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In sum, the first chart implies that the worldwide land declination majorly resulted from over-grazing while the second one depicts that Europe suffered most from this effect. Spending/ expenditure/ budgetIt is noted that ….It is also worth mentioning that …Interestingly,…有特征的其他数据Turning to glass and paper, both experience a rising tendency during the 10-year period. To be more precise, glass recycled 13%, which was equal to that of paper in 1992. Then there was a sudden increasing trend in the former to approximately 50%, which overtook/ outnumbered the latter, with roughly 40%.There are some reasons for the phenomenon. To begin with, lacking sense of protecting our setting serves as the major factor. For most ordinary people, they are convinced that it is government’s responsibility to take action to preserve the earth and the environment. Moreover, government in most countries focuses too much on economic development instead of paying enough attention to the environment. That is to say, people are busy making money with the scarify of destroying the setting.China serves as a typical example in point.It is admitted that modern people are living under great stress and a fierce competitive world than they used to be. Some people hold that it is a motivation of social development while others believe it makes no benefits to individuals and family life.1.Increase productivity 提高生产力2.Motivate people to move forward3.More talented people are able to be employed into cities andeven countries. A typical example in point is that America attracts many outstanding/competent people every year. 4.In order to make you competitive, you have to continuallylearn through work and experience.5.People tend to keep energetic and positive attitudes towardworkNegative effects:1.Mental health / it hurts people mentally →psychologicaldiseases → upset and depressed → commit suicide2.In order to keep their job and make a promotion, peoplesacrifice their spare time in work, or even work overtime fora long time. Consequently/ as a result/, resulting in the factthat3.Side effects along with the toxic competition among peersand colleagues, → unease and uncomfortable work place →turnover rate increase其他的一些可以高分的表达Rat raceGaokao – university entry examinationChinese students spend over 10 years working on their preparation of the exhausted 3-day Gaokao merely for entering a university, which largely determine their future.Keep alarm in their job and professionalSecondary school education1.The function of education is not only focused on/limited onjob hunting, but also for a better development.2.In a country which suffer high unemployment rate, a highdemand of talented people are required. In this case, teenagers should further receive secondary education/ have access to secondary learning at schools. Oppositely, a teenager who just finishes primary education can only find labor job, which can be done by a machine.3.Do a favor to personal quality, enhance/ boost/ promote/drive/ fuel the quality of the labor force, thereby increasing production efficiency4.In a long run, if pupils could receive better education, theyare able to/ more likely to have far more job opportunities to find a decent job.5.People with higher education qualification are more easier toestablish a company/ run their own business, which tend to offer more job vacancies/ positions. (which would help to improve the unemployed situation in a society)Teachers vs other resources (e.g computers and Internet resources)老师的重要性不如以前了1.Teach students according to their characteristics andpersonalities2.Offer feedback immediately3.Observe the classroom learning4.Cultivate other abilities such as interpersonal skills andteamwork spirit.Other resources:1.Distance-learning makes it possible for learners from remotearea to have access to advanced courses2.The advancement of Internet, people are able to share andacquire knowledge and information to large extent.3.Be able to repeat the course and take note during theonline-learning4.People who are not available for classroom learning aremore likely to gain what they want to learn without paying a large amount of money to learn what they do not want.5.Full discussion with learners in the same course. Theselearners are from all over the world, which lead to a wide range of exchange of knowledge and culture.6.Enlarge one’s social circleGeneral education 全面教育specialized or vocational education 专业学习1.Under less/slighter stress2.Focus more on their profession, which is beneficial for theacademic research and personal growth as a whole. More academic achievement could be produced/ created/ born 3.Be more competitive in a job market due to that fact thatthey fully understand their profession. This is possible tomake great effort/ contribution to the companies compared with those who have access to a general understanding.4.Overall education seems to cultivate an overall-developedstudent. However, it could only foster a normal and ordinary graduate.5.It is not beneficial for a student to have wide range of jobs tochoose when he or she just acquires a particular subject or major. For example, history students are reported to be the majority of unemployed graduates every year.6.Creativity and imagination7.Interdisciplinary study 跨专业/学科学习。