ppt how to polish your essay 如何润色英语作文
合集下载
高考英语作文的润色与提高.ppt
17
英文书写大方、圆润、自然；
整洁卷面 不影响交际
词与词间距适当 字母大小适当
无大面积涂改
18
19
20
21
22
23
专题二
肃清基础语言错误
Yours,
Li Hua 6
层次不乱
开头：引入话题
通常只需要2-3句话。提出话题， 并说明你有建议。 主体：陈述观点或给出建议
结尾：呼应、总结
7
第一段：引出话题 通常只需要2-3句话。
I’m sorry to hear that you have trouble in making friends. As far as i’m concerned/For my part/In my opinion, there are some ways to solve this problem.
friend... Secondly, you need... Last but not least, it is also important to do...
All in all/ In short/ In conclusion/ In a word, you can improve your present situation. And I believe , with
your trying, you can overcome...
Yours,
Li Hua
13
句式多变
长短变化 主、被动变化 主语变化 同义词变化 同功能句型变化 横向比较变化
14
高中词汇
亮点若干
高中常见短语
各种复合句 倒装句
高级句型 强调句型
虚拟语气句型 非谓语动词结构
英文书写大方、圆润、自然；
整洁卷面 不影响交际
词与词间距适当 字母大小适当
无大面积涂改
18
19
20
21
22
23
专题二
肃清基础语言错误
Yours,
Li Hua 6
层次不乱
开头：引入话题
通常只需要2-3句话。提出话题， 并说明你有建议。 主体：陈述观点或给出建议
结尾：呼应、总结
7
第一段：引出话题 通常只需要2-3句话。
I’m sorry to hear that you have trouble in making friends. As far as i’m concerned/For my part/In my opinion, there are some ways to solve this problem.
friend... Secondly, you need... Last but not least, it is also important to do...
All in all/ In short/ In conclusion/ In a word, you can improve your present situation. And I believe , with
your trying, you can overcome...
Yours,
Li Hua
13
句式多变
长短变化 主、被动变化 主语变化 同义词变化 同功能句型变化 横向比较变化
14
高中词汇
亮点若干
高中常见短语
各种复合句 倒装句
高级句型 强调句型
虚拟语气句型 非谓语动词结构
高三公开课读后续写how to polish your writing
With a giant tear in her eye, the little girl looked up at him. She forced a smile, saying “Thank you” and walked towards the door.Pappy thought of his daughter . Driven by a sense of sympathy, Pappy said to the girl loudly, “How much have you got to spend?” Hearing this, the little girl counted money in her purse---two dollars. After thinking for a few seconds, Pappy said, “Today is Christmas Day and this is your lucky day. The bell costs two dollars.” The child went out with great joy, holding the special bell in her hand.
Later that evening when Pappy was closing up the shop, he heard a familiar ringing. He couldn’t believe his ears. The girl stood in the doorway, ringing the bell happily. Then Pappy got close to her and asked, “Have you changed your mind, Miss?” “ No. My Momma says the present is for you.” said the child. Before Pappy had time to say another word, a young woman walked in. She said to Pappy, “Hello, Dad.”
howtopolishyourwriting写作技巧PPT教案
Enjoy the following passages and
pick out the shining points of them:
What a fine Sunday! I was planning to play football with Xiao Ming, but while I was going out, I found my mother was washing clothes. Mum was busy working and doing housework after work day and night without complaining. She was so tired. Thinking about this, I decided to help do the washing.
式表达。对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。 2. 应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性。值得 注意的是语法结构或词汇方面虽有些许错误, 但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致; 具 有较强的语言运用能力。
写作要领
1、 细读提示——明白写什么，日记、信函 、报导或叙事描写 2 、写全要点——了解核心内容，非重要情 节，图画作文应认真分析判断才能分清主次 。表格类原则上一个不能少 3 、层次分明——为使短文令人感到赏心悦 目分成2甚至3段为好 4、承上启下——简而言之是连接词、过渡 句他们是组成文章粘和剂，上下沟通的纽带
洋味十足---才是好文章
I don’t want to live with a stranger in a hotel room. I don’t want to share a hotel room with a stranger.
She shouted loudly , “I’ve succeeded!” She shouted at the top of her voice, “I ‘ve made it!”
高中英语高三高考一轮复习写作备考讲解教学课件《polish your writing》
衔接美：使用恰当的连接词
使文章上下衔接自然、条理清晰。
高中英语高三高考一轮复习写作备考讲解教学课件
作文例析
• 假定你是李华。你是学生会主席。你校将于5月25—30日 在广州举行龙舟赛 (Dragon Boat Race)。请根据以下内容 给姐妹学校剑桥中学（Cambridge High School)写一封邀 请信。
高中英语高三高考一轮复习写作备考讲解教学课件
2. After his family were told that he hadn’t passed the exam, they were disappointed.
Having been told that he hadn’t passed the exam, his family were disappointed.
高中英语高三高考一轮复习写作备考讲解教学课件
Some students agreed on it, because they thought that the senior 3 students worked hard, and they easily felt tired, but the tonic could help them overcome. Besides, they often have no time to do exercise.
Because of his not passing the exam, his family were disappointed.
Not having passed the exam, he made his family disappointed. With him not passing the exam , his family were disappointed
使文章上下衔接自然、条理清晰。
高中英语高三高考一轮复习写作备考讲解教学课件
作文例析
• 假定你是李华。你是学生会主席。你校将于5月25—30日 在广州举行龙舟赛 (Dragon Boat Race)。请根据以下内容 给姐妹学校剑桥中学（Cambridge High School)写一封邀 请信。
高中英语高三高考一轮复习写作备考讲解教学课件
2. After his family were told that he hadn’t passed the exam, they were disappointed.
Having been told that he hadn’t passed the exam, his family were disappointed.
高中英语高三高考一轮复习写作备考讲解教学课件
Some students agreed on it, because they thought that the senior 3 students worked hard, and they easily felt tired, but the tonic could help them overcome. Besides, they often have no time to do exercise.
Because of his not passing the exam, his family were disappointed.
Not having passed the exam, he made his family disappointed. With him not passing the exam , his family were disappointed
如何给作文润色学案高考英语作文专题
4. We were faced with many problems. We didn’t lose heart.(非谓语)
______________________________________________________
5. I worked very hard. I made great progress in his study.(改为复合句)
如：我们最需要的是受欢迎的科学类书籍
______________are popular science books.
2)定语从句
如：中国,地处亚洲东部；特点：地大物博、人口众多。
China,lies in the east of Asia, is a great countrywith
large area and populationas well asrich natural resources.
班级：学生姓名：
课题：如何给英语作文润色（How to polish your English writing）
设计人：
指导教师：
教学设计与反思
【课内探究】
一:感知典型范例
1.词汇层面
2.句型层面
3.段落层面
二：总结技巧
词汇选择精而准，规范句型有3类；主动不如被动巧，陈述不如倒装妙；
肯定不如双否好，分词结构不能少；常用句型要记牢。
______________________________________________________
7. He offered me a piece of advice that I should cheer up and start all over again. (what引导的主语从句)
______________________________________________________
5. I worked very hard. I made great progress in his study.(改为复合句)
如：我们最需要的是受欢迎的科学类书籍
______________are popular science books.
2)定语从句
如：中国,地处亚洲东部；特点：地大物博、人口众多。
China,lies in the east of Asia, is a great countrywith
large area and populationas well asrich natural resources.
班级：学生姓名：
课题：如何给英语作文润色（How to polish your English writing）
设计人：
指导教师：
教学设计与反思
【课内探究】
一:感知典型范例
1.词汇层面
2.句型层面
3.段落层面
二：总结技巧
词汇选择精而准，规范句型有3类；主动不如被动巧，陈述不如倒装妙；
肯定不如双否好，分词结构不能少；常用句型要记牢。
______________________________________________________
7. He offered me a piece of advice that I should cheer up and start all over again. (what引导的主语从句)
polish
does harm to is harmful to
三、肯定变双否
[原文] We sቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱould stress its importance.
[improve] We cannot stress the importance too much. [improve] We cannot stress the importance enough.
How to polish it?
加开头
As can be seen from the picture, it is 2 o’clock in the morning.
变为with结构 Xiao Ming is sleeping soundly with the TV on. 变虚为实
His mother turns off the TV and blames him for not having turned off the TV again.
[translation]
再…也不为过
四、主动变被动
[原文] We should raise people’s awareness of being environmentally friendly. [improve] People’s awareness of being environmentally friendly should be raised.
时态： 一般现在时 如果故事性很强的漫画，可用过去时
It is 2 o’clock in the morning. Xiao Ming is sleeping soundly. The TV is still on. Xiao Ming’s mother turns off the TV and says, “I have told you many times that you should turn off the TV first, but you always forget it ”
最新公开课Polish-your-writing教学讲义PPT
20%的学生认为“狼 80%的学生不赞成这种方法 爸”方法正确
1. 教会孩子自律
1. 方法粗暴, 甚至是违法的
2. 解决中国父母过分 2. 使孩子更叛逆(rebellious)
溺爱孩子的问题
3. 孩子童年快乐更重要
［写作内容］
1. 以上表格的内容； 2. 你的看法。 3.只能用5句话。 4.开头已给出，不算句数。
20的学生认为狼爸方法正确80的学生不赞成这种方法解决中国父母过分溺爱孩子的问题使孩子更叛逆rebellious孩子童年快乐更重要写作内容开头已给出不算句数
写作步骤
审题
构思
组织材料
修改
写出初稿
拟定提纲
润色
润色写作的策略
1. 使用较高级的词汇
策
2. 使用较丰富的句式
略
3. 使用恰当的连接词
Jeremy Lin —New York Knicks (尼克斯队 )star
名词性从句 状语从句 定语从句 强调句 倒装句 非谓语动词 被动结构 with 结构
Activity 1: Compare two compositions and decide which one is better
The Chinese government had been consider to limit the people who will smoking in public in the beginning of next year. It will acquire public places around China should put on the signs of “Don’t smoke”. And the aim is achieving no smoking in publics. It is necessary to do it base on that about 3.5 million people who were smoker and men accqure 75%, another 25% were women. What’s more, around 5.4 million people die of second-hand smoke, over 1 million people die every year because of this, and that is why reason the government do this conclusion, and hope all Chinese can understand special the smoker.
如何润色作文 (1)
easy-going
good
diligent
optimistic
intelligent generous
This is a good suggestion. constructive
practical
beneficial
good
effective
positive
Rule one:求实避虚原则
He likes playing computer games.
to raising people’s awareness of
environmental protection.
6 Some students think that they should save some of their pocket money for books. → set aside
10. I once had the same difficulty as yours.
There was a time when I was faced with the same difficulty as yours
Improve the sentence structures
1.We should take measures to solve the problem.
enable …to
allow …to
let
give sb a chance
make it possible
to do sth Rule two:
for sb to do 短语优先原则
Doing sports will be good for your health.
be beneficial to
ppt how to polish your essay 如何润色英语作文
1.2.3. Negative Word in the beginning
Never has this topic failed to fascinate people.
1.2.4.Though ，as Young as he is，he possesses patience.
1.3.Clauses
Thanks！
1.2. Inversion
1.3.Clauses
1.1 Non-predicate le
e.g. If you give me enough time， I can do it well．→Given enough time， I can do it well．
1.1.3. The Infinitive
e.g. He got up very early to catch the bus．→To catch the bus，he got up very early．
1.2.Inversion
1.2.1.Adverbial clause of place in the beginning
采取严厉的措施遏制对环境的污染。
2.2Exemplification 举例关系
①…is a case in point.(某人或某事是一个恰 当的例子.) ②Take…for example,….(以…为例) ③for instance,… (比如…) ④To Illustrate…(例如…) ⑤We may take…as an example .e.g. The Asian countries are getting westernized at a
现代人的生活是如此的奔忙与紧张，而我们的祖先却可以不 慌不忙的从事他们的事务。
英语作文草稿定稿和polish
英语作文草稿定稿和polishIn the realm of academic writing, the journey fromdraft to polish is akin to the metamorphosis of acaterpillar into a butterfly. It is a transformative process that requires meticulous attention to detail, a keen eye for improvement, and an unwavering commitment to clarity and coherence. As an English essayist, one must navigate this journey with patience and precision, honing their ideas until they shine.The drafting stage is where the foundation of an essay is laid. It is a time for free-flowing thoughts, for exploring ideas without constraints, and for mapping out the structure of the argument. This is where we brainstorm, jot down notes, and organize our thoughts into coherent paragraphs. The draft is a raw, unfinished product, but it holds the potential for greatness.Once the draft is complete, it's time to don the reviewer's hat. This is the polishing stage, where werefine our ideas, trim excess verbiage, and ensure that every sentence contributes to the overall coherence of the essay. We check for grammar errors, punctuation mistakes,and awkward phrasings. We ensure that the essay flows smoothly from one idea to the next, building towards a satisfying conclusion.The polishing process is iterative and ongoing. It involves multiple rounds of revisions, each aiming to improve upon the last. This is where we really hone our craft, where we turn a good essay into a great one. We scrutinize every word, every sentence, every paragraph, asking ourselves: does this contribute to the essay'soverall purpose? Is it clear and concise? Could it be expressed more elegantly?The final step is proofreading, where we read through the essay with a fine-toothed comb, looking for anylingering errors or inconsistencies. This is our finalcheck before submitting the essay for review or publication. It's a crucial step that ensures our hard work shines through in the final product.The journey from draft to polish is not always easy,but it is always rewarding. It is a process that requires dedication, discipline, and a love for the craft of writing. As we refine our ideas and shape them into coherentarguments, we not only improve our writing skills but also deepen our understanding of the subject matter.In conclusion, the transition from draft to polish isan essential part of the writing process. It is a time for refinement, for honing our ideas until they are sharp and clear. It is a journey that takes us from the messy worldof raw thoughts to the polished realm of published essays. And while the process may be challenging, the end result is always worth it: a well-written, coherent, and impactful essay that speaks volumes about our thoughts and ideas.**英语作文草稿定稿与润色之旅**在英语学术写作中，从草稿到定稿的旅程就如同毛毛虫蜕变为蝴蝶的过程。
2024届高考英语写作---如何给作文润色+课件
➢ To tackle challenges, my first advice is to face them positively. ➢ To tackle challenges, my first advice is to face them positively, which will
provide courage for you to get started.
expression (example...)
(reason, influence...)
Challenges are good.
➢ (1) Challenges are beneficial and inspiring. ➢ (2) Challenges are good. For example, they provide chances for us to
➢ concise (简练)
Activity 2 Compare and Analyze
What conclusion can we make about “适当增加细节”when writing? ➢ The added details should be relevant, specific and concise .
Activity 2 Compare and Analyze
Why passage 2 is better?
Paragraph 4
• 1. To tackle challenges, my first advice is to face them positively. Don’t face them negatively or just escape from difficulties. Most importantly, believe in ourselves and never give up. Always remember to keep confident and persistent when you seek success.
provide courage for you to get started.
expression (example...)
(reason, influence...)
Challenges are good.
➢ (1) Challenges are beneficial and inspiring. ➢ (2) Challenges are good. For example, they provide chances for us to
➢ concise (简练)
Activity 2 Compare and Analyze
What conclusion can we make about “适当增加细节”when writing? ➢ The added details should be relevant, specific and concise .
Activity 2 Compare and Analyze
Why passage 2 is better?
Paragraph 4
• 1. To tackle challenges, my first advice is to face them positively. Don’t face them negatively or just escape from difficulties. Most importantly, believe in ourselves and never give up. Always remember to keep confident and persistent when you seek success.
how to polish writing 如何打磨英语写作
Highlight 1
Fresh and not overused words 4.“不知道”→用in the dark/at a loss替换don’t know/have no idea 【秒杀】现在，我们需要比从前更意识到解决这个问题 的迫切性。(苏北四市2017一模作文） Moreover, without it, we might be in the dark about what to do, thus achieving nothing in the end.
What makes a good writing?
What makes a good writing?
1. _U_n_d__e_rs_t_a_n_d___ your readers and what they want
2. _P_l_a_n____your writing 3. Organize your ideas into paragraphs, with
Phrases come first 3. Your fluency in English makes you better than the other candidates for the job.
Your fluency in English gives you __a_n_____ _ad__v_a_n_ta_g_e___o_v_e_r_ the other candidates for the job. 4. We should remember that everyone is the master of his own fate.
Fresh and not overused words
2. It is classmates’ einncsopuirraatgioenment aanfdfecltoiove that help me go through this periodtoounfghdifficult time.(南京、盐城2017二模作文） 3. It is everyone’s duty to obey the regulations to keep our osobcsieertvyein order and going on the right track. (2015江苏卷作文）
英语写作专题-如何修改润色
How to Polish your Letter导学案Step 1 Review the topic of the letter假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家里做客，发邮件向你询问有关习俗。
请你回复邮件，内容包括：1、到达时间2、合适的礼物3、餐桌礼仪注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Step 2 Appreciation & Discussion2.1 Appreciate some essays with your classmates. Try to find out their beauties._____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________2.2 Can you summarize the tips to polish a letter?_____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________Step 3 Tips of Polishing3.1 Layout--结构及书写✓分段要合理，2-3段为宜。
✓书写要美观。
英语作文如何润色
英语作文如何润色第一篇：英语作文如何润色很多人都不知道，英语作文怎么写才能做到最好，有的人只是用单词生搬硬套的写法，对于英语作文润色就不知道如何是好了。
下面是对于英语作文润色方法的介绍，希望大家看了之后能够有所了解。
1、多使用被动句因为在写作中你要阐述你对图画的观点，你不能总用some people say，others say，这样的句子很没有说服力，你自己写的时候都要怀疑一下。
在一些出国类的考试的写作中，这些都是要坚决禁止的。
因为这样一来你的文章说服力就差了，一旦文章没有说服力，你这篇文章也就徒有其表了。
怎么增强你的文章说服力呢，就是用被动语态，当作一个客观事实来陈述。
汉语中用被动句较少，多使用没有人称的主语或者“大家”“人们”，在英语中多使用被动句。
在庖丁解牛中，那个科学统计法就用到了被动句，这里再举个例子。
Computers have been widely used in various fields.这样一个被动句是对事实的陈述，是一个议论文的标准格式。
如果你把它改成一个主动句 We find some use of computers in various fields.感觉就很站不住脚。
举这个例子是说明，被动句是我们的作文中应该出现的，通篇都是主动句，偶尔出现1～2个被动句会让你的文章增色不少。
在你复习作文的时候，每天改写几个被动句，练习一下，不要到考场上现想。
台上一分钟，台下十年功。
2、时态要统一由于议论文是要阐述你的观点，很少涉及动作发生的时间，所以写作中时态的运用很有限。
最常使用的是一般现在时，其次是一般将来时和现在完成时，再次是一般过去时和现在进行时，其它时态用的相对不多。
我写作的时候习惯是一般现在时，但要注意事态的统一，不要一会一般现在时，一会一般过去时，那样你的作文就彻底没高分了。
3、高级词汇的使用在上一个帖子中写过一些这方面的东西但是不多，词汇的多变是考试评分标准中的一项，平时多积累一些同义词是大有好处的，这里给大家一个文档，对阅读中常见的同义词进行总结，让大家笑傲考场。
高考英语作文讲解之如何润色英语作文
t nguage 3.Structure
Appreciation
高考阅卷标准
第五档（21分-25分）
1.完全完成了试题规定的任务。 2.覆盖所有内容要点。
1.切题(突出的 主题) 2.完整(清晰的要点) 3.精准(准确的表达) 4.连贯(恰当的衔接词) 5.灵活多样(丰富灵活高级 的表达)
3.If you want to know more, please contact me.
Replace Me With...
be important
1.We Chinese think family origins are important.
2. My introduction will make you know Chinese name culture better and adapt to Chinese culture better.
开头： 1.Having learned that you are having trouble in…, now I’m writing to offer some advice, which may help you ... 2. I’m more than delighted to receive your letter asking for my advice on… 3.Having read your letter, I am writing to express my views concerning/regarding/with reference to… 4.I’m writing in response to your letter in which you asked for my advice on……. 5. My suggestions are as follows./My advice is as follows.
Appreciation
高考阅卷标准
第五档（21分-25分）
1.完全完成了试题规定的任务。 2.覆盖所有内容要点。
1.切题(突出的 主题) 2.完整(清晰的要点) 3.精准(准确的表达) 4.连贯(恰当的衔接词) 5.灵活多样(丰富灵活高级 的表达)
3.If you want to know more, please contact me.
Replace Me With...
be important
1.We Chinese think family origins are important.
2. My introduction will make you know Chinese name culture better and adapt to Chinese culture better.
开头： 1.Having learned that you are having trouble in…, now I’m writing to offer some advice, which may help you ... 2. I’m more than delighted to receive your letter asking for my advice on… 3.Having read your letter, I am writing to express my views concerning/regarding/with reference to… 4.I’m writing in response to your letter in which you asked for my advice on……. 5. My suggestions are as follows./My advice is as follows.
高考英语书面表达-how to polish your writing
Three pieces of a student’s work(学生作品）
13分
16分
23分
WHAT MAKES A GOOD PIECE OF WRITING? Good first impression Everything 1.neat writing书写 required Well organized and No Chinglish included 2. content内容 smoothly No Grammatical mistakes developed exactly used words and 3. structure结构 relatively changed sentence patterns 4. language语言
2016年福建省质检书面表达
国外某网站举办新的一轮网上讲座活动，正面向 全球中学生征集话题。假设你是新华中学的学生 李华，经常访问该网站。现请你用英文给该网站 发送一封电子邮件，向其推荐话题。内容包括: 自我介绍 写信目的 话题：我们应该感恩（thankful). 推荐理由 预祝活动成功 注意：1.词数100左右; 2.邮件格式已为你给出； 3.邮件出不能出现本人信息；4.在答题卡上作答。
书面表达评讲之:
TO POLISH YOUR WRITING
让你的作文
起来
Xiamen Yingcai School Xie Jianchun
高级词汇与高级句式的润色升级
一、使用高级词汇
写作时，“高级词汇”如能运用贴切自
然，哪怕整篇文章只用上一两个，也会为
你的作文增添色彩。
1．标新立异
写作时要恰当得体地使用一些蕴含感情色彩，别人有 可能想不到的词汇，恰当地求新求异。
书面表达之润色篇 (1)
7. When we face violence, we shouldn’t keep silent.
When facing violence, we shouldn’t keep silent.
句式策略—强调句
8. Silent will make the things go from bad to worse.
Failing to control themselves when in conflict with others, some teenagers tend to be aggressive and therefore beat or insult their classmates.
句式策略—省略句
It is silence that makes the situation go from bad to worse.
句式策略—虚拟语气
ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱ
9. It is necessary for the government to make laws, after that, the bullyers will think twice before bully others. It is necessary that the government should make laws to severely punish those who commit violence. Otherwise, they wouldn't think twice.
they are lacking in parents’ love and care. For example, Some parents are so busy with their work that they ignore their children’s education. Worse still, Failing to control themselves when in conflict with others, some teenagers tend to be aggressive and therefore beat or insult their classmates.
备战高考英语写作之润色作文篇精品ppt课件
11.I want to do something to let our school to take measures to protect the students’ security.
11. I have a (strong) desire to do something to let our school to take measures to protect the students’ security.
Polish your writing
1. Words 2. Phrases 3. Sentence Patternry you.
You are the last man I am willing to marry.
Under no circumstances will I marry you.
4. Schools should consider students’ safety all the time.
4. Schools should take students’ safety into account/consideration all the time.
备战高考英语写作之润色作文篇精品p pt课件 -PPT执 教课件 【推荐 】
2. It’s class meeting that helps me to succeed in study.
2. It’s class meeting that helps me to achieve success in study.
备战高考英语写作之润色作文篇精品p pt课件 -PPT执 教课件 【推荐 】
①Inspired by the class meeting, I made up my mind to study hard.
11. I have a (strong) desire to do something to let our school to take measures to protect the students’ security.
Polish your writing
1. Words 2. Phrases 3. Sentence Patternry you.
You are the last man I am willing to marry.
Under no circumstances will I marry you.
4. Schools should consider students’ safety all the time.
4. Schools should take students’ safety into account/consideration all the time.
备战高考英语写作之润色作文篇精品p pt课件 -PPT执 教课件 【推荐 】
2. It’s class meeting that helps me to succeed in study.
2. It’s class meeting that helps me to achieve success in study.
备战高考英语写作之润色作文篇精品p pt课件 -PPT执 教课件 【推荐 】
①Inspired by the class meeting, I made up my mind to study hard.
高三一轮备考polish your writing教学课件—A3演示文稿设计与制作【微能力认证优秀作
Because of his not passing the exam, his family were disappointed.
Not having passed the exam, he made his family disappointed.
With him not passing the exam , his family were disappointed
2021/10/10
17
相应的解题步骤+高分策略
1.审题：已确定经体裁这、样时态做、人了称，。 还是得不到 第五档高分？ 2.列要点：漏掉内容要点要降低得分档次！
3.列句子：必要时适当增加细节。
4.连句成W文：h使a用t 适co当u的l连d接h词a，v使e 行g文on连e贯
5.润色：w尽力ro使n用g较?复杂结构或较高级词汇；
2021/10/10
12
2. After his family were told that he hadn’t passed the exam, they were disappointed.
Having been told that he hadn’t passed the exam, his family were disappointed.
4.That he hadn’t passed the exam made his family disappointed. His not having passed the exam made his family disappointed.
5.He didn’t pass the exam, which made his family disappointed.
Some students agreed on it, because they thought that the senior 3 students worked hard, and they easily felt tired, but the tonic could help them overcome. Besides, they often have no time to do exercise.
相关主题
- 1、下载文档前请自行甄别文档内容的完整性，平台不提供额外的编辑、内容补充、找答案等附加服务。
- 2、"仅部分预览"的文档,不可在线预览部分如存在完整性等问题,可反馈申请退款(可完整预览的文档不适用该条件!)。
- 3、如文档侵犯您的权益，请联系客服反馈,我们会尽快为您处理(人工客服工作时间：9:00-18:30)。
How to polish an essay?
By Wang Xuemei
Contents
1
Variation of sentence patterns Conjunction Advanced vocabulary
2
3
1.Variation of sentence patterns
1.1. Non-predicate Verbs
Thanks！
staggering rate. Take China for example, when youngsters go to the movies, it is standard practice for them to choose Hollywood blockbuster over domestic films亚洲国家正以一种惊人的速度变得西方化，以中国为例，当
Climax ：
①What
is more②in addition ③besides ④furthermore ⑤moreover ⑥additionally
Summarizing: →
①to sum up ②all in all ③in consequence ④in brief ⑤as a result ⑥the point is ⑦in conclusion ⑧ it amounts to this ⑨what I have been saying is this, etc.
1.3.1Attributive clause 定语从句 • e.g. Those who were trapped under the ruins fi nally got rescued. 1.3.2 Apposition 同位语 e.g. there is no doubt that….
1.3.3Emphasis :强调句 e.g. it is….that (who)….
年轻人去电影院的时候，通常都会选择好莱坞大片而不是中国电 影
2.3Comparison and contrast 对比关系 ①While …, ②whereas…, ③whilst…, ④in contrast e.g. Whereas/ while modern man is so rushed and so stressed, our ancestors could often perform their business in a relaxed manner.(对比)
3.2.verb
the picture means that love is more needed by people in urgent need of help. mean→
3.3.adjective
3.4. others
①in my opinion ②as far as my view is concerned, ③with regard to my thinking ④ personally thinking, ⑤ for my part, ⑥in line with my consideration.
2.Conjunction 2.1. Cause and effect 因果关系 2.2. Exemplification 举例关系 parison and contrast 对比关系 2.4.Concession 让步关系 2.5ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้Definition 下定义关系
2.1Cause and effect 因果关系
3.Advanced vocabulary
3.1.nouns
文化融合 ： cultural blending， cultural integration → a combination of diverse cultures. 多元文化： multi—culture, pluralistic culture,
1.2. Inversion
1.3.Clauses
1.1 Non-predicate Verbs
1.1.1 .The past participle
e.g. If you give me enough time， I can do it well．→Given enough time， I can do it well．
1.1.2. The present participle
e.g. I was filled with anticipation when I came home from school.→Coming home from school，I was filled with anticipation．
illustrate, demonstrate, point out, convey, reveal
various, diverse, a variety of, miscellaneous → different
Re-stating: →
① in other words ②that is to say ③ to put it another way ④ let me put it this way ⑤ or rather⑥ namely
①because, as, since, due to, owing to ②hence,….thus,…therefore(因此) As a consequence,…(作为结果) Accordingly…(相应的)， As a result…(作为结果) Consequently…(作为结果) so…that…(如此…以致…) e.g. The ecological problems are being aggravated. Hence, it is imperative that we take measures to curb the pollution of the environment.生态系统正在急剧的恶化,因此，我们必须
1.2.3. Negative Word in the beginning
Never has this topic failed to fascinate people.
1.2.4.Though ，as Young as he is，he possesses patience.
1.3.Clauses
Our library lies in the center of our school. → In the center of our school lies our library.
1.2.2. Only+prep phrase:
Only＋ by taking exercises can we keep healthy.
现代人的生活是如此的奔忙与紧张，而我们的祖先却可以不 慌不忙的从事他们的事务。
2.4.Concession 让步关系
①Despite /in
spite of …(后面只能跟名词 名词词 组或者动名词)(尽管有…), ②albeit…(尽管 ,后面只能跟形容词或者介词短 语), ③ 形容词+as it may be…(尽管,前面只能加形容 词), ④Nonetheless/Nevertheless,(尽管如此) e.g. Tough as it may be to get accustomed to a new culture, it will prove very rewarding.的 尽管适应新的文化可能很难，但这会被证明是 很值得。
1.1.3. The Infinitive
e.g. He got up very early to catch the bus．→To catch the bus，he got up very early．
1.2.Inversion
1.2.1.Adverbial clause of place in the beginning
①关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……
There are different opinions among people as to ____ .Some people suggest that ____. ②俗话说(常言道)……，它是我们前辈的经历，但是， 即使在今天，它在许多场合仍然适用。 There is an old saying ______.It’s the experience of our forefathers，however，it is correct in many cases even today. ③ 现在，……很普遍，许多人喜欢……，因为……， 另外(而且)……。 Nowadays, it is common to ______. Many people like ______ because ______. Besides,______. ④……已成为人的关注的热门话题，特别是在年青人 当中，将引发激烈的辩论。 ______ has become a hot topic among people, especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.
2.5.Definition 下定义关系
① A is best characterized by…( A 最明显的 特征是…), ②A constitutes…(A 构成…) ③A means…, ④A consists of …(A 由…组成).
e.g. A fine journalist is best characterized by discipline, determination and keen observations. 一个好的记者最重要的特点是自律，毅力 和敏锐的观察。
采取严厉的措施遏制对环境的污染。
2.2Exemplification 举例关系
①…is a case in point.(某人或某事是一个恰 当的例子.) ②Take…for example,….(以…为例) ③for instance,… (比如…) ④To Illustrate…(例如…) ⑤We may take…as an example .e.g. The Asian countries are getting westernized at a
By Wang Xuemei
Contents
1
Variation of sentence patterns Conjunction Advanced vocabulary
2
3
1.Variation of sentence patterns
1.1. Non-predicate Verbs
Thanks！
staggering rate. Take China for example, when youngsters go to the movies, it is standard practice for them to choose Hollywood blockbuster over domestic films亚洲国家正以一种惊人的速度变得西方化，以中国为例，当
Climax ：
①What
is more②in addition ③besides ④furthermore ⑤moreover ⑥additionally
Summarizing: →
①to sum up ②all in all ③in consequence ④in brief ⑤as a result ⑥the point is ⑦in conclusion ⑧ it amounts to this ⑨what I have been saying is this, etc.
1.3.1Attributive clause 定语从句 • e.g. Those who were trapped under the ruins fi nally got rescued. 1.3.2 Apposition 同位语 e.g. there is no doubt that….
1.3.3Emphasis :强调句 e.g. it is….that (who)….
年轻人去电影院的时候，通常都会选择好莱坞大片而不是中国电 影
2.3Comparison and contrast 对比关系 ①While …, ②whereas…, ③whilst…, ④in contrast e.g. Whereas/ while modern man is so rushed and so stressed, our ancestors could often perform their business in a relaxed manner.(对比)
3.2.verb
the picture means that love is more needed by people in urgent need of help. mean→
3.3.adjective
3.4. others
①in my opinion ②as far as my view is concerned, ③with regard to my thinking ④ personally thinking, ⑤ for my part, ⑥in line with my consideration.
2.Conjunction 2.1. Cause and effect 因果关系 2.2. Exemplification 举例关系 parison and contrast 对比关系 2.4.Concession 让步关系 2.5ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้Definition 下定义关系
2.1Cause and effect 因果关系
3.Advanced vocabulary
3.1.nouns
文化融合 ： cultural blending， cultural integration → a combination of diverse cultures. 多元文化： multi—culture, pluralistic culture,
1.2. Inversion
1.3.Clauses
1.1 Non-predicate Verbs
1.1.1 .The past participle
e.g. If you give me enough time， I can do it well．→Given enough time， I can do it well．
1.1.2. The present participle
e.g. I was filled with anticipation when I came home from school.→Coming home from school，I was filled with anticipation．
illustrate, demonstrate, point out, convey, reveal
various, diverse, a variety of, miscellaneous → different
Re-stating: →
① in other words ②that is to say ③ to put it another way ④ let me put it this way ⑤ or rather⑥ namely
①because, as, since, due to, owing to ②hence,….thus,…therefore(因此) As a consequence,…(作为结果) Accordingly…(相应的)， As a result…(作为结果) Consequently…(作为结果) so…that…(如此…以致…) e.g. The ecological problems are being aggravated. Hence, it is imperative that we take measures to curb the pollution of the environment.生态系统正在急剧的恶化,因此，我们必须
1.2.3. Negative Word in the beginning
Never has this topic failed to fascinate people.
1.2.4.Though ，as Young as he is，he possesses patience.
1.3.Clauses
Our library lies in the center of our school. → In the center of our school lies our library.
1.2.2. Only+prep phrase:
Only＋ by taking exercises can we keep healthy.
现代人的生活是如此的奔忙与紧张，而我们的祖先却可以不 慌不忙的从事他们的事务。
2.4.Concession 让步关系
①Despite /in
spite of …(后面只能跟名词 名词词 组或者动名词)(尽管有…), ②albeit…(尽管 ,后面只能跟形容词或者介词短 语), ③ 形容词+as it may be…(尽管,前面只能加形容 词), ④Nonetheless/Nevertheless,(尽管如此) e.g. Tough as it may be to get accustomed to a new culture, it will prove very rewarding.的 尽管适应新的文化可能很难，但这会被证明是 很值得。
1.1.3. The Infinitive
e.g. He got up very early to catch the bus．→To catch the bus，he got up very early．
1.2.Inversion
1.2.1.Adverbial clause of place in the beginning
①关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……
There are different opinions among people as to ____ .Some people suggest that ____. ②俗话说(常言道)……，它是我们前辈的经历，但是， 即使在今天，它在许多场合仍然适用。 There is an old saying ______.It’s the experience of our forefathers，however，it is correct in many cases even today. ③ 现在，……很普遍，许多人喜欢……，因为……， 另外(而且)……。 Nowadays, it is common to ______. Many people like ______ because ______. Besides,______. ④……已成为人的关注的热门话题，特别是在年青人 当中，将引发激烈的辩论。 ______ has become a hot topic among people, especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.
2.5.Definition 下定义关系
① A is best characterized by…( A 最明显的 特征是…), ②A constitutes…(A 构成…) ③A means…, ④A consists of …(A 由…组成).
e.g. A fine journalist is best characterized by discipline, determination and keen observations. 一个好的记者最重要的特点是自律，毅力 和敏锐的观察。
采取严厉的措施遏制对环境的污染。
2.2Exemplification 举例关系
①…is a case in point.(某人或某事是一个恰 当的例子.) ②Take…for example,….(以…为例) ③for instance,… (比如…) ④To Illustrate…(例如…) ⑤We may take…as an example .e.g. The Asian countries are getting westernized at a