高考写作新题型读后续写,概要写作和应用文及答案8

2020新高考作文综合练习-----续写，概要，应用文

专练八

1. 阅读下面短文,根据文章的情节续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。

An 80-year-old man was sitting on the sofa in his house along with his 45-year-old highly educated son. Suddenly a crow(乌鸦)perched(栖息)on their window.

The father asked his son, “What is this?” The son replied, “It is a crow.”After a few minutes, the father asked his son for the second time, “What is this?” The son said, “Father, I have just now told you that it’s a crow!”

After a little while, the old father again asked his son for the third time, “What is this?”

At this time some expression of irritation (恼怒)was felt in the son’s tone when he said to his father with a rebuff(生硬回绝). “It’s a crow, a crow.” A little while later, the father again asked his son the fourth time, “What is this?”

Th is time, the son shouted at his father, “Why do you keep asking me the same question again and again, although I have told you so many times ‘IT IS A CROW’? Are you not able to understand this?”

A little while later the father went to his room and came back with an old tattered(发皱的)diary, which he had maintained since his son was born.

On opening a page, he asked his son to read that page.

When the son read it, the following words were written in the diary:

Today my little son aged three was sitting with me on the sofa when a crow was sitting on the window. My son asked me 23 times what it was, and I replied to him all 23 times that it was a crow. I hugged him lovingly each time he asked me the same question. I did not at all feel irritated but I rather felt affection for my innocent son.

注意:

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;

2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;

3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;

4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph 1:

After reading the diary,

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Paragraph 2:

Feeling ashamed, the son got down on his knees before his father.

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答案

【写作提示】

这是一篇具有教育意义的故事。文章讲述了儿子由于父亲多次提问同样的问题而烦躁生气,父亲拿出了一篇日记,日记中讲述儿子小时候问同样的问题时,父亲没有感到厌烦,而是感觉到亲情的故事。根据原文的意思以及所给的提示词和续写的开头提示句可知, 第一段应该是儿子内心的反思。而第二段则应该是儿子认识到自己的错误之后的行动。