高考 概要写作 公开课

概要写作难点 1
• How to get the key points quickly and
correctly?
(如何快速、准确地捕捉要点)
抓住主题句或关键信息，忽略次要信息
Para 1： topic sentence Once upon a time, industrial goods were made to last forever. If you bought a car or a stove, it was a once-in-a-lifetime investment. You paid good money for it, and you took care of it. characteristics 忽略具体事例 detailed example
近义词替换
1. Nowadays industry has persuaded us that products couldn’t last a long time. 2. It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them. 3. This has not permanent led directlyshort-lived to the “throw-away society” which is a great waste of the earth’s resources.
Once upon a time, industrial goods were made to last forever. If you bought a car or a stove, it was a once-in-a-lifetime investment. You paid good money for it, and you took care of it. Nowadays industry has persuaded us that products couldn’t last a long time. It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them. This has led directly to the “throw-away society” which is a great waste of the earth’s resources. Just think of the cars that are traded daily, just because they are out of style. Think of the expensive packaging material that is thrown away every time a new object is bought. And we shoppers have to pay for that material! Our industrial society has turned us into spoiled children. This wastefulness has got us into the great trouble we are in now. When we have no resources left, then we will start to take care of what we have. But why can’t we act before this happens? Why can’t we try to build a society in which the prevention of waste is a virtue? （182W）
Decades ago, industrial goods were made durable.
You paid good money for it, and you took care of it. treasure spent much money on treat it kindly use it carefully
You spent much money on it and treasure it.
Para1.
Decades ago, industrial goods were made durable You spent much money on it and treasure it.
topic sentence Nowadays industry has persuaded us that products couldn’t last a long time. It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them. This has led characteristics directly to the “throw away society” which is a great result waste of the earth’s resources. Just think of the cars that are traded daily, just because they are out of style. Think of the expensive packaging material that is thrown away every time a new object is bought. And we shoppers have to pay for that material! 忽略具体事例 detailed examples
Para2.
Modern industry has convinced us that products are not permanent. To throw them away is cheaper than to repair them, which has resulted in a great waste of the earth’s resources.
Step 1 . Understand the whole passage and grasp the key points.
Once upon a time, industrial goods were made to last forever. If you bought a car or a stove, it was a once-in-a-lifetime investment. You paid good money for it, and you took care of it. Nowadays industry has persuaded us that products couldn’t last a long time. It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them. This has led directly to the “throw-away society” which is a great waste of the earth’s resources. Just think of the cars that are traded daily, just because they are out of style. Think of the expensive packaging material that is thrown away every time a new object is bought. And we shoppers have to pay for that material! Our industrial society has turned us into spoiled children. This wastefulness has got us into the great trouble we are in now. When we have no resources left, then we will start to take care of what we have. But why can’t we act before this happens? Why can’t we try to build a society in which the prevention of waste is a virtue?
改变句式
result in
This has led directly to the “throw-away society” which is a great waste of the earth’s resources.
which has resulted in a great waste of the earth’s resources.
概要写作难点 2
• How to express the key points by using your own words properly? (如何灵活诠释，规避抄袭的嫌疑)
近义词替换
1.Once upon a time, industrial goods were made to last forever. Some time ago; In the • ___________________,industrial goods past; Decades ago to be used for a long time were made _____________________. to function well for a long time; durable
made us believe Mstry has convinced us that products are not permanent.
改变主语（形式主语） 2. It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them. •To throw them away is cheaper than to repair them. 正话反说、反话正说 •It is more expensive to repair them than to throw them away.
高考新题型
概要写作
Summary writing
概要写作评分标准第五档（21–25points）： contents 1.理解准确，涵盖所有要点 (内容) 2.准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇 language skills (语言) 3. 完全使用自己的语言。(60-80W)
4.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使概要 结构紧凑 structure (结构)
Nowadays industry has persuaded us that products couldn’t last a long time. It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them. This has led directly to the “throw-away society” which is a great waste of the earth’s resources. Just think of the cars that are traded daily, just because they are out of style. Think of the expensive packaging material that is thrown away every time a new object is bought. And we shoppers have to pay for that material!