2018高考总复习限时规范训练(人教新课标) 第三部分 写作技能步步高 要诀4 2 满分作文登场

第三部分要诀四
(2015福建)
请阅读下面图画，按要求用英语写一篇词数为120左右的短文。

内容要求：
凿壁偷光
1．描述画面；
2．概述其含义；
3．谈谈个人感想。

注意：
1．短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2．可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、行文连贯；
3．文中不能出现考生的具体信息。

参考词汇：凿，钻：bore
In the picture，
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考场作文
In the picture, we can see a boy in rags.He was ①seating at a table
with a pile of books on it.(1)He was reading a book attentively with the help of a weak ray of light coming in through a small hole in the wall.
②As is known to us that this is a story from an ancient Chinese idiom.So poor was the boy that he couldn't afford even a candle.Therefore, in order to read at night, he bored a hole in the wall to “steal” light from his neighbor's house.What we can learn from the story is that we should do what we can ③acquire knowledge when faced with difficult situations.(2)When we try to improve ourselves by learning, we can make good preparations for the future.
1．错误聚焦：
(1)①seat作动词时是及物动词，故应将①改为______或__________。

(2)②As处于形式主语的位置，故应将As改为_______。

(3) do what sb.can to do为固定句型，故应在acquire前加上
______________。

【答案】(1)seated/sitting (2)It (3)to
2．高分靓句：
(1)用强调句型对画线(1)中的with the help of a weak ray of light coming in through a small hole in the wall进行强调：
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(2)将画线(2)改为Only when引导的倒装句：
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【答案】
(1)It was with the help of a weak ray of light coming in through a small hole in the wall that he was reading a book attentively.
(2)Only when we try to improve ourselves by learning, can we make good preparations for the future.
参考范文
In_the_picture,_we can see a boy in worn clothes, sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it.A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his reading.。