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With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake .To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.
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•注意： •1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右 •2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划 线的关键词语； •3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开 头语已为你写好； •4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出 你所使用的关键词语。
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• Paragraph 1 But no helicopter came and it was
“Tom! ”she cried. “Help! ”
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No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much s--he loved him.
getting dark again.____________________________________ __________________________________________ __________________________________________ ____________________________
Paragraph 2
It was day break and Jane woke up._______________________________________ __________________________________________ __________________________________________ _____________________________
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One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “I’m going to find a better spot for us to camp” and walked away.
As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately,the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.
Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling(滴落)somewhere at a
distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to --the lake.
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Biblioteka Baidu
• 第三，抄袭现象比较严重。抄袭的情况一般 分为三类：抄自续写原文部分，抄自试卷的 其他部分（如阅读题），或者之前背诵的某 一段文章。由于读后续写的内容连贯性强， 抄袭的同学很难浑水摸鱼，往往以零分或低 分告终。
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•答题情况分析及审题建议
• 第一，从逻辑方面来看，大部分考生对故事的 主要情节拓展基本做到了合情合理，衔接较为 顺畅。但是，也有不少考生构思能力较为欠缺 ，无法在短时间内理清故事脉络以及写作意图 ，对所给的十个关键词、两段开头语中提供的 线索信息没有很好利用，未实现语言交际的目 的。
• 第二，从语言方面来看，大多数考生能做到语 言的基本正确。但是很多考生仍然基础薄弱， 不能用英文传达意义，出现一些低级错误。
With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake .To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.
--
•注意： •1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右 •2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划 线的关键词语； •3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开 头语已为你写好； •4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出 你所使用的关键词语。
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• Paragraph 1 But no helicopter came and it was
“Tom! ”she cried. “Help! ”
--
No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much s--he loved him.
getting dark again.____________________________________ __________________________________________ __________________________________________ ____________________________
Paragraph 2
It was day break and Jane woke up._______________________________________ __________________________________________ __________________________________________ _____________________________
读后续写
--
真题回放
One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “I’m going to find a better spot for us to camp” and walked away.
As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately,the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.
Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling(滴落)somewhere at a
distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to --the lake.
--
Biblioteka Baidu
• 第三，抄袭现象比较严重。抄袭的情况一般 分为三类：抄自续写原文部分，抄自试卷的 其他部分（如阅读题），或者之前背诵的某 一段文章。由于读后续写的内容连贯性强， 抄袭的同学很难浑水摸鱼，往往以零分或低 分告终。
--
•答题情况分析及审题建议
• 第一，从逻辑方面来看，大部分考生对故事的 主要情节拓展基本做到了合情合理，衔接较为 顺畅。但是，也有不少考生构思能力较为欠缺 ，无法在短时间内理清故事脉络以及写作意图 ，对所给的十个关键词、两段开头语中提供的 线索信息没有很好利用，未实现语言交际的目 的。
• 第二，从语言方面来看，大多数考生能做到语 言的基本正确。但是很多考生仍然基础薄弱， 不能用英文传达意义，出现一些低级错误。