高考概要写作公开课

概要写作难点 1
• How to get the key points quickly and correctly? (如何快速、准确地捕捉要点)
抓住主题句或关键信息，忽略次要信息
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Para 1： topic sentence Once upon a time, industrial goods were made to last forever. If you bought a car or a stove, it was a once-in-a-lifetime investment. You paid good money for it, and you took care of it. 忽略具体事例 detailed examplecharacteristics
Our industrial society has turned us into spoiled children. This wastefulness has got us into the great trouble we are in now. When we have no resources left, then we will start to take care of what we have. But why can’t we act before this happens? Why can’t we try to build a society in which the prevention of waste is a virtue?
Our industrial society has turned us into spoiled children. This wastefulness has got us into the great trouble we are in now. When we have no resources left, then we will start to take care of what we have. But why can’t we act before this happens? Why can’t we try to build a society in which the prevention of waste is a virtue? （182W）
Step 1 . Understand the whole passage and grasp the key points.
Once upon a time, industrial goods were made to last forever. If you bought a car or a stove, it was a once-in-a-lifetime investment. You paid good money for it, and you took care of it.
Nowadays industry has persuaded us that products couldn’t last a long time. It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them. This has led directly to the “throw-away society” which is a great waste of the earth’s resources. Just think of the cars that are traded daily, just because they are out of style. Think of the expensive packaging material that is thrown away every time a new object is bought. And we shoppers have to pay for that material!
Nowadays industry has persuaded us that products couldn’t last a long time. It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them. This has led directly to the “throw-away society” which is a great waste of the earth’s resources. Just think of the cars that are traded daily, just because they are out of style. Think of the expensive packaging material that is thrown away every time a new object is bought. And we shoppers have to pay for that material!
高考概要写作公开课
高考新题型
概要写作
Summary writing
概要写作评分标准第五档（21–25points）：
1.理解准确，涵盖所有要点
contents (内容)
2.准确使用相应的语法结构和l词an汇guage skills
3. 完全使用自己的语言。(60-80W()语言)
4.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使概要 结构紧凑 structure
(结构)
Once upon a time, industrial goods were made to last forever. If you bought a car or a stove, it was a once-in-a-lifetime investment. You paid good money for it, and you took care of it.