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face a heavy fine
who what Chen Yan, a tourist from Changzhou, east China’s Jiangsu Province, complained online on February 12 that he was being overcharged 10,000 yuan for three big fish at a local wild fish restaurant in Songbei District of Harbin. Worse still, he claimed that his family members were beaten and threatened by the restaurant staff when he questioned the bill at the checkout. Chen’s complaint immediately spread on China’s social media. The investigation results by some local government departments showed that the restaurant had no fault, since they had already tagged the price, which raised doubt among netizens again.
Further investigation showed that one type of the fish served, Huso, was not the real wild species, but a kind of farmed fish at a much lower price. Since the prices of the fish did have violated the rights of consumers, the restaurant got its due punishment. Meanwhile, relevant government departments that have stood by the side of the restaurant in the first place would also be investigated and punished.
lately/not long ago require/command close down
Lately, a wild fish restaurant in Harbin faced being shut down and a heavy fine.
2. Chen Yan complained he was being overcharged and were beaten and threatened by the restaurant staff. Chen’s complaint immediately spread on China’s social media. Chen’s complaint that … spread… violent treatment expose… to the public A customer named Chen Yan exposed his being overcharged and the violent treatment of the restaurant to the public.
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Recently，a wild fish restaurant was ordered to shut down in Harbin, northeast China's Heilongjiang Province. As a result, the owner of the restaurant faced a fine of 500,000 yuan. where
received 3. The restaurant got its due punishment and relevant government departments would also be investigated and punished. as well as/ together with/along with The restaurant as well as some relevant government departments received their due punishment.
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Similar cases of fraudulent (欺骗的) pricing at scenic spots have also been reported elsewhere in China. In October 2015, for instance, a tourist was overcharged for a course of shrimp (虾) in the coastal city of Qingdao, east China's Shandong Province, when the restaurant claimed the quoted price of 38 yuan was not for the dish, but for each shrimp! Authorities say that these illegal actions will be severely punished. how
第五档(21-25) complete 理解准确,涵盖全部要点。 能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇。correct 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所完成 的概要结构紧凑。 coherent 完全使用自己的言语。 concise; no copy
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1. Recently, a wild fish restaurant was ordered to shut down in Harbin and faced a heavy fine.
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Recently, a wild fish restaurant was ordered to shut down in Harbin, northeast China's Heilongjiang Province. As a result, the owner of the restaurant faced a fine of 500,000 yuan. Chen Yan, a tourist from Changzhou, east China’s Jiangsu Province, complained online on February 12 that he was being overcharged 10,000 yuan for three big fish at a local wild fish restaurant in Songbei District of Harbin. Worse still, he claimed that his family members were beaten and threatened by the restaurant staff when he questioned the bill at the checkout. Chen’s complaint immediately spread on China’s social media. The investigation results by some local government departments showed that the restaurant had no fault, since they had already tagged the price, which raised doubt among netizens again. Further investigation showed that one type of the fish served, Huso, was not the real wild species, but a kind of farmed fish at a much lower price. Since the prices of the fish did have violated the rights of consumers, the restaurant got its due punishment. Meanwhile, relevant government departments that have stood by the side of the restaurant in the first place would also be investigated and punished. Similar cases of fraudulent (欺骗的) pricing at scenic spots have also been reported elsewhere in China. In October 2015, for instance, a tourist was overcharged for a course of shrimp (虾) in the coastal city of Qingdao, east China's Shandong Province, when the restaurant claimed the quoted price of 38 yuan was not for the dish, but for each shrimp! Authorities say that these illegal