初中英语作文的修改PPT教学课件
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kinds of fish.
The water was so clear that they could see all kinds of fishes.
3.Many place are very dry.
Many places are very dry.
主谓一致问题
1. And now many rivers becomes very dirty.
save her daughter with her mother’s help.
At once, she jumped into the water to save her daughter.
2. But she wasn’t careful, so that she fell into
the river. She wasn’t careful, and she fell into the river.
词类错用
1.When I was sadly, I played with it. When I was happily, I played with it. When I was sad, I played with it. When I was happy, I played with it.
2. All of us are excited in it. Because it can make we happy and healthy. All of us are excited about it. Because it can make us happy and healthy.
典型病例
名词的单复数问题 主谓一致问题 时态和语态问题 Chinglish 现象 行文的逻辑性问题 词类错用
请你当老师
书面表达
自行车在北京仍然受欢迎，骑车上 学或上班都很方便。如今越来越多 的人……这使得……。骑车既可 以……，又可以……。那么你更喜 欢哪种交通工具呢？为什么？
请你当老师
初中wenku.baidu.com语作文的修改
名词的单复数问题：
1. …Joy found there was much fish in the lake.
…Joy found there were many fish in the lake.
2.The water was so clear that they could see all
Please read it carefully, then find the mistakes and correct them.
Bicycle are still popular on the streets in Beijing. It’s easy to by bike go to school or go to work. Now more and more people plan to buy cars instead of bike. But I think that running cars make air dirty. It was harmful to our health. Riding bicycles can help people keep healthy, and energy can be save. Because riding bikes will always make me happy, so I prefer to go to school by bike.
Tom’s mother jumped into the water. She saved her daughter at last. 3. On Tree Planting Day,many trees planted in Yongan Park. On Tree Planting Day,many trees were planted in Yongan Park. 4.The 29th Olympic Games will hold in China.
And now many rivers become very dirty.
2. Everything are going very well.
Everything is going very well.
3. David with his little brother go to the park every
2. I and my classmates by bus to Dayang Foreign Language School.
My classmates and I took a bus to Dayang Foreign Language School.
行文的逻辑性问题
1. At once, she jumped into the water to
office.
时态和语态问题
1. Her mother jumped into the lake and swimed to Joy.At last her mother saved Joy. They were all got wet.
Her mother jumped into the lake and swam to Joy.At last her mother saved Joy. They all got wet. 2. Tom’s mother jumped into the water. She saves her daughter at last.
Sunday. David with his little brother goes to the park every Sunday
4. There are a man teacher and two women
teachers in the office. There is a man teacher and two women teachers in the
The 29th Olympic Games will be held in China.
Chinglish 现象
1. Last Sunday,Ann with her mother and brother went to a park. The park with a lake.
Last Sunday,Ann went to a park with her mother and brother. There was a lake in the park.
The water was so clear that they could see all kinds of fishes.
3.Many place are very dry.
Many places are very dry.
主谓一致问题
1. And now many rivers becomes very dirty.
save her daughter with her mother’s help.
At once, she jumped into the water to save her daughter.
2. But she wasn’t careful, so that she fell into
the river. She wasn’t careful, and she fell into the river.
词类错用
1.When I was sadly, I played with it. When I was happily, I played with it. When I was sad, I played with it. When I was happy, I played with it.
2. All of us are excited in it. Because it can make we happy and healthy. All of us are excited about it. Because it can make us happy and healthy.
典型病例
名词的单复数问题 主谓一致问题 时态和语态问题 Chinglish 现象 行文的逻辑性问题 词类错用
请你当老师
书面表达
自行车在北京仍然受欢迎，骑车上 学或上班都很方便。如今越来越多 的人……这使得……。骑车既可 以……，又可以……。那么你更喜 欢哪种交通工具呢？为什么？
请你当老师
初中wenku.baidu.com语作文的修改
名词的单复数问题：
1. …Joy found there was much fish in the lake.
…Joy found there were many fish in the lake.
2.The water was so clear that they could see all
Please read it carefully, then find the mistakes and correct them.
Bicycle are still popular on the streets in Beijing. It’s easy to by bike go to school or go to work. Now more and more people plan to buy cars instead of bike. But I think that running cars make air dirty. It was harmful to our health. Riding bicycles can help people keep healthy, and energy can be save. Because riding bikes will always make me happy, so I prefer to go to school by bike.
Tom’s mother jumped into the water. She saved her daughter at last. 3. On Tree Planting Day,many trees planted in Yongan Park. On Tree Planting Day,many trees were planted in Yongan Park. 4.The 29th Olympic Games will hold in China.
And now many rivers become very dirty.
2. Everything are going very well.
Everything is going very well.
3. David with his little brother go to the park every
2. I and my classmates by bus to Dayang Foreign Language School.
My classmates and I took a bus to Dayang Foreign Language School.
行文的逻辑性问题
1. At once, she jumped into the water to
office.
时态和语态问题
1. Her mother jumped into the lake and swimed to Joy.At last her mother saved Joy. They were all got wet.
Her mother jumped into the lake and swam to Joy.At last her mother saved Joy. They all got wet. 2. Tom’s mother jumped into the water. She saves her daughter at last.
Sunday. David with his little brother goes to the park every Sunday
4. There are a man teacher and two women
teachers in the office. There is a man teacher and two women teachers in the
The 29th Olympic Games will be held in China.
Chinglish 现象
1. Last Sunday,Ann with her mother and brother went to a park. The park with a lake.
Last Sunday,Ann went to a park with her mother and brother. There was a lake in the park.