九年级英语作文复习课PPT教学课件
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九年级中考英语总复习--作文讲评课件(共15张PPT)
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第二档(4-6分) 只能写出少部分内容要点,文中有许多语 法错误,只有个别句子可读。
第一档(0-3分)
只能写出语所要求内容有关的一些单词或 1-2个要点。正确抄写全部参考词汇给1分; 写出相关要点的词组给2-3分。
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English Composition
英语作文
2018年九年级模拟考试英语作文
书面表达:近来,天津市正在创建全国文明城市,这一话题在我校引起了热
烈讨论。作为一名中学生,请根据下面提示信息给学校英语专栏写一篇短文,
呼吁大家如何为创建文明城市贡献力量。
1.见面跟人打招呼
2.与同学友好相处
提示词:
3.保持教室及社区环境卫生
评分标准: 第五档( 13-15分)能写明全部要点,文
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初三英语作文教学课件总复习
we need. 4. We can send some emails to our friends.
5. We can play games on it.
Steps towards writing a good paragraph
Step 2 How to change it into a well- organized 组织 paragraph
Nowadays the Internet plays an important part in our life. With the Internet,we can get the latest news. It is fast and convenient. We can find and download information that we need. We can send emails to friends. We can play games on it.
The structure of a composition
Topic sentence
Supporting details
Reason 1 R the topic sentence in the paragraph
I listen to music while driving to work. I listen to music when I’m thinking. I listen to music when I’m happy. Even when I’m sad, I listen to music, too. I can’t live without music. Music plays an important part in my life.
5. We can play games on it.
Steps towards writing a good paragraph
Step 2 How to change it into a well- organized 组织 paragraph
Nowadays the Internet plays an important part in our life. With the Internet,we can get the latest news. It is fast and convenient. We can find and download information that we need. We can send emails to friends. We can play games on it.
The structure of a composition
Topic sentence
Supporting details
Reason 1 R the topic sentence in the paragraph
I listen to music while driving to work. I listen to music when I’m thinking. I listen to music when I’m happy. Even when I’m sad, I listen to music, too. I can’t live without music. Music plays an important part in my life.
初三英语总复习英语写作指导ppt课件
会,并在今年的暑假里打算为家里做什么。
• 提示词:family, lots of housework, learn to do, help, parents, feel proud of
举例 审清主题
• 人称:第一人称 • 时态:一般现在时,一般将来时
(个别使用一般过去时也可。) • 主题:做家务 • 文体:记叙文
teacher at school ,and so do I. My favorite teacher, Miss Lu, is a 30year-old young lady of medium height, with big eyes and long straight hair. She wears glasses and often gets dressed in different styles of clothes. And a big smile can always be found on her round face.
举例 初写文章
Summer vacation is coming, I want to learn how to cook. I want to cook for them. I think they will feel proud of me.
人物故事类的一些句子感受
• She wears glasses and often gets dressed in different styles of clothes.
大作文—复习策略 选题
人物故事 自己,家人,朋友,老师… 学习提高 学习的科目,遇到的困难和麻烦… 健康生活 疾病和卫生,食品健康… 计划愿望 暑假计划,学习计划…
大作文—复习策略 选题
• 提示词:family, lots of housework, learn to do, help, parents, feel proud of
举例 审清主题
• 人称:第一人称 • 时态:一般现在时,一般将来时
(个别使用一般过去时也可。) • 主题:做家务 • 文体:记叙文
teacher at school ,and so do I. My favorite teacher, Miss Lu, is a 30year-old young lady of medium height, with big eyes and long straight hair. She wears glasses and often gets dressed in different styles of clothes. And a big smile can always be found on her round face.
举例 初写文章
Summer vacation is coming, I want to learn how to cook. I want to cook for them. I think they will feel proud of me.
人物故事类的一些句子感受
• She wears glasses and often gets dressed in different styles of clothes.
大作文—复习策略 选题
人物故事 自己,家人,朋友,老师… 学习提高 学习的科目,遇到的困难和麻烦… 健康生活 疾病和卫生,食品健康… 计划愿望 暑假计划,学习计划…
大作文—复习策略 选题
中考英语作文优秀指导课件(共38张PPT)
Enjoy an article
Group learning 1:
Read the article and find out: 1 What’s the main idea of each paragraph? (每一段的主要内容是什么?) 2 What’s the writer’s opinion? What are the reasons?(作者的观点是什么?理由?) 3 Is the experience typical for the topic? (作者的亲身经历对于观点来说典型吗?) 4 Are there any good phrases or sentences? Underline them!(有好词好句吗?请划住。)
正方: Last year, I got into trouble learning math. I got poor grades on math and I was really worried. However, I believed that I could deal with it by
me much time, my eyesight became
worse. And because of leaking(泄露) some
personal information, I often got many unwanted calls.
自己的亲身经历
All in all, as middle school students, we should be far away from the mobile phones, and pay much attention to our study.
Group learning 2:
初三英语作文综合复习万能句型以及模板PPT课件
初中英语作文模板Hale Waihona Puke 标 准 (10 分 卷
作 文 评 分
1.内容完整,语句流畅,无语法错误, 书写规范,给13-14分; 2. 内容较完整,语句较流畅,基本 无语法错误,书写较规范,给9-12分; 3. 内容不完整,语句欠流畅,语法 错误较多,书写较规范,给5-8分; 4. 写出个别要点,语法错误较多,书写欠 规范,个别句子可读或不知所云,0-5分。
3.请假条/ 明信片 / 书 信/ e-mail
写信人地址 写信时间
Dear Sir or Madam, I’m glad to hear from you. Now I’m writing to tell you that … _____________________________________________ ____________________________ _____________________________________________ ____________________________ Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely,/Yours, Tony
U1 Improve your writing
U2 write a short story U3 write a short article about your family life U4 write an email U5 a script for hosting a show U6 A restaurant review U7 a report on a story U8 the most valuable gift
连词:1)表层次: first, second, third, firstly, secondly, thirdly, to begin with, to start with, what’s more, furthermore, also, and then, next, besides, At first; at last; in the end… then/next/after that… when/while/as soon as/not… until… in addition, finally, On one hand,....on the other hand, each/one coin has two sides,
作 文 评 分
1.内容完整,语句流畅,无语法错误, 书写规范,给13-14分; 2. 内容较完整,语句较流畅,基本 无语法错误,书写较规范,给9-12分; 3. 内容不完整,语句欠流畅,语法 错误较多,书写较规范,给5-8分; 4. 写出个别要点,语法错误较多,书写欠 规范,个别句子可读或不知所云,0-5分。
3.请假条/ 明信片 / 书 信/ e-mail
写信人地址 写信时间
Dear Sir or Madam, I’m glad to hear from you. Now I’m writing to tell you that … _____________________________________________ ____________________________ _____________________________________________ ____________________________ Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely,/Yours, Tony
U1 Improve your writing
U2 write a short story U3 write a short article about your family life U4 write an email U5 a script for hosting a show U6 A restaurant review U7 a report on a story U8 the most valuable gift
连词:1)表层次: first, second, third, firstly, secondly, thirdly, to begin with, to start with, what’s more, furthermore, also, and then, next, besides, At first; at last; in the end… then/next/after that… when/while/as soon as/not… until… in addition, finally, On one hand,....on the other hand, each/one coin has two sides,
人教版九年级英语Unit3写作课课件 (共14张PPT)
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开门见山 express your main idea directly at the beginning
写作应用: 中国有很多节日,比如春节、元宵节、端午节、中秋节 等等。你最喜欢哪一个节日呢?请以“My favorite festival"为题,写一篇80词左右的作文。 要点提示: 1. Introduce the festival. 2. When is it celebrated? 3. What people do and eat? 4. Why do you like it best?
the Mid-Autumn Festival
范文展示
My Favorite Festival My favorite festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival. It is celebrated on the 15th day of the 8th lunar month. During this festival, people get together, admire the moon and share mooncakes. Also, the mooncakes are usually in the shape of a full moon. They carry people’s wishes to the families they love and miss. How delicious the mooncakes are! There are many traditional folk stories in China. However, most people think that the story of Chang’e is the most touching. So parents often tell the story to their children. I like the festival best because it makes me feel happy and relaxed. ( It falls/comes on August 15th of the lunar calendar. It usually comes in September or October.)
九年级Units7--14英文作文范文课件(PPT25张)
Recently I’ve had a discussion with my parents about whether teenagers should go out with friends on weekends.
My parents think that teenagers should stay at houme on weekends, so they can go over their lessons and have enough time to have a good sleep. They also think teenagers should help
1. Go over lessons
1. …
2. have a good sleep
3. Help parents do housework
2. … 3. …
要求: 1. 包括上述表格中的信息, 2. 至少给出你的三个想法
Should teenagers go out with friends on weekends?
Unit 7
最近你和父母针对“青少年该不该再周末与朋友外出”进行 了讨论。 请根据下列信息提示,以“Should teenagers go out with friends on weekends?为题,写一篇英语短 文。开头已给出不计入词数。
Your parents’ idea
Your idea
Unit 12 五三P103 看图写话
Liu Qiang and Zhao Lei are good friends. They both like playing soccer very much. Last Sunday, they decided to play soccer to relax in their neighborhood in the afternoon. They were both good at soccer and they played happily. Suddenly, Liu Qiang kicked the ball so hard that it flew to the
My parents think that teenagers should stay at houme on weekends, so they can go over their lessons and have enough time to have a good sleep. They also think teenagers should help
1. Go over lessons
1. …
2. have a good sleep
3. Help parents do housework
2. … 3. …
要求: 1. 包括上述表格中的信息, 2. 至少给出你的三个想法
Should teenagers go out with friends on weekends?
Unit 7
最近你和父母针对“青少年该不该再周末与朋友外出”进行 了讨论。 请根据下列信息提示,以“Should teenagers go out with friends on weekends?为题,写一篇英语短 文。开头已给出不计入词数。
Your parents’ idea
Your idea
Unit 12 五三P103 看图写话
Liu Qiang and Zhao Lei are good friends. They both like playing soccer very much. Last Sunday, they decided to play soccer to relax in their neighborhood in the afternoon. They were both good at soccer and they played happily. Suddenly, Liu Qiang kicked the ball so hard that it flew to the
初中英语作文写作课(精编版)-PPT课件(共17张)
Most students think that the Internet is very useful in our life. First of all, we can learn a lot from the Internet. We can also listen to music and enjoy movies for fun. Besides, the Internet makes our life more convenient. However, some other students feel differently. There are lots of unhealthy pictures or movies on the Internet. They make students lose interest in their study.
第七步: 誊
誊文章,规范整洁
书 写 注 意 事 项: 1、规范书写,字母饱满圆润,格式正确。 2、坚决不能在试卷上出现乱涂、乱写、 或用修正液覆盖现象——给人一种凌乱的 感觉 3、一旦写错,规范修改——用一条斜线 划掉即可。
eg: He can speker speak English very well.
Ending
Beginning
Different students have different ideas about the Internet. Most students think that the Internet is very useful in our life. First of all, we can learn a lot from the Internet. We can also listen to music and enjoy movies for fun. Besides, our life becomes more convenient with the Internet. However, some other students feel differently. There are lots of unhealthy pictures or movies on the Internet. They make students lose interest in their study. In my opinion, we should stay away from the unhealthy websites and make good use of the Internet. Only in this way, it can help us students a lot.
初三英语写作专题复习课课件
beginning linking words连词
key sentence
How glad he is! He can do many things of his own. He is going
to have a trip to Cuihua Mountain with his friend. He will also
Ending:
Step Five
根据提纲,写出文章,注意 使用好词好句和连接词。
评价: 请对照下面这个表格评价同桌的作文。
A ( 13-15 分 ) :包含内容要点,语言基本无误,行文连 贯,表达清楚.
B ( 11-12 分 ) :基本包含内容要点,语言有少量错误, 行文基本连贯,表达基本清楚.
C ( 8-10分 ) :内容包含部分要点,语言虽有较多错误, 尚能达意.
D (6-7分 ) : 要点不明确,语言错误多,影响意思表 达.E (3-5 ) :只抄了提示词,错误百出,不知所 云.F ( 0-2分 ) :白卷或文不对题.
作者:_______得分:________评价人:_______
How to improve your writing
Step Four: Make an outline(提纲)
Title: _____________
Beginning:
Main part (正文):
Ending:
general总
to
Key sentence A: specific分
Key sentence B: specific分
to
general总
can make him excited
pop music movies
2025年中考英语写作复习课课件(共25张PPT)
Write your story about growth according to your story line.
__________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________
correctly. • I write my story in 3 parts.
Homework
1. Finish writing the composition. 2. Polish your writing according to the checklist.
人教新目标九年级英语中考作文复习课课件
作文课件作文指导作文复习作文专题 复习PP T课件 人教新 目标九 年级英 语中考 作文复 习课课 件优秀 课件精 品课件 免费课 件公开 课课件p pt课件 课件下 载
Writing skill:
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Better Your Writing
天门市拖市一中 谢文莉
The High School Entrance Exam(中考) is coming! tired busy
good ways to get relaxed
Is going outing(春游) a good way to relax for Grade 9 students ? Why?
3. Worry about our safety ?
作文课件作文指导作文复习作文专题 复习PP T课件 人教新 目标九 年级英 语中考 作文复 习课课 件优秀 课件精 品课件 免费课 件公开 课课件p pt课件 课件下 载
作文课件作文指导作文复习作文专题 复习PP T课件 人教新 目标九 年级英 语中考 作文复 习课课 件优秀 课件精 品课件 免费课 件公开 课课件p pt课件 课件下 载
Your opinion
Reasons
1. get close to nature; enjoy the beautiful nature
2. Open our eyes and increase our knowledge
3. be good for our health
1. waste time ; affect our study 2. feel tired
初中英语作文复习PPT幻灯片(PPT45页)
2018年衡阳市书面表达
假如你是刘伟,你在英国的笔友Jim对中国的传统节日很感兴趣,他来信询问 有关情况。请你给他回一封电子邮件,简单介绍中国的传统节日。今天是端午节, 请你重点介绍中国人一般是如何过端午节的。 注意:1. 80~100词左右。 2.可以结合自己的情况适当增加细节,以便行文连贯。 3.开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
阅读一个提升自我能力的好方法 ;既有用又高效
Reading is a good way to improve our ability,it is both useful and effective Reading is a good way to improve our ability,which is helpful and effective
复习和预习对于学习很重要,因为他们在学习 中扮演着关键的作用
Preview and review is important to study,because they play an key role in studying
保护环境很重要,因为自然环境对于我们的日常生活 不可或缺
protecting the environment is important ,for the reason that natural environment plays an important role in our daily life
2. 文中应写出自己的补充的三个观点。
3. 书写工整、语句通顺连贯、词数不少于80。
注意:文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
How to Create a Harmonious Community
My name is Tony. I live in Xiangjiang Community.
九年级英语中考书面表达复习专题课件(共44张PPT)
要求:1. 表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯; 2. 要点须包括表格和四幅图片中的信息,但不得使用真实姓名和校名等; 3. 表格中“加入目的”一栏内容由考生自拟; 4. 词数:80-100字左右。
第一步:审 要认真审题,明确写
作体裁、人称、时态、提示和要求
具体做法:用笔勾画或写下
—— 1:体裁 2:人称 3:时态 4:提示 5: 要求
小组合作互批评分标准 满分20分: (1) 找“亮点”。找出好词好句,适当加1--3分; (2)正确使用过渡词和过渡语,加1分; (3)词数不够扣1分; (4)单词拼写错3个扣1分; (5)名词单复数不一致扣0.5--1分; (6)时态用错扣1分; (7)主谓不一致整洁扣2分; (10)文章结构不合理或体裁用错扣3-5分;
书面表达写作技巧 审
列 连
加
美
假如你是王林。你所在学校的“爱心俱乐部(Helping Hands Club)”将吸收新会员。 你想加入该俱乐部,请根据下面表格和图片的内容,用英语写一封申请信。
姓名 本人特点 “爱心”表现 加入目的 王林
性别
男
身体健康;学习刻苦;乐于助人;与同学友好相处 (见图片) 1.… 2. …
正 The apples are cheap. I'll take some.
语法问题之 代词的误用 英语中代词的形式很多,包括主格、宾格、物主代词、 反身代词等。而汉语中没有主格和宾格、形容词性物主 代词和名次性物主代词之分;此外汉语中很多时候不用 物主代词,而英语中物主代词是不可省略的,代词的误 用是考生最容易发生的错误 误 I mother and I went to the shop to buy a present for I father. 正 My mother and Iwent to the shop to buy a present for my father.
初中英语写作公开课九年级PPT课件
Great changes have taken place in Li Ming’s
hometown since the reform and opening-up.
In the past, people lived in low houses. The
farmers planted crops only with the help of
2.Nowadays, the roads in my hometown are wide and clean.
3.Today,many families have cars.
第16页/共23页
(正文)
house
school
第17页/共23页
第18页/共23页
以Great changes in my Hometown 为题,按下列提示要求写一篇80词左右短文, 介绍自己家乡的变化。
While in recent years, with the development of society, my hometown has been greatly changed. Now the roads are getting much wider. Trees and flowers are planted on the two sides of the roads. They can provide us with oxygen and fight against the pollutions. So the sky becomes cleaner and brighter. What’s more, you can see many modern and beautiful buildings everywhere, and the living conditions are improving. People are enjoying a comfor第ta21b页/l共e23l页ife now.
九年级英语写作PPT课件
出发时间
上午8:00
活动地点
文化公园
交通方式
自行车
你们的发现
1、地上垃圾很多; 2、墙上贴着许多广告; 3、小孩攀爬树木
你们的行动 捡垃圾、擦墙、植树
你的希望
大家一起来保护好环境
注意:1、文章应包括表格中所有内容要点,可适当增 加细节,使短文的内容通顺、连贯。
2、词数:80词左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
内容应包括以下要点: 1、数学考得不好,打算多学数学。 2、帮父母做家务。 3、外出旅游。 4、拜访朋友。
要求: 1、不要逐词翻译,文中不要提及真实的
校名和姓名。 2、词数80—100左右。
呈现形式:提示写作 时态: 将来时
2.假如你是《英语周报》的小记者,星期天你
和同学一起参加了“环保小卫士” (Environment Protector)活动,请你根据 下表所提供的信息,把当天的活动用英语写成 短文发表在《英语周报》上。(2008 广东梅州)
1I must spend most of the time on it.2I’m planning to do some more exercises.3Also I’d love to help my parents with the housework.4Then we would like to take a trip to the Yellow Mountains.5I believe we’ll have fun playing in the mountains.6Finally, I’ll visit some friends if I have some more time, I hope to see you sometime in the holiday.
初中英语作文讲解 PPT课件(共29张)
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(2004年陕西省中考试题) VII. 书面表达(共1题,计10分) 假如你叫张强。请根据下面美国朋友Bob的来信内容,结合你自己的情况写一篇语言连惯、符合逻辑的英文回信。 要求:1. 认真阅读来信的内容,从中获得你需要的信息。 2. 词数:80左右。回信的开头、结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。 注意:回信中不得出现你的真实地址和所在学校的名称。 Dear friend, Hello!I’m your new friend. My name is Bob. I’m fifteen. I’m American. I live in New York. I am a middle school student. I’m good at maths. It is very interesting. My favourite sport is basketball. And I am not only a basketball fan but also a good player. I like pop music. My friends and I often sing pop songs together. After school, I am interested in getting on-line. I have known a lot about China from the Internet. Now I’m learning Chinese. I hope I will visit your country one day. Please write to me and tell me something about your life. I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Bob Dear Bob,
初三英语作文教学课件总复习ppt
English writing skills
What do you usually do on weekends? I usually„
DISCUSSION: What words or phrases can you
think of when you see the word “ Internet”?
现在很多同学喜欢上网,但是老师对学生上网观点不一,请谈 谈你对学生上网的观点。
Teachers some others I
Opinion agree disagree …
Reasons make friends, be good for study waste time , lose oneself in games …
fast download search for watch convenient Internet information latest news games E-mail
send
Steps towards writing a good paragraph
Step 1 Make sentences using the words or
Fill in the blanks with link words
2. School uniform rule has its advantages. First of all we don’t have to spend time _________, thinking about what to wear every day. Also/In addition , we don’t need to worry ______________ about competing with others based on how we look. However it has some disadvantages. Our _________, personality can’t be shown if we wear the What’s more same clothes every day…______________, sometimes the uniform style is old-fashioned.
What do you usually do on weekends? I usually„
DISCUSSION: What words or phrases can you
think of when you see the word “ Internet”?
现在很多同学喜欢上网,但是老师对学生上网观点不一,请谈 谈你对学生上网的观点。
Teachers some others I
Opinion agree disagree …
Reasons make friends, be good for study waste time , lose oneself in games …
fast download search for watch convenient Internet information latest news games E-mail
send
Steps towards writing a good paragraph
Step 1 Make sentences using the words or
Fill in the blanks with link words
2. School uniform rule has its advantages. First of all we don’t have to spend time _________, thinking about what to wear every day. Also/In addition , we don’t need to worry ______________ about competing with others based on how we look. However it has some disadvantages. Our _________, personality can’t be shown if we wear the What’s more same clothes every day…______________, sometimes the uniform style is old-fashioned.
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为了进一步增强中学生的安全意识,提 高自我保护能力,某校开展了以“How to keep safe” 为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你 根据以下要点提示,用英语写一篇演讲稿。
要点:1. 慎重交友;2.遇险报警; 3. 安全饮食;4. 其它(1-2点)
注意:1.可适当增加情节,使行文连贯。 2. 词数:90-110,字迹工整。
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你如何写开头
1.开头常用词语: as far as we know 据我们所知 as everybody knows 众所周知 at present 目前 first of all 首先 To tell the truth 老实说
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添加过度次,使行文连贯
be bad for our health 其它:keep away from water, fire
it’s dangerous to swim in the river
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加 写作第三步:
• 加首尾,使结构完整。
• 可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构, 开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁,漂 亮。
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中考作文评分标准
第一档(13-15分) 信息完整,表达流畅,无语言错误或基本无语言错误。 第二档(10-12分) 信息基本完整,表达较流畅,有少量语言错误,但不影响意思表 达。 第三档(7-9分) 能传达部分信息,表达不够流畅,语言错误较多,但句子基本可读。 第四档(4-6分) 只能传达少量信息,表达不流畅,语言错误多,只有少量句子可读。 第五档(1-3分) 只能传达个别信息,表达不清楚,只有个别句子可读。
In short 简言之
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美 写作第五步:
• 选好词句,美化文章。在有把握的情
况下展示自己的语言功底。
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1. 长句短句交叉使用最好。
2. 基础一般的同学要尽量使用简单句,文 章算不上完美,但很实用。
3. 把握要点,层次清晰。
4. 注意句子与句子、段与段之间过渡自然, 行文连贯,注意适当使用连词,
How to keep safe” 为主题的英语演讲 比赛。请你根据以下要点提示,用英语写 一篇演讲稿。
要点:1. 慎重交友;2.遇险报警; 3. 安全饮食;4. 其它(1-2点)
注意:1.可适当增加情节,使行文连贯。 2. 词数:90-110,字迹工整。
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审 写作第一步
• 认真审题,找出ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้章要表达的要点, 确定文章的人称,时态。
• on the one hand, on the other hand
• not only … but also …
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你如何写结尾
1.结尾常用词语:
after all 毕竟 at last 最后 in a word 总而言之 finally, 最后 we hope that··· 我们希望
In a word, we should…
be bad for our healthy
keep away from water, fire
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连 写作第四步:
• 恰当运用关联词句,使得文章层次清 晰,各个部分衔接自然。
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• 顺序:first( at first, first of all, to begin with), second( then, next), finally( at last, in the end)
• what’s more(而且), besides(另外),
• and, but, however, or, so, becuase
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As teenagers, we …Here are some of my suggestions. a nice head
be careful to make friends
a nice body
be in danger call the police for help in time eat healthily and safely
结尾
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列 写作第二步
• 用简单的句子或短语列出文章要
点。
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文章要点短语
交友:be careful to make friends 遇险:be in danger
call the police for help in time 饮食:eat healthy and safe food
例如:and ,so ,or, but, become等等。
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查 写作第六步:
• 认真检查,改正错误。
1)格式是否有错。
2)拼写有无错误,大小写。
3)语言是否用错。
4)时态、语态错误。
5)标点错误。
620)20/10人/16 称是否用错。
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相互交换批改
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