高中英语读后续写微技能指导表达的精准性和丰富性人物的内心世界描写公开课PPT课件

关于绝望的描写
1) As the result of an accident, Tony was suddenly thrown into a world of darkness and sank into hopelessness. (被投入黑暗之中；陷入绝望)
2) Tony felt left out and was getting desperate with loneliness. (感觉被遗 忘、忽视)
2) When the mother kissed the baby on the cheek, his face beamed (堆满 笑容)and his bright smile lit up the room. (眉开眼笑；笑容照亮房间)
Micro-writing
Para. 1: But no more helicopters came and it was dark. How did Jane feel then? How did Jane struggle through the night? Did she fall asleep?
1) Sheldon felt so angry that he stormed out of the room, slamming(砰地关上) the door furiously behind him. (冲出房 间；狠狠摔门)
2) Filled with angre/fury(狂怒), Sheldon was unable to utter a single word. (充满愤怒；说不出话)
读后续写微技能指导-表达的精准性和丰富性
人物内心世界描写
Using adjectives to describe the picture.
happy glad joyful delighted excited...
sad disappointe d depressed frustrated upset...
3) Boiling with rage(愤怒), Sheldon shook his fist at me.(怒火 中烧；挥舞拳头)
翻译练习3: 当妈妈亲吻他时，小baby开心极了。
关于高兴的描写
概括描述When his mother kissed him on the cheek, the baby was happy/delighted/full of joy.
1) When his mother kissed him on the cheek, it seemed as if the baby were on top of the world. (非常开心)
3) When the mother kissed the baby on the cheek, he danced with joy and sweetness.(欢欣雀跃)
frightened
Can we describe feelings more vividly?
puzzled confuse
ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้
scratch her head [skrætʃ]
d
…她…挠了挠头，一个字也听不懂。
She __s_c_r_a_t_c_h_e_d__h_e_r__h,enaodt understanding a word.
angry annoyed cross irritated mad...
surprised amazed astonished shocked ...
读后续写第五档评分原则
档次
描述
— 与所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段落开
头语衔接合理。
— 内容丰富，应用了5个以上短文中标出的
第五档 关键词语。 （21—25）— 所使用语法结构和词汇丰富、准确，可能
angry
She jumped to her feet at the news.
excited
She picked her way carefully along the
cautious
stream.
upset/uneas
He paced back and forth.
y
She screamed that there was a snake.
3) Tony's beliefs in looking forward and seeing the positive in everything deserted him.(被信念抛弃) (主语问题)
翻译练习2: Sheldon感到非常生气。
关于生气的描写
概括描述Sheldon felt very angry.
ashamed sad……
hang/drop/lower one’s head
他羞愧地低下了头。
He ___h_u_n__g_/_d_r_o_p_p__e_d_/_l_o_w_e__re__d_h__is__hienadshame.
翻译练习1: Tony感到很绝望。
概括描述Tony felt hopeless/desperate.
Using actions to describe the feelings
actions
feeling
s
He covered his mouth to hide his yawn.
tired
Our mouths dropped open in surprise.
surprised
She folded her arms and stared at him.
有些许错误，但完全不会影响意义表达。
— 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续
写短文结构紧凑。
B3 sadness, weep, curiosity, glare, sign, stare, rude, scream, cheer up, terrify, terrified, pleased
B6 melt, bad-tempered, tough, breathless, desperate, disappointed, ashamed, embarrassed, awkward, unconscious, tremble, anxious, anxiety, panic,