2013年广州一模创新式试卷讲评

Work out the summary
• A lizard (named Johnny) continued an endless search for his tail (after it was broken by some boys) until he found he had grown a new one. Then he realized that it was a waste of time doing that and determined to think of the future.
2013广州一模读写任务（天利12）
2013广州一模读写任务（天利12）
• If I were fortunate enough to be able to travel back to the past, I would like to visit Chang An City during the Tang Dynasty. This is because the Tang Dynasty is a shining pearl in Chinese history. Many people believe it was during this period that China reached its cultural peak, with outstanding literature, the invention of new technology, expanding foreign trade and the development of new religions. As a Chinese student, how I wish I could witness the life at that time, the peaceful, beautiful and joyful life there. • Leading such a life appeals me. It would be a challenge to discover if I could survive in ancient times, to find out what skills I possessed and how I could use them to earn a living. I also hope I would discover some of the ancient values such as respect and morality, which I fear have become less important in our modern world.
• After reading about this film, I imagined where I would go if I could travel through time. Personally, I would travel to Tiananmen Square in Beijing on Oct. 1st, 1949. It would be exciting to witness the historic moment when the People’s Republic of China was founded. If I were lucky enough to have the opportunity, I would interview Chairman Mao and other revolutionary pioneers, telling them how brilliant they were and showing them our gratitude for the new life they brought us. I would also take pictures to record how people lived at that time. • After I returned, I would show those photos to people I know, reminding them of the hardship in the past, so that they would cherish what they possess now and be more positive toward life. Hopefully, what I brought back would inspire people today to follow the example set by those pioneers and contribute more to developing our society and building a better world.
for it; found that a new, stronger one had grown; spotted the old one
Content Johnny, a lizard
What result is Realized that it was a waste of time
doing that; determined to leave the old tail and moved on
2013广州一模读写任务（天利12）
• Summary: • The author introduces the film “The Time Machine”, in which the hero invents a time travelling machine. He also imagines where he would go if he could travel through time. • In the film “The Time Machine”, the main character invents a time machine, which interests the author who describes where he would go if he could travel through time. • The writer dreams about time travelling after he watches the movie the Time Machine, a story about an inventor who builds a time machine to save his sweetheart’s life.
Create your own version
• • • • • Your fruitless devotion to something pointless. In a sports match, In your daily life, (daily routine) In an important test, When you lost something …
2013广州一模读写任务（天利12）
• Body part: • 考点难点：虚拟语气的准确运用；构思能力。 • 主题构思：
– 回到1949建国时谈感动 – 清朝或唐朝谈强国之路 – 唐山地震谈挽救生命 – 奥运或亚运谈感动 – 与父母或同学相处的趣事 – 回忆去世的亲人 – 工业革命谈污染 – 战国时代谈和平
Reading & Writing
Topic: To let the past pass and move on
Reading for information
Item Writing style Pattern Content Narrative writing A story
Elemeபைடு நூலகம்t
Who What happens Lost his tail; started an endless search
Writing based on reading
• Sue热爱篮球运动，对自己的篮球技术很自 信，是班女子篮球队一员。
• 她率队参加了今年的篮球赛，在一场关键 的比赛中，她失了关键一分，最终无缘决 赛。
• 她陷入深深的自责，甚至常常徘徊于篮球 场找原因。
• 她意识到这样于事无补，其实继续率队努 力训练才是最需要做的。