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公开课_高中英语写作PPT教学课件

a result of, for the reason that 让步关系： though, although, even if, even though,
in spite of the fact that
递进关系：what’s more, in addition, furthermore
on the one hand …on the other hand, 条件关系：if, unless, as long as, on condition that …
flowers are many buildings of different
styles. A stream runs through our
school and you always see everything
reflected in the water. Our school is
just like a garden.
Topic paragraph Supporting Paragraph 1 Supporting Paragraph 2 Supporting Paragraph 3
Concluding paragraph
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Topic paragraph (Introduction paragraph) General statement
2020/12/12
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正确使用有关连接词
时间先后：first, then, later, in the end, eventually,
since then, after a while 转折关系：but, however, on the contrary, nevertheless

高考英语作文讲评课（Writing）课件.ppt

⾼考英语作⽂讲评课（Writing）课件.pptBased-task Writing太⽩中学刘亚琴Teaching goals: Enable students to learn how to write an article.Teaching important and difficult points: Check the mistakes in students’ article. Teaching methods: Discussion, cooperative learning.Teaching aids: a computer and a pptTeaching procedures and waysStep1 lead-inStep2 Check the answer题⽬：假定你是中学⽣李华。

美国⼀个中学校长代表团即将访问你校并出席英语周的⼀项活动。

请根据写作要点和写作要求写⼀篇欢迎词。

写作要点：1.表⽰对客⼈的欢迎；2. 介绍此项活动（如活动⽬的、内容等）；3. 表达对客⼈的祝愿。

写作要求：1.词数不少于100词；2. 称呼已经给出，请写欢迎词正⽂；3. 不能⽤真实姓名和学校名称。

Dear American guests,On behalf of our school, I would like to express our warm welcome to you. We are lucky to have you here in the middle of our English Week activities.As scheduled, we have English Talent Show today. The purpose of this programme is to develop our interest in English learning and practical abilities in listening and speaking. The programme consists of the following activities: recitation, singing, word spelling, story telling and so on . The Show will beg in at two o’clock this afternoon at the Student Centre. Dear guests, you are welcome to take part in some activities. I hope we students will benefit from your presence.I sincerely wish you a pleasant time with us. Thank you.18-23分黄云张银娟秦青李琼李⽂兴杨欢王阳赵天云朱媛张敏李爱琴郑茹李岚唐⽂丽崔红王娇张萌赵彤彤24分彭瑶梅赵林鑫周筱Mistake Correction in Spellings1.I am lucky to introtuce …2. …and Ping-Pong gams…3. The most important is English speach…4. This acitivity…Mistake Correction in Passage1.It’s benefit from communicating culture.(任永刚)I benefit from…2. I will greet you on my school behalf.(任永刚)I will greet you on behalf of our school.2.We take part in English Talent Show can improve students’ English. (黄云)We take part in English Talent Show to improve our English.4. I am express ours warm welcome to you.(张银娟严飞）I would like to express our warm welcome to you.5. This English Week activities consist to many interesting project. ( 杨欢）… consist of many interesting programs.6. Thanks for your come to…(杨欢)Thanks for coming to…7. Such as English spoken…(李莹莹秦青)Such as spoken English…8. We are lucky to invite you take part in this activity and we will appreariate if you can give us some advices. (李琼) We are lucky to invite you to take part in this activity and we will appreciate it if you can give us some advice.9. Due to our school English Talent Show students’ English level is high.(李岚)Due to our school English Talent Show, students’ English level has improved gradually10. I’m very thank you. (杨锐花)Thank you very much.11. In order to making… (李莹莹)In order to make…12. I think I’m very luckily.I think I’m very lucky.13. The key of this activity…The key to this activity…14. Our school develop a variety of English activity. (崔红)There are a variety of English activities in our school.15. The Talent Show, whose goal is improve our English communication.(彭瑶梅) The Talent Show , whose goal is to improve our English skills is very interesting. 16. We are hope you are happily.(王澜波)We hope you are happy.Excellent sentences in the passage1.Only in this way can I learn a lot of knowledge well. (黄云)2.I’m lucky to represent our warm welcome to you.(李⽂兴)3.I’m on behalf of our school to express our warm welcome to you.(赵林鑫)4.There is no denying the fact that this activity is very interesting.5. We not only talk about things we are interested in to practice our oral Englishbut also exchange our experience in English study. (李爱琴)6. Only after you attend this activity will you know the interest of this activity (it). (周筱)7. We are very glad to express our warm welcome to you. (周筱)StepⅢ Homework跟踪训练⽤正确的引导状语从句的连词(词组)填空1．It seemed only several minutes __ 1.2．It has been three years _3．Work hard，4．，_5．I was about to leave _6．The composition is all right，Ⅱ.句型转换1．Don't forget what your teacher says.(使⽤状语从句)1.＝_，don't forget.2．To his surprise，the little girl knows so many things.(使⽤名词性从句)＝①_＝②_＝③_3．Does Mr.Brown enjoy living in China? Could you tell us？(变为复合句)＝Could you tell us _ if/whether _ Mr.Brown _ enjoys _ living in China? 4．Jim is not a student.Tom is not a student，either.(合并为⼀个句⼦)＝_5．When does the train leave？I want to know.(改为含宾语从句的复合句)＝6．He lives in a big house，there stands a tree in front of the house. (变为复合句)＝He lives in a big house，__Step3 Homework。

高中英语写作公开课ppt课件

PPT内容要精炼简洁，避免冗长繁琐。
文字要简短明了，避免使用大段文字。
字体大小要适中，避免过小或过大。
添加标题
添加标题
添加标题
添加标题
使用关键词或短语，突出重点信息。
字体颜色要与背景色形成对比，避免看不清。
感谢您的耐心观看
汇报人：
针对不同文体进行写作技巧讲解
记叙文：注意叙事顺序，情节曲折，人物塑造议论文：论点明确，论据充分，论证严密说明文：抓住事物特征，条理清晰，语言准确应用文：格式规范，语言得体，内容符合要求
分析经典英文写作范文，提炼写作技巧
逐句分析，提炼句式、词汇和表达方式
总结范文写作技巧，引导学生掌握写作要领
字体大小适中，颜色搭配合理
字体大小：根据幻灯片布局和观众距离调整，确保清晰易读字体颜色：与背景色形成对比，突出重点内容，避免使用刺眼颜色文字排版：遵循简洁明了原则，避免文字堆积和混乱布局文字数量：精简文字内容，突出重点，避免过多文字干扰观众理解
图文并茂，增强视觉效果
文字与图片结合，增加视觉冲击力图片选择要符合主题，清晰度高图片与文字排版要简洁明了，易于理解色彩搭配要合理，避免过于花哨或单调
课堂总结与作业布置
总结本节课所学内容及重点难点
回顾本节课所学的单词和短语。
复习本节课所学的语法和句型。
强调本节课的重点和难点。
总结本节课所学的写作技巧和方法。
布置课后作业及要求
作业内容：根据本节课所学内容，写一篇80-100词的英语作文。作业要求：认真审题，结合本节课所学知识，注意语法和单词的拼写，书写工整。上交时间：下节课上课前提交，逾期不候。奖励机制：对完成出色的同学进行表扬和奖励。

高中英语写作公开课ppt课件

Verb tensions
Verbs are used in different tensions to show time relationships Understanding when to use each tense is critical for accurate expression of time related ideas
Vocabulary usage
A writer should choose precision and appropriate words to accommodate their means It is important to understand the meaning and usage of different words and phrases to enhance the clarity of writing
Summary
Incorporate both narrative and argumentative essay writing into the practice sessions Narrative essays focus on storytelling, while argumentative essays center around presenting a point of view and defending it with evidence
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Through peer evaluation, students can learn to apply different writing styles and viewpoints, improve their critical thinking ability, and enhance their communication and cooperation skills

高中英语写作课教学ppt课件

2) It may bring about severe unpredicted consequence.
3）It does us much harm// It is harmful to us．// It is bad for us.
4) It brings more harm than good to us.
they benefit people’s health greatly by giving them due physical exercise．
From what has been mentioned above, we have good
reason to believe that the bike will soon become people’s
English Writing
细化写作化繁为简
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1．表示原因
1）There are three reasons for this．
2）The reasons for this can be listed as
follows:
3 ） The reason for this is obvious ．
练吧
近年来，人们的生活发生了翻天覆地的变化。电脑在今天已经进入寻常百姓家，请简单阐述其原因。
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Three reasons may account for the
changes that have taken place in our
life．First of all，people’s living
While I admit that it is sometimes inconvenient for one to go on a long trip by bike, bicycles still have more advantages than disadvantages, compared with cars. There are several reasons accounting for my opinion.

高中英语作文写作教学公开课ppt课件

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句子1 翻译
句1：学生会将要举办一次英语演讲比赛。目的：增长环保知识和提高英语口语。主题：“保护环境, 节约能源”。
The Students’ Union is going to organize an English-speaking contest to increase our knowledge about the environment and iTmhperothveem适更oue当加riss调顺:p“o整畅PkreonteEcnt goluisrhe.nvironment and save our energy”.
英语作文写作 What makes
a good essay?
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基础写作中存在的主要问题及分析
1. 话题词汇、短语错误积累少
2. 词汇、短语、句型贫乏
3. 句子语法错误
语法不扎实
4. 连贯性差
篇章意识不足
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考场作文TIPS
1.取悦评卷人: 有清晰的整体脉络, 有自然的段间衔接. 经典的用词用句, 有整齐美观的书写. 2.经典的用句：感叹句，倒装、强调、虚拟、省略句、定语从句，名词性从句，名人名言。
学生会 _T_h_e_S_t_u_d_e_n_ts’ Union
参加 __ta_k_e_p_a_r_t_in_/_p_a_r_ti_cipate in
保护 _p_r_o_te_c_t_(v_t_) protection(n)
环境 _e_n_v_ir_o_n_m__en_t__(n_)_e_n_v_ir_o_n_m_e_n_t_a_l _(_a_dj)
中文没有主语时：要补充主语再翻译。
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句子4、5 翻译
句4：奖项：3个一等奖, 6个二等奖和12个三等奖。

高三英语写作公开课课件(共26张)

高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）
高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）
Para.3
表达感谢和期待回复
如果你能考虑我的申请，我将十分感激。期待你的回复。
I would appreciate it if …; take my application into consideration/ account/ take account of/ seriously
高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）
Para.2
总结
具备了以上提到的所有品质(如上所述)，我可以肯定的说，我就是你要找的合适人选。
As is mentioned above；with；qualities
With all these qualities mentioned above, I can say with certainty that I am the right person you are looking for.
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 3.结束语已为你写好
Dear sir or madam, __________________________________________ _______________________________________________
I am looking forward to hearing from you. Sincerely , Li Hua
⑵递进关系 ⑶举例关系 ⑷转折关系 ⑸因果关系 ⑹归纳总结 ⑺并列关系
高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）
（使用恰当的连接词使文章流畅）
合适的过渡性词汇
first; firstly; second; secondly; last but not least; at first; first of all; in the first place; at last; last of all; for one thing; for another thing; on the one hand; on the other hand; finally what’s more; besides; furthermore; in addition; additionally; to make matters worse; what’s worse; worse still; for example; for instance; like; such as; as follows; take… as an example

高考英语书面表达高分写作技巧公开课教学课件(共25张PPT)

二、忌次序混乱，连接词单一或缺乏
审完题后，不少考生虽已知道了要写的内容，却不能合理地组织所给的材料，东一句、西一句，写得支离破碎，文理不通，让人不知所云。考生最好能迅速地列出要点，在这个过程中，要考虑一下先写什么，后写什么，句与句之间，不得逐字或逐条翻译。段与段之间最好能使用一些能清晰表达逻辑结构的连接词或句子，如first of all , above all , secondly , next , in fact,besides, in a word , at last , the most important point is that…等等，使文章过渡自然、流畅，做到前后连贯、层次分明、有条不紊。
注意：不能不用，且不能少用，但也不能滥用。
一、怎样使用较高级的词汇
1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable. Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable. 2.We all think he is a great man. We all think highly of him . 3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea. A good idea occurred to me. / A good idea suddenly struck me.
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六、忌充分自信、不回查
写出来的东西，很可能有不正确、不恰当的地方，因此，在答完卷时，至少应从以下几个方面认真检查：（1）对照题目要求，看全部要点是否都已包括进去，有无遗漏或误解；（2）文体格式是否正确规范；（3）词语使用是否合适、正确，有无语法与用词上的错误，表达是否符合英语表达习惯；（4）单词拼写、字母大小写有无错误，标点符号有无遗漏或用错等等。一句话，对书面表达应尽量做到：不跑题，不漏点，语言精简合习惯，灵活表达要规范，书法整齐词有限。

writing-高中英文记叙文写作(共21张PPT)

1. requirement（person, tense） 2. details in pictures（5W1H)
3. passages with linking words 4. ending with feelings (What…! How…!) 5. corrections (grammar & spellings)
handwriting
Key points
1. better your handwriting… 2. avoid the language mistakes 3. use advanced word&expressions 4. vary your sentence patterns 5. make the description vivid and organized 6. present your independent thinking
请根据图片所提供的信息以第一人称用英语写一篇记叙文。注意：①短文应包括所有图片的主要内容，内容要连贯、完整；
②长度100单词左右。
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Picture 1
who: I when: 9:00AM
June, 17 where: at home what: wake up late
why: stay up
Picture 2
get dressed
prepare breakfast
get the schoolbag to school
Pschool
as fast as…
Picture 4
to one’s surprise find…close
realize…Sunday
To my surprise, it was closed. It was then that I realized it was Sunday today. What an awful day! I really did a foolish thing.

高考英语作文讲评课(Writing)课件ppt

Based-task Writing太白中学刘亚琴Teaching goals: Enable students to learn how to write an article.Teaching important and difficult points: Check the mistakes in students’ article. Teaching methods: Discussion, cooperative learning.Teaching aids: a computer and a pptTeaching procedures and waysStep1 lead-inStep2 Check the answer题目：假定你是中学生李华。

美国一个中学校长代表团即将访问你校并出席英语周的一项活动。

请根据写作要点和写作要求写一篇欢迎词。

写作要点：1.表示对客人的欢迎；2. 介绍此项活动（如活动目的、内容等）；3. 表达对客人的祝愿。

写作要求：1.词数不少于100词；2. 称呼已经给出，请写欢迎词正文；3. 不能用真实姓名和学校名称。

Dear American guests,On behalf of our school, I would like to express our warm welcome to you. We are lucky to have you here in the middle of our English Week activities.As scheduled, we have English Talent Show today. The purpose of this programme is to develop our interest in English learning and practical abilities in listening and speaking. The programme consists of the following activities: recitation, singing, word spelling, story telling and so on . The Show will beg in at two o’clock this afternoon at the Student Centre. Dear guests, you are welcome to take part in some activities. I hope we students will benefit from your presence.I sincerely wish you a pleasant time with us. Thank you.18-23分黄云张银娟秦青李琼李文兴杨欢王阳赵天云朱媛张敏李爱琴郑茹李岚唐文丽崔红王娇张萌赵彤彤24分彭瑶梅赵林鑫周筱Mistake Correction in Spellings1.I am lucky to introtuce …2. …and Ping-Pong gams…3. The most important is English speach…4. This acitivity…Mistake Correction in Passage1.It’s benefit from communicating culture.(任永刚)I benefit from…2. I will greet you on my school behalf.(任永刚)I will greet you on behalf of our school.2.We take part in English Talent Show can improve students’ English. (黄云)We take part in English Talent Show to improve our English.4. I am express ours warm welcome to you.(张银娟严飞）I would like to express our warm welcome to you.5. This English Week activities consist to many interesting project. ( 杨欢）… consist of many interesting programs.6. Thanks for your come to…(杨欢)Thanks for coming to…7. Such as English spoken…(李莹莹秦青)Such as spoken English…8. We are lucky to invite you take part in this activity and we will appreariate if you can give us some advices. (李琼)We are lucky to invite you to take part in this activity and we will appreciate it if you can give us some advice.9. Due to our school English Talent Show students’ English level is high.(李岚)Due to our school English Talent Show, students’ English level has improved gradually10. I’m very thank you. (杨锐花)Thank you very much.11. In order to making… (李莹莹)In order to make…12. I think I’m very luckily.I think I’m very lucky.13. The key of this activity…The key to this activity…14. Our school develop a variety of English activity. (崔红)There are a variety of English activities in our school.15. The Talent Show, whose goal is improve our English communication.(彭瑶梅) The Talent Show , whose goal is to improve our English skills is very interesting. 16. We are hope you are happily.(王澜波)We hope you are happy.Excellent sentences in the passage1.Only in this way can I learn a lot of knowledge well. (黄云)2.I’m lucky to represent our warm welcome to you.(李文兴)3.I’m on behalf of our school to express our warm welcome to you.(赵林鑫)4.There is no denying the fact that this activity is very interesting.5. We not only talk about things we are interested in to practice our oral Englishbut also exchange our experience in English study. (李爱琴)6. Only after you attend this activity will you know the interest of this activity (it).(周筱)7. We are very glad to express our warm welcome to you. (周筱)StepⅢ Homework跟踪训练用正确的引导状语从句的连词(词组)填空1．It seemed only several minutes __ 1.2．It has been three years _3．Work hard，4．，_5．I was about to leave _6．The composition is all right，Ⅱ.句型转换1．Don't forget what your teacher says.(使用状语从句)1.＝_，don't forget.2．To his surprise，the little girl knows so many things.(使用名词性从句)＝①_＝②_＝③_3．Does Mr.Brown enjoy living in China? Could you tell us？(变为复合句)＝Could you tell us _ if/whether _ Mr.Brown _ enjoys _ living in China?4．Jim is not a student.Tom is not a student，either.(合并为一个句子)＝_5．When does the train leave？I want to know.(改为含宾语从句的复合句)＝6．He lives in a big house，there stands a tree in front of the house. (变为复合句)＝He lives in a big house，__Step3 Homework。

高中英语信件作文课优秀公开课课件

No chinglish or grammatical or spellingmistakes In accordance with the requirements of the composition With exactly used words and relatively changed sentence patterns
obvious
Correct the possible mistakes in the following sentences.
1 I will never forget the wonderful moments we have worked together.
when
2 I’ll appreciate it if you could agree my request.
开篇要直入主题
Content
• 内容要完整
• 注意内容的适当性
Content
Focus on “your” feeling, when you want to resign.
内容要适当
• It's a chance for you to choose a fresh man
Language:
3 But I supposed to concentrate on my study now.
on
am
好的信件： Comfortable Persuasive 读起来舒服有说服力
Polish the following sentences. 1. I I don’t think I can succeed in this job any more. don’t think I can be qualified as your

高考英语作文写作公开课PPT课件(34张)

遇到不会写的单词怎么办？
（3）老百姓
• old hundred sex
X
• the general public
• ordinary people
• people from all walks of life
四喜丸子
four happy meatballs X
meatballs √
遇到不会写的单词怎么办？
Possible version
Walk round to the other side of the hill. There you will see a lake. We’ll have our picnic in the small woods by the lake. I’m sure you’ll have no trouble finding us. Do come!
Walk round to the other side of the hill. There you will see a lake. We’ll have our picnic in the small woods by the lake. I’m sure you’ll have no trouble finding us. Do come!
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Thank you for you letter asking about the rebuilt
6. 绕/爬过小山
6. to the other side of hill
7. 我们在（湖畔）小树林里 7. in small woods, by lake
•三“变”为变要点为句子。
Expand the key points have a picnic, in People’s Park We will have our picnic in the People’s Park. We are going to the People’s park for a picnic. We are going to the People’s park, where we will have a picnic.

writing公开课课件

[实战演习]
书面表达：某报纸有一讨论的栏目，讨论的主题是good
health, 学生、家长、老师等对此看法不一。请你根据以下提示写一短文，发表你自己的看法，一定要从以下角度去写： 1. 健康的重要性:毫无疑问,健康与我们的幸福密不可分.不管你是谁,只有拥有健康的体魄,才能享受生活的乐趣和成功的喜悦. 2. 保持身体健康的方法:进行体育锻炼,合理的饮食习惯,乐观的态度. 3. 我是这样做的:经常打篮球,吃好睡好,勇敢面对生活. 要求:词数：100左右；注意语句连贯；不要逐句翻译。
[思维导航] ：这是一篇典型的提纲式作文，它是让你对
某一现象发表自己的看法。要求中的三个提纲给出了文章的框架，一定要用过渡词把它们衔接起来构成一篇完整的文章。行文应用一般现在时。
Key words:
good health; keep healthy; happiness; success;
importance; ways; exercise; eating habits; spirits;
frequently
positive
importance;
ways;
lead a happy life
Homework:
现在越来越多的农民进城打工。诚然，他们对城市建设作出了很大的贡献，但是也带来了诸如城市拥挤、教育、环境、公共安全等一系列问题。请以 “My opinion on peasants’coming into cities”为题，写一篇120词左右的英语短文。
[范文背诵]：请依据如下提示词在10分钟内背下范文并于次日早晨再朗读并背诵一遍。
is thirsty for;
habits
good health;

高考英语作文写作公开课PPT课件

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Language use
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Prompt Review
Analyze the specific instructions and requirements provided by the question
Title Review
Identify the main topic or concept of the composition
Reading is an effective way to improve English writing ability.
Summary
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Introduction Structure
Start with a clear introduction that hooks the reader's interest
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Body Organization
Organize ideas into a logical flow that supports the main argument

高中英语写作公开课ppt课件

It provides a comprehensive guide to help students develop their writing ability, including essay writing, letter writing, and other practical writing tasks
It is important to understand the basic rules of English grammar, such as subject verb agreement, use of positions, and correct placement of commands PowerPoint presentations can break down these rules into easy to understand slides with examples and exercises to help students master them
Argumentative Writing: Practice and Feedback
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Applied Writing
Applied Writing
Applied Writing
Applied Writing
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Letters and Emails
Resumes and Cover Letters
Introduction
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高中英语作文复习公开课课件-(共31张PPT)

Para.1: The 29th Olympic Games were hosted in Beijing with a great success. I hear you are collecting some advice on how to make the best of the stadiums. I would like to contribute the following suggestions to you.
结尾信息5 总结，意愿……
In my opinion/ as far as I am concerned../from my point of view
I. would appreciate… I would you will think of /take…into consideration….
结尾信息5 总结，意愿……
In my opinion/ as far as I we am should concerned../from my point of view From my point of view, do what we can to make
. I would appreciate… full use of the stadium. I you will think of /take…into consideration…. I would would appreciate it if you would take my advice into deep consideration In a word…
③你想写一些建议
Want to write some advice/Would like to give you some advice