高三英语复习写作专题讲座:第10讲 记叙文(二)叙事记叙文(新人教版)
2024届高三英语写作专项读后续写研讨讲座课件
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2023年新高考英语读后续写题型提分课件ppt之读后续写中的记叙方法
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专题07 新高考书面表达之读后续写(10)-备战2021年高考英语二轮复习题型精练(含答案)
2020-2021学年广东省六校高三上学期第二次联考47. 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文,续写短文的次数应为150 左右。
My school had a tradition during the ninth-grade graduation: a beautiful gold and green jacket(the school colors), was awarded to the student who had maintained the highest grades for nine years.I had been a straight A student since the first grade and had looked forward very much to owning that jacket. My father was a farm laborer who couldn’t earn enough money to feed five children, so I was given to my grandparents t o raise. There would never be a school sports jacket for us because we couldn’t afford it. This scholarship jacket was my only chance.One day in May, I happened to overhear in the office. Mr. Schmidt, my history teacher, and Mr. Boone, my math teacher arg uing about me. “I refuse to do it!I don’t care who her father is; her grades can’t match Martha’s at all. I won’t lie or falsify(伪造)records.” said Mr. Schmidt angrily.But Mr. Boone’s voice sounded calm. “Joann’s father is not only on the Board(董事会), he owns the only store in town: we could say it was a close tie and…”The pounding in my ears drowned out the rest of the words, only a word here and there filtered through. “…Martha is Mexican…resign … won’t do it …”To this day I don’t remember how I made it through the rest of the afternoon. That night, I cried into my pillow so Grandmother wouldn’t hear me.The next day when the principal called me into his office. “Martha,” he said, “There’s been a change in policy this year regarding the scholarship jacket. This year the Board has decided to charge fifteen dollars, which still won’t cover the complete cost of the jacket. So if you are unable to pay the money for the jacket, it will be given to the next one in line.”Standing with all the dignity I could fin d, I said, I’ll speak to my grandfather about it, sir, and let you know tomorrow.” That day, I cried sadly on the walk home.注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150 左右;2. 续写部分分为两段,每段开头语已为你写好;By the time I got home, my eyes were red and swollen. I found my grandpa in the bean field.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________I dragged into the principal’s office the next day, sad and disappointed.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】V ersion 1:Paragraph 1By the time I got home, my eyes were red and swollen. I found my grandpa in the bean field. His back bent into an arch and his face was drowned in sweats. I called him, in a choked voice. Sensing something wrong, he asked me what happened with great concern. I murmured the principal’s words, after which Grandpa fell silent, eyes rounding in disbelief. A surge of regret gnawing at my heart, I really hated to see my gray-haired Grandpa’s disappointment. Time ticking by, he heaved a long sigh, “My child, an award bought can’t be called an award.” I nodded understandingly. But who knew how reluctant and bitter I was?Paragraph 2I dragged into the principal’s office the next day, sad and disappointed. I knew I might never get that jack et which represented my years of hard work and expectation. However, I tried to fight back the tears, with my head still lifted with dignity. “My grandpa…won’t pay the dollars. He said if I had to pay for it, then it wouldn’t be a scholarship jacket.” Ther e was a deafening silence. The principal looked at me, biting his lip, as if thinking. Finally, after what seemed like a century, he decided that he would make an exception for me. I could hardly believe it. Looking into his eyes, which brimmed with smiles, I stood up and bowed low to him. Only at that moment did I believe that Mr. Schmidt and my grandpa were right: never can awards be falsified or bought.Version 2:Paragraph 1By the time I got home, my eyes were red and swollen. I found my grandpa in the bean field. Sensing somethingwrong, he asked me what happened with great concern. I murmured the principal’s words, a surge of regret gnawing at my heart. I really hated to see my gray-haired Grandpa’s disappointment. Grandpa’s eyes rounded in disbelief. Time ticking by, he heaved a long sigh, “My child, an award bought can’t be called an award.” I nodded understandingly. But who knew how reluctant and bitter I was?Paragraph 2I dragged into the principal’s office the next day, sad and disappointed. My h ead still lifted with dignity, I tried to fight back the tears, stammering, “I cannot…afford the jacket, sir.” Staring into my eyes, the principal suddenly grinned, “I have good news for you.” I looked at him in confusion. “The board decided that an award cannot be bought just for the sake of winners’ dignity.” His eyes brimmed with smiles. I pinched my hand only to find I was not dreaming. Only at that moment did I believe that Mr. Schmidt and my grandpa were right: never can awards be falsified or bought.【解析】【分析】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者所在学校在九年级的毕业典礼上有一个传统:一件漂亮的金绿色夹克(学校的颜色)被授予九年来一直保持最高成绩的学生。
高考英语阅读理解记叙文类讲义(2021年整理)
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1、基础知识a)词:“查单词”b)句:“画括号"i.基本知识:句子=主干+修饰=主干+(介短/从句/非谓/时状)ii.基本步骤:给介短从句非谓时状画括号,把句子化整为零!c)段:“标主题”2、解题能力学单词最好的方法记叙文(2015浙江D)unite 联合v.United States of America 美利坚合众国United Kingdom 联合王国United Nations 联合国desire 欲望n.v。
want to do sth= plan to do sth= desire to do sth= have a great desire to do sth= look forward to doing sth。
= be longing/thirsty for doing sth(As for sth) 至于.。
呢As for the reasons,…至于理由呢,…share 分享v。
n.canine 犬类的adj。
*lust 欲望*n.(In 2004), (when my daughter Becky was ten), she and my husband, Joe, were united (in their desire)(for a dog)。
2024届高三英语二轮复习写作专项读后续写主题升华积累讲义
【读后续写Happy Ending】读后续写主题升华素材积累Class:__________ NO.__________ Name:____________每种类型挑选一个易背、易写、多用途的句子默写一、人与自我:自主觉悟,自主成长(一)永不言弃——希望见于坚持,梦想圆于不懈1. Never give up no matter what happens, no matter how hopeless. 1.无论发生什么,无论多么绝望,都不要放弃。
2. Every cloud has a silver lining. / There is always light at the end of the tunnel. / Somebody sometime somewhere will shine a lamp of hope. 2.黑暗中总有一线光明。
/ 隧道尽头总有光明。
/ 某个地方的某个人会点亮一盏希望之灯。
3. There are no shortcuts to any place worth going. 3.任何值得去的地方都没有捷径。
4. As long as you have a dream, just go for it, and never give it up easily. 4.只要你有梦想,就去追求它,不要轻易放弃。
5. Be the flower that blooms, and butterflies will come. 5. 做那朵盛开的花,蝴蝶就会来。
6. Luck is what happens when preparation meets opportunity. 6.当准备遇到机会时会发生运气。
7. There is no elevator to success, only stairs. 7. 通往成功没有电梯,只有楼梯。
8. Where there is a life ,there is a hope. 8. 生命不息,希望长在。
新课标人教版高三英语第二轮复习专题讲座-阅读理解[下]
不同体裁文章的阅读方法不同体裁的文章,作者的写作手法不同,表达的方式千差万别。
体裁不同,要求使用的阅读方法也不一样。
因此,掌握不同体裁的文章的阅读方法有助于我们提高阅读效率、加深对文章的理解。
下面分别谈谈记叙文、说明文、议论文、应用文的阅读方法和技巧。
第一节记叙文的阅读方法记叙文讲述的是发生在当前或过去或将来事情的经过。
简而言之,记叙文就是讲故事,包括人物或故事情节。
常见的记叙文根据其用途可分为文学记叙文和说明记叙文:文学记叙文以虚构为主,如趣闻逸事、传说、寓言、传奇故事、短篇小说、科幻小说等;说明记叙文以事实为依据,包括历史、传记、新闻报道、日记等。
无论哪一种记叙文作者都要交代何人何时何地为什么、怎么样、干了何事等等,这也就是我们常说的“5Ws and 1H”。
这是我们在阅读记叙文时要首先了解的,接着按照线索弄清事情的来龙去脉,就能理解整个故事。
特别值得注意的是:记叙文的叙事顺序有顺叙和倒叙两种,有时候作者为了吸引读者会采用倒叙的方法,即不按照事情发展的先后顺序来叙述,而是从最重要、最能引人入胜的事件开始,然后再回过头来追叙故事的开端和经过。
阅读时要学会从事情本身的发展去理解故事情节而不要只看事件在文中出现的先后位置。
另外,讲故事必定有其目的:或证明某一理论,或阐明某一概念,或赞美某种美德,或谴责某种罪恶等等。
我们在阅读时要通过作者的重要细节描写联系故事情节去领会作者的意图,对作者重墨泼就的细节描写要重点关注。
概括起来一句话:读记叙文的关键是抓情节。
抓住了故事情节,就理解了文章的脉络,其他的就迎刃而解了。
下面请阅读一篇记叙文,看看你能不能抓住故事的主要情节。
(05浙江卷 A 篇)Compassion is a desire within us to help others.With effort, we can translate compassion into action.An experience last weekend showed me this is true.I work part-time in a supermarket across from a building for the elderly.These old people are our main customers, and it’s not hard to lose patience over their slowness.But last Sunday, one aged gentleman appeared to teach me a valuable lesson.This untidy man walked up to my register(收款机) with a box of biscuits.He said he was out of cash(现金), had just moved into his room, and had nothing in his cupboards.He asked if we could let him have the food on trust.He promised to repay me the next day.I couldn’t help staring at him.I wondered what kind of person he had been ten or twenty years before, and what he would be like if luck had gone his way.I had a hurt in my heart for this kind of human soul, all alone in the world.I told him that I was sorry, but store rules didn’t allow me to do so.I felt stupid and unkind saying this, but I valued my joB.Just then, another man, standing behind the first, spoke up.If anything, he looked more pitiable.“Charge it to me,” was all he saiD.What I had been feeling was pity.Pity is soft and safe and easy.Compassion, on the otherhand, is caring in action.I thanked the second man but told him that was not allowed either.Then I reached into my pocket and paid for the biscuits myself.I reached into my pocket because these two men had reached into my heart and taught me compassion.解析:故事采用顺叙的叙事方法,主要情节发展如下:One aged gentleman begged me to have the food on trust and promised to repay the next day.---- I told him the store rules didn’t allow me to do so.---- Another man wanted me to charge the food to him.----I paid for the biscuits myself. 作者用第一人称讲述自己亲身经历的这段故事,让人觉得亲切可信,同时也增强了文章的感染力。
人教版新高考英语二轮复习习题训练--完形填空文体分类练(二)——记叙文
文体分类练(二)——记叙文Test1A trip to a bank’s ATM machine is usually a common affair. But for Jose, his 1 on Sunday is one that he won’t 2 for the rest of his life.The 19-year-old college student was making a3 for Mother’s Day online when he noticed his account balance(账户余额) was 4. So he drove to the nearest bank to deposit money. Little did he know that he was about to make an incredible5.When he arrived, Jose noticed a plastic bag on the ground filled with cash, which turned out to be $135,000.“When I first saw it, I was very6, not knowing what to do,”Jose told The New York Times. After taking a moment to 7 himself, Jose called the police. And the police soon discovered that the money had 8 been left behind by a worker 9 with refilling the ATM.Thinking that it was the biggest amount of money ever found and10 in Albuquerque’s history, the mayor and the police chief held a ceremony to honour Jose’s 11. And, perhaps best of all, the police chief invited Jose to12 a job as a public service aid for the department 13 his graduation. For Jose, it was the best gift for Mother’s Day.“Mother called me14 she almost started crying excitedly... She told me I did the right thing and that she was 15 of me,” said Jose.1.A.plan B.experimentC.visitD.show2.A.enjoy B.forgetC.imagineD.face3.A.purchase B.surveyC.wishD.decision4.A.full B.clearC.inaccurateD.low5.A.offer B.promiseC.profitD.discovery6.A.shocked B.amusedC.excitedD.satisfied7.A.teach B.disturbC.collectD.challenge8.A.carefully B.accidentallyC.deliberatelyD.nervously9.A.continued B.chargedC.armedD.tasked10.A.returned B.savedC.lostD.exchanged11.A.confidence B.honestyC.braveryD.appreciation12.A.hold up B.adapt toC.wait forD.apply for13.A.although B.beforeC.afterD.until14.A.or B.andC.soD.but15.A.proud B.considerateC.worthyD.sureTest2(2021·山东济宁一模)A few weeks ago, I surfed the Internet and came across a book called The Debt to Pleasure. At first sight, I 1, immediately, to own it. Its structure was novel and it had won wide 2among readers.But before I could 3 the Buy Now button, a tiny inner voice 4the library, which was simply three blocks away from my apartment. I searched the catalogue(目录) of the library and was sure enough,“5” now. However, by the time the book was borrowed, I couldn’t say with 6 that I would love it. This worn, yellow-papered object was just so 7. However promising our first 8 was, my initial desire 9sank. When the book was 10, I walked to the library and 11 it into the Return Box. Once reshelved, it would 12for others. I sighed and walked off. It had never13me from the very beginning.One thing I should mention: I did end up loving The Debt to Pleasure.I loved it so much that I finally ordered a copy of my own. The library book does 14me the cost of a paperback, but it just delivers a 15satisfaction, one that can’t promise permanent ownership. Live your life fully, for our lives are only lent to us and can’t be owned forever.1.A.attempted B.decidedC.arrangedD.ceased2.A.sympathy B.judgmentC.adaptationD.recognition3.A.click B.spotC.untieD.strike4.A.defended B.insistedC.confirmedD.conveyed5.A.accessible B.affordableC.availableD.dynamic6.A.patience B.reliefC.certaintyD.honesty7.A.plain B.vividC.uniqueD.attractive8.A.response B.adventureC.interactionD.encounter9.A.frequently B.graduallyC.consequentlyD.normally10.A.due B.extraC.missingD.out11.A.submitted B.donatedC.droppedD.distributed12.A.apply B.exchangeC.cheerD.head13.A.belonged to B.appealed toC.turned toD.depended on14.A.paid B.offerC.saveD.prepare15.A.material B.temporarypleteD.sustainableTest3(2021·河北秦皇岛高三二模)When I was three, I was inseparable from my parents. Wherever they went I went, always reaching out for their hands to ensure their 1.As we 2my preschool for the first time, my hands tightly 3 my parents’. We walked past the 4 sign out front which read “Welcome to the Lake School!”, up the stairs and through the front door. I was happy and 5—what could this new place be? Soon enough, however, I was introduced to my teachers and as they warmly 6 me, they separated my hands from my parents’ hands. As we progressed across the room, my parents 7 broke away from our little group and went a 8 way. They seemed, in fact, to be heading towards the door. When I realised what was happening, I 9 to run after them, only to be held back by my teachers. My small face contorted(扭曲) and tears began to flood my cheeks. My mouth opened and a desperate 10 escaped, loud enough for my parents, who were now outside, to 11. I stared at them, and pressed my face against the 12. But soon another little girl 13. She wrapped her 14 around me until I stopped crying. Then she took my hand and led me away from the window. My parents breathed a sigh of15.The girl was Helen, and from that moment on, we were best friends.1.A.safety B.satisfactionC.presenceD.attention2.A.approached B.calledC.attendedD.inspected3.A.controlled B.crossedC.shookD.held4.A.dull B.familiarC.cheerfulD.stressful5.A.absent-minded B.curiousC.seriousD.doubtful6.A.assessed B.trainedC.praisedD.greeted7.A.violently B.suddenlyC.anxiouslyD.randomly8.A.suitable B.differentC.straightD.normal9.A.attempted B.agreedC.hesitatedD.managed10.A.praise B.warningC.cryD.sigh11.A.break down B.turn aroundC.calm downD.speed up12.A.door B.blanketC.wallD.window13.A.appeared B.registeredC.slippedD.replied14.A.sleeves B.handsC.hairD.arms15.A.relief B.disbeliefC.sadnessD.admiration文体分类练(二)——记叙文Test1【语篇导读】本文是一篇记叙文。
高考英语复习写作专题讲座课件:十讲 记叙文(二)叙事记叙文 公开课一等奖课件
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The winter holiday we are looking forward to is
drawing near. The past holidays brought me many wonderful memories. The most unforgettable experience is the party held two days before the Spring Festival last year to celebrate the golden wedding anniversary of my
人教版高考英语一轮复习考点回顾 写作专项提升 第二讲 记叙文
Our school has recently launched an Adult Ceremony to encourage us to live with gratitude and responsibility.
Attending the ceremony were school leaders,teachers and students who are 18 years old.The president on behalf of the school expressed his wishes that we should stay hungry for knowledge and never let down the high expectations of teachers,parents and others in society.After the speech of the president,we students took a collective oath and wrote down our dreams.
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开头说明事件来龙去脉的常用语: 1.In order to raise awareness about environment protection,the English Club of our school organized a voluntary activity this Sunday morning. 为了提高环境保护的意识,本周日上午我校英语俱乐部组织了一次志愿者 活动。 2.During the May Day holiday,my parents and I climbed Mount Tai.We were lucky that the weather was fine that day and we were able to see the sunrise. 五一假期期间,我和父母一起去爬了泰山。我们很幸运,那天的天气很好, 我们看到了日出。
高三英语二轮复习记叙文写作全流程讲义
记叙文写作活动安排●叙事类短文写作框架:【活动概括】某人在某时某地做了某事,对某事的评价总【活动描写】1.细节(具体语境下的动作,可适当发挥的部分)2.过渡(时间、逻辑)3.心理描写【总结升华】情感升华+主题响应●记叙文语言框架开头段句式1:With the aim of doing sth., ...took place / was held in ... at...on...为了【目的】,【活动名称】将于【地点】【时间】举行。
例1:为了提升学生的口语水平,我们学校上周举办了英语演讲比赛。
With the aim of improving the students’ spoken English, an English speech contest was held in our school last week.活动目的语料包:①锻炼身体:build up one’s body①激发兴趣:set off interest; cultivate a taste for①亲近大自然:get close to nature①增进友谊:promote / strengthen the friendship①开拓眼界:widen / broaden one’s horizons①缓解压力:relieve / ease pressure / stress①庆祝节日:celebrate / observe ...①传承中国传统文化:preserve traditional cultures⑨加强我们(参与者)对...的理解和欣赏:Enhance our (participants’) understanding and appreciation of...⑩增添色彩:enrich our life / add colour to our life句式2: Time rewinding to..., ..., together with..., did sth...., which left a deep impression on us.时光倒流到...,...和...一起...,给我们留下了深刻的印象。
高考英语专题之记叙文的写作
高考英语专题之记叙文的写作状元必读1. 本讲课程涉及的学问点在高考考试大纲中对应的考点为语言应用;2. 本讲课程重点讲解记叙文的写作;3. 该考点在高考试卷中的大体分值为25-30分。
专家点拨一、学问精讲Ⅰ. 运用连接词,行文流畅连贯依据高考书面表达的评分原则,第五档文章的要求之一是“有效地运用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑”;第四档文章的要求之一是“应用简洁的语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑”;第三档文章的要求之一是“应用简洁的语句间的连接成分,使全文内容连贯”;假如全文内容缺少连贯性,得分就会比较低。
由此可见,在书面表达中,假如想得到较高的分数,就应力求做到全文结构紧凑、内容连贯。
要想文章内容连贯、语句流畅,需正确地运用连词、副词、介词词组来表达上下句之间的关系。
常用的连词、连词词组、副词和介词词组可依据意思分为以下几种:1. 表示并列、补充或承接关系,如:and, so, therefore, not only…but also…, both…and…, as well as, as well, also, besides, in addition, what’s more,what’s worse, to make matters worse等。
【例句】I arrived at home late yesterday. What’s worse, I left my key in my office.I was too tired to walk home, so I took a taxi.The activity not only taught us a lot but also made us get close to nature.2. 表示转折或让步关系,如:although / though, even though / even if, in spite of, in fact, however, but, yet,instead等。
专题复习阅读理解之记叙文课件-2023届高三英语二轮复习
This hit home for me as I was sitting with my 2-year-old grandson on a sofa
over the Spring Festival holiday. I had brought a children’s book to read. It had simple words and colorful pictures — a perfect match for his age. (2022新高考2卷 B篇) 4. What do the underlined words “hit home for me” mean in paragraph 2?
记叙文命题方向2:词义猜测
1)根据上下文逻辑关系猜词
常见设问:The underlined word/phras2e)in根th据e ..同. p义ar词agr反ap义h m词e猜an词s ___.
The word “it/they” in the3)las根t s据en构ten词ce法re猜fer词s to______.
"A lot of skills are needed for the job. You have to make sure you don't turn two pages at once and make sure you find the repeats in the music when you have to go back to the right spot, " Mr Titterton explained.
A. Provided shelter for me. B. Became very clear to me.
高考英语读后续写三大主题意境十大经典话题精选荟萃:10:公益慈善篇(人与社会)
【考前特训】10:公益慈善篇(人与社会)-2024年高考英语读后续写三大主题意境十大经典话题精选荟萃题源:【1】2024届山东省烟台市等2地高三二模英语试题【2】2024届福建省南平市高考第三次质检英语试题【3】2024届河北省承德市部分示范性高中二模英语试题【4】2024届浙江省杭州第二中学新高考模拟试卷(一)英语试题【5】2024届重庆市高三模拟考试英语试题(五)【6】2024届山西省名校联考高三下学期二模英语试题【7】2024届山西省平遥县第二中学校高三冲刺调研押题卷英语(四)【8】河北省沧衡名校联盟2023-2024学年高三下学期4月期中英语试题【9】2024届吉林省长春市东北师范大学附属中学高三下第五次模拟考试英语试题【10】安徽省滁州市高三下学期第二次教学质量检测英语试卷1.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
American football can be pretty competitive. From old opponents to fan drama, it’s just another part of the game. There have even been all-out violent fights in the name of defending your team. However, one high school football player Mario Hoefer showed that his love for the sport didn’t take priority over helping a person in need.One afternoon in September, Charles City High School football team Mario was on faced nearby New Hampton in a Friday football game. Mario was captain of his team and Carter the quarterback of the opposing team.It was really foggy and awfully hot. Filled with excited audience in the stands, the stadium felt like a heated steamer. Every player was we win sweat even during the warm-ups. All this meant the game would be a tough one and a test or the mind and body of both teams.Soon the game began and for the first three quarters, each team seemed to have a chance to win and theytook the lead by turns. So exhausted was Mario running back and forth that he cramped (抽筋) up twice. Each time he got a cramp near the New Hampton sideline, his teammates came to his assistance and stretched his leg to ease the cramp. Though feeling uncomfortable and worn out, Mario soldiered on as Charles City protected a slim lead and New Hampton attempted a late comeback.In the fourth quarter, Mario saw his teammates across the field break up a crucial pass intended for Carter. Mario was about to cross over to the other side of the field to high five his teammates when he noticed that beside him, Carter fell onto the ground, screaming in pain, his eyes wide open and a look of panic on his face. Carter grabbed his left calf (小腿肚), trying to move his leg in different positions. Judging from Carter’s desperate expression, Mario realized Carter was possibly experiencing an unbearable cramp just as he himself had gone through minutes before. But the New Hampton players were farther away from the quarterback.注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
三维设计最新届高考英语一轮复习写作专题讲座课件:十讲 记叙文(二)叙事记叙文 公开课一等奖课件PPT
As a Senior 3 student, the coming winter holiday is sure a busy one. I'll make good use of it to work hard at my lessons, getting ready for the college entrance examinations. I'll also try to spare some time to do some exercise to keep fit. In addition, I can watch my favorite TV programmes with my parents, especially on the eve of Spring Festival. During the Spring Festival, I'll visit my grandparents and help them prepare food for the family get-together.
2. 第二天上午上课时,我和其他同学一样正在大声读课文时, 英语老师走向我。 ►In the class of the following morning, the English teacher came towards me. I was reading the text aloud as other students then. ►In the morning class the next day, the English teacher came to me while I was reading the text aloud as other students.
In the morning class the next day, the English teacher came to me while I was reading the text aloud as other students. After listening to me for a while, she gave me a big smile and said she liked my voice very much. The smile shone in the whole day and the following days. A week later, I volunteered to take charge of English study in my class.
高考英语二轮专题复习精品名师课件书面表达指导系列记叙文
记叙文是对某一事件或一系列事件的发生、发展、结束以 及某一人物的变化情况所做的文字表述。它通常包括写人、写
景、写事。其主要形式是:故事、人物介绍、新闻报道、缩
写、改写等。这类题材的试题在试卷中多以看图作文、材料作 文以及材料缩写等不同形式出现,是高考书面表达的主要考查 方式之一。
built standard playground.In the new environment ,
teachers and students are living happily and working hard.
新课标高考总复习· 英语(配人教版)
It is really amazing that the once ruined place
时,也要使用现在时,但应以现在时为主。
新课标高考总复习· 英语(配人教版)
3.内容要点:题干当中已提示题目为“Great Changes” ,
因此根据已给要点,围绕变化、原因和感想进行写作。试卷题 目没有在审题上给学生造成大的障碍,反而提示了文章内容和 写作框架。考生在展开要点时切忌照搬照抄、生拼硬凑、大量 堆砌,而是要有理有据的展开;另外,图片提示了三点变化,
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has now been turned into a beautiful school , full of life. Obviously , without the help of the whole society , there would be no new school today.It is love and
结构清晰,感情真实,这样才能冲刺高分。
新课标高考总复习· 英语(配人教版)
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with my parents, especially on the eve of Spring Festival. During the Spring Festival, I'll visit my grandparents and help them prepare food for the family gettogether.
Thanks to the comforting smile from my English teacher, I began to be confident.
高考复习 ┃ 高三英语写作专题讲座
高考复习 ┃ 高三英语写作专题讲座
一年一度的寒假即将来临,《中学生英语》杂志准备出版 专刊“快乐寒假”。请你为此写一篇英文稿件。你的叙述须 包括下列要点: 1.往年寒假难忘的一件事(过程及感想); 2.今年寒假的打算(至少3点,娱乐、学习等); 3.你的愿望。 要求:1.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
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4.注意文章的完整性。 整篇文章要完整,内容全面,详略得当,层次分明,重点 突出。英语记叙文的时态通常为一般过去时,但如果是经 常性的事件或自然现象、社会现象,则常用现在时。 另外,所述事情的情节展开要突出重点、详略有致。可有 意识地采用类似“设置悬念”“前后呼应”等的写作手法,以 吸引读者的兴趣。好的记叙文具有描述事件具体、人物形 象逼真、故事生动感人的特点。
高考复习 ┃ 高三英语写作专题讲座
2.词数150词左右,短文开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。 The winter holiday we are looking forward to is drawing near. The past holidays brought me many wonderful memories. _______________________________________________ _______________________________________________ _______________________________________________ _______________________________________________
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________________________ (事件发生的过程). The smile shone in the whole day and the following days. A week later, ______________________ (事件的结果).
高考复习 ┃ 高三英语写作专题讲座
As a Senior 3 student, the coming winter holiday is sure a busy one. I'll make good use of it to work hard at my lessons, getting ready for the college entrance examinations. I'll also try to spare some time to do some exercise to keep fit. In addition, I can watch my favorite TV programmes
高考复习 ┃ 高三英语写作专题讲座
参考范文: The winter holiday we are looking forward to is
drawing near. The past holidays brought me many wonderful memories. The most unforgettable experience is the party held two days before the Spring Festival last year to celebrate the golden wedding anniversary of my grandparents. Before the party, I made a careful plan for it
高考复习 ┃ 高三英语写作专题讲座
[技法指导] 1.明确“五个W和一个H”。
要写好记叙文,首先要确定先写什么,再写什么,最后写 什么,然后开始布局谋篇。我们可以借用英语新闻写作中 经常用到的“五个W和一个H”的概念,即what(什么事), who(什么人),when(什么时候),where(什么地点), why(什么原因),how(怎么样)。整个写作内容的确定、写 作材料的筛选,都要围绕这五个W和一个H进行。
高考复习 ┃ 高三英语写作专题讲座
②在确定了人称之后,要确定展开记叙的顺序。在英语记 叙文中,最常用的是按事情发生的时间或空间顺序进行记 叙。就目前中学生的实际英语水平而言,最值得练习的记还是连接词、过渡词等方面都比较容易掌握。
高考复习 ┃ 高三英语写作专题讲座
I hope I'll have a joyful and fruitful holiday.
高考复习 ┃ 高三英语写作专题讲座
“一划二括三会意,读懂高考长难句”
高考复习 ┃ 高三英语写作专题讲座
高考复习 ┃ 高三英语写作专题讲座
高考复习 ┃ 高三英语写作专题讲座
[题目要求] 请你根据以下提示,结合生活中的一个事例,用英语
写一篇短文,谈谈微笑的作用。 The best example of universally understood body language may be the smile. A smile can help us get through difficult situations and find friends in a world of strangers. A smile can open doors and tear down walls.
高考复习 ┃ 高三英语写作专题讲座
In the morning class the next day, the English teacher came to me while I was reading the text aloud as other students. After listening to me for a while, she gave me a big smile and said she liked my voice very much. The smile shone in the whole day and the following days. A week later, I volunteered to take charge of English study in my class.
高考复习 ┃ 高三英语写作专题讲座
with my parents. All our relatives got together for this special occasion when my cousins and I gave my grandparents some nice handmade presents. My grandparents were so happy that they sang and danced like young couple.
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第三步 串句成文,保证流畅 I still remember how nervous I was on my first day in
the new school three years ago, when I found it difficult to follow my teacher in the first English class. The teacher spoke English throughout the class, which was totally different from the lessons I had taken before.
高考复习 ┃ 高三英语写作专题讲座
2. 第二天上午上课时,我和其他同学一样正在大声读课文 时,英语老师走向我。 ►In the class of the following morning, the English teacher came towards me. I was reading the text aloud as other students then. ►In the morning class the next day, the English teacher came to me while I was reading the text aloud as other students.
3.在塑造人物、展开情节上下功夫。 我们记叙的任何事情都是由人来进行的,人物塑造的好 坏是衡量记叙文好坏的一个重要标准。因此,表达人物 的动作、语言以及展开情节时,使用哪些句型、短语、 词汇都应该仔细推敲。
高考复习 ┃ 高三英语写作专题讲座
一般说来,叙事类记叙文的话题通常和中学生的生活 阅历有关,如校园生活、旅游、交通、交友等,平时要注 意积累这方面的词汇和短语。
高考复习 ┃ 高三英语写作专题讲座
高考复习 ┃ 高三英语写作专题讲座
第一步 构建框架,清晰行文 [谋篇布局]
高考复习 ┃ 高三英语写作专题讲座
[黄金模板] I still remember how ________________________ (心情)
I was ________________________ (事件发生的时间), when I ________________________ (什么事件).
高考复习 ┃ 高三英语写作专题讲座
Persistence produces miracles!