2018年浙江省高考新题型概要写作训练指导

概要写作

[考纲解读]

提供一篇350词以内的短文，要求考生基于该短文写出一篇60词左右的内容概要。

[原题分析]

1．原文材料350词以内，概要写作40～80词。

2．原文以说明文、议论文为主。

3．概要，基本就是段落大意。每段用一句话概括，或者两段一个大意，最多用两句话概括。

4．要着重训练自己文章主旨大意和各段段落大意的归纳概括能力。

[写作注意事项]

1．找关键词和主题句，准确理解、分析原文要点，归纳段落大意。

2．各要点的表达要相对独立。

3．各要点之间要有适当的衔接。

4．句型力求简单，每句话要表意明白，无空泛、笼统、含混之词。

5．尽量使用短句，慎用长难句。例如，尽量少用关系代词which，who等引导的定语从句，而采用-ing形式和-ed形式作定语。

6．多使用概括性词语，少用具体描述性词语。

[概要模板及句型]

1．表示文章的内容以及研究目的

①This paper is aimed at/covers/mainly deals with...

②The article focuses on the topic of...

2．表示研究的结论

①The result showed that...

②The author found that...

③It was concluded that...

3．表示推荐、观点或建议

The author suggests/considers that...

Suggestions are made for...

实战演练1

阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

As most children return to school, many affluent families are choosing to pull their children out of the mainstream education system altogether in favor of having a tutor at home "Around 50 percent of the inquiries we're getting at the moment are for long-term, daily home tutoring," Steve Spriggs, managing director of London-based private tutoring service And, he adds, the trend has grown from families asking for personal tutors to replicate the classroom environment in their own homes. Many families that were making the inquiries for full-time home tutors, Spriggs said, were either travelling so frequently that sending their children to one school was impractical and others did not want their children to go into boarding school.

Home tutoring is nothing new, and many tuition firms also offer extra tutoring services to families wanting their children to have a little extra help learning ahead of entrance exams at competitive private schools in the U.K., such as Harrow, St. Pauls or Eton.

"We always make it clear to parents that we will only offer full-time home schooling for a year though," Spriggs explained. "Any more than a year and children start to lose out on what a school environment can give them, such as social skills and that vital interaction they need – although we try to

mitigate that anyway in our home tutoring with sports clubs of museum trips as part of the teaching program."

Spriggs said that the costs of hiring a full-time tutor would exceed the fees of a top boarding school, which usually charge around £35,000 ($54,400) a year. Some families employ two full-time tutors, one to cover humanities and the other to cover science and maths. Devising an educational plan for youngsters in these situations is not a quick process, however, taking up to six weeks to plan, Spriggs said, with a tutor being matched to the child to ensure they are compatible.

参考范文：Home tutoring isn’t rare in society. Some rich families choose full-time tutors because of frequent travelling or because they don’t want their children to go into boarding school.(要点1) Meanwhile, to perform better in entrance exams, some children need extra tutoring services.(要点2) Some tuition firms add some activities to improve the social skills of the children .(要点3) Although the costs of home tutoring are high, some families still employ two full-time tutors to ensure their children can gain balanced development.(要点4)

实战演练2

阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。