3.3公开课“概要写作”
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①topic sentence: There is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt ② In what order does the passage develop to show the different “attitudes”?
(Para 2 )In the early 16th century, people thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease, as medical opinion had it that washing off dirt with hot water could open up the skin and let ills in. A particular
think, believe, consider, regard, argue, support, be convinced that, in one’s opinion, from one’s point of view
Para 2: In the early 16th century, people thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease, as medical opinion had it that washing off dirt with hot water could open up the skin and let ills in. A particular danger was thought to lie in public baths. By 1538, the French king had closed the bath houses in his kingdom. So did the king of England in 1546. Thus began a long time when the rich and
danger was thought to lie in public baths. By 1538, the French king had closed the bath houses in his kingdom. So did the king of England in 1546. Thus began a long time when the rich and the poor in Europe lived
Step 2: Make an outline
Topic: There is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt
In the suppor 16th century -ting (Para 2 ) Ideas
People thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease
since18th
century (Para 3)
…has no longer been regarded as… cleaning away dirt is good to health
nowadays …encourages children to play in the dirt (Para 4) to build up a strong immune system
概要写作：
提供一篇350词以内的短文，要求考生基于该短文 写出一篇60词左右的内容概要。（满分25分）
评分原则
本题总分为25分，分5个档次给分 第五档 理解准确,涵盖全部要点。 (21-25) 能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇。 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所完成的 概要结构紧凑。
﹏完全﹏使﹏用﹏自己﹏的﹏言﹏语。
Step 3: Rewrite the sentences in other ways
① There is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.
different, mixed, various
towards opinions, views, ideas
反义转换
(Para 4)Attitudes to dirt still differ hugely nowadays. Many first-time parents nervously try to warn their children off touching dirt, which might be responsible for the spread of disease. On the contrary, Mary Ruebush, an American immunologist (免疫学家), encourages children to play in the dirt to build up a strong immune system. And the latter position is gaining some ground.
② In the early 16th century, people thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease.
Have a try!
② In the early 16th century, people thought
Forms of Literature
Argumentation (议论文） Exposition （说明文）
Narration （记叙文）
Argumentation (议论文）
Topic Supporting ideas Conclusion
Step 1: Read
(para1)Getting rid of dirt, in the opinion of most people, is a good thing. However, there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.
(Para 3)Though the belief in the merit of dirt was long-lived, dirt has no longer been regarded as a nice neighbor ever since the 18th century. Scientifically speaking, cleaning away dirt is good to health. Clean water
①topic sentence (in para1) There is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt
② supporting ideas (in para2-4)
Find out the topic sentence of each paragraph
(Para 4) Attitudes to dirt still differ hugely nowadays. Many first-time parents nervously try to warn their children off touching dirt, which might be responsible for the spread of disease. On the contrary, Mary Ruebush, an American immunologist (免疫学家), encourages children to play in the dirt to build up a strong immune system. And the latter position is gaining some ground.
with dirt in a friendly way. Henry IV, King of France, was famously dirty. Upon learning that a nobleman had taken a bath, the king ordered that, to avoid the attack of disease, the nobleman should not go out.
supply and hand washing are practical means of preventing disease. Yet, it seems that standards of cleanliness have moved beyond science since World War Ⅱ. Advertisements repeatedly sell the idea; clothes need to be whiter than white, cloths ever softer, surfaces to shine. Has the hate for dirt, however, gone too far?
After this class, I hope you will know:
1 what the summary writing is 2 the criteria of a good summary 3 how to write a good summary 5
《普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语 科考试说明》
that dirt on the skin was a means to block
the poor in EEuxraompepllievsedowf sitohmdiertEinuraofprieeanndlcyowuanyt.rHieesnry
IV, King of France, was famously dirty. Upon learning that a nobleman had taken a bath, the king ordered that, to avoid the attack of disease, Biblioteka Baiduhe nobleman should not go out.
同义词替换
句型转换
▲ The attitudes to dirt is not always the same. ▲ People’s attitudes to dirt vary in different times. ▲ People hold different opinions towards dirt over time.
(Para 3) Though the belief in the merit of dirt was longlived, dirt has no longer been regarded as a nice neighbor ever since the 18th century. Scientifically speaking, cleaning away dirt is good to health. Clean water supply and hand washing are practical means of preventing disease. Yet, it seems that standards of cleanliness have moved beyond science since World War Ⅱ. Advertisements repeatedly sell the idea; clothes need to be whiter than white, cloths ever softer, surfaces to shine. Has the hate for dirt, however, gone too far?
(Para 2 )In the early 16th century, people thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease, as medical opinion had it that washing off dirt with hot water could open up the skin and let ills in. A particular
think, believe, consider, regard, argue, support, be convinced that, in one’s opinion, from one’s point of view
Para 2: In the early 16th century, people thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease, as medical opinion had it that washing off dirt with hot water could open up the skin and let ills in. A particular danger was thought to lie in public baths. By 1538, the French king had closed the bath houses in his kingdom. So did the king of England in 1546. Thus began a long time when the rich and
danger was thought to lie in public baths. By 1538, the French king had closed the bath houses in his kingdom. So did the king of England in 1546. Thus began a long time when the rich and the poor in Europe lived
Step 2: Make an outline
Topic: There is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt
In the suppor 16th century -ting (Para 2 ) Ideas
People thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease
since18th
century (Para 3)
…has no longer been regarded as… cleaning away dirt is good to health
nowadays …encourages children to play in the dirt (Para 4) to build up a strong immune system
概要写作：
提供一篇350词以内的短文，要求考生基于该短文 写出一篇60词左右的内容概要。（满分25分）
评分原则
本题总分为25分，分5个档次给分 第五档 理解准确,涵盖全部要点。 (21-25) 能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇。 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所完成的 概要结构紧凑。
﹏完全﹏使﹏用﹏自己﹏的﹏言﹏语。
Step 3: Rewrite the sentences in other ways
① There is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.
different, mixed, various
towards opinions, views, ideas
反义转换
(Para 4)Attitudes to dirt still differ hugely nowadays. Many first-time parents nervously try to warn their children off touching dirt, which might be responsible for the spread of disease. On the contrary, Mary Ruebush, an American immunologist (免疫学家), encourages children to play in the dirt to build up a strong immune system. And the latter position is gaining some ground.
② In the early 16th century, people thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease.
Have a try!
② In the early 16th century, people thought
Forms of Literature
Argumentation (议论文） Exposition （说明文）
Narration （记叙文）
Argumentation (议论文）
Topic Supporting ideas Conclusion
Step 1: Read
(para1)Getting rid of dirt, in the opinion of most people, is a good thing. However, there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.
(Para 3)Though the belief in the merit of dirt was long-lived, dirt has no longer been regarded as a nice neighbor ever since the 18th century. Scientifically speaking, cleaning away dirt is good to health. Clean water
①topic sentence (in para1) There is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt
② supporting ideas (in para2-4)
Find out the topic sentence of each paragraph
(Para 4) Attitudes to dirt still differ hugely nowadays. Many first-time parents nervously try to warn their children off touching dirt, which might be responsible for the spread of disease. On the contrary, Mary Ruebush, an American immunologist (免疫学家), encourages children to play in the dirt to build up a strong immune system. And the latter position is gaining some ground.
with dirt in a friendly way. Henry IV, King of France, was famously dirty. Upon learning that a nobleman had taken a bath, the king ordered that, to avoid the attack of disease, the nobleman should not go out.
supply and hand washing are practical means of preventing disease. Yet, it seems that standards of cleanliness have moved beyond science since World War Ⅱ. Advertisements repeatedly sell the idea; clothes need to be whiter than white, cloths ever softer, surfaces to shine. Has the hate for dirt, however, gone too far?
After this class, I hope you will know:
1 what the summary writing is 2 the criteria of a good summary 3 how to write a good summary 5
《普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语 科考试说明》
that dirt on the skin was a means to block
the poor in EEuxraompepllievsedowf sitohmdiertEinuraofprieeanndlcyowuanyt.rHieesnry
IV, King of France, was famously dirty. Upon learning that a nobleman had taken a bath, the king ordered that, to avoid the attack of disease, Biblioteka Baiduhe nobleman should not go out.
同义词替换
句型转换
▲ The attitudes to dirt is not always the same. ▲ People’s attitudes to dirt vary in different times. ▲ People hold different opinions towards dirt over time.
(Para 3) Though the belief in the merit of dirt was longlived, dirt has no longer been regarded as a nice neighbor ever since the 18th century. Scientifically speaking, cleaning away dirt is good to health. Clean water supply and hand washing are practical means of preventing disease. Yet, it seems that standards of cleanliness have moved beyond science since World War Ⅱ. Advertisements repeatedly sell the idea; clothes need to be whiter than white, cloths ever softer, surfaces to shine. Has the hate for dirt, however, gone too far?