托福强化写作讲义

写作提高：

1. 中文思维——看到题目有话可说；

2. 英文表达——正确恰当把中文思维体现成英文

细节，结构，语言

细节：清晰恰当的举例或“说明”能力；并不是一定出现for example，论据：why, what, how 结构：正常的逻辑说话顺序

不重视语言。

语言：讲究用简单的话陈述深刻的道理；

不是用复杂的话陈述简单的道理

审题：1. 问法：which one, A & D （10-30 sec.）

2. 思考什么现象导致出此题目（30-60 sec.）

思考方式：1.过去和今天对比；2.以自身为背景; 3. 细化主题词

写作：

A 开头部分

题目背景：1.通过现象 2.引出话题

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主题句（开头）用肯定的语言概括文章将来结构（理由，例子）

B 论证部分

1 （1）key words和题目相同（尽量保持题目语序）

（2）概括此段大意（尽量概括论据）

（3）简单准确

2 解释1句

3 解释2句论据：why / what / how

4 解释3句

C 结尾部分

主题句（结尾）清晰明确

递进

A & D（含有绝对词）

第1段：BI(Back Information)

第2段：去掉绝对词（或把绝对词变限定词）肯定

第3段：加上绝对词否定

第4段：TS (Thesis Statement) + 递进(取决于&不得不)

“含绝对词立论文”出题形式

A is the most important. & A is more important than B.

2. A is important.

3. However, B is the same important.

4. I disagree that A is the “most” important.

(1) It depends on …… whether A or B is

the most important.

(2) B is more important than A in that ……

A is the best.

A is only way.

A is better than B.

常见绝对词：最高级，唯一性，比较级

best —— good

worst —— bad

always —— sometime, often, usually

never —— sometime not

消失——减少

必然——可能

必须——可以

● Nowadays, the ability to cooperate is more important than past?（2007-3-4）

2. It is undeniable that the ability to cooperate nowadays is extremely important and inevitable.

3. However, it is also indisputable that the ability to cooperate in past is genuinely

important and imperative.

4. Judging from above evidence offered, I can hardly agree that the ability to cooperate nowadays is “more”important than past. From my perspective, since the undeveloped science and technology, the ability to cooperate in past is more important than nowadays.

● It is more important for a teacher to help students gain self-confidence than to teach specific knowledge?（2007-3-10）

2. It is undeniable that it is extremely important and inevitable to help students gain self-confidence.（错）

2. It is undeniable that a teacher to help students gain self-confidence is great important.（错）

2. Admittedly, it is magically important and inevitable for a teacher to help students gain self-confidence in order to encourage

students to face the troubles of study and daily routine easily.

3. Nevertheless, it is also typically important and imperative for a teacher to teach students specific knowledge for their extensive essential knowledge to lay the foundation for the favorable career prospect.

4. Consequently, I can hardly agree that it is “more”important for a teacher to help students gain self-confidence than to teach specific knowledge. From my perspective, it depends mostly on the study period and personality of the students whether the teacher helps students gain self-confidence or teaches specific knowledge.

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写文章框架的规律：

1. 题目语序为“主谓宾”结构，使用it is undeniable / indisputable / unavoidable /