclusions.✓To reach the cited conclusion, the arguer must explain either why none of these alternatives is available or why none of them is able to sustain.✓To reach the cited conclusion,the arguer should account for and rule out these possibilities. ✓the following deductions appear to be precarious since the most important premise proves to be unwarranted.To sum up, the conclusion reached by the arguer lacks credibility since the argument has several flaws which render it logically unpersuasive as it stands. In order to draw a better conclusion, the arguer should✓first further develop his argument by ……✓reason more convincingly, cite some evidence that is more persuasive to show the****.✓And also, he should eliminate the possible influences interrupting the analogy experiment.✓At last he should discreetly reconsider the proposal for ……✓Additionally, the author would provide more information to show that ……, and take every possible consideration into account.Therefore, if the author had considered the given factors discussed above, the argument would have been more through and acceptable.两个东西不相关From the outset,the author has failed to build a strong connection concerning the secondary infections and the problems faced by the two groups of patients. Considering the few information the author has provided me with, I am not sure the two groups of patients have even been infected for a second time.In addition, the doctors have limited the secondary infections on the severe muscle strain. It is somehow different form the normal muscle injuries and the author has also omitted the possible distinctions here. Since the secondary infections may not inflict the patients, the following deductions appear to be precarious since the most important premise proves to be unwarranted.Sample 不可信From the outset, what is the most fatal, the author's overall view is based on a precarious sample. /The arguer provides no evidence that survey’s respondents are representative of the overall group of ...Twenty five infants cannot well represent a truth generally for the relatively small number of individuals is dubious for scientific observation.This argument contains neither sign of random sampling nor the specific way how the study was conducted.Nor to mention the author has failed to convince me by providing with enough details focusing on the individual characteristics, necessarily including the personality of the parents, the circumstance they were facing since they were born and so on. Possibly, the twenty five infants all belong to a specific type of people; that is to say, their formation of the personalities cannot well illustrate a common truth withheld by all the infants.调查不可信Since the survey is a telephone survey, the reliability of its result is suspicious at many aspects, e.g. the size of the sample, who responded to the survey, if therespondents could exactly understand the questions, if the respondents were forthright when answering the questions, etc.没有对比，无法定义And also, the unfamiliar stimuli, as the author claims, can probably have the same effects on most of the infants. As we all know, it is the human instinct to be scared by the unknown; such characteristics may intensively appear on the infants. Maybe every infant tend to be distressful confronting the unfamiliar, somehow unpleasing stimuli as the infants in the group; therefore there is no reason to believe the distress only exist in the group. Since there is not a control group, which can eliminate such possibility, the author's evidence pointing out the special distress displayed by the group of infants has no strong bases. The comparison is deadly needed since the evidence presented here is a threshold process in verifying the effects of melatonin.还有其他的原因，不是就这一个Even if I admit, the group of the infants can accurately and precisely reflect the special signs of distress,is that to say the production of melatonin is the true reason leading to the result? As I have mentioned above, the genetic inheritance, the environment the infants have faced since the birth and many other factors can also contribute to the distress. Moreover, melatonin may not be the only hormone in effect; there can be a wide varieties of stimuli engendered by their mothers, correspondingly effect the infants; and thus there is no reason to believe a single hormone is the only effective factor, instead of a possible cooperative result. Still the author should provide some control teams eliminating the unrelated influences.错上加错In addition ，the follow-up studying doesn't help to explain and compensate for the fallacies mentioned above;on contrast it further aggravates the confusions made by the author. The author has mentioned a research made in the group of infants who are now teenagers. The relation is not accurate or strong enough to relate the signs to their condition as infants, while categorizing them into the shyness in strictly medical sense. The different conditions in growing up, can be more effective factor deciding what they are when they are teenagers; in fact, if an individual grows up without brother or sister, he can be a silent person since he never get used to talking to others. Such continuation cannot be truly verified, considering the murky information in observing the overall growing process of the infants.类比有错误Even if I admit that the two groups of patients are confronting the secondary infections as the author has stated, the author's analogy appears to be dubious.First and the foremost the author failed to illustrate with detailed information focusing on the patients. If the patients being to the first group treated by Dr. Newland are much stronger on average than that in the second group then the comparison is of little meaning.As a common sense in experiment the scientist should control unrelated factors as much as possible;besides the worries mentioned above, the factors say the age, the gender, or even the live style can also lead to a distinction in recovery. Secondly, if I omit the fallacies above, the author should illustrate his evidence, detailing the difference of two doctors and their treating method. Possibly, Dr. Newland is an expert in muscle injuries and Dr.Alton has a wider scope in his major and therefore, Dr. Alton doesn't have performance as excellent as Dr. Newland. And the treating condition and environment can also be divergent;a specifist may have better and more fitful medical utility dealing with the problem. Thus to blame the secondary infections for the delay in recovery is highly reckless while not ruling out all the alternative explanation all mentioned above.两个东西不能比，有差别In the ** place,Another trouble with the argument is that no clear evidence is provided to substantiate that the endemic/national statistics about the *** can be applied equally to other regions in the country. Adimittedly this might be possible that these town County embrace same characteristic to some extent,however,an inherent distinctions between every regions will inform us the exitence of another ability that……,which perhaps is very different from other regions in the country.逻辑错误调查错误·the sampling of the study is reliable.It is very likely that the experimental and the control groups of the study were not randomly chosen.For example, they are just ... which could not represent a diverse cross section of the population. 画蛇添足·it is necessary that过去·be responsible for/contribute to/ give birth to未来·this trend in... will continue in the future空间变化·the similar strategy will carry a similar result at ...另起炉灶·no course of action other than the proposed one will contribute to the problem.It is just as possible that other proposals might also solve the problem.For example, there are ...负面影响· there is no possible detrimental effect of...例子核心词汇such as/ especially if/人口因素·A has experienced a large growth in its population管理因素·imprudent (pricing and distribution) strategies or poor management偶然因素... was an aberration先天因素·... was more relatively healthy/relatively bright than average to begin with.For example, they exercise regularly and eat healthily司机因素... do not have enough security knowledge in mind or do not keep alert all the time.For example, a large portion of A, who enjoy the feeling of freedom and high speed, are bold and careless, which may be the lurking danger for accidents.时间因素were traveling during less safe times of the day, such as early in the morning, or during twilight地形因素the geographic features of ... are more conductive to cause accidents.For example, ... has many sharp turns天气因素poor weather价格因素the price of... has been cut down in order to tout consumers旅游因素A is a tour resort, so the customers who ... are mainly tourists instead of local residents.宴会因素most of th e consumption is from the big company’s invitation banquet品牌因素A has some special advantage thatB do not have - and that it cannot duplicate in any other types. 供求因素Property values are a function of supply and demand.It is at least likely that the demand for housing in the area happens to rocket dramatically due to an influx of major employers.In addition, it is possible that the supply of housing has decreased.竞争因素A’s competitive opponent firms and companies move to other cities. (go bankrupt)成本因素the cost for ... may has gone up rapidly, which will have to be included in the retail price of ...市场因素consumption of other similar products have also declined during that time,the amount of which might even exceed that of ...价格因素the earlier products are prohibitively expensive for most consumers改革因素the university built more laboratories in the past two years, and then, it is obvious that more money would spend on the new projects.教授因素there are too few professors of botany in the university and the students, although lack of interest, have no choice but to attend Thomas's class必修因素the classes she teaches are requirements for every science student.老师因素the school hired more effective teachers whose outstanding teaching methods contributed to theimprovement of……新旧因素... has to update its trucks, which are old and out of service, rather than add to its new...规模因素the size of the farms has shrinked.For example, a farm which has 30 cows producing more milk than two farms each of which has 10 cows.质量因素... is not so good, so people are unwilling to go to ... when they ...顾客因素many customers are indeed disgruntled about..., but too busy to take time and effort to formally complain.领导因素college career-planning staff provides students with little information about the current job market. 竞争因素·they have already attended a similar coursethere are cheaper but highly-qualified products from the formidable opponents/ the surrounding areas coming in the instant future insomuch as these products will tout more customers and make the future’s sales sharply down;习惯原因the consumer tastes and habits have become so well entrenched that consumers would not be glad to change.流行因素It is well known that the taste of the public especially when it comes to such vogue cases as ... shifts quicker than anyone can imagine. Today’s hot issue may well be in tomorrow’s landfill. Maybe at that time ... are in the fashion due to... other than...个人因素many unemployed residents are unwilling to go to work if offered the chance, for their handsome welfare can support their families。