【概要写作】【讲评】【15】【放慢生活节奏】(共19张PPT)
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live a slower friends． Besides， it allows people to fully enjoy the beautiful scenery along the way．On the contrary， being in a
argumlifeentation hurry will make us lose chances of enjoying our lives．
work less quickly．We should not make mistakes by doing work hurriedly． ③Slowing down the pace of life
helps people enjoy their life better． For example，taakirngg autmrainetonstosme place certainly will take more time than
rush．When people do their jobs or take action in a hurry，they can't make a sound decision and probably regret
later．As the saying goes，"Haste makes waste．" We should think carefully before making a decision and do our
better
for
people
to
taktehtehesiritsime
and
live
their
life
at
a
slower
pace
than
to
hurry
to
② The main reason that convinces us to oppose doing work in a hurry is the possibility of doing wrongs in a
taking a plane． However， taking a train makes people have enough time to get to know a lot of new
friends． Besides， it allows people to fully enjoy the beautiful scenery along the way．On the contrary， being in a
④ Finally， slower life pace provides better health conditions for us． As is known to all， taking action in a hurry bothers people and raises their stress．People think if they are not in a hurry，they will become a loser and that annoys them．But being in a hurry can hurt people both physically and mentally．According to some studies， people who have a slower pace suffer fewer diseases， tend to be happier and live much longer than those whose life is tense，even if the former finish jobs more slowly than the latter． ⑤In short，working quickly will bring about more material benefits to make our society more advanced．Yet， much stress can't bring enjoyment，friends and health，which are much more important than money and other material advantages．Therefore，take your time and live your life at a slower pace．
② The main reason that convinces us to oppose doing work in a hurry is the possibility of doing wrongs in a rush．When people do their jobs or take action in a hurry，they can't make a sound decision and probably regret later．As the saying goes，"Haste makes waste．" We should think carefully before making a decision and do our work less quickly．We should not make mistakes by doing work hurriedly． ③Slowing down the pace of life helps people enjoy their life better． For example，taking a train to some place certainly will take more time than taking a plane． However， taking a train makes people have enough time to get to know a lot of new
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①These days our society develops rapidly and forces people to rush．It appears that people have got used to being in a hurry．However，it's better for people to take their time and live their life at a slower pace than to hurry to get things done．
② The main reason that convinces us to oppose doing work in a hurry is the possibility of doing wrongs in a rush．When people do their jobs or take action in a hurry，they can't make a sound decision and probably regret later．As the saying goes，"Haste makes waste．" We should think carefully before making a decision and do our work less quickly．We should not make mistakes by doing work hurriedly． ③Slowing down the pace of life helps people enjoy their life better． For example，taking a train to some place certainly will take more time than taking a plane． However， taking a train makes people have enough time to get to know a lot of new friends． Besides， it allows people to fully enjoy the beautiful scenery along the way．On the contrary， being in a hurry will make us lose chances of enjoying our lives．
hurry will make us lose chances of enjoying our lives．
reason1
பைடு நூலகம்
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reason3
④ Finally， slower life pace provides better health conditions for us． As is known to all， taking action in a
④ Finally， slower life pace provides better health conditions for us． As is known to all， taking action in a hurry bothers people and raises their stress．People think if they are not in a hurry，they will become a loser and that annoys them．But being in a hurry can hurt people both physically and mentally．According to some studies， people who have a slower pace suffer fewer diseases， tend to be happier and live much longer than those whose life is tense，even if the former finish jobs more slowly than the latter． ⑤In short，working quickly will bring about more material benefits to make our society more advanced．Yet， much stress can't bring enjoyment，friends and health，which are much more important than money and other material advantages．Therefore，take your time and live your life at a slower pace．
Reading passage
①These days our society develops rapidly and forces people to rush．It appears that people have got used to being in a hurry．However，it's better for people to take their time and live their life at a slower pace than to hurry to get things done．
Structure
①These days our society develops rapidly and forces people to rush．It appears that people have got used to
being in a get things
hurry．However，it's done．
argumlifeentation hurry will make us lose chances of enjoying our lives．
work less quickly．We should not make mistakes by doing work hurriedly． ③Slowing down the pace of life
helps people enjoy their life better． For example，taakirngg autmrainetonstosme place certainly will take more time than
rush．When people do their jobs or take action in a hurry，they can't make a sound decision and probably regret
later．As the saying goes，"Haste makes waste．" We should think carefully before making a decision and do our
better
for
people
to
taktehtehesiritsime
and
live
their
life
at
a
slower
pace
than
to
hurry
to
② The main reason that convinces us to oppose doing work in a hurry is the possibility of doing wrongs in a
taking a plane． However， taking a train makes people have enough time to get to know a lot of new
friends． Besides， it allows people to fully enjoy the beautiful scenery along the way．On the contrary， being in a
④ Finally， slower life pace provides better health conditions for us． As is known to all， taking action in a hurry bothers people and raises their stress．People think if they are not in a hurry，they will become a loser and that annoys them．But being in a hurry can hurt people both physically and mentally．According to some studies， people who have a slower pace suffer fewer diseases， tend to be happier and live much longer than those whose life is tense，even if the former finish jobs more slowly than the latter． ⑤In short，working quickly will bring about more material benefits to make our society more advanced．Yet， much stress can't bring enjoyment，friends and health，which are much more important than money and other material advantages．Therefore，take your time and live your life at a slower pace．
② The main reason that convinces us to oppose doing work in a hurry is the possibility of doing wrongs in a rush．When people do their jobs or take action in a hurry，they can't make a sound decision and probably regret later．As the saying goes，"Haste makes waste．" We should think carefully before making a decision and do our work less quickly．We should not make mistakes by doing work hurriedly． ③Slowing down the pace of life helps people enjoy their life better． For example，taking a train to some place certainly will take more time than taking a plane． However， taking a train makes people have enough time to get to know a lot of new
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•明确
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主旨
结构
2
•寻找 主题 句
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•提取 主次 信息
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•独立 表达
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•语篇 衔接
keywords—for topic
①These days our society develops rapidly and forces people to rush．It appears that people have got used to being in a hurry．However，it's better for people to take their time and live their life at a slower pace than to hurry to get things done．
② The main reason that convinces us to oppose doing work in a hurry is the possibility of doing wrongs in a rush．When people do their jobs or take action in a hurry，they can't make a sound decision and probably regret later．As the saying goes，"Haste makes waste．" We should think carefully before making a decision and do our work less quickly．We should not make mistakes by doing work hurriedly． ③Slowing down the pace of life helps people enjoy their life better． For example，taking a train to some place certainly will take more time than taking a plane． However， taking a train makes people have enough time to get to know a lot of new friends． Besides， it allows people to fully enjoy the beautiful scenery along the way．On the contrary， being in a hurry will make us lose chances of enjoying our lives．
hurry will make us lose chances of enjoying our lives．
reason1
பைடு நூலகம்
reason2
reason3
④ Finally， slower life pace provides better health conditions for us． As is known to all， taking action in a
④ Finally， slower life pace provides better health conditions for us． As is known to all， taking action in a hurry bothers people and raises their stress．People think if they are not in a hurry，they will become a loser and that annoys them．But being in a hurry can hurt people both physically and mentally．According to some studies， people who have a slower pace suffer fewer diseases， tend to be happier and live much longer than those whose life is tense，even if the former finish jobs more slowly than the latter． ⑤In short，working quickly will bring about more material benefits to make our society more advanced．Yet， much stress can't bring enjoyment，friends and health，which are much more important than money and other material advantages．Therefore，take your time and live your life at a slower pace．
Reading passage
①These days our society develops rapidly and forces people to rush．It appears that people have got used to being in a hurry．However，it's better for people to take their time and live their life at a slower pace than to hurry to get things done．
Structure
①These days our society develops rapidly and forces people to rush．It appears that people have got used to
being in a get things
hurry．However，it's done．