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高中英语复习北师大版复习专题书面表达-如何适当增加细节共25张PPT)

II.增加要点中的细节
•首先，细读和分析书面表达原文和提示，理解句意，再适当增加细节，完善句子，常用的方法有：增加原信息有关原因、条件和目的等从句
II.增加要点中的细节
•1、增加与原信息有关的原因的句子 •假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Henry最近来信，询问你高考后的暑期安排。请你根据以下要点，用英语回一封信，说明你的计划，并简述理由。（1）.休息；（2）. 读书；
• 我们有许多共同爱好。（例如旅行，游泳，钓鱼） • We have a lot of common interests. • such as travelling,swimming,fishing.
• 集中注意力于学习（不劳无获） • We should focus our mind on our studies. • As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” We should focus our mind
• 3 我爸爸会带外国学生参观这个城市（很高兴带，在空闲时间） • My father will be very glad to show the foreign students around our
city
• in our spare time. • 4 .我会帮您还书的。（给图书馆/你的老师） • I will help you return the book. to the the library./your teacher.
成文：
• Dear Henry, • I’m glad to receive your letter. It’s a pleasure for me to tell you
my plan of this coming summer vacation after the college entrance examination. • First of all, I need a good rest because I do feel tired after the hard work of all these years .Of course, I’ll do some reading for fun, and for knowledge as well. I’ll spend some time staying with my parents, chatting with them and doing some housework. They’ve done so much for me, you know. If possible, I’ll take part in some social activities so that I can know more about the society. （105字）

高中英语写作提升之如何增加细节课件(共21张ppt)

crowds. Only in this way can you keep yourself far away from
学会分析优秀的范文 the virus. More importantly, you must wear protective clothing or at least mask when you have to go out, as the protective
job in a foreign company.
3.__S_i_n_c_e_/A__s_/B__e_c_a_u_s_e__I_h_a_v_e__t_h_e__e_x_p_e_r_ie_n_c_e__o_f_____ ___l_o_s_in_g__m__y_p__u_rs_e__，______(由于我有过丢钱包的经历）
Dear Tim,
补充原因
Learning that the COVID 19 is also spreading in America
and you are asking for advice since Chinese have done quite
well in fighting in this battle, I am writing this letter to offer you
二、补全前因后果或目的
2.补充前因后果或目的
1. K__n_o_w_in_g__th_a_t_y_o_u__s_h_o_w_g_r_e_a_t_in_t_e_re_s_t_i_n_C__h_in_e_s_e____ __tr_a_d_it_io_n_a_l_c_u_lt_u_r_e_, (知道你对中国传统文化很感兴趣,）
Looking forward to your early reply.

高考英语作文写作公开课PPT课件(34张)

• Beijing is so beautiful that thousands of people come here every year.
• Beijing is so beautiful that thousands of people come here every year from all around the world.
√
• difficult people？ X • the people who suffered from a disaster √
遇到不会写的单词怎么办？
（3）老百姓
• old hundred sex
X
• the general public
• ordinary people
• people from all walks of life
假定你是李华。你和几个朋友约定星期天在人民公园野餐。你们的英国朋友 Peter 也应邀参加。请根据下面的示意图，给他写封信件，告诉他进公园后如何找到你们。注意：词数 80-100 。开头语已为你写好。(’95) Dear Peter,
We’re so glad that you are coming to join us on Sunday. Here is how you 一“抓”为抓主题。
• Type: 说明文（书信） • Person: 第一人称 • Tense: 一般现在时，一般将来时 • What: 通过看示意图来野餐 • When: 星期天 • Where: 人民公园
二“列”为列要点。
the key points to be included
英语写作训练
• 英语看图类作文： • 1.记叙文 • 2.议论文 • 3.说明文（含图表）

高中英语写作提升之如何增加细节课件(共21张PPT)

二、补全前因后果或目的
2.补充前因后果或目的
1. K__n_o_w_in_g__th_a_t_y_o_u__s_h_o_w_g_r_e_a_t_in_t_e_re_s_t_i_n_C__h_in_e_s_e____ __tr_a_d_it_io_n_a_l_c_u_lt_u_r_e_, (知道你对中国传统文化很感兴趣,）
I am writing to invite you to participate in this activity.
2._In__o_r_d_e_r_t_o__g_e_t_s_o_m__e__p_ra__c_ti_c_a_l _e_x_p_e_r_ie__n_c_e_,_______
(为了获得一些实践经验) I'm planning to take a part-time
I can feel how anxious Mr Steven will be now.
暂停3分钟
Because of the experience of...
三、适当将写作内容具体化
3.适当将写作内容具体化
1.The activity will be held
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我擅长于运动。
, such as A，B and C/ so on.
, including A，B and C/ so on.
I am good at sports, such as swimming, playing basketball and running/ so on. I am good at sports, including swimming, playing basketball and running/ so on.

高考英语书面表达写作技巧训练公开课课件(共27张)【优质PPT】共29页文档

谢谢！
高考英语书面表达写作技巧训练公开课课件(共27张)【优质PPT】
1、本；不，不成文法本身就是讲道理 ……法律，也 ----即明示道理。— —爱·科克
3、法律是最保险的头盔。——爱·科克 4、一个国家如果纲纪不正，其国风一定颓败。—— 塞内加 5、法律不能使人人平等，但是在法律面前人人是平等的。 ——波洛克
61、奢侈是舒适的，否则就不是奢侈。——CocoCha nel 62、少而好学，如日出之阳；壮而好学，如日中之光；志而好学，如炳烛之光。 ——刘向 63、三军可夺帅也，匹夫不可夺志也。 ——孔丘 64、人生就是学校。在那里，与其说好的教师是幸福，不如说好的教师是不幸。 ——海贝尔 65、接受挑战，就可以享受胜利的喜悦。——杰纳勒尔·乔治·S·巴顿

高考英语书面表达高分写作技巧公开课教学课件(共25张PPT)

二、忌次序混乱，连接词单一或缺乏
审完题后，不少考生虽已知道了要写的内容，却不能合理地组织所给的材料，东一句、西一句，写得支离破碎，文理不通，让人不知所云。考生最好能迅速地列出要点，在这个过程中，要考虑一下先写什么，后写什么，句与句之间，不得逐字或逐条翻译。段与段之间最好能使用一些能清晰表达逻辑结构的连接词或句子，如first of all , above all , secondly , next , in fact,besides, in a word , at last , the most important point is that…等等，使文章过渡自然、流畅，做到前后连贯、层次分明、有条不紊。
注意：不能不用，且不能少用，但也不能滥用。
一、怎样使用较高级的词汇
1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable. Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable. 2.We all think he is a great man. We all think highly of him . 3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea. A good idea occurred to me. / A good idea suddenly struck me.
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六、忌充分自信、不回查
写出来的东西，很可能有不正确、不恰当的地方，因此，在答完卷时，至少应从以下几个方面认真检查：（1）对照题目要求，看全部要点是否都已包括进去，有无遗漏或误解；（2）文体格式是否正确规范；（3）词语使用是否合适、正确，有无语法与用词上的错误，表达是否符合英语表达习惯；（4）单词拼写、字母大小写有无错误，标点符号有无遗漏或用错等等。一句话，对书面表达应尽量做到：不跑题，不漏点，语言精简合习惯，灵活表达要规范，书法整齐词有限。

高考英语写作技巧PPT课件

自然、紧凑。
2021
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I、怎样使用较高级的词汇
1 .Suddenly I thought out a good idea.
A good idea occurred to / struck me. 2. As a result , the plan was a failure.
The plan turned out to be a failure. 3. When she heard he had died, she went pale with sorrow.
2021
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Practice makes perfect
某考察团正在农村参观考察，假定你是接待人员,请根据下列提示以发言稿的形式简要介绍该村情况：
1)大小：近100户人家，约500口人。
2)变化：过去很穷，78年后变化很大。人们生活比以前好多了。现已旧貌换新颜。
3)教育：原来的学校很小，现已经改建过。新建的教学楼有4层，是村里最美的建筑物。村所有学龄儿童在此免费就读。
Weak as I am, I’ll ………..
3. I passed the physics exam because of your help.(虚拟语气） I couldn’t have passed ……. but for /without…….
Had you not helped me, I wouldn’t have passed…… 4. I won’t believe what he says. （状语从句）
This village is a small one consisting of 100 families and about 500 people. Since 1978, it has seen great change in many fields such as: life and education. Therefore, people here live a much better life than before . Now it is taking on a new look.

高中英语作文复习公开课课件-(共31张PPT)

Para.1: The 29th Olympic Games were hosted in Beijing with a great success. I hear you are collecting some advice on how to make the best of the stadiums. I would like to contribute the following suggestions to you.
结尾信息5 总结，意愿……
In my opinion/ as far as I am concerned../from my point of view
I. would appreciate… I would you will think of /take…into consideration….
结尾信息5 总结，意愿……
In my opinion/ as far as I we am should concerned../from my point of view From my point of view, do what we can to make
. I would appreciate… full use of the stadium. I you will think of /take…into consideration…. I would would appreciate it if you would take my advice into deep consideration In a word…
③你想写一些建议
Want to write some advice/Would like to give you some advice

高中英语一轮课件写作微技能书面表达如何增加细节

Noticing the use of vidid verbs and objections: Excellent sample essays of using vidid verbs and objections to bring the details to life, making the reader feel as if they are witnessing the scene firsthand
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Tips and methods for adding details
Expand presence components and enrich presence
structure
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Add advertisements
By inserting advertisements such as time, place, banner, and
The role of detail description in writing
Enhancing the vividness of the text
Detail description helps to create a sense of presence and immersion for the reader, making the text more vivid and engaging
Organize the content
Identify key details
Determine which specific examples, facts, or accessories will be best illustrated or support the main ideas
Arrange the ideas in a logical order to ensure a coherent flow of information

公开课如何在高考英语作文中增加细节.优秀精选PPT

1. 增加同位语 2. 补全前因后果或目的 3. 适当将写作内容具体化 4. 写出个人感受、评价或后果 5. 补充功能性（交际性）语言
What kind of information can often be added to your article?
1 增加同位语
1 I am LiHua, _C__h_a_ir_m_a_n__o_f _th_e_S_t_u_d_e_n_ts_’_U_n_i_o_n_o_f_m__y__
1___________________________________________________________________（如果你能帮我这个忙，我将不胜感激要点：1、参加中文学习班。
可__适_当_增_加__细_节_，_以_使__行_文_连_贯_。_____________________________________________________
picked up a passport last Sunday in the subway
station when I was taking a ride home. There was
nobody around when I found it on a waiting bench.
The owner of it is Steven who comes from England.
missing passport, so that he can get it back. I would
appreciate it if you could do me the favor. I’m
looking forward to your reply.
交际语
结
Y果ours,

高考英语写作公开课如何添加有效细节

你最近过得怎样？
How are things going with you recently?
得知你要去语文老师家做客，以下是你需要注意的一些细节。
I hear from your last letter that you are going to pay a visit to your Chinese teacher.
吃书信饭（时告知不信要）喋喋不休。
定篇章结构：（书信/邮件）
Dear Tony,
称呼
第一段：问候语 + 写信目的（Beginning）
第二段：主体部分（Body）
第三段：结束语（Ending）
落款
Yours, Li Hua
第一段：问候语 + 写信目的（Beginning）
近来好吗？
How is everything going?
真题演练（2018全国I卷
假定你是李华），你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家
做客，发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1.到达时间； 2.合适的礼物； 3.餐桌礼仪。注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。
篇章结构：（书信/邮件）
Dear Terry,
Here are some relevant details you should pay attention to.
第二段：主体部分（Body）
到达时间：提前10分钟
如何连词成句？
合适的礼物：水果或者鲜花
餐桌礼仪：提前练习使用筷子；不能用筷子指着别人；吃饭时不要喋喋不休。
到达时间：提前10分钟
你应该提前10分钟到达你老师的家。
You are supposed to arrive at your teacher’s house ten minutes earlier.

(新)高考英语怎样让书面表达文采飞扬教学公开课PPT(26张)

meanwhile, suddenly, later, soon, in the
same way, what’s more
• 表示转折让步——unfortunately，though/ although，anyway，but，however, otherwise，still，yet，after all，in spite of， on the contrary，on the other hand，in any case，whatever
篇章结构松散。
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2. 丰富的语法结构
各非
with 独强
种从
谓
倒装
句语
复合宾
立调虚等
主格
句型
拟
等
语
运用多种语法结构，句式灵活多变，可以使文章增色不少。
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丰富的语法结构(Exercises 3)

高考英语写作公开课：如何添加有效细节

2.你不能用筷子指着别人，那是很没礼貌的。
You should not point at others with your chopsticks because it is considered to be bad manners.
3.记住吃饭时不要喋喋不休（talkative）。
Always keep in mind that you can’t be too talkative when you are eating.
高考英语写作指导：如何添加有效细节
Objectives:
In this lesson, you will:
★ learn how to add effective details to
polish your composition; ★ improve your writing skills.
写作指引：
Dear Terry, How are you doing these days? I hear you are invited to dinner at your Chinese friend’s house. As for this, I don’t think there is much for you to pay attention to. However, I do have a few suggestions for you. Since some people
你学校新来的外国学生Tony将到语文老师家做客，发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件，内容包括： 1.到达时间 2.合适的礼物 3.餐桌礼仪注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。
审题：
文体
人物关系
书信（告知信）